2025屆高考英語(yǔ)復(fù)習(xí) 讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)六、提升作文顏值 導(dǎo)學(xué)案

讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)六、提升作文顏值一、巧用形容詞Useadjectivestoconveyavividpicture!1.Janeroseatthebreakofday.2.Fortunately,wegotinthehelicopter3.Shebegansobbing.4.Marysatstillagainstthedoor.5.Wewerethrilledtoseetheboywasrescued.Wejumpedtoourfeet.6.Shewasexhausted.Shestillkeptyellingatthetopofherlung.7.Youcan'tmaginethatIwasveryanxiouswhenIknewyouwereinabadmood.→升級(jí)版:1.Janeroseatthebreakofday,_hungryandthirsty.2.Fortunately,wegotinthehelicopter,_safeandsound.3.Frightenedandfrustrated,Shebegansobbing.4.Lostintheaght,Marysatstillagainstthedoor.5.Sothrilledwerewetoseetheboywasrescuedthatwejumpedtoourfeet.6.Exhaustedas/thoughshewas,shestillkeptyellingatthetopofherlung.7.Youcan'timaginehowanxiousIwaswhenIknewyouwereinabadmood.→句式總結(jié)！①主謂...，adj(短語(yǔ))②adj(短語(yǔ))，主謂③so+adj+that...④adj+as/thoughsbis/was...⑤How+adj.+主謂Practice1.Mary滿(mǎn)臉通紅、氣喘吁吁地從大門(mén)口跑了進(jìn)來(lái)。2.Jack是如此的焦急以至于他在他的房間里來(lái)回踱步。3.困在迷霧中，我什么也做不了，只能哭泣，無(wú)助又失落。答案:Flushedandbreathless,Maryrushedoutofthegate.SoanxiousasJackthathepacedupanddowninhisroom.Trappedinthedensemist,Icoulddonothingbutburstintotears,helplessanddisappointed.二、活用副詞①副詞使表達(dá)更具活力②副詞突出畫(huà)面感例如:1.Tearsofjoyfloodedhereyesassheprayedsilently.2."She'sstolenmywatch!”Leesaidangrily(怒地說(shuō)),"Itwentmissingatschoolyesterday.3.Deeplymoved(深地被感動(dòng))，weappreciatedhimandfeltasenseofwarmth.4.Hopelesslystandingontheroadside(絕望地站在路邊),Iwassosadthatthetearswerefilledwithmyeyes.5.Myparentsscoldedmeforrunningoutofthehousesecretly(偷地跑出房間)butwerealsogladthatIwasnotseriouslyinjured(我受傷并不很?chē)?yán)重).6.Totally/Absolutely/Completelyfrightened(完全被嚇著)Macrodehisbikeasquicklyashecould.三、非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞1.動(dòng)詞的一種形式，可以充當(dāng)出了謂語(yǔ)以外的其他成分。它不受人稱(chēng)和數(shù)的限制。在句中起n.adj.adv.的作用。1.Hewastremblinginablanketandhesaid,“I’mcold.”=Tremblinginablanket,hesaid,“I'mcold.”2.Whenshearrivedthere,shesearchedtheunfamiliarbuilding,andaskedforZatanna'sdormitoryfromdoortodoor.=Arrivingthere,shesearchedtheunfamiliarbuilding,askingforZatanna'sdormitoryfromdoortodoor.3.ForafewmomentsIjuststoodthere.Iheldthatten-dollarbillandIwonderedwhattobuyandwhotobuyitfor.=ForafewmomentsIjuststoodthere,holdingthatten-dollarbillandwonderingwhattobuyandwhotobuyitfor.4.Shewrote“ToBobby,FromSantaClaus”onit.ThenshedrovemeovertoBobbyDecker'shouseassheexplainedIwasofficiallyoneofSanta'shelpers.=Havingwritten“ToBobby,FromSantaClaus”onit,shedrovemeovertoBobbyDecker'shouse,explainingIwasofficiallyoneofSanta'shelpers.Practice1.我小心翼翼地打開(kāi)信，希望能找到一些有關(guān)錢(qián)包主人身份的線(xiàn)索。2.女孩微笑著，長(zhǎng)發(fā)在微風(fēng)中飄動(dòng)。3.他的妻子傷心極了，眼里滿(mǎn)是淚水。4.他又沮喪叉低落，低著頭，走在隊(duì)伍的最后。5.他聚精會(huì)神地聽(tīng)著，咬著嘴唇，眼睛盯著地板。6.天亮?xí)rJane醒了，覺(jué)得頭暈暈的。7."當(dāng)然有圣誕老人啊"，奶奶說(shuō)道，一邊用手指撥弄著我的頭發(fā)。8.她穿著圣誕老人的服裝，悄悄溜進(jìn)房間，沒(méi)有被看到。9.Ronny沉浸在強(qiáng)烈的恐懼感中，一句話(huà)也說(shuō)不出來(lái)。10.好奇心切，她從河岸邊跑開(kāi)，穿過(guò)田野去追兔子。11.他痛苦地喘著氣，強(qiáng)迫自己站了起來(lái)，邁著緩慢的步子，搖搖晃晃地開(kāi)始走。