（江蘇省專用）2024屆高考英語(yǔ)沖刺必考題型真題模擬-高分寫作【查漏補(bǔ)缺】（附答案）

（江蘇省專用）2024屆高考英語(yǔ)沖刺必考題型真題模擬——高分寫作【查漏補(bǔ)缺】知識(shí)點(diǎn)：中考高分作文的特征1.清晰的分段，頭尾兩段比較簡(jiǎn)潔明了，中間內(nèi)容可以詳細(xì)描述。明確時(shí)態(tài)和文章的體裁，有時(shí)候會(huì)穿插不同的時(shí)態(tài)在文章中，特別是是描述個(gè)人的一段經(jīng)歷時(shí)要用到一般過去時(shí)，作文體裁考察書信體、郵件、記敘某件事情、描寫某個(gè)人居多。例如這樣一篇材料是目前中考比較容易考察的類型：生活是一位睿智的長(zhǎng)者，生活是一位博學(xué)的老師。生活需要我們用心面對(duì)，無(wú)論是美好還是意外，我們都要記得微笑和感恩。請(qǐng)以“Lifeisfullof”為題寫一篇短文，分享一次對(duì)你有特殊意義的經(jīng)歷。內(nèi)容包括：1.請(qǐng)先將標(biāo)題填寫完整；2.分享一次對(duì)你有特殊意義的經(jīng)歷；3.談?wù)勀愕母形?。LifeisfullofchallengesLifewillbewonderfulwithallkindsofchallenges.Itisthechallengesthatmakemestronger.（開頭段比較簡(jiǎn)潔，點(diǎn)明主題“生活充滿挑戰(zhàn)，但挑戰(zhàn)讓我更堅(jiān)強(qiáng)?！保㊣movedtothecitywhenIenteredthemiddleschool.Butmyproblemwasthatnoonecookedformebecausemyparentscamehomelate,soImadeupmymindtolearnhowtocook.Imustchallengemyself.ThenonedayIwatchedmyparentscookingdinnercarefully.Theytaughtmehowtocook.Afewdayslater,Ilearnedtocookformyself.NowIamhappyIcancookdeliciousfood.Myparentsaresatisfiedwithme.Iamalsoproudofmyself.（中間段主要分享自己的一段特殊經(jīng)歷，這里一定要圍繞主題去展開故事的講解，并且要提到現(xiàn)在自己的改變有哪些。）Ilearnedfromitthatwemaymeetsomedifficultiesinourlife,butifwehaveconfidenceandaregoodatlearning,everythingwillbebetter.Iamsoeagertomeetthecomingdifficulties,Iwon’tgiveupnomatterhowhardtheywillbe.（結(jié)尾段談?wù)剛€(gè)人的感悟，這個(gè)時(shí)候需要重新說明一下主題，并且提到遇到挑戰(zhàn)個(gè)人會(huì)怎么應(yīng)對(duì)。）2.適當(dāng)運(yùn)用英語(yǔ)中的定語(yǔ)從句、狀語(yǔ)從句和賓語(yǔ)從句這大句式以及what引導(dǎo)的主語(yǔ)從句和it作為形式主語(yǔ)和形式賓語(yǔ)的句式。同時(shí)，感嘆句和強(qiáng)調(diào)句也可以使用。例如：HersmileissobrightthatshewontheheartofminewhenIfirstmether.（so….that引導(dǎo)結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句；when引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句）Besides,itisimportantforustokeepsafetyrulesinmind,especiallywhenwerowaboatorplayintheamusementpark.（it作形式主語(yǔ)，“Itis+adj.forsb.todosth.”句型）It’smygreathonortoinformyouthatwewillgototheSlenderWestLakeinYangzhouforastudytournextWednesday.（it作形式主語(yǔ)，Itis+名詞+todosth）Youmayfinditdifficulttomakefriendswithpeoplewhoalwayshavedoubtsaboutyou.(it作形式賓語(yǔ)，sbfindit+adj+todosth)Maryisalwaysreadytohelpotherswhogetintotrouble.（who引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句）Moreover,whatmakesmeinterestedisthatIcancookbymyself.（what引導(dǎo)主語(yǔ)從句）IthinktheExpoParkisnotonlyanexhibitionofgardens,butalsotheprideofXuzhou’sdevelopment.（“notonly...butalso...”結(jié)構(gòu)）IfIhavethechancetobeamemberoftheclub,I’llbehappy.（if引導(dǎo)條件狀語(yǔ)從句）Asforme,Ithinkbeingaleadercanhelpmelearnhowtoarrangethingsproperly,whichmeansalottome.（動(dòng)名詞作主語(yǔ)，which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句）Whatawonderfulexperience!（what引導(dǎo)感嘆句）Ilearnedfromitthatwemaymeetsomedifficultiesinourlife,butifwehaveconfidenceandaregoodatlearning,everythingwillbebetter.（that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句和if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句）Lifewillbewonderfulwithallkindsofchallenges.Itisthechallengesthatmakemestronger.3.