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高考英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)語(yǔ)篇練習(xí)社區(qū)合力拯救,陽(yáng)光書(shū)店重?zé)ㄉ鷻C(jī)1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫(xiě)原文ItwasagreatpitywhenonedayIheardthattheSunshineBookstorewasclosingafterfiftyyearsofbusiness.Iwasalsoheartbroken.Thebookstorewasaplacewhereanyoneintheneighborhoodcoulddropby(順便拜訪)andbeconnectedthroughtheirloveofbooks.WhenIhurriedtothestore,Isawthebookswerebeingpackedintoboxes.Sighingdeeply,thestore’selderlyowner,Thomas,toldmehowitwasbecomingdifficulttorunanindependentbookstore.Mostyoungpeoplepreferredtoreade-booksontablets.Customerswerebeingattractedbychainstoresandonlinediscounts.Itriedtothinkofsomewordsofsympathy,butIhadtoadmitthattheSunshineBookstorecouldn’tstayinbusinessmuchlonger.4續(xù)寫(xiě)原文Childhoodmemoriescamefloodingback.Abunchofuskidswouldfrequentlydropintothestoreafterschool,lookingatthenewbooks,orjustchattingwitholdThomas.Hekneweverybookinthestoreandwouldalwayspicktheperfectoneforus.Wespenthoursreading,seatedonthestore’sold,butcomfortablefurniture.Thomasencouragedustoshareourideasandcommentsonthebooksbywritingthemonalargeboardinonecornerofthestore.WhenIleftthebookstore,itwasbecomingcoldanddarkoutside.IturnedtowavegoodbyetoThomas,butbothheandhisbookstorewerealreadyhiddeninathickmist.ItmademerealizethatthebookstoreandallthatoldThomashadgiventothecommunitycouldsoondisappearforgood.5續(xù)寫(xiě)原文Afewmonthslater,IwasbackintheneighborhoodfrommyvacationandwassurprisedtoseethattheSunshineBookstorewasstillthereandopenforbusiness.Itsoldbrickoutsidehadn’tchanged,butinsideitwaslikeadifferentworld.Clearly,theSunshineBookstorewasingoodandcreativehands.IwastoldthatthecommunityhaddecidedtoworktogetheronacampaigntosavetheSunshineBookstore.ThecampaignhadbeenledbyMartin,asalesmanwhohadgrownupintheneighborhoodandwhowashelpingThomasrunthebookstore.6段首句Paragraph1:Ienteredthebookstoreandsawhowithadchanged.Paragraph2:“WhereisThomas,”Isaidtomyself.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫(xiě)原文分析9經(jīng)營(yíng)五十年的陽(yáng)光書(shū)店面臨倒閉,作者聽(tīng)聞后心碎。書(shū)店老板托馬斯訴說(shuō)經(jīng)營(yíng)困境,如年輕人偏好電子書(shū)、連鎖店與線上折扣沖擊等。作者回憶童年常與伙伴光顧書(shū)店,在那里看書(shū)、交流。幾個(gè)月后,作者度假歸來(lái),驚訝發(fā)現(xiàn)書(shū)店仍在營(yíng)業(yè),得知是社區(qū)共同發(fā)起拯救行動(dòng),由馬丁牽頭,他曾在社區(qū)長(zhǎng)大,如今協(xié)助托馬斯經(jīng)營(yíng)書(shū)店。點(diǎn)1:位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段段首,流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語(yǔ);點(diǎn)2:位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段段尾,流暢銜接第二段段首句;點(diǎn)3:位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第二段段首,續(xù)寫(xiě)銜接第二段段首語(yǔ);點(diǎn)4:文章結(jié)尾升華,給予讀者正能量,揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)10續(xù)寫(xiě)思路分析Para1:Ienteredthebookstoreandsawhowithadchanged.我走進(jìn)書(shū)店,瞬間被眼前的變化所震撼。原先略顯陳舊的書(shū)架已煥然一新,整齊排列的書(shū)架上,既有散發(fā)著歲月韻味的經(jīng)典名著,也有時(shí)下熱門(mén)的暢銷書(shū)籍。