Unit2Illhelptocleanupthecityparks.-2023-2024學(xué)年八年級(jí)英語(yǔ)下冊(cè)單元寫作深度指導(dǎo)（人教版）（教師版）

Unit2I’llhelptocleanupthecityparks.單元寫作指導(dǎo)與演練近三年考情分析話題考查熱度“提供幫助和做志愿者”志愿者活動(dòng)本單元以＂志愿服務(wù)＂為話題，應(yīng)用文體裁居多，該話題屬于中考常考話題之一。描述了發(fā)生在我們身邊的相關(guān)事情，目的在于教育學(xué)生團(tuán)結(jié)互助，關(guān)心社會(huì)和諧發(fā)展。此類作文為英語(yǔ)中的?？荚掝}作文，寫作時(shí)應(yīng)盡量用倡議或號(hào)召性的語(yǔ)句或者用自己或他人親身經(jīng)歷的事件鼓勵(lì)、教育他人。寫作目標(biāo)1.掌握并熟練使用表達(dá)出活動(dòng)的要點(diǎn)；1.掌握并熟練使用表達(dá)出活動(dòng)的要點(diǎn)；2.會(huì)寫一些簡(jiǎn)單的應(yīng)聘信；3.清晰表達(dá)自己的能力。寫作步驟◆1.總分總結(jié)構(gòu)。短文通常分為三個(gè)部分：總第一部分：開(kāi)篇點(diǎn)題，引出話題。分第二部分：活動(dòng)內(nèi)容以及提供的幫助。總——第三部分：活動(dòng)的感受?！?.人稱：第一人稱。◆3.時(shí)態(tài)：一般將來(lái)時(shí)、一般過(guò)去時(shí)。申請(qǐng)目的Ihavereadabout....申請(qǐng)目的Iwanttobeavolunteerof...in....I’mgoodat.../goodwith...個(gè)人優(yōu)勢(shì)Wecanraisemoneyfor....個(gè)人優(yōu)勢(shì)Ontheonehand,一方面Ontheotherhand,另一方面Ontheonehand,一方面Ontheotherhand,另一方面I’mableto...個(gè)人感受Iwilltrymybesttomaketheworldmorebeautiful.個(gè)人感受Tobevolunteerswillbeagreatexperienceforme.IhopeIcangetthechance.真題感知（2023·湖南湘潭·統(tǒng)考中考真題）湘潭市博物館正在為“講好湘潭故事，傳播本土文化”的大型宣傳活動(dòng)招募英語(yǔ)講解員。假設(shè)你是李華，你想?yún)⒓哟舜位顒?dòng)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示用英語(yǔ)向活動(dòng)負(fù)責(zé)人寫一封自薦信。要點(diǎn)提示：（1）個(gè)人基本情況（姓名、年齡等）；（2）自薦的原因（性格、特長(zhǎng)等）；（3）對(duì)活動(dòng)的認(rèn)知（感想或意義等）。注意：（1）字?jǐn)?shù)在80詞左右，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮（開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；（2）不能出現(xiàn)可能透露真實(shí)身份的任何信息（如校名，個(gè)人姓名等）。DearSir/Madam,I’dliketobeavolunteerinthis“TellingXiangtanStories,SpreadingLocalCulture”activity.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.YoursLiHua【答案】例文DearSir/Madam,I’dliketobeavolunteerinthis“TellingXiangtanStories,SpreadingLocalCulture”activity.