有明顯的銜接詞或者詞組，使得文章長(zhǎng)短有致。例如：What’smore,Maryisalwaysreadytohelpotherswhogetintotrouble.Asweallknow,agoodfriendcanmakeourlifebetter.Firstofall,tomakeagoodfriend,youmustbefriendlytoothers.Also,beatrustworthyman.Youcantellanythingtosuchaperson.especiallywhenyouareinabadmood.Inaddition,themostimportantqualityinfindingfriendsishonesty.Asforme,oneofmysecretsofmakingfriendsisbeinghelpful.Ibelievethatbeinghelpfulmeansshowingconcernforothers.Forexample,myclassmateJiangLeifeltsadafterlosingabasketballgameInaword,I’mlookingforwardtohavingameaningfulnewlife.4.可以適當(dāng)?shù)剡\(yùn)用諺語(yǔ)或者名人名言來增強(qiáng)文章想表達(dá)的思想感情。例如：Practicemakesperfect.（孰能生巧）Wecanpracticehardinordertohaveagoodperformanceatschool.Nopain,nogain.（一份耕耘，一份收獲）Weshouldrealizetheimportanceofworkinghardonthewaytosuccess.Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.（有志者事竟成）Wecan’tgiveupeasilywhenwegetintotrouble.Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.（患難見真情）Friendshipplaysanimportantroleinourlife.【例題講解】時(shí)光荏苒，光陰似箭。在三年的初中生活里，你肯定遇到過許多良師益友，其中誰(shuí)會(huì)是你最難忘的人呢？請(qǐng)以“TheMostUnforgettablePerson”為題，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文，講述你和他（她）之間的故事。注意：1.內(nèi)容必須包括所給的提示要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.詞數(shù)90左右，短文開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。3.表達(dá)中請(qǐng)勿提及真實(shí)校名及姓名。TheMostUnforgettablePersonHowtimeflies!I’llgraduatefrommymiddleschoolsoon.Overthepastthreeyears,I’vemetlotsofimportantpersons.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【正確答案】TheMostUnforgettablePersonHowtimeflies!I’llgraduatefrommiddlemyschoolsoon.Overthepastthreeyears,I’vemetlotsofimportantpersons.Amongthem,mydeskmateMaryisthemostunforgettablepersonforme.HersmileissobrightthatshewontheheartofminewhenIfirstmether.What’smore,Maryisalwaysreadytohelpotherswhogetintotrouble.Shehaschangedmealotsincewebecamedeskmates.Iusedtobelazyandalwaysmadeagreatmessonmydesk.AndIwasalwaysmadwhenlookingformyexercisebooksandtestpapers.Sheoftenremindedmetotidymydesk.Sometimessheevenhelpedmelookforthings.Gradually,Iformedthegoodhabitofputtingeverythinginorder.Tome,Maryisjustlikethebrightlightinmylife.ShehasleftmemanyhappymemoriesandIwillneverforgether.①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”和“一般過去時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏提示中的關(guān)鍵信息，結(jié)合給出的三個(gè)問題來介紹自己最難忘的人。[寫作步驟]第一步，點(diǎn)明最難忘的人是誰(shuí)；第二步，具體介紹這個(gè)人為何是最難忘的；第三步，介紹自己對(duì)這個(gè)人的感覺。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①lotsof許多②bereadytodosth.準(zhǔn)備好做某事③getintotrouble遇見麻煩④usedtobe過去曾經(jīng)是⑤lookfor尋找⑥formthegoodhabitof養(yǎng)成……的好習(xí)慣[高分句型]①HersmileissobrightthatshewontheheartofminewhenIfirstmether.（that引導(dǎo)結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句；when引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句）②What’smore,Maryisalwaysreadytohelpotherswhogetintotrouble.