專題8.書面表達(dá)（教師版）

書面表達(dá)寫作六步驟：1.審題：文體，時態(tài)，人稱。2.抓住要點(diǎn)：要點(diǎn)是否齊全，適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充。3.擴(kuò)充句子：通過增加狀語，定語，連詞，使句子意思飽滿充實(shí)。4.連句成文，合理使用連詞。5.改正錯誤：拼寫是否錯誤，語法時態(tài)是否正確，連詞是否恰當(dāng)?shù)取?.謄寫作文：注意書寫工整美觀整潔。一20202021南京市建鄴區(qū)假如你是李華。你的英國筆友Peter想通過郵件了解你和你的家人以及你的學(xué)校生活。請根據(jù)他郵件中提出的問題回復(fù)郵件。郵件的開頭與結(jié)尾已給出，Peter郵件中的問題：Whereareyoufrom?Howoldareyou?Howmanypeoplearethereinyourfamily?Whatdoyourparentsdo?What’syourschoollike?Whatsubjectsdoyoustudyatschool?What’syourfavoritesubjectandwhy?要求:1.詞數(shù)60詞左右，文章開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.涵蓋所有問題，可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)信息；3.文中不得提及真實(shí)校名、人名等信息。DearPeter,Itwasgreattohearfromyou.I’dliketotellyousomethingaboutmyself.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Whatisyourlifelike?Ireallywanttoknowmoreaboutyou.Pleasewriteback.Yours,LiHua【答案】DearPeter,Itwasgreattohearfromyou.I’dliketotellyousomethingaboutmyself.Iama13yearoldboywhoesfromNanjing.Thereare3peopleinmyhome,includingmyparentsandme.BothofmyparentsareteachersandtheyhopeIcanbeateacherinthefuture,too.Ihaveabeautifulandmodernschool.Therearebeautifultreesandtallclassroombuildingsinit.Asamiddleschoolstudent,Ihavetolearnmorethan10subjects.MyfavouriteoneisEnglishbecauseIthinkitisnotonlyusefulbutalsointeresting.Whatisyourlifelike?Ireallywanttoknowmoreaboutyou.Pleasewriteback.Yours,LiHua【解析】1.題干解讀：本篇作文為電子郵件，要求根據(jù)郵件中所給的問題來介紹你和你的家人，以及你的學(xué)校生活；開頭段和結(jié)尾段已給出，寫作時注意上下文連接；第二段敘述“我”以及家人的情況，包括年齡、來自哪里、家里幾口人以及父母的工作；第二段介紹學(xué)校的情況、所學(xué)科目以及最喜歡的學(xué)科。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時，靈活運(yùn)用所學(xué)單詞短語以及句型，如13yearold,befrom,including,as以及therebe句型等。寫作時要包含題干中所有的要點(diǎn)，不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)使行文連貫。二20192020南京市秦淮區(qū)假如你是在南京學(xué)習(xí)的英國交流學(xué)生Jack,你收到一封來自你的英國同學(xué)Ben的電子郵件。請你根據(jù)郵件內(nèi)容，用英語給Ben回封電子郵件。DearJack,Howareyouthesedays?IknowyouareinNanjingnow.Whatisyourschoollike?Whatareyourfavouritesubjectsandsportsatschool?Whatdoyouliketodoatweekendsandwhy?Writesoon!YoursBen注意:1.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱;2.語言通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，要點(diǎn)全面，書寫規(guī)范;3.詞數(shù)80左右，文章的開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearBen,I'mfinethesedays.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________IhopetomeetyouinNanjingoneday.Yours,Jack【答案】DearBen,I'mfinethesedays.I’minNanjingChina.Ourschoolisbig.MyfavoritesubjectsareChineseandPE.Ilikefootballverymuch.Ioftengooutingwithmyfriendsonweekends.Allofuslikehikingnearourschool.Wecanseebeautifulflowersandtreesincountryside.Weareveryhappy.WouldyouliketoetoChina?IhopetomeetyouinNanjingoneday.Yours,Jack【解析】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于應(yīng)用文，書信作文。