MynameisLiHua.Iam14yearsold.I’msuchanoutgoingboythatit’seasyformetomunicatewithothers.Inaddition,I’vegotvariedhobbies,suchasreadingbooks,doingsportsandperformingthecrosstalk.IaminterestedinChinesetraditionalculture.Ioftenreadbooksaboutthem.AndIalsotakepartinmanyactivitieslikethis.Ithinkthisactivityisverymeaningful.Itcanmakemorepeoplelearnaboutourlocalculture.Itcanhelptopromoteculturalexchangesanddevelopment.IfIamchosentobeamemberofthisactivity,Iwilltrymybesttodoit.I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.YoursLiHua[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為書(shū)信作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)完整表述內(nèi)容。[寫作步驟]第一步，開(kāi)頭已給出，表達(dá)想成為一名志愿者的意愿；第二步，介紹自己的個(gè)人情況，自薦原因以及對(duì)活動(dòng)的認(rèn)知；第三步，期待對(duì)方的回信。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①inaddition另外②beinterestedin對(duì)……感興趣③takepartin參加[高分句型]①I’msuchanoutgoingboythatit’seasyformetomunicatewithothers.（such…that引導(dǎo)結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句）②IfIamchosentobeamemberofthisactivity,Iwilltrymybesttodoit.（if引導(dǎo)條件狀語(yǔ)從句）【詞匯積累】1.helptodo...幫助做..... 2.cleanup打掃3.cheerup使高興起來(lái) 4.giveoutfood分發(fā)食物5.teachkids教學(xué)生 6.volunteer志愿者7.givesomeadvice給出建議 8.makeaplan制定計(jì)劃9eupwith想出......10.workinanoldpeople’shome在敬老院上班11.helpoutwith想辦法解決lonely孤獨(dú)的 carefor照顧decideto決定做 giveup放棄attheageof在.....歲時(shí) tryout參加.....選拔trieddoing嘗試做 etrue實(shí)現(xiàn)learnsomethingimportant學(xué)到了重要的東西beinterestedin對(duì)......感興趣 atthesametime同時(shí)volunteertodo自愿去做..... putup張貼repair修理 giveaway捐贈(zèng)thankyoufor...因......而感謝changemylife改變我的生活句型積累：I’dliketohelptocleanupthecityparks.我想去幫忙打掃市里的公園。IcanteachkidstolearnEnglish.我會(huì)教孩子們學(xué)英語(yǔ)。Let’smakesomenotices.咱們做些通知吧。Iwanttobeavolunteerinanoldpeople’shome.我想在敬老院做志愿者。Ilikereadingnewspapertothem.我喜歡讀報(bào)給他們聽(tīng)。Weshouldlistentothemandcareforthem.我們應(yīng)該傾聽(tīng)他們并且照顧他們。Iloveanimalsandwanttobeananimaldoctor.我喜歡小動(dòng)物想成為一名獸醫(yī)。8.IgetsuchastrongfeelingofsatisfactionwhenIseetheanimalsgetbetterandthelookofjoyontheirowners’faces.我得到強(qiáng)烈的滿足感當(dāng)我看見(jiàn)他們主人臉上的喜悅感。9.Volunteeringhereisadreametrue.能在這做志愿者，我的夢(mèng)想實(shí)現(xiàn)了。10.IcandowhatIlovetodoandhelpothersatthesametime.我可以做我喜歡做得去幫助別人。11.Helpingotherscanbringushappiness.幫助別人能給我們帶來(lái)快樂(lè)。12.Ithinkwe’dbetter....我覺(jué)得我們最好....13.InmyfreetimeIliketo...soIthinkI’dbegoodatthisjob.在業(yè)余時(shí)間我喜歡做所以我覺(jué)得我擅長(zhǎng)這項(xiàng)工作。14.I’mstrongin....我強(qiáng)烈想加入....15.Iwanttohelpoutasavolunteerinyourgroup.我想在你們的團(tuán)隊(duì)里做一名志愿者。例題分析：某兒童醫(yī)院正在招募一批能在周末來(lái)醫(yī)院幫忙的志愿者。假如你是Susan，你想成為其中的一員，請(qǐng)你給該兒童醫(yī)院寫一封自薦信?！舅悸伏c(diǎn)撥】1.定基調(diào)體裁：應(yīng)用文(自薦信)；信的主體部分為說(shuō)明文時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)人稱：第一人稱2.謀布局、寫句子3.巧銜接本文要求寫一封自薦信。在寫個(gè)人優(yōu)勢(shì)時(shí)，我們可用I’m...和Ican...的平行結(jié)構(gòu)作為一種銜接手段，這樣能使文章節(jié)奏勻稱、緊致。4.成篇章DearSirorMadam,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________DearSirorMadam,I’mwritingtoyouaboutvolunteeringatyourchildren’shospital.Iwouldliketostaywithkids.