（who引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句）【基礎(chǔ)練習(xí)】1.假如你是李華，你的英國(guó)筆友Eric給你發(fā)來電子郵件請(qǐng)求幫助。請(qǐng)根據(jù)郵件內(nèi)容，用英語(yǔ)回復(fù)。DearLiHua,Howareyougoing?Ourschoolwillholdadramafestivalnextmonth.Itriedoutfortheperformancelastweek.ButI’mveryunhappytobechosentoplayarolewithoutanydialogue.ShouldIgiveupthechance?Couldyoupleasegivemesomeadvice?Thankyou!Yours,Eric注意：1.文中不能出現(xiàn)你的真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。2.語(yǔ)言通順，意思連貫，條理清晰，書寫規(guī)范。3.詞數(shù)80左右，郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾部分已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearEric,I’mgladtoreceiveyouremail.Now,I’mwritingtotellyouaboutmythoughts.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【正確答案】DearEric,I’mgladtoreceiveyouremail.Now,I’mwritingtotellyouaboutmythoughts.First,it’sbraveofyoutotryoutfortheperformanceduringyourdramafestival.Althoughyouhaven’tgottheroleyouwanted,it’sstillagoodchanceforyoutoimproveyouractingskillsandconfidence.Infact,therolewithoutanydialoguemaybemorechallengingbecauseyouwillhavetousemorebodylanguagestoexpressyourself.Sodon’tgiveupthechance.What’smore,practicehardinordertohaveagoodperformance.Practicemakesperfect.Wishyougoodluckandlookforwardtoyourwonderfulperformance!Yours,LiHua①題材：本文是一封電子郵件；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，學(xué)生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏Eric的郵件中的關(guān)鍵信息，針對(duì)朋友參加戲劇節(jié)選拔而提出的想法和建議。適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，表達(dá)很開心收到朋友的電子郵件，并要表達(dá)自己的想法。第二步，夸贊朋友勇于參加戲劇節(jié)的選拔，講述要參加沒有對(duì)話的角色的理由，鼓勵(lì)朋友熟能生巧。第三步，書寫結(jié)束語(yǔ)。表達(dá)“祝愿朋友表演成功”的想法。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①tryoutfortheperformance參加……的選拔②infact事實(shí)上③giveup放棄④inorderto為了[高分句型]①I’mgladtoreceiveyouremail.（begladtodosth.句型）②First,it’sbraveofyoutotryoutfortheperformanceduringyourdramafestival.（Itis+形容詞+ofsb.todosth.該句型常用描述人物特征的形容詞）③Practicemakesperfect.（諺語(yǔ)）2.初中生活就要結(jié)束了，同學(xué)們即將開始新的征程，規(guī)劃新的人生。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表提示以“Myplanforthenewlife”為題，給你們校報(bào)寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文，介紹你的計(jì)劃。學(xué)習(xí)制定計(jì)劃，努力學(xué)習(xí)；多讀好書，……生活早睡早起，勤做鍛煉，如……做做家務(wù)，感恩父母；聽聽音樂，放松自己；外出旅游，參觀名勝；愿望……注意：1.詞數(shù)90左右，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.內(nèi)容須包括所給要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，條理清楚、語(yǔ)句連貫；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名和地名等信息。MyplanforthenewlifeOurmiddleschoollifeiscomingtoanend.Anewlifeisontheway.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【正確答案】MyplanforthenewlifeOurmiddleschoollifeiscomingtoanend.Anewlifeisontheway.Iplantodolotsofthingsforthenewlife.First,Iwillmakeaplanandtrytokeepabalancebetweenworkandrest.I’llworkhardonallsubjects.Inmyfreetime,Ihopetoreadmoreusefulbookstolearnaboutdifferenthistoriesandcultures.Readingcanopenupanewworldtome.Second,I’dliketohaveahealthylifestyle.It’sgoodformetogetupearlyandgotobedearly.Exercisemoreeveryday.I’llgojoggingintheparkorplaybasketballwithmyfriends.Moreover,I’mgoingtodosomehouseworkformyparentstothankthem.Listeningtomusicisgoodformetorelaxmyself.Ialsowanttogotravellingtoenjoythenaturalbeautyandvisitthepalacesofinterest.Inaword,I’mlookingforwardtohavingameaningfulnewlife.