高三9月聯(lián)考英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)+放下鏡頭面對(duì)真實(shí)+講義

續(xù)寫(xiě)題目閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Thewaitercarefullyplacedourfoodonthetable."Enjoyyourmeal.Letmeknowifyouneedanything,"hesaidwithapolitesmileashewalkedofftoservetheotherguestsintherestaurant.RaulliftedhisforktobegineatingbeforeIinterruptedhim,"Wait,canItakeapictureformyblog?"Hesighed,"Goahead."Itookoutmycellphoneandtookthepicture.Then,Ispentthenextthirtysecondsdecidingonhowtomakeaperfectpost.Bythetimeouricecreamdessertcamearound,Iwasgettingreadytotakemyfifthpictureofthenight.Raulrolledhiseyes.Iquicklyhadashotofthedessertbeforeaskinghim,"Sorry,amIbotheringyoubytakingpictures?""I'mnotgoingtolie.It'salittleannoying,"hesaidhesitantly."Butit'sokay.Iwantyoutodowhatmakesyouhappy."Iputawaythephone,alittlebitembarrassed,anddecidedtojustenjoyourdinner.Whileweconversedoverdessert,hisstatementlingered（逗留）inthebackofmymind.Itwasn'tuntilIreachedhomethatIreallythoughtovertheissue.DidtakingpicturesofmylifetoshowsomeonewhomIbarelyspoketomakemehappy?Well,therewasdefinitelythatindescribablefeelingIfeltwhenmypostgainedovertwentylikes.Itfeltgood;itfeltlikeIwon.But,whatwastheprize?IlookedthroughthestreamofphotosthatIhadpostedofRaulandme.Mostwereofourtimespentatfinerestaurantsorthelatestattractionsnearourcity,andthebrandnamegiftsweboughteachotheronholidays.IclickedontheprofilesofotherpeopleIknewandnoticedasimilartrend.Well,whenmypostgainedovertwentylikes,itfeltgood.Butdoesitreallymatter?1.續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請(qǐng)按格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Para1:IcalledRaulthatnight.Para2:“Howaboutdoingsomethingmeaningfulforatleastthenextyear?”Ianswered.文章大意文章講述了主人公在餐廳與朋友Raul共進(jìn)晚餐時(shí)，因?yàn)轭l繁拍照記錄而忽略了與朋友的真實(shí)互動(dòng)。在Raul的委婉提醒下，主人公開(kāi)始反思自己的行為，意識(shí)到社交媒體上的點(diǎn)贊和關(guān)注并不能帶來(lái)真正的滿(mǎn)足感?；丶液?，主人公審視了自己過(guò)去在社交媒體上發(fā)布的照片，意識(shí)到這些照片并不能代表他們之間真正的關(guān)系和經(jīng)歷。在與Raul的深夜電話(huà)交談中，主人公提出了一個(gè)想法：在未來(lái)一年內(nèi)，他們將不再為了社交媒體而生活，而是專(zhuān)注于真實(shí)的體驗(yàn)和創(chuàng)造有意義的回憶。這個(gè)決定標(biāo)志著他們將從追求虛擬的認(rèn)可轉(zhuǎn)向追求真實(shí)的生活體驗(yàn)。在原文中，有幾處伏筆為續(xù)寫(xiě)部分提供了基礎(chǔ)：1.拍照行為的頻繁：主人公在餐廳頻繁拍照，這不僅影響了與Raul的用餐體驗(yàn)，也暗示了主人公對(duì)社交媒體的依賴(lài)。2.Raul的微妙反應(yīng)：Raul對(duì)主人公拍照行為的不滿(mǎn)，雖然他沒(méi)有直接表達(dá)，但從他的眼神和語(yǔ)氣中可以感受到。3.主人公的自我反思：在對(duì)話(huà)中，主人公開(kāi)始質(zhì)疑自己追求社交媒體認(rèn)可的行為是否真的讓她快樂(lè)，這為后續(xù)的改變埋下了伏筆。4.社交媒體的虛幻滿(mǎn)足：主人公意識(shí)到社交媒體上的點(diǎn)贊雖然讓她感到短暫的滿(mǎn)足，但這種滿(mǎn)足是虛幻的，這促使她思考更深層次的滿(mǎn)足感。在續(xù)寫(xiě)部分，這些伏筆得到了回應(yīng)：1.改變拍照習(xí)慣：主人公在電話(huà)中向Raul表達(dá)了想要改變頻繁拍照的習(xí)慣，這直接回應(yīng)了原文中拍照行為的頻繁。2.Raul的支持：Raul在電話(huà)中的支持和理解，回應(yīng)了原文中他微妙的不滿(mǎn)和對(duì)主人公幸福的關(guān)心。3.追求真實(shí)體驗(yàn)：主人公提出不再為了社交媒體而生活，而是專(zhuān)注于真實(shí)的體驗(yàn)，這回應(yīng)了她在原文中的自我反思和對(duì)社交媒體虛幻滿(mǎn)足的質(zhì)疑。4.一年之約：主人公提出的“至少未來(lái)一年”的承諾，是對(duì)原文中她對(duì)社交媒體依賴(lài)的直接回應(yīng)，也是她決心改變的明確表示。