2024年高考英語全國I卷書面表達(dá)試題解析范文講解課件

2024高考英語新課標(biāo)I卷應(yīng)用文寫作適用地區(qū)：山東、河北、湖北、湖南、福建、廣東、江蘇、浙江第三部分寫作（共兩節(jié)，滿分40分）第一節(jié)（滿分15分）

假如你是李華，你的美術(shù)老師上周五在公園帶你們上了一節(jié)美術(shù)課，完成了一個(gè)美術(shù)作品。請(qǐng)你寫信給外國筆友，講述你完成的作品及感受。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個(gè)左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。DearSusan,__________________________Yours,LiHua【語篇分析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生寫信給外國筆友，講述自己完成的一件美術(shù)作品及感受。文章的人稱應(yīng)為第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)以一般過去時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。體裁人稱時(shí)態(tài)主要內(nèi)容書信第一人稱一般過去時(shí)、一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)1.講述自己完成的一件美術(shù)作品2.自己的感受【遣詞造句】詞匯運(yùn)用完成：complete周圍的：surrounding特色：flavour咨詢：consult作品：presentation令人信服的：convincing優(yōu)美：elegance花朵：blossom令人激動(dòng)的：thrilling成果豐碩的：fruitful從事：bededicatedto不時(shí)地：fromtimetotime亮點(diǎn)句型1.I’mwritingtosharemyadventureinanartclasswhichtookplaceinaparkwithyou.（定語從句）2.LastFriday,ourartteachertookourclasstoHongxingPark,locatedonatwistingrivertogiveusaclass.

（非謂語動(dòng)詞短語作定語）3.Intheclass,theteachergotustoprepareanartwork,eithershowingthelandscapeordrawingsomebeautifulflowersandinsects.4.WhatIwasdedicatedtoisapeachtree.（名詞性從句）5.Howthrillingandfruitfultheclasswas!（感嘆句）6.Notonlydidwestudentsgetsomehands-onexperience,butwealsodevelopedourinterestinbothartandnature!（倒裝句）【遣詞造句】范文1DearSusan,LastFriday,ourartteachertookourclasstoHongxingPark,tocompleteanartworkbasedonthesurroundingscenery.WhatIwasdedicatedtoisapeachtree.Toshowthedelicacyandeleganceoftheblossom,Iaddedsomebeestoitscentre,enjoyingtheflavour.Ofcourse,Istoppedfromtimetotimetoconsultmyteachertomakemypresentationmoreconvincing.Howthrillingandfruitfultheclasswas!Notonlydidwestudentsgetsomehands-onexperience,butwealsodevelopedourinterestinbothartandnature!Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHua范文2DearSusan,

I'mwritingtosharemyadventureinanartclasswhichtookplaceinaparkwithyou.

LastFriday,ourartteachertookourclasstoHongxingPark,locatedonatwistingrivertogiveusaclass.Intheclass,theteachergotustoprepareanartwork,eithershowingthelandscapeordrawingsomebeautifulflowersandinsects.

WhatIwantedtodrawisanappletree.Toshowthebeautyoftheblossom,Iaddedsomebeestoitscentre,enjoyingtheflavour.Ofcourse,IstoppedfromtimetotimetorefertotheInternetforsomeexpertisetomakemypresentationmoreconvincing.

Notonlydidwestudentsgetsomehands-onexperiencefromtheclass,butwealsodevelopedourinterestinbothartandnature!Yours,