①題材：本文是一篇材料作文寫作；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：本文要求從學(xué)習(xí)、生活和原文等方面介紹新生活的計(jì)劃，注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫。[寫作步驟]第一步，先介紹學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃；第二步，介紹生活計(jì)劃；第三步，介紹自己的愿望。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①begoodfor對(duì)……有好處②Inaword總之③wanttodosth想要做某事[高分句型]①It’sgoodformetogetupearlyandgotobedearly.（it固定句型）②Listeningtomusicisgoodformetorelaxmyself.（動(dòng)名詞作賓語(yǔ)）3.假如你是李華，看到某英語(yǔ)報(bào)社將要組織勞動(dòng)體驗(yàn)和體育鍛煉夏令營(yíng)活動(dòng)的宣傳。請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)給編輯寫一封信，談一談你更想?yún)⑴c的一種活動(dòng)及理由，并對(duì)你選擇的活動(dòng)提出建議。SummerCampLivingskillstraining●onafarm●livewithlocalpeople●cookmealsbyyourself●feedanimals,...Sportstraining●inatrainingcentre●livewithteammembers●betestedbycoaches●playballgames,...要求：1.所寫內(nèi)容必須包括一種活動(dòng)的所有信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;2.對(duì)你所選擇的活動(dòng)說明理由，并對(duì)其提出建議;3.文章不少于90詞，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);4.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名、校名等信息。DearSir/Madam,Thanksforofferingsuchmeaningfulcamps.Iprefer__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【正確答案】DearSir/Madam,Thanksforofferingsuchmeaningfulcamps.IpreferlivingskillstrainingbecauseallthelivingskillsIwillgetduringtheprocesswillbeofgreatvaluetomylaterlife.Thelivingskillstrainingwillbeonafarm.There,Icanlivewithlocalpeoplewhowillhelpmelearnmoreabouttheircustomsandlifestyles.Moreover,whatmakesmeinterestedisthatIcancookbymyself.Inthesummercamp,Icantakepartinactivitiesonthefarmsuchasfeedinganimalsandpickingfruit.IalsohavesomeadviceforyouIhopetherewillbemoreactivitieslikegrowingplantsandvegetables.IhopeIwillenjoymyselfonthefarm.Yours,LiHua①題材：本文是一篇書信作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”和“一般將來時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)先選擇想要參與的活動(dòng)，然后談?wù)勛约旱睦碛桑⒔o出一些建議。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明自己更喜歡哪種活動(dòng)并說明理由；第二步，更加詳細(xì)地陳述理由，說明這種活動(dòng)的好處；第三步，給出一些建議。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①beofgreatvalue很有價(jià)值②takepartin參加[高分句型]①IpreferlivingskillstrainingbecauseallthelivingskillsIwillgetduringtheprocesswillbeofgreatvaluetomylaterlife.（because引導(dǎo)原因狀語(yǔ)從句；省略that的定語(yǔ)從句）②Moreover,whatmakesmeinterestedisthatIcancookbymyself.（what引導(dǎo)主語(yǔ)從句；that引導(dǎo)表語(yǔ)從句）4.隨著五一勞動(dòng)假期的到來和疫情的開放，越來越多的人選擇外出旅游放松自己。假如你是李華，看到某旅行社組織的兩種旅游團(tuán)的宣傳。請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)給旅行社寫一封信，談一談你更想?yún)⑴c的一種旅游團(tuán)及理由，并對(duì)你選擇的旅游團(tuán)的活動(dòng)提出建議。