答案:1.Iopenedthelettercarefully,hopingforsomecluetotheidentityoftheownerofthewallet.2.Thegirlsmiled,withherlonghairflowinginthebreeze.3.Hiswifewasindeepsorrowwithhereyesfilledwithtears.4.Depressedandlow-spirited,hewalkedattheendofthelinewithhisheaddrooping.5.Helistenedwithcloseattention,bitinghislipsandstaringatthefloor.6.ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeupwithherheadspinning.7."Ofcourse,thereisaSantaClause."Grandmasaid,strokingherfingersthroughmyhair.8.DressedinaSantaClauscostume,sheslippedintotheroomwithoutbeingnoticed.9.Immersedinastrongsenseofscare,Ronnycouldn'tutterasingleword.10.Burningwithcuriosity,sheranawayfromtheriverbankandacrossthefieldtochaseaftertherabbit.11.Gaspingwithpain,heforcedhimselftohisfeetandwithslow,shakysteps,begantowalk. 四、with的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)句式①:with+情感名詞，主謂/[withone'seyesfullof+n.]1.周?chē)娜藵M(mǎn)意地笑了。Peoplearoundmesmiledwithsatisfaction.2.她生氣地盯著我。Shestaredatmewithanger.3.我熱淚盈眶,沖出公寓，沿著街道跑。Withmy eyesfulloftears,Irushedoutoftheflatandranalongthestreet.4.他停下來(lái)轉(zhuǎn)向我，眼里滿(mǎn)是恐懼。Withhiseyesfullofterror,hestoppedandturnedtome.句式②:with+賓語(yǔ)+doing/done/todo,主謂1.Hestoodsilently.Tearsofregretwererolling/sliding/strearingdownhischeeks.=Hestoodsilentlywithtearsofregretrollingdownhischeeks.2.Herushedtotheroom.Hisheartbeatwildly.=Herushetotheroomwithhisheartbeatingwildly.3.Asherplanwasruinedbytheaccident,sheletoutacrywithanger.=Withherplanruinedbytheaccident,sheletoutacrywithanger.4.Asalltheexamswerepassed,shedancedwithjoy.=Withalltheexamspassed,shedancedwithjoy.Practice:① Heissmiling__________②Heburiedhisfaceinhishands,crying_________.③Seeingtheunexpectedpresent,shejumpedtoherfeet________.④Afterseveralattemptstosaveherself,shesatstillinthelift,waitingforrescue__.⑤Figuringoutthatshehadmadeastupidmistake，shesmiled____andapologizedtotheman.五、無(wú)靈主語(yǔ)一、Whatis"無(wú)靈主語(yǔ)"→用無(wú)生命的事物做主語(yǔ)，用人或者是社會(huì)團(tuán)體的行為動(dòng)作做謂語(yǔ)="無(wú)靈主語(yǔ)+有靈謂語(yǔ)"[有種擬人化表達(dá)]eg:Romewitnessedmanygreathistoricevents.羅馬發(fā)生過(guò)許多重大歷史事件。Rome-→無(wú)生命的事物witness-→目擊，是人的動(dòng)作，有靈謂語(yǔ)→→無(wú)靈主語(yǔ):物品，動(dòng)作，情感，時(shí)間，地點(diǎn)等vs有靈主語(yǔ):有生命的①Suddenly,Ihaveagoodidea.→→→②A(yíng)goodideasuddenlystrikesme.二、無(wú)靈主語(yǔ)的分類(lèi)①情感狀態(tài)的抽象名詞+謂語(yǔ)→描寫(xiě)人物情緒/心理時(shí)，可以替換掉"sbfeel..."“情感狀態(tài)的抽象名詞+謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞”的描寫(xiě)有：①Feargrippedthevillage.(整個(gè)村莊籠罩在恐怖之中)②Couragedesertedhim.(他失去了勇氣)③Angerchokedmywords.(我氣的說(shuō)不出話(huà))④Awaveofnervousnesswashedoverhim.(一陣緊張的情緒涌上他的心頭)⑤Achillofhorrorsuddenlysweptoverhim.(他突然感到不寒而栗)⑥Excitementseizedhim.(他好興奮)Tips:◆常見(jiàn)的情緒名詞：happiness,joy,delight開(kāi)心快樂(lè)；surprise,astonishment驚奇驚訝；shame羞恥羞愧；anger憤怒；despair絕望；regret遺憾后悔；sorrow悲傷；horror驚恐；anxiety焦慮；disappointment失望沮喪；satisfaction滿(mǎn)意滿(mǎn)足；puzzlement困惑不解；等等。◆常見(jiàn)的謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞：seize侵襲；choke噎住堵住；flood充滿(mǎn)；creep不知不覺(jué)產(chǎn)生；grip緊抓；givewayto被xx代替；washover洗滌侵襲；deserted丟棄遺棄；等等。