本文時態(tài)主要是一般現(xiàn)在時。認(rèn)為閱讀材料，認(rèn)真審題，根據(jù)Ben的書信列出提綱，短文必須包含Ben提出的內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.例文點(diǎn)評：本文就Ben提出的問題，做出了詳細(xì)的回答。時態(tài)使用正確，表達(dá)條理清楚，運(yùn)用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，文章具有連貫性和富有邏輯性。三20192020南通市八一中學(xué)請根據(jù)以下表格中的信息介紹你的好朋友Nancy姓名Nancy年齡12外貌高而苗條，棕色長發(fā)個人情況陽光中學(xué)七年級二班，擅長…….（自擬一點(diǎn)）家庭情況有一個幸福的家，父母來自英國，在中國工作；興趣愛好1.網(wǎng)球是她的最愛，………（自擬一點(diǎn)）2.在業(yè)余時間還喜歡閱讀，......（自擬一點(diǎn)）要求：1、根據(jù)表中的所給英語要點(diǎn)，不要簡單運(yùn)用，要有適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2、意思連貫，語言通順，語法正確，主題明確3、字?jǐn)?shù)：70左右。MygoodfriendNancyismygoodfriend.She___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Nancyismygoodfriend.SheistwelveyearsisMike.Sheistallandthin.Shehasbrownlonghair.SheisinClassTwo,GradeSeveninSunnyMiddleSchool.SheisgoodatEnglishbecauseshethinksitisinteresting.Shehasahappyfamily.HerparentsarebothfromAmerica,butnowtheyworkinChina.Herfatherisacookandhermotherisateacher.Shelovesherparentsverymuch.Tennisisherfavoritesport.Sheoftenplaytenniswithherfriendsafterschool.Shealsolikesreadinginherfreetime.ShegoestotheReadingClubtwiceaweek【解析】1.題干解讀：本文屬于材料作文。通過表格呈現(xiàn)出作文中需要描寫的所有細(xì)節(jié)，所給的材料比較具體，寫作時用簡單易懂的語言把要點(diǎn)描述清楚即可。2.例文點(diǎn)評：文章分開兩段，從對朋友Nancy的外貌描寫到她的家人的敘述描寫都很詳細(xì)。第二段主要描寫了朋友的興趣愛好，最喜歡的運(yùn)動。文章整體比較流暢，語言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，語言結(jié)構(gòu)簡單，意思表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確。四20192020南通市啟秀中學(xué)最近，啟秀中學(xué)和英國湯力文法友好學(xué)校舉行筆友書信活動。你想把李梅介紹給你的筆友May，請根據(jù)以下提示，寫一篇英語短文?；厩闆r14歲，七（8）班，高而瘦，不戴眼鏡興趣愛好她喜歡運(yùn)動，認(rèn)為運(yùn)動對她有好處，擅長打網(wǎng)球在校情況步行到學(xué)?；?0分鐘。上學(xué)從不遲到。喜歡地理，因?yàn)椤瓕蠋熀屯瑢W(xué)都很友好，所以……最喜歡的節(jié)日春節(jié)，因?yàn)椤硐搿ㄖ辽僖稽c(diǎn))注意：1.表達(dá)中必須包含所給的要點(diǎn)，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡單翻譯；2.詞數(shù)90左右。標(biāo)題已經(jīng)給好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；3.表達(dá)中請勿提及真實(shí)姓名。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】MybestfriendisLiMei.Sheisa14yearoldgirlinClass8,Grade7.Sheishighandthin.Sheneverwearsglasses.LiMeilovessportsbecauseshethinksit'sgoodforher.Sheisreallygoodattabletennis.Ittakesher10minutestogotoschool.Sheisneverlateforschool.Geographyisherfavouritesubjectbecauseit'sinteresting.Sheisalwaysfriendlytoherteachersandclassmates,sosheisverypopularwiththem.Amongallthefestivals,SpringFestivalisherfavourite.That'sbecauseshecangetredpacketsandbuythethingsshewant.LiMeidreamstobeadoctoronedaysothatshecanhelpalotofpeopleinneed.【解析】1.題干解讀：這是一篇材料作文，要求根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容介紹自己的朋友LiMei，寫作時要緊扣提示要點(diǎn)并進(jìn)行適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。文中可適當(dāng)使用一些連接詞來加強(qiáng)文章的邏輯性。寫好時，再閱讀一遍，減少語法錯誤，不要犯單詞拼寫上的錯誤。2.