MayDayTourtheYangtzeRiverCulturalTourDisneylandTourTimeMay1—May2May2—May3PlaceNanjingShanghaiActivities●OverlooktheYangtzeRiverfromahelicopter.●TakeaboattripontheYangtzeRiver.●ListentospeechesonhowtoprotecttheYangtzeRiver.●Trydifferentkindsofrides,suchasceMountain.●WatchaparadeofDisneycharacters.●Enjoythebeautifulfireworksshow.Cost￥450/perperson￥1050/perperson(overlook:俯瞰；helicopter:直升機(jī)）要求：1.所寫內(nèi)容必須包括一種旅游團(tuán)的所有信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.對(duì)你所選擇的旅游團(tuán)活動(dòng)說明理由，并對(duì)其提出建議；3.文章不少于90詞，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；4.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名、校名等信息。DearSir/Madam,Thanksforofferingsuchwonderfultours.Iprefer____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【正確答案】例文1DearSir/Madam,Thanksforofferingsuchwonderfultours.IprefertheYangtzeRiverCulturalTourbecausethetourwillimprovemyknowledgeofthelongestriverinChina.TheYangtzeRiverCulturalTourwilltakeplaceinNanjing.ItlastsfromMay1toMay2.There,wecanoverlooktheYangtzeRiverfromahelicopter.Moreover,wewilltakeaboattripontheYangtzeRiver.WecanalsoenjoybeautifulviewsalongtheYangtzeRiver.Inthetour,wecanlistentospeechesonhowtoprotecttheYangtzeRiver,too.What’smore,thecostofthetripis450yuanperperson.Ialsohavesomeadviceforyou.IhopemorespeechesaboutthehistoryoftheYangtzeRiverwillbegiven.IamsureIwillenjoymyselfinthetour.Yours,LiHua例文2DearSir/Madam,Thanksforofferingsuchwonderfultours.IpreferDisneylandTourbecausethetourwillmakemerelaxedafterafewmonths’hardwork.TheTourwillbeinShanghai.ItlastsfromMay2toMay3.There,wecantrydifferentkindsofrides,suchasceMountain.Itwillbeveryexciting.WhatmakesmeinterestedisthatwecanwatchaparadeofDisneycharacters.Inthetour,wecanalsoenjoythebeautifulfireworksshow.Moreover,thecostofthetripis1050yuanperperson.Ialsohavesomeadviceforyou.Ihopewecanhavesometimetodosomeshopping.Iwanttobuysomegiftsformyfriends.IamsureIwillhaveafantastictimeinDisneyland.Yours,LiHua①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為書信作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏表格中所給要點(diǎn)，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖。選擇你更想?yún)⑴c的一種旅游團(tuán)并說明理由；第二步，具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容。從“時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、活動(dòng)、費(fèi)用”幾個(gè)方面重點(diǎn)介紹旅游團(tuán)活動(dòng)的具體情況；第三步，書寫結(jié)語(yǔ)。提出建議表達(dá)希望。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①takeplace舉行②listentospeeches聽演講③What’smore而且④enjoymyself玩得開心[高分句型]①IprefertheYangtzeRiverCulturalTourbecausethetourwillimprovemyknowledgeofthelongestriverinChina.(because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句)②IamsureIwillenjoymyselfinthetour.(賓語(yǔ)從句)5.紅星中學(xué)王校長(zhǎng)是一位英語(yǔ)老師，在學(xué)校網(wǎng)站的英語(yǔ)欄目“HEARYOURVOICE”發(fā)帖，了解學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)和學(xué)校食堂兩方面的情況。假如你是學(xué)生李明，請(qǐng)根據(jù)校長(zhǎng)的帖子，選擇其中一個(gè)方面反映問題，并提出建議。