2021高考英語學(xué)案：短文改錯練習(xí)(3)及答案解析

2021高考英語學(xué)案：短文改錯練習(xí)（3）及答案解析【英語卷(解析)·2021屆河南省頂級名校高三入學(xué)定位考試（202208）】AOnce,amangotonabustoNewYork.Becausehedidnotwanttopay,sohehidinthetoilet.Butapassengersawher.Shetappedthepersoninfrontofherontheshoulderandsay,“There’sabumintoilet.Tellthebusdriver.”Themessagewaspassingonfrompersontoperson.Butsomewherealongtheway,itwaschanged.Thebusdrivertoldthattherewasabombinthetoilet.Heimmediatestoppedthebusandtelephonedthepolice.Whenthepolicecame,theytoldthepassengerstogetoffthebusorstayfaraway.Thentheyclosedthehighway.Asaresult,atrafficjamof15milelongwassooncaused.Inthehelpofadog,thepolicesearchedfortwohours.Ofcoursetheyfoundnotomb.【答案】【學(xué)問點】E1短文改錯記敘文【思路點撥】該題重點考查基礎(chǔ)學(xué)問的應(yīng)用，留意名詞單復(fù)數(shù)，動詞人稱，形容詞和副詞的變化，時態(tài)、語態(tài)等基礎(chǔ)學(xué)問?！敬鸢附馕觥?6.so去掉。because為從屬連詞，不與并聯(lián)連詞so連用，故去掉so。77.her→him前文敘述的aman，故此處用him。78.say→said并列的謂語動詞應(yīng)用同樣的時態(tài)，此句前謂語動詞用過去時，此處也應(yīng)用過去時，故say改為said。79.toilet前加the此處toilet是雙方都明白的，故用定冠詞the修飾。80.passing→passed句中的主語message為pass的動作承受者，故passing改為passed。81.wastoldtell后跟雙賓的及物動詞，tellsbthat-clause，tell后無間接賓語，故用被動語態(tài)。82.immediate→immediately。副詞修飾動詞stopped，故immediate改為immediately。83.or→and。并列的不定式，表示確定含義用and連接。84.mile→miles15修飾mile，故應(yīng)用復(fù)數(shù)形式。85.in→with。在某人的掛念之下withone’shelp或者withthehelpofsb?！居⒄Z卷(解析)·2021屆河北省唐山市高三9月模擬考試（202209）WORD版】第一節(jié)短文改錯（共10小題：每小題1分，滿分10分）假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。留意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均限一詞。2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。ItwasayearagowhenJoshuagotabikeforChristmas,butherodeiteveryday．Onemorning,hesuddenlyfoundthebikegone．Rantohisfrontyard,hesawamanloadingitintohiscar．Heshouted,butthemandriveoff．AsadevotedChristian,hetoldhisdadherealforgavethethief．What'smore,hewantedthethiefknowhewasforgiven．Sothenextday,hepostedthemessageonaposter-boardandputitinthefrontyard．"Tothepersonwhostolemybike:Youhurtmyfeeling．ButIamaChristianandIforgivehim!"Whenheleftforhomethenextmorning,attheendofthedriveway,thebikewasbackwithnewbrakes．【答案】【學(xué)問點】E1短文改錯記敘文【文章綜述】本文敘述一個和善的人用愛心感動盜賊的故事【答案解析】when–that考查強調(diào)句。句意：一年前由于圣誕節(jié)周華得了一輛自行車。強調(diào)一年前。but—and考查連詞。句意：一年前由于圣誕節(jié)周華得了一輛自行，并且每天都騎著它。兩個句子之間是并列關(guān)系。Ran—Running考查非謂語動詞。句意：他跑到前院，看到一個男人正在把他的自行車裝到他的車上。兩個句子共用一個主語，he與run之間是主動關(guān)系。drive—drove考查動詞的時態(tài)。句意：他叫喊但那個男人開車跑了。But連接的兩個句子時態(tài)保持全都。real---really考查副詞句意：作為一個虔誠的基督徒，他告知父親他真的原諒了那個小偷。thethief后面加to考查動詞用法。Wantsbtodo想讓某人做某事。themessage—a考查冠詞。句意：因此其次天，他前院的海報上寫一個短信；由于第一次提到故用a.feeling---feelings考查名詞。句意：你損害我的感情。Feelings表示感情。him—you考查代詞。句意：但我是個基督徒，我原諒你。leftfor去掉for考查動詞。句意：當(dāng)他其次天早上離開家時。LeaveAforB離開A地去B地。短文改錯

