2024-2025學(xué)年新教材高中英語Unit1Backtoschool表達(dá)作文巧升格學(xué)案牛津譯林版必修第一冊

PAGEUNIT1Backtoschool倡議書倡議書屬于應(yīng)用文的一種，由標(biāo)題、稱呼、正文、結(jié)尾、落款五部分組成。一般用將來時(shí)或一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。題目常會(huì)給出標(biāo)題、稱呼、結(jié)尾、落款這四部分，考生只需完成正文即可。這類寫作的正文包括倡議的目的、內(nèi)容以及呼吁。[基本框架]1．開頭——點(diǎn)明發(fā)出倡議的目的；2．主體——具體說明倡議的內(nèi)容；3．結(jié)尾——對特定對象發(fā)出呼吁。留意事項(xiàng)：該體裁觀點(diǎn)顯明，情感真摯。觀點(diǎn)顯明，顯示著說話者對一種理性相識(shí)的確定，也顯示著說話者對客觀事物見解的透徹程度，能給人以可信性和牢靠感，情感真摯才能打動(dòng)人，引起共鳴。[常用詞塊]1．Nowadays，...Ashighschoolstudents，whatshouldwedo?現(xiàn)在，……作為中學(xué)生，我們應(yīng)當(dāng)做些什么呢？2．Inorderto...Ithinkweshouldtryourbesttodowhateverwecan.為了……我認(rèn)為我們應(yīng)當(dāng)盡最大努力。3．NowIwouldliketocalloneveryonetopayattentionto...現(xiàn)在我想要呼吁大家關(guān)注……4．Inmyopinion，weshould...Onlyinthiswaycanwe在我看來，我們應(yīng)當(dāng)……只有用這樣的方法我們才能……5．Itwouldbebetterif...假如……，那就更好了。6．Itishightimethatwe...是我們……的時(shí)候了。7．Aslongasweworktogether，wecan...只要我們團(tuán)結(jié)，就能……。8．Ifyouarewillingto...，please...假如你情愿……，請……[常用語句]※精彩開頭1．WhatI'mtalkingabouttodayismydream.我今日要談?wù)摰氖俏业幕孟搿?．It'snicetospeakaboutwhatwecandoforourschool，andIthinkeachofuscandosomething.很興奮談?wù)勎覀兡軌驗(yàn)閷W(xué)校做些什么，我認(rèn)為我們每個(gè)人都可做到。3．It'smyhonourtostandhereandsaysomethingaboutfriendship.很榮幸站在這里談?wù)撽P(guān)于友情的話題。4．Nowadays，peopleinbigcitiesarecomplainingabouttheheavytraffic.現(xiàn)在，生活在大城市里的人們在埋怨嚴(yán)峻的交通堵塞。5．Goodlisteningcanalwaysshowrespect，promoteunderstanding，andimproveinterpersonalrelationship.擅長傾聽能夠顯示出對于別人的敬重，促進(jìn)相互理解，改善人際關(guān)系。※正文佳句1.Asweallknow，failureisthemotherofsuccess，butfewpeoplecanreallyunderstandwhatthesayingmeans.我們都知道失敗是勝利之母，但是很少有人真正理解這句格言的真諦。2.NowifyouaskmewhatIwanttobewhenIgrowup，IwillsaywithouthesitationthatIwanttobeateacher，particularlyanEnglishteacher!如今你若問我長大想干什么，我會(huì)堅(jiān)決果斷地回答：我想當(dāng)個(gè)老師，尤其是當(dāng)一名英語老師！3．TodayIalsohaveadream—tomakeourcountrystrongerandmoreprosperous.今日我也有一個(gè)幻想——讓我們的國家變得更加強(qiáng)大，更加旺盛。4.Fromthispointofview，wecanseemoreandmorepeopletendtoofferhelptothoseintrouble.從這個(gè)角度來看，我們可以看到越來越多的人傾向于幫助那些處于麻煩中的人。5.Noonecandenythefactthatexercisingregularlyandkeepingabalanceddietbenefitourhealthgreatly.沒有人能夠否認(rèn)這一事實(shí)：常常熬煉和保持均衡的飲食對健康特別有好處。6.Thethingweshoulddoistoprotectthefacilitiesinourschool.我們應(yīng)當(dāng)做的是愛護(hù)好我們學(xué)校的設(shè)施?！辔督Y(jié)尾1．Ifeveryonedoesonethingforourschool，Ibelievewewillturnourschoolintoabetterplacetostudyandlivein.假如每個(gè)人都為學(xué)校做些事情，我信任我們學(xué)校會(huì)變成一個(gè)更有利于大家學(xué)習(xí)和生活的地方。2．Inmyopinion，weshouldtrytodevelophealthyeatinghabitstobuildupastrongbody.Onlyinthiswaycanwehaveenoughenergytostudybetter.