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Susan一、詞匯積累(一)動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)1.打掃干凈___________________2.(使)變得更高興；振奮起來(lái)___________________3.分發(fā)；散發(fā)___________________4.放棄___________________5.張貼___________________6.推遲___________________7.打給(某人)___________________8.修理；解決___________________9.贈(zèng)送；捐贈(zèng)___________________10.建立；設(shè)立___________________11.幫助解決困難___________________12.用完___________________13.想出；提出___________________(二)其他短語(yǔ)1.城市公園_____________________ 2.食物銀行_____________________ 3.開(kāi)心的表情_(kāi)____________________ 4.一個(gè)課后計(jì)劃_____________________ 5.由于_____________________ 6.從現(xiàn)在起_____________________ 7.清潔日_____________________ 8.殘疾人_____________________ 二、句子積累1.Thegirlcouldvisitthesickkidsinthehospitaltocheerthemup.【不定式tocheerthemup表目的】我可以去敬老院逗老人開(kāi)心。___________________________________________________________________________________2.IcandowhatIlovetodoandhelpothersatthesametime.【whatIlovetodo是作do的賓語(yǔ)，意為＂做我喜歡的事情＂】我想做我喜歡的事情。___________________________________________________________________________________3.Volunteeringourtimetohelpthesepeopleisagoodideatospendourfreetime.【volunteeringourtimetohelpthesepeople在此句中是動(dòng)名詞短語(yǔ)作主語(yǔ)，volunteertimetodosth.意為＂自愿花時(shí)間做某事＂】我認(rèn)為自愿每周花時(shí)間去幫助殘疾人是很有意義的。___________________________________________________________________________________4.I’dliketohelphomelesspeople.Iwanttotravelalone.【wouldliketodosth.與wanttodosth.是指＂想要做某事＂】大學(xué)畢業(yè)后，我想成為一名志愿者。___________________________________________________________________________________【參考答案】一、詞匯積累(一)動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)1.cleanup2.cheerup3.giveout4.giveup5.putup6.putoff7.callup8.fixup9.giveaway10.setup 11.helpoutwithsth12.runoutof13.eupwith(二)其他短語(yǔ)1.citypark2.foodbank3.thelookofjoy4.anafterschoolprogram5.becauseof6.fromnowon7.CleanUpDay8.disabledpeople二、句子積累1.Icangotoanoldpeople’shometocheerthemup.2.IwanttodowhatIlovetodo.3.Ithinkvolunteeringourtimeeveryweektohelpdisabledpeopleismeaningful.4.I’dliketobeavolunteerafterIfinishmycollege.（一）1．為了更好地舉辦冬奧會(huì)，市冬奧辦現(xiàn)在面向全社會(huì)招聘身體健康、熱愛(ài)體育運(yùn)動(dòng)、樂(lè)于助人，并能熟練運(yùn)用英語(yǔ)和外國(guó)友人交流的志愿者。假如你叫李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示和要求，寫一封應(yīng)征冬奧會(huì)志愿者的自薦信。提示:1.Whydoyouwanttobeavolunteer?2.Whatcanyoudo?要求:1.自薦信須包含所有提示信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.信中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名、地名；3.詞數(shù)80左右，開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearSirorMadam,Thankyouforreadingmyletter.I’dliketobeavolunteerforWinterOlympicGames.Because____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】Onepossibleversion:DearSirorMadam,Thankyouforreadingmyletter.I’dliketobeavolunteerforWinterOlympicGames.BecauseIlikesports.Inschool,Ioftentakepartinallkindsofactivities.IamgoodatEnglish.IlistentoEnglishnewsontheradioeverydayandcanmunicatewithforeignfriendsfreely.Iamoutgoing,too.Icangetalongwiththemandgivethemahandwhenevertheyareinneed.Ithinkvolunteerworkisgreat.IhopeIcanbeamemberofWinterOlympicGames.I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，要求寫一篇自薦信；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)主要為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫作時(shí)應(yīng)圍繞所給提示信息寫作，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。