←HEARYOURVOICEMr.WangDearstudents,Howiseverythinggoing?Doyouhaveanyproblemswithyourstudy?Forexample,doyouoftenstayuplatetofinishyourhomework?WhataboutourStudents’Canteen(食堂)?Areyousatisfiedwithyourlunch?Lookingforwardtoyourproblemsandadvice.5:20PM.Apr.16,2023注意：1.內(nèi)容涵蓋所有要點(diǎn)，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，全文連貫通順。2.詞數(shù)80左右（回帖開頭和結(jié)尾不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。3.文中不得提及有關(guān)考生個(gè)人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。.DearMr.Wang,IamLiMing,fromGradeNine._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yoursfaithfully,LiMing【正確答案】Possibleversion1:DearMr.Wang,IamLiMing,fromGradeNine.Iwanttotellyousomethingaboutourstudy.Firstofall,properexerciseshelpuscheckwhatwehavelearned.Sincewehavesevensubjects,wehavetospendmorethanthreehoursfinishingourhomework.Wouldyoumaketeachersreducehomework?Besides,mostofusfindlessonsboring.Althoughexercisesandexamshelpusunderstandthekeypoints,theytakeuptoomuchtime.Dearheadmaster,youcan’timaginehowboringourschoollifeis.Ithinkteachersshouldimprovetheirteachingmethods.Ihopetheseproblemscanbedealtwithsoon.Yoursfaithfully,LiMingPossibleversion2:DearMr.Wang,IamLiMing,fromGradeNine.IwanttosaysomethingaboutourStudents’Canteen.First,Iamunhappywiththelunchfood.Sometimesitisnotdelicious.However,Ihavetoeatit.Morekindsofdishesshouldbeprovided.Moreover,thecanteenistoosmalltoholdsomanystudents.Whynotbuildalargerone?Finally,theenvironmentatthecanteenisnotsatisfying.Thetablesandchairsaresometimesdirty.Ithinkthecanteenworkersshoulddothecleaningmorecarefully.Iftheproblemscanbesolved,studentswillhaveahappiertimeoncampus.Yoursfaithfully,LiMing①題材：本文是一篇話題作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意圍繞王校長(zhǎng)帖子中的問題進(jìn)行寫作。[寫作步驟]第一步，開門見山，交代寫作目的；第二步，闡述學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)或?qū)W校食堂的問題并給出建議；第三步，表達(dá)自己的期望，希望這些問題能夠成功解決。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①firstofall首先②keypoints重點(diǎn)③takeup占據(jù)[高分句型]①Firstofall,properexerciseshelpuscheckwhatwehavelearned.（what引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句）6.假如你是導(dǎo)游，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容，用英語(yǔ)向外國(guó)朋友介紹“第十三屆中國(guó)國(guó)際園林博覽會(huì)（The13thChinaInternationalGardenExpoPark）”主展區(qū)的一些情況。地理位置位于徐州東南約30公里的呂梁山風(fēng)景區(qū)，面積2595畝。開幕時(shí)間2022年11月6日。吉祥物徐徐、州州——形象可愛，陽(yáng)光健康。主要展區(qū)情況共設(shè)65個(gè)展園，包括室外展和室內(nèi)展。是一個(gè)集旅游、文化、教育、科技及農(nóng)業(yè)展示為一體的綜合性園林，……你的觀點(diǎn)（自擬二條）注意：1)語(yǔ)言通順，意思連貫，想象合理，書寫規(guī)范；2)詞數(shù)：90詞左右。開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：呂梁山風(fēng)景區(qū)LvliangMountainScenicArea；吉祥物mascot；綜合性comprehensive.Hello,guys!WelcometoourExpoPark.