例文點(diǎn)評：這是一篇比較優(yōu)秀的例文。例文按照材料中的提示要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行寫作，并進(jìn)行了適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，把朋友的基本情況、興趣愛好、在校情況、最喜歡的節(jié)日和理想都介紹清楚了。例文中簡明扼要，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，語言表達(dá)到位。五20202021南通市啟秀中學(xué)通過半學(xué)期的學(xué)習(xí)，同學(xué)們的英語有了明顯提高，請用英語介紹自己的家庭。下表是你的家庭成員情況，根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容，寫一篇題為Myfamily的短文。我在七年級二班；戴眼鏡，留短發(fā)；是學(xué)?；@球隊(duì)的成員爸爸是位地理老師；最喜歡的運(yùn)動是游泳；常從圖書館借各種各樣的書媽媽在博物館工作；每天步行上班；空閑時間她喜歡...要求：1、短文須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，要求語句通順、意思連貫；2、省略處須用23句話展開合理想象，做適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3、詞數(shù)在70個左右，短文的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。MyfamilyTherearethreepeopleinmyfamily.They'remyfather,mymotherandI.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Myfamilyisahappyone.Iloveitverymuch.【答案】MyfamilyTherearethreepeopleinmyfamily.They'remyfather,mymotherandI.MynameisLiLei.I’mastudentinClassTwo,GradeSeven.Iamatallboywithglassesandshorthair.Ilikeplayingbasketball.I’maplayerinschoolbasketballteam.Myfatherisageographyteacher.Helikesswimmingbest.Heoftenborrowsallkindsofbooksfromtheschoollibrary.Mymotherworksinamuseum.Sheusuallygoestoworkonfoot.Inhersparetime,sheenjoysreadingbooksandcooking.Shealwayscooksdeliciousfoodforthefamily.Myfamilyisahappyone.Iloveitverymuch.【解析】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于記敘文寫作。在寫作時應(yīng)根據(jù)題目要求講述自己及家人的情況。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文用第一人稱來寫作，時態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時為主，講述自己及家人的情況敘述完整，條理清晰。六20192020南通市田家炳中學(xué)（三中）81.《時代英語報》正舉辦以“Mynewfriend”為題的演講比賽。假如你是Kitty，請根據(jù)下表所提示的要點(diǎn)，用英語寫一篇演講稿，介紹你的新朋友Simon。姓名Simon年齡13班級陽光中學(xué)七年級一班外貌不高，戴眼鏡運(yùn)動業(yè)余時間打籃球，擅長籃球愛好閱讀，因?yàn)椤瓕W(xué)校生活7:45上課，8:30早操。每天8節(jié)課最愛科目……，因?yàn)椤蠋熡焉疲瑢W(xué)友愛夢想……注意：1、表達(dá)中必須包含所給的要點(diǎn)，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡單翻譯；2、詞數(shù)90左右。開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；3、表達(dá)中請勿提及真實(shí)姓名。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】MynewfriendHello,everyone!I’mkitty.LetmetellyousomethingaboutmynewfriendSimon.Simonis13yearsold.HeisastudentinClass1,Grade7atSunshineMiddleSchool.Heisnottall.Hewearsglasses.Heplaysbasketballinhisfreetime.Andheisgoodatplayingbasketball.Heenjoysreading.Readingisfun.Hisschoolstartsat7:45inthemorning.Usuallytheydomorningexercisesat8:30.Theyhave8lessonseveryday.HisfavoritesubjectisMath.HethinksMathisveryinteresting.Helikesallhisteachers.Theyareallverykind.Andhisclassmatesareallveryfriendly.Hewantstobeateacher.Ihopehisdreamcanetrue.【解析】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文，根據(jù)表格提示信息，介紹Simon的個人信息、外貌、愛好、學(xué)校生活等，部分理由需要補(bǔ)充，還需要寫他的夢想，理由合理，內(nèi)容全面。