[寫作步驟]第一步：文章開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，應(yīng)承接文章開(kāi)頭，接著寫出想成為志愿者的原因及你擅長(zhǎng)做的事情；第二步：對(duì)自薦信進(jìn)行總結(jié)，寫出你的期待和愿望。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①takepartin參加，參與②municatewithsb和某人溝通，交流③givethemahand幫助某人④getalongwith和某人相處[高分句型]①Icangetalongwiththemandgivethemahandwhenevertheyareinneed.（用whenever引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句）②.IhopeIcanbeamemberofWinterOlympicGames.（hope后省略that的賓語(yǔ)從句）（二）2．根據(jù)以下提示，以“I’mHappytoHelpOthers”為題，寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文。內(nèi)容:1.過(guò)去我將錢花在買衣服和零食上；2.老師告訴我們有很多兒童缺少衣服和食物，更不能上學(xué)；3.從那以后，我將零花錢捐給一個(gè)幫助兒童的組織；4.我為能幫助別人而自豪。要求:1.語(yǔ)句通順，語(yǔ)意連貫；2.必須包含所有提示內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3.80詞左右（不含所給詞）。I’mHappytoHelpOthersEveryoneneedshelp.Iusedto_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文I’mHappytoHelpOthersEveryoneneedshelp.Iusedtobuyclothesandsnackswithmypocketmoney.Butsometimestheywereawasteofmoney.Oneday,ourteachertoldusinsomeplacesintheworld,thereweremanypoorchildrenandtheydidn’thaveenoughclothesandfood.Theyevencouldn’tgotoschool.Hearingthat,Ifeltsorryforthem.Ishoulddosomethingforthem.Fromthenon,Igaveawaymypocketmoneytoanorganizationtohelpchildren.IhopeIcanhelpthepoorkids.Atleasttheycanbuyabook.Thismakesmefeelveryhappy.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般過(guò)去時(shí)”；③提示：注意不要遺漏提示內(nèi)容中給出的要點(diǎn)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫。[寫作步驟]第一步：表明寫作意圖。內(nèi)容是根據(jù)提示，以“I’mHappytoHelpOthers”為題，寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文。第二步：具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容。首先介紹過(guò)去我將錢花在買衣服和零食上；然后從老師那兒得知還有很多兒童缺少衣服和食物，更不能上學(xué)；其次介紹從那以后，我將零花錢捐給一個(gè)幫助兒童的組織。第三步：書(shū)寫結(jié)語(yǔ)。表示“我為能幫助別人而自豪?！盵亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①pocketmoney零花錢②awasteofmone浪費(fèi)金錢③feltsorryfor感到抱歉

④gaveaway捐贈(zèng)[高分句型]①Oneday,ourteachertoldusinsomeplacesintheworld,thereweremanypoorchildrenandtheydidn’thaveenoughclothesandfood.（therebe句型）②Fromthenon,Igaveawaymypocketmoneytoanorganizationtohelpchildren.（tohelpchildren.做目的狀語(yǔ)）③Thismakesmefeelveryhappy.（makesb.dosth.讓某人做某事）（三）3．假如你是Helen，你在某個(gè)圖書(shū)館的網(wǎng)站上看到了招收志愿者的公告，想申請(qǐng)成為其中一員。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的要點(diǎn)提示并結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際情況，寫一封申請(qǐng)郵件。提示：1.Whatkindofvolunteerworkdoyouwanttodo?2.Canyoudotheworkwell?3.Whydoyouwanttodothevolunteerwork?4.Whenareyoufreetodothework?要求：1.短文應(yīng)包括以上要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使行文通順、連貫；2.詞數(shù)：80左右（郵件的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。