這些伏筆和回應(yīng)構(gòu)成了故事的連貫性，推動(dòng)了情節(jié)的發(fā)展，并揭示了主人公內(nèi)心的變化和成長(zhǎng)。參考范文Para1:IcalledRaulthatnight."Hey,it’sme,"Isaid,myvoicetentative."I'vebeenthinkingandIcan'thelpbutwonderifI'mmissingsomethingmoremeaningfulinlife."Therewasapauseontheline."Youknow,"hefinallyreplied,histonethoughtful,"Sometimes,itjustfeltlikeyouweremorefocusedoncapturingthemomentthanactuallylivingit."Hishonestystruckachord.Staringoutattheflickeringlights,Iadmitted,"Idon’twantthattodefineourmomentstogether."AsIimaginedhimnoddingslowly,heuttered,“Igetthat,”hisvoicesteady,“Whatdoyousuggest?”P(pán)ara2:“Howaboutdoingsomethingmeaningfulforatleastthenextyear?”Ianswered.MypulsequickenedasIenvisionedusembarkingonadventuresthattranscendedthedigitalrealm.“Let’sputourphonesawaywhenwe’retogetherandfocusonrealexperiences—exploretheworld,volunteer,oreventryoutnewhobbies.”Icouldsenseasparkinhimasheleanedintomyidea.“I’dlikethat,”hereplied,asmileblossomingthroughthespeaker.Atthatmoment,anewresolveignitedwithinme,shimmeringwithinfinitepossibilities.Iknew,insteadofchasingephemerallikesthateroded,wewouldbecreatingmemoriesthatendured.下水文1Para1:IcalledRaulthatnight,mymindracingwiththerealizationsoftheday."Raul,I'vebeenreflectingonourdinnerconversation,"Isaid,myvoicefilledwithanewfoundclarity."Theconstantneedtocaptureeverymomentforsocialvalidation...it'sbeenovershadowingthejoyofthemomentitself."Icouldsensehisattention,hispatienceashelistened."Ithinkit'stimeforachange,"Ideclared,feelingaresolveIhadn'tknownIpossessed."Iwanttoliveourexperiencesfully,withoutthefilterofacameralens."Therewasathoughtfulsilenceontheotherendoftheline,andIheldmybreath,waitingforhisresponse.Para2:"Howaboutdoingsomethingmeaningfulforatleastthenextyear?"Ianswered,myexcitementgrowingwitheachword."Let'smakeapacttoliveinthemoment,totrulyenjoyourtimetogetherwithoutthepressureofdocumentingitforsocialmedia."Icouldhearthesmileinhisvoiceasheresponded,"Ilikethesoundofthat.Let'sdoit."Wediscussedideasforexperiencesthatwouldenrichourlives,fromvolunteeringatalocalcharitytotakingupanewhobbytogether.Theconversationwasfilledwithenthusiasmandasenseofadventure,andaswehungup,Ifeltarenewedsenseofpurpose.Itwastimetoshiftthefocusfromlikesandsharestolaughterandmemories.下水文2Para1:IcalledRaulthatnight,mythoughtsswirlingwiththeimplicationsofourearlierdiscussion."Raul,I'vebeenmullingoverwhatyoumentionedattherestaurant,"Iventured,myvoicetingedwithahintofuncertaintybutalsoasparkofresolve."ThewayI'vebeentreatingouroutings—turningthemintophotoopsforsocialmedia—it'snotreallyaboutus,isit?"Ipaused,allowingthequestiontohangbetweenus."I'vebeensofocusedontheonlineapproval,onthevirtualpatsontheback,thatImighthavelostsightoftherealtreasure:thetimewespendtogether."IcouldalmostfeelRaulnoddingontheotherend,hisunderstandingandsupportpalpableeventhroughthephoneline.Para2:"Howaboutwemakeacommitmenttolivemoreauthentically,atl