2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文主要以第三人稱書寫，時態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時，注意主謂一致?？煞殖伤亩危谝欢慰傤I(lǐng)全文，第二段介紹個人信息，第三段介紹學(xué)校生活，最后介紹夢想。注意內(nèi)容連貫，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰條理。七20202021南通市育才中學(xué)假如，Millie是你的新朋友，請根據(jù)下表寫一篇為“Millie’sDay”的英文短文，介紹她的日常生活。工作日在學(xué)校1.早上7：30開始上課，下午5：00放學(xué)2.最喜歡地理3.有許多朋友，經(jīng)常一起聊天放學(xué)后1.周三下午練習(xí)足球2.周四下午經(jīng)常去圖書館借書周末1.經(jīng)常閱讀2.……要求：1.須包含所給內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，要求語句通順、意思連貫；2.具體內(nèi)容可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡單翻譯；3.詞數(shù)70詞左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Millie’sDayMillieismynewfriend.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Millie’sDayMillieismynewfriend.FromMondaytoFriday,sheusuallystartslessonsat7:30inthemorningandfinishesat5:00intheafternoon.HerfavouritesubjectisGeography,becauseshethinksgeographyclassesarealwaysinteresting.Shehaslotsoffriendsandtheyoftenchatwitheachotherafterclass.Afterschool,shedoesmanyinterestingactivities.ShepracticesplayingfootballeveryWednesday.OnThursday,shealwaysgoestothelibraryandborrowssomebooks.Atweekends,shelikesreading.Ithelpsherknowmoreabouttheworld.Shealsolikesdrawingpictures,andshewantstobeanartistwhenshegrowsup.【解析】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于材料作文，題目要求是請你根據(jù)表格提示內(nèi)容，以“Millie’sDay”為題寫一篇英文短文，介紹你的新朋友Millie的工作日和周末的日常活動。八20192020蘇州市56.學(xué)校學(xué)生社團(tuán)開始招募新社員啦!假設(shè)學(xué)校請你負(fù)責(zé)招募工作，請根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示，用英文寫一則啟事，介紹社團(tuán)情況。theSportsClub觀看比賽;鍛煉身體theEnglishClub談?wù)撚⒄Z;結(jié)識朋友theReadingClub閱讀書籍;了解世界注意:1.所寫內(nèi)容必須包括表格中所有信息，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;2.詞數(shù)80左右。開頭及結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名、地名等相關(guān)信息。參考詞匯:加入join(v.)Boysandgirls,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Weletoourschool.Letmeintroducesomeofourclubstoyou.【答案】Boysandgirls,Weletoourschool.Letmeintroducesomeofourclubstoyou.TheSportsClubisagoodplaceforsportsfans.There,youcanwatchmatcheswithothermembersanddosportstogetsomeexercise.IfyouareinterestedinEnglish,pleasejointheEnglishClub.Inthisclub,youcantalkyou’reyourfriendsaboutEnglish.Also,I’msureyouwillmakesomenewfriends.Andifyoulikereading,theReadingClubwillbearightplace.Readingbookswillhelpyoulearnalotabouttheworld.Thesearethemostpopularclubsinourschool.Ihopeyouwilljoinone.