16 青少年安全與保護(hù)-2023年中考英語熱點(diǎn)話題寫作

2023年中考英語熱點(diǎn)話題寫作-青少年安全與保護(hù)【1】1．（2022·江蘇·鹽城市鹽都區(qū)實(shí)驗(yàn)初中二模）你校舉辦了“中學(xué)生安全教育日”英語征文活動(dòng)，請根據(jù)所給提示，以“LiveaSafeLife”為題，寫一篇短文參賽。注意事項(xiàng)：1.詞數(shù)：100詞左右(文章開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))；2.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名等信息；3.文章必須包含所提供的主要信息，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。LiveasafelifeAsmiddleschoolstudents,weshouldalwayskeepsafetyinmind.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【2】2．（2022·寧夏中衛(wèi)·一模）一場波及全球的疫情，讓人們深深懂得了生命的價(jià)值。作為中學(xué)生，我們更應(yīng)該懂得珍愛我們年輕的生命。請你根據(jù)下面的提示，以“TreasureOurLives”為題，用英語寫一篇有關(guān)如何珍愛生命的短文。要點(diǎn)：1.遵守交通規(guī)則，注意食品安全，防止意外溺水。2.交友謹(jǐn)慎，不沉迷于手機(jī)及游戲，提高安全意識(shí)。3.倡議：擁有快樂、充實(shí)、健康的生活方式……要求：1.短文應(yīng)包括所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要逐句翻譯；2.語言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，條理清晰，書寫工整，句式規(guī)范；3.詞數(shù)80左右，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；參考詞匯：drown溺水V.TreasureOurLivesEachpersononlylivesonce,sowemusttreasureourlives.Whatshouldwedo?___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【3】3．（2022·江蘇無錫·二模）為增強(qiáng)安全意識(shí)，學(xué)校英語俱樂部將開展“Howtoprotectourselves”的討論，請你用英語寫一篇短文投稿。以下信息非限定性內(nèi)容，僅供參考。HowtoprotectourselvesAtschoolgetalongwithourclassmates;…Inpublicneverrunaftereachother;…OntheInternetprotectourpersonalinformation;………注意事項(xiàng)：1.短文須自擬，要求觀點(diǎn)明確、語句通順、意思連貫、符合題意；2.詞數(shù)在100個(gè)左右，短文標(biāo)題、開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；3.短文必須寫在答題卡指定的位置上。HowtoprotectourselvesThereislotsofpossibledangeraroundus.It’simportantforustolearnhowtoprotectourselves.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Dangerisneverasfarawayaswethink.Takegoodcareofourselvesatalltimes!【4】4．（2022·湖南·長沙市立信中學(xué)一模）全世界每年因安全事故導(dǎo)致有數(shù)以萬計(jì)的生命死于非命！面對每一次殘酷的事故，面對每一個(gè)鮮活的生命的逝去，我們難道就只有感嘆、哀傷？其實(shí)，只要我們行動(dòng)起來，做到心中有安全意識(shí)，遵守安全規(guī)則，就能消除潛在危險(xiǎn)。我校即將舉行“珍愛生命，心系安全”的征文比賽，特此向你征稿。請你圍繞生活中經(jīng)常存在的安全問題，如：運(yùn)動(dòng)安全，交通安全……結(jié)合實(shí)際就如何減少安全事故的發(fā)生談至少三點(diǎn)建議，并呼吁大家一起攜手，珍惜生命，健康成長。要求：1.不逐字翻譯；2.文章總詞數(shù)為80—100；3.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和姓名。Itisreportedthattherearethousandsofaccidentsaroundtheworldeveryyear.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【5】5．（2022·黑龍江佳木斯·二模）話題作文：今年3月28日是第27個(gè)中國小學(xué)生安全教育日，教育部會(huì)同公安部治安管理局印發(fā)《關(guān)于開展全國中小學(xué)生安全教育日活動(dòng)的通知》，請你就安全問題寫一封80詞左右的倡議書，從交通、飲食、運(yùn)動(dòng)、防溺水等方面向全校同學(xué)發(fā)出安全倡議。提示詞：trafficrules,healthyfood,hurt,swimalone要求：（l）80詞左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。2.字跡工整，語法正確，意思連貫，合乎邏輯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。HowtoKeepOurselvesSafe________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【6】6．（2022·青海·治多縣第二民族寄宿中學(xué)一模）青少年安全一直是人們關(guān)注的焦點(diǎn)。