高考英語復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)：大蕭條時期的圣誕溫暖+課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)：大蕭條時期的圣誕溫暖1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Itwasthetailendofthedepression(大蕭條),andthingsweretough.MomhadahardtimeraisinguskidsonherowninoursmallcommunityofNewWestminster,BC．MydadhaddrownedinPittLakefiveyearsearlier—Istillrememberitasifitwereyesterday.Lookingback,IrealizewhatMomwentthroughsendinguskidstoschool.Everymorningshewouldputanewpieceofcardboardinourshoes,becauseoursoleswerewornout.Constantmovingwastypicalformyfamilyinthesetimes.Rentwastwenty-fivedollarsamonth,butMomcouldn’tpayit.Thesewerehardandsadyears,butwenevercomplained.4續(xù)寫原文Christmaswasapproaching,andwewereentitledtoatwenty-fivedollarChristmasfundforsocialassistance.Momsaidthatinsteadofbuyingfood,shewouldusethemoneytopaybackrent.ShetoldusthentherewouldbenothingforChristmas.UnknowntoMom,IhadbeensellingChristmastreestoearnenoughmoneytobuyanewpairofboots.Bootswithnocardboardinthesoles.IknewexactlywhichbootsIwanted.Theyhadapriceoftwenty-threedollars.5續(xù)寫原文Well,thebigdaycameontheafternoonofChristmasEve.Iwasveryexcited,asIhurrieduptheroadtocatchthebus.Itwasonlyhalfamilewalk,butonthewayInoticedahousewithChristmaslightsanddecorations.ItwasthenthatIrealizedthatatourhouse,wehadnothingforChristmas.IknewthenthatwewouldhavenoturkeyorhamforChristmas,andIfeltsad.Suddenly,Iwasfeelingastrangesenseofguilt.HereIwasgoingtobuyanewpairofbootswhileMomwashomeintears.Shewouldbetryingtoexplaintouswhytherewerenopresents.Istopped.Thebusdroveoffwithoutme,andIstoodalone,butfeelingasifaweighthadbeenliftedoffmyshoulders.IchangedmymindandIrealizedwhatIhadtodo.6段首句Paragraph1:AcrossthestreetwasabiggrocerystorecalledthePigglyWiggley.Paragraph2:Iwhisperedforboystoquietlyunloadthegroceriesandpilethemagainstthedoor.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9本文圍繞大蕭條時期作者一家的艱難生活展開。爸爸早逝，媽媽獨自撫養(yǎng)孩子，家庭經(jīng)濟拮據(jù)，連房租都難以支付。圣誕節(jié)臨近，媽媽決定用社會救助的25美元交房租，意味著沒有錢買圣誕物品。而“我”通過賣圣誕樹攢了些錢，原本打算買雙新靴子，但看到別人家的圣誕裝飾，想到自己家的冷清，心中愧疚，決定改變計劃。點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點10續(xù)寫思路分析Paragraph1：AcrossthestreetwasabiggrocerystorecalledthePigglyWiggley.分析：此句作為段首，應(yīng)承接上文“我”改變主意后的行動?？梢悦枋觥拔摇边M入雜貨店的情景，比如看到琳瑯滿目的商品，內(nèi)心的想法，如何挑選圣誕所需物品，以及與雜貨店老板的互動等，為下文將這些物品帶回家給媽媽驚喜做鋪墊。11續(xù)寫思路分析Paragraph2：Iwhisperedforboystoquietlyunloadthegroceriesandpilethemagainstthedoor.分析：該句引出了送雜貨到家這一情節(jié)。接下來可描寫“我”安排好一切后的緊張與期待，媽媽開門看到雜貨時的反應(yīng)，是驚訝、感動還是其他情緒，以及“我”看到媽媽反應(yīng)后的感受，突出家庭溫暖和“我”的成長。