【解析】1、題干解讀：題目要求你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示，用英文寫一篇啟事，介紹團(tuán)體的情況，團(tuán)體包括運(yùn)動俱樂部、英語俱樂部和閱讀俱樂部，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2、寫作指導(dǎo)：題目應(yīng)以第二人稱來敘述內(nèi)容；時態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時為主；介紹團(tuán)體情況時，應(yīng)詳細(xì)具體，條理清晰，結(jié)構(gòu)完整。九20202021蘇州市昆山市63.進(jìn)入SunshineMiddleSchool，你開始了新的學(xué)習(xí)和生活，認(rèn)識了很多新朋友，在你的班上，一位名叫Lily的女生成為了你最好的朋友。請結(jié)合所給圖示，用英語寫一篇題為“Mybestfriend”的短文向大家介紹你最好的朋友。注意：1.詞數(shù)90左右；2.短文須包括圖示中所有要點(diǎn)，不要逐詞翻譯，需適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫、通順；3.短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名，校名等相關(guān)信息。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】MybestfriendIhaveagoodfriend.HernameisLily.Sheis15yearsold.ShestudiesinSunshineMiddleSchoolnow.SheisinClass7,Grade8.HerbirthdayisonDecember12th.Sheistallandthin.Shealwayswearsglasses.Shelikesplayingbasketball.Shethinksitcanmakeherfeelrelaxed.Shealsolikereadingbooksbecauseshecanlearnalotofknowledge.Shejoinedthebasketballclub.Sheplaysbasketballafterschooleveryday.Shehopestobeabasketballplayerinthefuture.【解析】1.題干解讀：本文屬于記敘文寫作，以“我最好的朋友”為題，按照題干中要點(diǎn)提示介紹自己的好朋友。包括姓名、年齡、學(xué)校、班級、年級、外貌、愛好、俱樂部以及夢想，以上要點(diǎn)缺一不可。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：文章以第三人稱、一般現(xiàn)在時為主，注意主謂一致問題；可采用一段式寫作，按照要點(diǎn)介紹Lily；注意要點(diǎn)齊全，語句通順有條理。十20182019蘇州市太倉市、昆山市65.假如你叫Alice，請根據(jù)所給提示，寫一封電子郵件，向你的網(wǎng)友Lily介紹自己的情況。外貌特征高、黑長發(fā)、……學(xué)校生活上學(xué)方式；最喜歡的科目及理由；老師、同學(xué)關(guān)系。愛好、夢想看書，因?yàn)椤骷?writer)，寫……要求:1、條理清楚，意思連貫，語句通順，標(biāo)點(diǎn)正確;2、內(nèi)容作適當(dāng)增補(bǔ)，但必須包括表格中所有要點(diǎn);3、80字左右(開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。DearLily,I'mAlicefromNo.3MiddleSchool_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Whataboutyou?WouldyoupleasetellmesomethingaboutyouinyourletterYours,Alice【答案】DearLily,I’mAlicefromNo.3MiddleSchool.I’mverytallandslim.Ihavelongblackhairandaroundface.Myschoolisfarfromhome.SoIgotoschoolbybikeeveryday.MyfavouritesubjectisEnglishbecauseit’sveryinterestinganduseful.Myteachersareverykindandtheyoftenhelpmewithmysubjects.Allmyclassmatesarefriendlytometoo.Weoftenchatwitheachotherandplaygamesafterschool.Ilikereading.Ioftenborrowbooksfromtheschoollibrary.ReadingisfunandIcanlearnalotfrombooks.Iwanttobeawriterandwritebooksforchildren.Ihopemydreamcanetrue.Whataboutyou?Wouldyoupleasetellmesomethingaboutyouinyourletter?Yours,Alice十一20192020蘇州市張家港市梁豐初級中學(xué)根據(jù)以下提示，以Millie’sDay為題寫一篇80個字左右的短文。