②思考/動(dòng)作行為的名詞+謂語(yǔ)→描寫(xiě)人物動(dòng)作/思考行為時(shí)，可以替換"sbdo..."“思考/動(dòng)作行為的名詞+謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞”的描寫(xiě)有：①Thesightofthescenefilledmewithhorror.(看到這個(gè)情景我心中充滿(mǎn)了恐懼)②A(yíng)terriblethoughtsuddenlystruckme.(我突然想到一個(gè)可怕的想法)③Atenminutes’walkbroughtustothehotel.(我們步行十分鐘就到了旅館)④Thethoughtofseeinghersonverysoonfilledherheartwithgreathappiness.(想到不久就要見(jiàn)到她的兒子，她心中感到十分快樂(lè))Tip：◆常見(jiàn)詞匯補(bǔ)充，可根據(jù)文中人物動(dòng)作或思考的行為，挑恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~自行搭配：常見(jiàn)的人物行為詞匯有：sight看到，thought想法，glance一瞥，look看到，idea想法，feeling感受，walk走路；等等?！舫Ｒ?jiàn)的謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞：overwhelm壓倒；strike打擊侵襲；arouse喚起；remind想起；fill...with充滿(mǎn)xx；change改變；bring帶來(lái)；等等。③身體部位/音容樣貌+謂語(yǔ)→描寫(xiě)人物外貌性格時(shí)，可以替換"sbis..."“身體部位/音容類(lèi)名詞+謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞”的描寫(xiě)有：①Smilecrumpledhisface.(他笑得一臉皺紋)②HerfacebrightenedwhenIgaveherthepresent.(我給她禮物時(shí)，她的臉上煥發(fā)出了光彩)③Hiswordssentmeaquiverthroughmybody.(他的話(huà)讓我全身不寒而栗)④Laughterlingeredaroundtheroom.(笑聲在房間里縈繞)⑤TearswelledupinAnni'seyes.(淚水從安妮的眼中涌出)Tip：◆常見(jiàn)詞匯補(bǔ)充，可根據(jù)文中的人物的外貌或性格，挑恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~自行搭配：常見(jiàn)的身體部位/音容的名詞有：face；laughter；smile；tear；words說(shuō)的話(huà)；等等?！舫Ｒ?jiàn)的謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞：lightup，brighten照亮；linger繼續(xù)存留；wellup涌出；flash閃爍；crumple弄皺；等等。④時(shí)間地點(diǎn)場(chǎng)景類(lèi)+謂語(yǔ)→描寫(xiě)故事的時(shí)間或背景時(shí)“時(shí)間/地點(diǎn)/場(chǎng)景類(lèi)名詞+謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞”的描寫(xiě)有：①Ahushfellupontheclassroom.(教室一片寂靜)②Beijinghaswitnessedgreatchangesinrecentyears.(北京見(jiàn)證了最近幾年的的巨大變化)③Duskfoundthechildcryinginthestreet.(黃昏時(shí)，孩子在街上哭)④Thatchillyafternoonwitnessedhimtrudginginthesnow.(那個(gè)寒冷的下午，他在雪地里跋涉)⑤Nighthasfallenoverthecountry.(夜幕已經(jīng)籠罩著鄉(xiāng)間)Tip：◆常見(jiàn)詞匯補(bǔ)充，可根據(jù)文中需要交代的時(shí)間或地點(diǎn)背景，挑恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~自行搭配：常見(jiàn)的時(shí)間/地點(diǎn)/場(chǎng)景類(lèi)名詞：slience，hush安靜沉默；dusk黃昏；dawn黎明破曉；morning；afternoon；night；等等?！舫Ｓ玫闹^語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞有：see看見(jiàn)；witness見(jiàn)證；find發(fā)現(xiàn)；fall降臨進(jìn)入；等等。⑤自然現(xiàn)象類(lèi)名詞+謂語(yǔ)→描寫(xiě)環(huán)境時(shí)，可以替換"Itissunny..."“自然現(xiàn)象類(lèi)名詞+謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞”的描寫(xiě)有：①Asuddenshowerkilledthewind.(突然下了一陣雨，風(fēng)停了)②A(yíng)heavyrainvisitedthecity.(這個(gè)城市剛下過(guò)一場(chǎng)大雨)③Thesunhascomeout.(太陽(yáng)出來(lái)了)④Thethickfogblanketedthefield.(濃霧籠罩著整個(gè)大地)Tip：◆常見(jiàn)詞匯補(bǔ)充，可根據(jù)續(xù)寫(xiě)所需的環(huán)境描寫(xiě)，挑恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~自行搭配：常見(jiàn)的自然現(xiàn)象名詞：sun；sunshine；moon；moonlight；fog，mist霧；rain；earthquake地震；等等?！舫Ｒ?jiàn)的謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞：blanket覆蓋；come；bring；prevent妨礙阻止；strike打擊侵襲；threaten威脅/即將來(lái)臨；等等。練習(xí)一1.他沒(méi)有了勇氣。Couragedesertedhim.2.他感到非常輕松。Agreatsenseofrelaxationfloededoverhim.3.他感到不寒而栗/恐懼。Asenseofhorrorseized/creptuponhim.4.一陣焦慮撕名