假如你校英語角將開展以“如何提升青少年自我保護(hù)能力”為主題的演講比賽，請你根據(jù)以下提示，以“HowtoProtectOurselves”為題寫一篇英語演講稿。要點(diǎn)提示:1.提高自我保護(hù)意識(shí)；2.不在網(wǎng)上泄露個(gè)人隱私；3.遇到危險(xiǎn)時(shí)要保持冷靜。寫作要求：1.包含提示中的所有要點(diǎn)，條理清楚，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.詞數(shù)100左右(開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。參考詞匯：awareness意識(shí)HowtoProtectOurselvesSelf-protectionisoneofthemostimportantskillsforteenagers.Buthowcanweprotectourselves?Herearesomeofmyideas.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Dangerisneverasfarawayaswethink.Safetymustbeputfirstwhateverhappens.參考答案：1．范文：LiveasafelifeAsmiddleschoolstudents,weshouldalwayskeepsafetyinmind.Herearesomeofmysuggestions.Firstly,weshouldeathealthyfoodsuchasfruitandvegetableseveryday.It’swisetostayawayfromtoocoldfoodinsummer.Secondly,it’snecessarytofollowtrafficruleswhencrossingtheroad.Don’tridesidebyside.It’swrongtotouchmobilesontheway.Besides,becarefulwhenwemakefriendsonline.We’dbetternottellothersourtelephonenumber,addressorpasswords,especiallystrangers.Finally,weoughtnottorunaftereachotheratschool.Moreover,whenhavingsports,remembertoprotectourselvesfromdanger.Inaword,safetymustcomefirst.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，要求以“LiveaSafeLife”為題，結(jié)合提示內(nèi)容進(jìn)行寫作，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖。借用“給出安全的生活的建議”來引出重點(diǎn)介紹的內(nèi)容；第二步，具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容。從“飲食、道路安全、交友，校園安全”幾個(gè)方面重點(diǎn)介紹；第三步，書寫結(jié)語，安全必須是第一位的。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①keep...inmind記?、趕tayawayfrom遠(yuǎn)離③hadbetter最好④runafter追趕[高分句型]①Secondly,it’snecessarytofollowtrafficruleswhencrossingtheroad.（It固定句型）②Besides,becarefulwhenwemakefriendsonline.（when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句）2．例文TreasureOurLivesEachpersononlylivesonce,sowemusttreasureourlives.Whatshouldwedo?Firstofall,weshouldeathealthyandsafefoodinsteadoffastfoodorjunkfoodeveryday.Whenwegoout,wemustobeythetrafficrules.Ifwewanttogoswimming,wearesupposedtogosomewheresafesothatwecanavoiddrowning.Andweshouldfollowtheschoolrules,don’truninthehallwaysandbecarefulwhenwedosports.Besides,wemustbecarefulinchoosingourfriendsandkeepawayfromdangerouspeople.Weshouldn’tplayphonesorcomputergamesforalongtime.What’smore,wecan’tgotoNetBarorchatwithstrangersonlineandweshouldn’tstayouttoolongespeciallyatnight.Lifeisvaluable,weshouldtakeitseriously.We’dbetterliveahappy,colorfulandhealthylife.Thenwewillstudybetterandmakeourdreamscometrue.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇說明文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，根據(jù)下面的提示，以“TreasureOurLives”為題，用英語寫一篇有關(guān)如何珍愛生命的短文。[寫作步驟]第一步，開頭已給出，點(diǎn)名我們要珍惜我們的生命；第二步，具體闡述我們應(yīng)該怎么做；第三步，總結(jié)，表明自己對生命的看法。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①firstofall首先②insteadof而不是③besupposedto應(yīng)該做某事④keepawayfrom遠(yuǎn)離⑤cometrue實(shí)現(xiàn)[高分句型]①Ifwewanttogoswimming,wearesupposedtogosomewheresafesothatwecanavoiddrowning.