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)Paragraph1:AcrossthestreetwasabiggrocerystorecalledthePigglyWiggley.Ienteredthestorewithanewfoundpurpose.Lookingaround,Isawturkeys,hams,andallkindsofChristmastreats.IthoughtabouthowhappymyfamilywouldbeifwecouldhaveaproperChristmas.SoIusedallthemoneyIhadtobuythosethings.Thestoreownerwaskindandhelpedmefindtwoboyswithbicyclestocarrythegroceriestomyhome.Paragraph2:Iwhisperedforboystoquietlyunloadthegroceriesandpilethemagainstthedoor.ThenIknockedonthedoor.WhenMomopenedit,shewasshockedtoseethegroceries.Shelookedatmewithtearsinhereyes.Isaid,“MerryChristmas,Mom!WecanhaveagoodChristmasthisyear.”Momhuggedmetightly,andIfeltsowarminside.ItwasthebestChristmasIhadeverhad.14范文呈現(xiàn)Paragraph1:AcrossthestreetwasabiggrocerystorecalledthePigglyWiggley.Irushedintothestoreandstartedpickingoutitems.Ichoseabigturkey,someham,anddeliciouscookies.Ispenteverycentofmyhard-earnedmoney.ThestoreownersawwhatIwasdoingandwastouched.Hehelpedmefindtwoboyswhowerewillingtohelpmecarrythegrocerieshome.Paragraph2:Iwhisperedforboystoquietlyunloadthegroceriesandpilethemagainstthedoor.Aftertheyleft,Iknockedonthedoor.Momopenedit,andhereyeswidenedinsurprise.Shecouldn'tbelievewhatshesaw.Isaid,“Mom,thisisourChristmas.Wedon'thavetobesadanymore.”Momhuggedme,andwebothfeltthejoyofChristmas.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Paragraph1:AcrossthestreetstoodacolossalgrocerystorenamedthePigglyWiggley.Withaheartbrimmingwithdeterminationandanew-foundsenseofpurpose,Isteppedinside.ThestorewasawonderlandofChristmasdelights.Turkeys,theirplumpbodiesglisteningunderthestorelights,hamswiththeirenticingaroma,andanarrayofmouth-wateringChristmastreatsfilledtheshelves.AsIbrowsedthroughtheaisles,imagesofmyfamily'sjoyousfacesonChristmasDayflashedthroughmymind.Withouthesitation,Iselectedthefinestitems,spendingeverypennyofmyhard-earnedmoney.Thestoreowner,observingmyactionswithasoftsmile,offeredhisassistance.Hehelpedmerecruittwoboys,who,withtheirbicyclesequippedwithcarriers,weremorethanwillingtoaidintransportingthegroceriestomyhumbleabode.Paragraph2:Iwhisperedtotheboystoquietlyunloadthegroceriesandneatlypilethemagainstthedoor.Oncetheyhadcompletedthetaskandriddenaway,Itookadeepbreath,myheartpoundingwithanticipation.Iknockedonthedoor,andwhenMomopenedit,timeseemedtostandstill.Hereyeswidenedinsheerdisbelief,andagaspescapedherlips.Shestaredatthegroceries,thenatme,andtearswelledupinhereyes.“MerryChristmas,Mom,”Isaid,myvoicefilledwithloveandpride.“We'regoingtohaveaChristmastorememberthisyear.”Momenvelopedmeinawarmhug,andIcouldfeeltheloveandgratituderadiatingfromher.Inthatmoment,IknewthatthesacrificesImadewereworthit,andthewarmthoffamilyandthespiritofChristmasfilledourhome.16升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Paragraph1:AcrossthestreetwasamagnificentgrocerystoreknownasthePigglyWiggley.Idashedintothestore,myeyesscanningtherowsofgoodswitheagerness.Thesightofturkeys,ham,andanabundanceofChristmasdelicaciesfilledmewithexcitement.Icarefullyselectedtheitems,imaginingthelookofsurpriseonmyfamily'sfaces.EveryitemIplacedinthecartwasasymbolofhopeforabetterChristmas.Iusedupallmymoney,notasinglecentleft.Thestoreowner,touchedbymyefforts,