窗邊增設(shè)了溫馨的閱讀角落,柔軟的坐墊擺放得錯(cuò)落有致,暖黃色的燈光營(yíng)造出愜意的氛圍,不少顧客正沉浸在閱讀的樂(lè)趣中。店內(nèi)還搭建了一個(gè)小巧的舞臺(tái),旁邊的宣傳板上寫(xiě)著即將舉辦的各類讀書(shū)活動(dòng)。新增的咖啡柜臺(tái)香氣四溢,顧客們手捧咖啡,輕聲交流著讀書(shū)心得。曾經(jīng)的留言板變成了數(shù)字化的,方便大家隨時(shí)分享感悟。11續(xù)寫(xiě)思路分析Para2:“WhereisThomas,”Isaidtomyself.“托馬斯去哪兒了?”我暗自思忖。這時(shí),馬丁走了過(guò)來(lái)。他告訴我,托馬斯年事已高,如今退居幕后,主要擔(dān)任顧問(wèn)一職,憑借他對(duì)書(shū)籍的深厚了解,為書(shū)店挑選新進(jìn)書(shū)籍。馬丁還說(shuō),托馬斯看到書(shū)店如今充滿生機(jī),內(nèi)心十分欣慰。聽(tīng)到這些,我由衷地感到高興。社區(qū)的努力有了回報(bào),陽(yáng)光書(shū)店在保留原有韻味的同時(shí),以全新的面貌繼續(xù)承載著人們對(duì)書(shū)籍的熱愛(ài),成為連接大家心靈的溫馨港灣。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)Ienteredthebookstoreandsawhowithadchanged.Theoldandshabbybookshelveswerereplacedbybrand-newones,whichwerefilledwithawidevarietyofbooks,includingtime-honoredclassicsandpopularbest-sellers.Acozyreadingcornerwassetupnearthewindow,wheresoftcushionswereplacedinanorderlymannerandwarmlightswereshininggently.Manycustomerswereabsorbedinreading.Therewasasmallstageinthestore,andontheadjacentbulletinboard,variousupcomingreadingeventswerewritten.Anewly-addedcoffeecounterwasgivingoffapleasantaroma.Customerswereholdingcupsofcoffee,chattingsoftlyabouttheirbook-readingexperiences.Theoldboardforleavingmessageshadbeentransformedintoadigitalone,makingitconvenientforpeopletosharetheirthoughts.14范文呈現(xiàn)“WhereisThomas,”Isaidtomyself.Justatthismoment,Martincameover.HetoldmethatbecauseofThomas'sadvancedage,hehadtakenastepbackandnowmainlyservedasaconsultant.Relyingonhisprofoundknowledgeofbooks,Thomashelpedselectnewbooksforthestore.MartinalsosaidthatThomaswasverypleasedtoseethebookstorefullofvitality.Hearingthis,Ifeltsincerelyhappy.Thecommunity'seffortshadpaidoff.TheSunshineBookstore,whileretainingitsoriginalcharm,continuedtobeaplacethatconnectedpeoplewiththeirloveforbooksinanewlook.15升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Uponenteringthebookstore,Iwasimmediatelystruckbytheastonishingtransformation.Goneweretheold,dilapidatedbookshelves,replacedbyrowsofbrand-newones,brimmingwithaneclecticmixofliterature,fromtime-honouredclassicstothelatestbest-sellers.Nearthewindow,acozyreadingnookhadbeenestablished,wheresoftcushionswereartfullyarrangedandwarm,invitinglightscastagentleglow.Customerswereengrossedinthepagesoftheirbooks,lostintheworldofwords.Asmallstagehadbeenerected,andontheadjoiningbulletinboard,detailsofupcomingliteraryeventsweredisplayed.Anewly-installedcoffeecounterwaftedatantalizingaromathroughtheair,ascustomerssippedtheircoffee,engaginginhushedconversationsabouttheirreadingexperiences.Thetraditionalmessageboardhadbeenmodernizedintoadigitalone,facilitatingeffortlesssharingofthoughtsandinsights.16升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)“WhereisThomas,”Imusedtomyself.Atthatprecisemoment,Martinemerged.HeinformedmethatduetoThomas'sadvancedyears,hehadsteppedbackfromtheday-to-dayoperationsandnowfuncti
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