Iwasahighschoolstudentthen,fromlow-income76._______family.SoIhavetoworktosupportmyfamily.My 77.__________firstonejobwastocleantablesinasmallrestaurant. 78.__________Istillremembergoingthereearlyandfeltanxiousabout 79.__________thenewworld.IworkedharderbecauseIwasafraidof 80.__________losingthejob.Atnight,Iwassometimesverytiredtodo 81.__________myhomework.AndIcametounderstandthatwasnot 82.__________easytoearnmoney,andknowledgecouldchange 83.__________mylife.SowhatIlearnedfromthejob,inahard 84.__________way,wasmuchmoreimportantaswhatIearned. 85.__________【參考答案】Iwasahighschoolstudentthen,from∧low-income 76.____a______family.SoIhavetoworktosupportmyfamily.My 77.___had____firstonejobwastocleantablesinasmallrestaurant. 78.____去掉one___Istillremembergoingthereearlyandfeltanxiousabout 79.____feeling______thenewworld.IworkedharderbecauseIwasafraidof 80.___hard_______losingthejob.Atnight,Iwassometimesverytiredtodo 81.____too______myhomework.AndIcametounderstandthat∧wasnot 82.____it______easytoearnmoney,and∧knowledgecouldchange 83.___that____mylife.SowhatIlearnedfromthejob,inahard 84.____√______way,wasmuchmoreimportantaswhatIearned. 85.___than____MycousinXiaoHongandIwentontriptomyuncle’s76._____________lastSunday.Wewereridingalongahillsidethensuddenly77._____________somebigstoneswererolleddownandknockedusoffourbikes.78._________XiaoHong’slegsgotserioushurtandsodidmine.We79._____________couldn’tmoveabit.Fortunately,Isawsomefarmersahead.80.____________Wavingourhand,wecriedforhelplikecrazy.Onhearing81.____________us,theyruntothespotasfastastheycould.Thanksto82___________theirhelp,wewereallsenttoanearbyhospitalandreceived83.____________medicaltreatmentintime.Althoughwedonotknowabouttheir84.________names,wefelltheylikeourdearbigbrothersandsisters.85._______【參考答案】76.on︿a77.then→when78were去掉79serious→seriously80.正確81.hand→hands82.run→ran83.all→both84.about去掉85.they︿are短文改錯Oneday,Iwascookinginthekitchenas 76．_______________thetelephonerang.Iwenttoanswerimmediately. 77．_______________Shewasmyclosefriend,Lisa.Whenweweretalking 78．_______________onaphone,thefirealarmsounded.Iranbacktothe 79．_______________kitchen.Theroomfullofsmokeandbeefwasbadly 80．_______________burnt.Iquicklyturnedoffthegas,openingallthe 81．_______________windows,andthenwentoutofthehouse.Withmy 82．_______________surprise,twofireengineswereoutsidemyhouse.I 83．_______________wasratherworried.Itoldaboutthefirementhatit 84．_______________wasmycarelesscookingwhichcausedtheheavysmoke. 85．_______________【參考答案】76．a(chǎn)s→When77．a(chǎn)nswer后加it78．She→It79．a(chǎn)→the80．room后加was81．opening→opened82．With→To83．√84．去掉about85．which→that此題要求改正所給短文中的錯誤。對標(biāo)有題號的每一行作出推斷：如無錯誤，在答題卡該行右邊橫線上畫一個勾（J）；如有錯誤（每行只有一個錯誤），則按下列狀況改正：此行多一個詞：在答題卡短文上把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉，在答題卡該行右邊橫線上寫出該詞，并也用斜線劃掉。此行缺一個詞：在答題卡短文的缺詞處加一個漏字符號（八），并在答題卡該行右邊橫線上寫出該加的詞。此行錯一個詞：在答題卡短文錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在答題卡該行右邊橫線上寫出改正后的詞。留意：原行沒有錯的不要改。George,It'sbeenaweekafterweleftyourfamilyandwearenow76._______backhome.Thankyouverymuchforshowingthemaround77.