在我看來，我們應(yīng)當(dāng)盡力養(yǎng)成健康的飲食習(xí)慣來強(qiáng)身健體。只有這樣我們才能夠擁有足夠的精力以便于更好的學(xué)習(xí)。3．Aslongasweworktogether，wecanmaketheimpossiblepossible.只要我們眾志成城，一切皆有可能。4．Ifyoucherishit，youwillhaveasuccessfullife!珍惜它，你就會(huì)擁有勝利的生活。越來越多的汽車進(jìn)入了我們的家庭，改善了我們的生活，但同時(shí)也帶來了許多問題，如堵車和車禍，給家庭和社會(huì)帶來了極大的危害。請你以學(xué)生會(huì)的名義，就交通平安問題用英語給全體學(xué)生寫一封倡議書。內(nèi)容包括：1．遵守交通規(guī)則，如走人行道/過斑馬線；2．別在街道或公路上玩耍；3．勸父母不要酒后駕車。留意：1．詞數(shù)80左右；2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)微環(huán)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。參考詞匯：斑馬線zebra-crossing【學(xué)生習(xí)作】Dearschoolmates，Moreandmorecarsarecomingintoourfamiliesandwearehappythattheyhavegreatlyimprovedourlife.Butunluckily，theyhavealsobroughtmanyproblems，suchasheavytrafficandtrafficaccidents.Trafficsafetyiseverybody'sbusiness.Wemustobeytherules.Forexample，wemustwalkonthesidewalks，whenwecrosszebra-crossing，stop，lookrightandleft，andthengoacrossfast.Don'tplayontheroad.Wecantellourparentsnottodrinkbeforetheydrive，nottorunthroughredlights，nottotalkandlaughwhiletheyaredriving.Carsarecomingintoourlife，butwecanbesafetodriveonroadsandwalkonsidewalksonlywheneverybodythinkstrafficsafetyiseverybody'sbusiness.TheStudents'Union點(diǎn)評：1.文章主體結(jié)構(gòu)支配欠合理：其次段可以分成兩段。2.句式較為單調(diào)：有些句子可以適當(dāng)整合以提升句子質(zhì)量，增加表達(dá)效果。3.詞匯選擇以初級(jí)詞匯為主：應(yīng)多用一些高級(jí)詞匯。【升格作文】Dearschoolmates，Withmoreandmorecarscomingintoourfamilies，wearehappythattheyhavegreatlyimprovedourlife.Butunluckily，theyhavealsobroughtmanyproblems，suchasheavytrafficandtrafficaccidents.Trafficsafetyiseverybody'sbusiness.Wemustobeytherules.Forexample，wemustwalkonthesidewalks，whenwecrosszebra-crossing，stop，lookrightandleft，andthengoacrossfast.Don'tplayontheroad.Wecantellourparentsnottodrinkbeforetheydrive，nottorunthroughredlights，nottotalkandlaughwhiledriving.Let'stakeimmediateaction!TheStudents'Union假定你是某國際學(xué)校的學(xué)生李華，你校正在開展“創(chuàng)建漂亮校內(nèi)”的活動(dòng)。請你用英語給全校學(xué)生寫一封倡議書。要點(diǎn)包括：1．創(chuàng)建漂亮校內(nèi)的重要性；2．校內(nèi)內(nèi)存在的不文明現(xiàn)象；3．你的看法。留意：1.詞數(shù)80左右(開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))；2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)微環(huán)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。Dearfellowstudents，I'mwritingtocalloneveryonetotakeanactivepartinbuildingabeautifulcampus.Yours，LiHua【參考范文】Dearfellowstudents，I'mwritingtocalloneveryonetotakeanactivepartinbuildingabeautifulcampus.Asweknow，wespendmostofourtimeoncampus.Anattractivecampuscanmakeourlearningpleasantandasaresultimproveourgrades.However，somestudentscanbeseenrunningonthelawn，pickingflowers.Someevenspitinpublicorthrowrubbishev