DearSirorMadam,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,Helen【答案】參考范文DearSirorMadam,I’dliketovolunteerasastudenthelperinthelibrary.Inmyfreetime,Ilovereadingallkindsofbooks.I’malsogoodatChineseandEnglish.IthinkIcandotheworkwell.Iwanttohelpstudentslearnabouttheimportanceofreadingbecauseitmakespeoplesmart.IcanalsodowhatIlovetodoandhelpothersatthesametime.I’malwaysfreeonweekends,soI’llbeabletovolunteerthereontime.I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,Helen【詳解】1.題干解讀：這是一篇電子郵件寫作。主要是表達(dá)自己想要參加志愿者項(xiàng)目的愿望，題干中給出了寫作要點(diǎn)，寫作時(shí)不要遺漏，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：要求是一封申請(qǐng)郵件，應(yīng)用書(shū)信格式。時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；人稱：第一人稱。首先描述自己想要做的志愿者工作以及自己做這份工作的優(yōu)勢(shì)；然后描述自己對(duì)于志愿者工作的理解；最后告知可以做志愿者工作的時(shí)間。寫作時(shí)要圍繞主題靈活運(yùn)用不同的短語(yǔ)和句式使文章層次清晰、邏輯清楚。（四）4．第十九屆亞運(yùn)會(huì)即將在杭州市舉辦。亞組委正向全社會(huì)招聘志愿者。假如你叫李華，你對(duì)此很感興趣，寫一封電子郵件應(yīng)聘。要求：1.樂(lè)于為國(guó)際友人服務(wù)；2.掌握豐富的文化知識(shí)，既是服務(wù)人員，也是文化的使者；3.具有流利的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)能力，能做好溝通工作。參考詞匯：第19屆亞運(yùn)會(huì)the19thAsianGames；使者carrier；要求：1.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名或地名；2.語(yǔ)言通順，意思連貫，書(shū)寫工整；3.詞數(shù)在100左右。文章開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearSirorMadam,Thankyouforreadingmyletter.Astheingofthe19thAsianGames,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________YoursLiHua【答案】參考例文：DearSirorMadam,Thankyouforreadingmyletter.Astheingofthe19thAsianGames,I’dlikeverymuchtobeavolunteer.MynameisLiHua.I’mgoodatEnglishandArabic.MyspokenEnglishissogoodthatIhavenodifficultymunicatingwithvisitors.Iamalwaysreadytohelpothers.Iamgladtoprovidethebestserviceforathletesandvisitorsduringthegames.Icanleadtheathletestodifferentplaceseasily.Besides,IhavearichknowledgeofChinesehistory,soIamnotonlyavolunteerbutalsoacarrierofChineseculture.I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.IhopeIcanplayaroleinmakingourcitymorebeautifulandlively.Yours,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一封電子郵件；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：根據(jù)所給提示完成寫作，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹寫信的目的——想成為一名志愿者；第二步，具體介紹自己的優(yōu)勢(shì)；第三步，最后期待能得到這次做志愿者的機(jī)會(huì)。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①begoodat擅長(zhǎng)于②havenodifficultydoingsth做某事沒(méi)有困難③notonly...butalso...不僅……而且……[高分句型]①M(fèi)yspokenEnglishissogoodthatIhavenodifficultymunicatingwithvisitors.（結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句）②IhopeIcanplayaroleinmakingourcitymorebeautifulandlively.（賓語(yǔ)從句）（五）5．假如你是李欣，一名英國(guó)交換生Judy向你咨詢你校關(guān)于志愿活動(dòng)的事情，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示給Judy寫一封郵件，介紹你校的志愿活動(dòng)。內(nèi)容提示：Whatvolunteeringactivitiesdoyouhaveinyourschool?Whendoyouusuallydovolunteeringwork?Howtojointhevolunteeringactivities?Somethingmoreaboutthevolunteering.注意：文中不得透露個(gè)人真實(shí)信息；詞數(shù)60—80；開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Hi,Judy!I’mlookingforwardtoyourexchangevisit._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Hopethishelpsandseeyousoon!Love,LiXin【答案】例文Hi,Judy!