要點(diǎn)如下：1．米莉每天6：00起床。她每天有許多事情要做。2．她吃完早飯后去上學(xué)。3．她大概在8：30做早操。因?yàn)樗鼈儗λ幸娌⑶医o她的一天作準(zhǔn)備。4．她吃中飯時與她的同班同學(xué)閑聊。5．每天晚上，她花2個多小時做家庭作業(yè)。6.做完作業(yè)后看半個小時電視。7.在十點(diǎn)鐘左右上床睡覺。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Millie’sDayMillieusuallygetsupat6:00inthemorning.Shehasmanythingstodoeveryday.Shegoestoschoolaftershehasbreakfast.Shedoesmorningexercisesatabout8:30becausetheyaregoodforherandhelpherpreparefortheday.Shelikestalkingwithherclassmatesatlunch.Everynight,shespendsmorethantwohoursdoingherhomework.Afterfinishingherhomework,sheoftenwatchesTVforhalfanhour.Shegoestobedataboutteno’clockatnight.【解析】1.題干解讀：本題是材料作文，要求根據(jù)題目所給材料寫一篇關(guān)于Millie一日生活的文章。題目所給要點(diǎn)必須全部包含，切忌遺漏。十二20202021泰州市泰興市洋思中學(xué)101.假如Jane是你的外教老師，請你根據(jù)表格中所給的信息提示，寫一篇文章介紹一下她。基本情況1.23歲，長頭發(fā)，高且苗條；2.來自美國，但現(xiàn)在和家人住在泰興；3.住得離我們學(xué)校遠(yuǎn)，每天乘公交車到校，花大約半個小時。愛好及擅長1.愛閱讀，因?yàn)閺臅锌梢粤私夂芏嚓P(guān)于世界；也愛聽歌，…2.擅長打網(wǎng)球，空閑時間經(jīng)常和朋友練習(xí)。3.最喜歡春節(jié)，能燃放煙花,觀看春晚。對中國的看法中國人對她很友好。你對Jane的評價(自擬一條)要求：1.內(nèi)容完整，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.表達(dá)清楚，意思連貫，符合邏輯；3.80詞左右。開頭已給，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。IhaveanewEnglishteacher.HernameisJane.Andsheismygoodfriendnow.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】IhaveanewEnglishteacher.HernameisJane.Andsheismygoodfriendnow.JaneesfromtheUSAbutshelivesinTaixingnow.Sheistwentythreeyearsold.Sheistallandslimandshehaslonghair.Shelivesfarawayfromourschool.Ittakesabouthalfanhourtogettoschoolbybuseveryday.Shelooksveryyoungandmodern.Shelikeslisteningtomusicverymuch.Shealsosingsverywell.Inheropinion,listeningtomusiccanmakepeoplehappyandrelaxed.Shealsoenjoysreading.Shethinksreadingcanhelpherlearnmoreabouttheworld.What’smore,sheisgoodatsports.Herfavouritesportistennis.Sheoftenpracticeswithherfriends.ShelikesSpringFestivalbest.BecauseshecansetofffireworksandwatchtheSpringFestivalGala.Jane

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題干解讀：題目要求根據(jù)表格提示要點(diǎn)，描寫自己的老師Jane的情況，可以適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮，寫作時要運(yùn)用正確的英語表達(dá)，要選用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和短語。