（if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句；sothat引導(dǎo)的目的狀語從句）3．Onepossibleversion:HowtoprotectourselvesThereislotsofpossibledangeraroundus.It’simportantforustolearnhowtoprotectourselves.Firstofall,it’snecessaryforustogetalongwellwithourclassmates.Neverforgetyourteachers.Askthemforhelpwhilemeetinganydangeratschool.Second,notdoingsomethingdangerousinpublicisalsoimportant.Remembernottorunafterorcrowdwitheachother,especiallynotpushpastothers.Third,becarefultomakefriendsonline.Don’tgiveanypersonalinformationtoothers.Nevermeete-friendsalone.Letyourparentsgowithyouifyouhaveto.Lastbutnotleast,wemustfollowthetrafficrulesoutsideanddon’tcarrytoomuchmoneywithus.Dangerisneverasfarawayaswethink.Takegoodcareofourselvesatalltimes!【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇提綱類作文，以“Howtoprotectourselves”為題參照表格中要點(diǎn)信息進(jìn)行分析。寫作時(shí)需包括表格中所有要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)拓展。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文以第一、二人稱為主，時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；寫作時(shí)注意分段敘述，第一段開門見山，引入話題；第二段介紹如何從三個(gè)方面保護(hù)自己，可以多采用祈使句句式；第三段原文已給出；保證文章條理清晰，語句通順。4．例文：Itisreportedthattherearethousandsofaccidentsaroundtheworldeveryyear.Forexample,manypeoplediefromcaraccidentseveryday.Theunsafefoodinthemarketcanbeseeneverywhere.Itisharmfultotheourhealth.What’smore,improperexercisecanalsoleadtosafetyproblems.Inordertoprotectourselves,weshouldobeythetrafficrules.Don’tallowanyonetoproduceanyunsafefood.Wemustn’tsellorbuysuchunsafefood.Whenweplaysports,wemustpaymoreattention.Wearesupposedtostopassoonaswefeeluncomfortable.Ifwedoso,everyonewillbesafer.【詳解】1.題干解讀：題目要求圍繞常見的安全問題提出至少三點(diǎn)減少安全事故發(fā)生的建議，開頭已給出，聯(lián)系實(shí)際情況進(jìn)行寫作。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文時(shí)態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，以第一、三人稱為主，提建議時(shí)多用情態(tài)動(dòng)詞；寫作時(shí)承接開頭，先描述常見的安全問題，在提出具體建議，最后總結(jié)收尾。注意主謂一致，做到無語法和標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤。5．例文HowtoKeepOurselvesSafeSafetyisveryimportanttoeveryone.Middleschoolstudentsarelikepreciousflowers—sotheirsafetyisbecomingafocusforusall.

First,wemustobeythetrafficruleswhenwegoout.Don’tcrossthestreetwhenthelightisred.Secondly,weshouldeathealthyfood.Don’teatjunkfood.Eatmorefruitsandvegetables.Eatlessmeatandeggs.Finally,becarefulnottohurtyourselfwhileyouareplayingoutside.It’sdangeroustogoswimmingbyyourself,sodon’tgoswimmingwithoutpermission.Thesearesomeimportantsafetytipstoremember.【詳解】1.題干解讀：這是一篇話題作文，要求根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示，就安全問題寫一封80詞左右的倡議書。要包含所有要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，主要采用第一人稱來書寫，多運(yùn)用祈使句。寫作時(shí)可分為兩段式：第一段介紹安全的重要性；第二空具體介紹如何保護(hù)我們自己的安全。在寫作時(shí)應(yīng)該注意符合題意，同時(shí)注意語言的準(zhǔn)確性和完整性，做到無單詞拼寫和語法錯(cuò)誤。6．例文Howt