I’mlookingforwardtoyourexchangevisit.Thereareallkindsofvolunteeringactivitiesinmyschool.Letmeintroducesomeofthem.

Wecancollectrubbishinthecitypark.WecanalsohelpthechildrenwhoareinChildren’sHospitalandcheerthemup.Besides,wecandovolunteerworkintheOldPeople’sHome.Iusuallychoosetohelpthesickchildren,becauseIliketostaywiththem.Also,Icangetonwellwithchildren.Ifyouwanttojointhesevolunteeringactivities,youcansendanemailtoschoolstudents’union.Weusuallydotheseactivitiesattheweekends.Ithinkyoucangetalotbydoingvolunteeringwork.Hopethishelpsandseeyousoon!Love,LiXin【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為電子郵件；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)完整表述內(nèi)容。[寫作步驟]第一步，引出本文主題；第二步，介紹學(xué)校有哪些志愿活動(dòng)，自己通常參加哪種志愿活動(dòng)以及如何加入志愿活動(dòng)；第三步，表達(dá)希望。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①lookforwardto期待②allkindsof各種各樣的③getonwellwith與……和睦相處[高分句型]①Letmeintroducesomeofthem.（祈使句）②WecanalsohelpthechildrenwhoareinChildren’sHospitalandcheerthemup.（who引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句）（六）6．假如你是李華，你參加了學(xué)校團(tuán)委上周六組織的“用行動(dòng)溫暖世界”(Actsmaketheworldwarm)的志愿者活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下表格信息，給你的筆友John寫一封電子郵件活動(dòng)地點(diǎn)街道、社區(qū)……至少補(bǔ)充兩項(xiàng))活動(dòng)內(nèi)容清潔街道；分發(fā)環(huán)保廣告……(至少補(bǔ)充兩項(xiàng))活動(dòng)的感受勞累但……參考詞匯：street,neighborhood,clean,tiredbuthappy,……要求：1.可選擇使用參考詞匯，亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)任何真實(shí)信息(姓名、校名和地名等)；4.詞數(shù)：不少于70詞。(開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))DearJohn,Longtimenosee!Letmetellyousomethingmeaningfulrecentlyinmylife.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I’mlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHua【答案】例文：DearJohn,Longtimenosee!Letmetellyousomethingmeaningfulrecentlyinmylife.LastSaturday,Itookpartinavolunteeringactivity“Actsmaketheworldwarm”organizedbymyschool.Thevolunteerswenttothestreets,neighborhoods,hospitalsandoldpeople’shometodothevolunteeractivities.Someofuscleanedupstreets.Somehandedoutenvironmentaladvertisements.Somereadstoriestothesickchildreninhospital.Othersofferedtheirhelpinthebusstation.Itookpartinthevolunteeractivityattheoldpeople’shome.Ihelpedthemwashclothesandcleanrooms.Ialsosangsongstotheoldpeopletomakethemhappy.Whenwefinishedthework,wewereverytiredbutfeltveryhappyatthesametime.I’mlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.