十三20202021無錫市第一女子中學(xué)76.請你根據(jù)表格中的信息寫一篇短文，介紹你的好朋友Lucy。年齡14學(xué)校生活就讀于陽光中學(xué)，學(xué)習(xí)努力，各門功課都學(xué)得好在學(xué)校，有很多好朋友，都對她很好，因此每天過的很愉快愛好喜歡打排球，是學(xué)校排球隊(duì)的一員夢想……（發(fā)揮12句）Lucyismygoodfriend.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Lucyismygoodfriend.Sheisfourteenyearsold.ShestudiesatSunshineMiddleSchool.Sheworksveryhardandsheisgoodat(doeswellin)allhersubjects(lessons).Atschool,shehasmanygoodfriendsandtheyareallkindtoher,soshehasagoodtime(hasfun…)everyday.Shelikesplayingvolleyballandsheisamemberoftheschoolvolleyballteam.Shewantstobeavolleyballplayerwhenshegrowsup.Ihopeherdreamwilletrue.【解析】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于材料作文，屬記敘文寫作。在寫作時應(yīng)承接短文開頭，從年齡、學(xué)校生活、愛好和夢想四個方面描寫，缺少內(nèi)容要補(bǔ)充完整，要包含表格中所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充。十四20202021徐州市銅山區(qū)初中生活開始了，你到了一所新的學(xué)校，經(jīng)過兩個多月的學(xué)習(xí)，一定對你的學(xué)校很了解吧！Tom也是一名初一新生，他想把他的學(xué)校介紹給我們，請根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示，幫助他寫一篇英語短文。要求：1.字?jǐn)?shù)：70詞左右，短文開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總數(shù)。2.內(nèi)容要包含以下所給提示，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。3.不得透露學(xué)校、姓名等任何個人信息，否則不予評分。內(nèi)容提示：(1)在ABC中學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)。(2)學(xué)校不大，12個教室；有閱覽室，可以看書；操場在教室前面，課后可以在那兒踢足球。(3)老師都很好，學(xué)生們很喜歡他們。(4)住的離學(xué)校遠(yuǎn)，每天乘公共汽車上學(xué)，大約需要半小時。(5)非常喜歡學(xué)校。MyschoolMynameisTom.IstudyatABCMiddleSchoolnow.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】MyschoolMynameisTom.IstudyatABCMiddleSchoolnow.Ourschoolisnotbig.Thereare12classrooms.Thereisareadingroomandwecanreadbooksinit.Theplaygroundisinfrontoftheclassroomsandwecanplayfootballthereafterclass.Ourteachersaresokindthatallthestudentslikethem.IlivefarawayfromschoolandIgotoschoolbybuseveryday.Ittakesabouthalfanhourtogotoschool.Ilikeourschoolverymuch.【解析】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容介紹自己的學(xué)校，注意要點(diǎn)要齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。十五20202021鹽城東臺市第四教育聯(lián)盟71.2018年8月26日，在亞運(yùn)會田徑男子100米的決賽中，我國短跑選手（Asia’sflyingman）的蘇炳添以9秒92的成績奪冠，并一舉打破賽會紀(jì)錄。請以Asia’sFlyingMan為題，介紹一下他。要點(diǎn)：1.蘇炳添，29歲，廣東人；2.短發(fā)，個子不高，強(qiáng)壯；3.待人友好，經(jīng)常幫助朋友，空閑時喜歡聽音樂和讀書；4.每天早起，努力訓(xùn)練；5.你對他的看法和希望：自擬兩點(diǎn)，不少于兩句話。注意：1.字?jǐn)?shù)在70字左右。2.文章要包括提示中的所有要點(diǎn)，不要逐詞翻譯。Asia’sFlyingManOnAugust26,2018,SuBingtianbroketherecordandwonthemen’s100metreraceattheAsianGames.ManypeoplecallhimAsia’sFlyingMan.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Asia’sFlyingOnAugust26,2018,SuBingtianbroketherecordandwonthemen’s100metreraceattheAsianGames.ManypeoplecallhimAsia’sFlyingMan.SuBingtianis29yearsold,heisfromGuangdong.NowhelivesinBeijing.Heisnottallbutstrong.Helikesrunning.Heisfriendlytoothers.Inhisfreetime,helikeslisteningtomusicandreading.Hehasagoodlivinghabithimself.Hegetsupearlyeverydayandtrainshard.Ilikehimverymuch,too.Ihopehecanwintheracen