______yourcityandprovidingusforthewonderfulmeals.After78._______wesaidgoodbyetoyou,wewenttoWashingtonwherewestayedforthreedays.Mybrotherwassomuchfond80._______ofthemuseumstherethathebeggedmyparentstostaying81．________anothercoupleofday.However,myfatherhadtoreturnto82.________workonMondaysoweflybacklastSaturdayafternoon.It83．________wasreallyaniceexperience.Ifyou'dliketomaketripto84._______ourcitysomeday,Iwillbebetterthanhappytobeyourguide.85._______Yours,Mike【參考答案】76.after---since77.them---us78.for---with79.正確80.去掉much81.staying---stay82.day----days83.fly---flew84.trip前a85.better----more(2021·甘肅省部分學(xué)校其次次聯(lián)考)I'maseniorstudentfromChina,agingseventeen.WhilesurfingtheInternet,IhavefoundthatyourorganizationwillholdasummercampinSingapore.Withgreatlyinterest,I'dliketoapplyforthem.I'manoutgoinggirlwholikecommunicatingwithothers.IcouldspeakEnglishwell.MywrittenEnglishisexcellent,either.Iwishtojoinintheactivities.Foronething,I'mwillingtointroduceChinatootherstudentsfromalloverworld;foranother,Iexpecttolearnfrommoreaboutothercountries.Inaddition,I'dliketomakefriend.ThechanceissopreciousasI'mreallylookingforwardtoyourapproval.答案：I'maseniorstudentfromChina,eq\o(aging,\s\do14(aged))seventeen.WhilesurfingtheInternet,IhavefoundthatyourorganizationwillholdasummercampinSingapore.Witheq\o(greatly,\s\do14(great))interest,I'dliketoapplyforeq\o(them,\s\do14(it)).I'manoutgoinggirlwhoeq\o(like,\s\do14(likes))communicatingwithothers.Ieq\o(could,\s\do14(can))speakEnglishwell.MywrittenEnglishisexcellent,eq\o(either,\s\do14(too)).Iwishtojoinintheactivities.Foronething,I'mwillingtointroduceChinatootherstudentsfromallovereq\o(∧,\s\do14(the))world;foranother,Iexpecttolearneq\o(from,＼)moreaboutothercountries.Inaddition,I'dliketomakeeq\o(friend,\s\do14(friends)).Thechanceissopreciouseq\o(as,\s\do14(that))I'mreallylookingforwardtoyourapproval. IstillremembermymiddleschoollifeinTianjinyet.Iwasthen 76.inaschoolforstudentsfromTibet.Aswewerealllefthome 77.atearlyage,wemetlotsofproblemsinourdailylife.We78.hadtodothewashing,cleaningandshoppingbyus.However, 79.weseldomfeltlonelyorhelplessly.Weenjoyedourhappylife. 80. Atweekends,wewouldplaybasketball,swimminginthepool 81.orgoforapicnic.Wewerelivinginabigfamily.Wetreat 82.eachotherasbrothersandsisters.Ifanyoneofushadany 83.difficultyinourlifeandstudy,theotherwouldhelphimout. 84. Ithasbeenfiveyearswhenwegraduated,butthosememories 85.areassweetaseverbefore.【參考答案】IstillremembermymiddleschoollifeinTianjinyet.Iwasthen76.yetinaschoolforstudentsfromTibet.Aswewerealllefthome77.wereat∧earlyage,wemetlotsofproblemsinourdailylife.We78.anhadtodothewashing,cleaningandshoppingbyus.However, 79.ourselvesweseldomfeltlonelyorhelplessly.Weenjoyedourhappylife. 80.helplessAtweekends,wewouldplaybasketball,swimminginthepool 81.swimorgoforapicnic.Wewerelivinginabigfamily.Wetreat 82.treatedeachotherasbrothersandsisters.Ifanyoneofushadany 83.√difficultyinourlifeandstudy,th