Yours,

LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般過(guò)去時(shí)”；③提示：根據(jù)所給提示完成寫作，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫。[寫作步驟]第一步，問(wèn)候?qū)Ψ讲⑻岢鲆o對(duì)方介紹自己的一次有意義的活動(dòng)（題目已給出）；第二步，具體介紹自己的一次志愿者的經(jīng)歷，包括活動(dòng)的地點(diǎn)、內(nèi)容以及自己的感受；第三步，最后期待對(duì)方的回復(fù)。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①takepartin參加②cleanup打掃③atthesametime同時(shí)[高分句型]①Whenwefinishedthework,wewereverytiredbutfeltveryhappyatthesametime.（when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句）②Ialsosangsongstotheoldpeopletomakethemhappy.（不定式作目的狀語(yǔ)）（七）7．假如你是李華，你和學(xué)校的志愿者最近開(kāi)展了一次志愿活動(dòng)，你的英國(guó)筆友Mike來(lái)信問(wèn)及此事，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)用英文給他寫封電子郵件。要點(diǎn)如下：1.時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)：5月22日，敬老院；2.參與人員：學(xué)校的志愿者；3.活動(dòng)：送鮮花水果，打掃衛(wèi)生等；4.收獲：懂得關(guān)愛(ài)老人，團(tuán)隊(duì)合作。注意：1.詞數(shù)80～100；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.郵件的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：OldPeople’sHome敬老院DearMike,Thankyouforyourlastemail.Nowletmetellyouwhatwedidinourlastschoolactivity.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Doyouhaveanyvolunteerwork?I’mlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHua【答案】例文DearMike,Thankyouforyourlastemail.Nowletmetellyouwhatwedidinourlastschoolactivity.OurschoolvolunteerswenttotheOldPeople’sHomeonMay22nd.Wegavethemflowersandfruits.Wealsohelpedthemcleanup.Somestudentsalsogavethemperformancestomakethemhappy.Throughthisactivity,Iunderstandthatweshouldcarefortheelderlyandworktogetherasateam.Ifweallgivealittlelove,theworldwillbebetter.Doyouhaveanyvolunteerwork?I’mlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為電子郵件；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般過(guò)去時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏提示，并適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)：5月22日，敬老院。第二步，介紹參與人員：學(xué)校的志愿者。第三步，介紹活動(dòng)：送鮮花水果，打掃衛(wèi)生等。第四步，介紹收獲：懂得關(guān)愛(ài)老人，團(tuán)隊(duì)合作。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①cleanup清理②carefor關(guān)心③lookingforwardto盼望[高分句型]①Somestudentsalsogavethemperformancestomakethemhappy.（tomakethemhappy.動(dòng)詞不定式作目的狀語(yǔ)）②Throughthisactivity,Iunderstandthatweshouldcarefortheelderlyandworktogetherasateam.（that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句）③Ifweallgivealittlelove,theworldwillbebetter.（if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句）（八）8．假如你是李華，長(zhǎng)春市圖書(shū)館英文圖書(shū)室正招募志愿者。你想申請(qǐng)做志愿者，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)和要求，用英語(yǔ)給負(fù)責(zé)人格林先生寫一封不少于40詞的申請(qǐng)書(shū)。要點(diǎn)：1.本人15歲，來(lái)自第一中學(xué)；2.擅長(zhǎng)說(shuō)英語(yǔ)，溝通能力強(qiáng)；3.可以幫助讀者介紹英文書(shū)籍、打掃衛(wèi)生等。要求：要點(diǎn)齊全；表述通順；簡(jiǎn)潔得體。DearMr.Green,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】例文1DearMr.Green,IwouldliketobeavolunteerinthelibrarybecauseIlikemunicatingwithothers.I’m15yearsold.I’mstudyingatNo.1MiddleSchool.I’mgoodatspeakingEnglish.IcanalsohelptointroduceEnglishbookstothereaders.I’mwillingtocleanthelibrary.Thankyouforyourkindnessandconsideration.Yours,LiHua例文2DearMr.Green,Iwanttobeavolunteerforthelibrary.I’ma15yearoldgirlfromNo.1MiddleSchool.I’mfondoftalkingwithothersandIdowellinspeakingEnglish.IcanhelptocleanthelibraryandintroduceEnglishbookstothereaders.IbelieveIcandoit.I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏信息提示的內(nèi)容，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，并且突出寫作的要點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖。直接說(shuō)明想要申請(qǐng)做志愿者；第二步，具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容。介紹自己，重點(diǎn)說(shuō)明你的優(yōu)勢(shì)；第三步，書(shū)寫結(jié)語(yǔ)。希望能被錄用。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①wouldliketobe想要成為②begoodat擅長(zhǎng)③consideration考慮④befondof喜愛(ài)⑤lookingforwardto期待[高分句型]①IwouldliketobeavolunteerinthelibrarybecauseIlikemunicatingwithothers.（原因狀語(yǔ)從句）②IcanhelptocleanthelibraryandintroduceEnglishbookstothereaders.（動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)并列）（九）9．學(xué)校學(xué)生會(huì)正在招募“手拉手”活動(dòng)的志愿者，為外國(guó)來(lái)訪學(xué)生展示傳統(tǒng)手工制作（例如剪紙、風(fēng)箏、燈籠等），以弘揚(yáng)中華傳統(tǒng)文化。假如你是李欣，請(qǐng)你用英文給學(xué)校學(xué)生會(huì)寫一封自薦信，在信中說(shuō)明你申請(qǐng)成為志愿者的理由以及你會(huì)做什么。內(nèi)容提示：（1）Whywouldyouliketobeavolunteer?（2）WhatdoyouthinkoftraditionalChineseculture?（3）Whatcanyoudoasavolunteer?（4）Somethingyou’velearnedfromvolunteerexperience.注意：文中不得透露個(gè)人真實(shí)信息；詞數(shù)60﹣80；文中已給出內(nèi)容不計(jì)入總數(shù)。DearSir/Madam,Learningthatthestudentunionislookingforvolunteers,I’mwritingtoapplytobeeavolunteer._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I’mlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply!Yours,LiXin【答案】例文：DearSir/Madam,Learningthatthestudentunionislookingforvolunteers,I’mwritingtoapplytobeeavolunteer.IamLiXin,aboyfromClass2,Grade9.IhavebeenavolunteersinceIwasamiddleschoolstudent.Ihavelearnedalotfrommyvolunteerwork.Forexample,Iknowhowtomunicatewellwithothers.ThereasonwhyIwanttobeavolunteerofyourprogramisthatIloveChinesecultureverymuchandIwanttospreadChineseculture.Besides,MyEnglishisverygood,soIcanmunicatewiththemveryeasily.IthinktraditionalChinesecultureisimportantanduseful.Iamgoingtoshowthetraditionalhandicraft,suchaspapercutting,kites,lanternsandsoontospreadthetraditionalChineseculture.IfIhavethechance,Icanmakevideostotellinternationalstudentsthehistoryofkitesandteachthemtomakekites.I’msuretheywillbeveryinterestedinit.I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply!Yours,LiXin【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一封信件；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖。表明自己寫信是為了推薦自己做一名志愿者；第二步，具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容。從“原因、對(duì)于中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化的看法以及作為一名志愿者會(huì)怎么做”具體闡述；第三步，書(shū)寫結(jié)語(yǔ)。表達(dá)自己的期待。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①lookfor尋找②municatewith與……交流③beinterestedin對(duì)……感興趣[高分句型]①ThereasonwhyIwanttobeavolunteerofyourprogramisthatIloveChinesecultureverymuchandIwanttospreadChineseculture.（why引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句）②IfIhavethechance,Icanmakevideostotellinternationalstudentsthehistoryofkitesandteachthemtomakekites.（if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句）（十）10．成都將于今年夏天舉行世界大學(xué)生運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)，隨著時(shí)間的日益臨近，大動(dòng)會(huì)主辦方于近日開(kāi)啟了志愿者招募工作。你是一名即將畢業(yè)的初三學(xué)生，很想成為一名大運(yùn)會(huì)志愿者。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)所給提示，用英語(yǔ)給大運(yùn)會(huì)組委會(huì)相關(guān)負(fù)責(zé)人Jordan先生寫一封申請(qǐng)信。注意：1.須全面反映表格中信息；2.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的學(xué)校和姓名；3.詞數(shù)：100左右。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：DearJordan,

IlearnfromtheInternetthattheWorldUniversityGameswillbeheldintheChengduwhereIlive.Iwouldliketoworkasvolunteerforit.I’maboyof15yearsoldfromamiddleschool.MyspokenEnglishisgoodandIcanmunicatewith