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【正確答案】Hello,guys!WelcometoourExpoPark.Nowletmeintroducethiswonderfulparktoyou.Hereisthemainexhibitionofthe13thChinaInternationalGardenExpoPark.ItislocatedinLvliangMountainScenicAreainthesoutheastofXuzhou.Ithasanareaof2595mu,about30kilometersawayfromXuzhouCity.TheGardenExpoParkopenedonNovember16lastyear,withthethemeof“GreenCity,GoodLife”.Herearethemascots—XuxuandZhouzhou.Theyaresocute,sunnyandhealthythatmanytouristslikethemverymuch.Asweallknow,thereare65exhibitionparksintotal,includingoutdoorexhibitionandindoorexhibition.Itisacomprehensivegardenmadeupoftourism,culture,education,science,technologyandagriculture.Itmainlyshowsthegreatachievementssuchasnewtechnologies,newmaterials,newartworksandnewequipment.IthinktheExpoParkisnotonlyanexhibitionofgardens,butalsotheprideofXuzhou’sdevelopment.ItshowstothepublicthatXuzhouisdevelopingsofastandbecomingmoreandmorebeautiful.Ihopeyouwillhaveagoodtimehere.①題材：這是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出，需要按要求補(bǔ)充；除了開幕時(shí)間外，其他不需要用一般過去時(shí)。[寫作步驟]第一步，描寫地理位置；第二步，描寫開幕時(shí)間、吉祥物、展區(qū)情況；第三步，描述自己的觀點(diǎn)。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①haveanareaof占地②withthethemeof主題為③acomprehensivegardenmadeupof由……組成的綜合性園林④showthegreatachievements展示巨大的成就[高分句型]①Theyaresocute,sunnyandhealthythatmanytouristslikethemverymuch.（“so...that...”結(jié)構(gòu)）②IthinktheExpoParkisnotonlyanexhibitionofgardens,butalsotheprideofXuzhou’sdevelopment.（“notonly...butalso...”結(jié)構(gòu)）③ItshowstothepublicthatXuzhouisdevelopingsofastandbecomingmoreandmorebeautiful.（賓語(yǔ)從句）7.假如你是李華，看到某英語(yǔ)報(bào)社將要組織勞動(dòng)體驗(yàn)和體育鍛煉夏令營(yíng)活動(dòng)的宣傳。請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)給編輯寫一封信，談一談你更想?yún)⑴c的一種活動(dòng)及理由，并對(duì)你選擇的活動(dòng)提出建議。SummerCampLivingskillstraining●onafarm●livewithlocalpeople●cookmealsbyyourself●feedanimals,...Sportstraining●inatrainingcentre●livewithteammembers●betestedbycoaches●playballgames,...要求：1.所寫內(nèi)容必須包括一種活動(dòng)的所有信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;2.對(duì)你所選擇的活動(dòng)說明理由，并對(duì)其提出建議;3.文章不少于90詞，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);4.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名、校名等信息。DearSir/Madam,Thanksforofferingsuchmeaningfulcamps.Iprefer__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【正確答案】DearSir/Madam,Thanksforofferingsuchmeaningfulcamps.IpreferlivingskillstrainingbecauseallthelivingskillsIwillgetduringtheprocesswillbeofgreatvaluetomylaterlife.Thelivingskillstrainingwillbeonafarm.There,Icanlivewithlocalpeoplewhowillhelpmelearnmoreabouttheircustomsandlifestyles.Moreover,whatmakesmeinterestedisthatIcancookbymyself.Inthesummercamp,Icantakepartinactivitiesonthefarmsuchasfeedinganimalsandpickingfruit.IalsohavesomeadviceforyouIhopetherewillbemoreactivitieslikegrowingplantsandvegetables.IhopeIwillenjoymyselfonthefarm.Yours,LiHua①題材：本文是一篇書信作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”和“一般將來時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)先選擇想要參與的活動(dòng)，然后談?wù)勛约旱睦碛桑⒔o出一些建議。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明自己更喜歡哪種活動(dòng)并說明理由；第二步，更加詳細(xì)地陳述理由，說明這種活動(dòng)的好處；第三步，給出一些建議。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①beofgreatvalue很有價(jià)值②takepartin參加[高分句型]①Ipreferlivingskil