2024屆高考英語續(xù)寫沖刺之萬能句子素材

一、把握兩線情節(jié)線：遭遇危險（惡劣環(huán)境/危險描寫&情感描寫）—出現(xiàn)轉機（想到辦法&呼救求助）—-救援脫險（救援描述&情感描寫）—-感悟升華（歷險者/救援者）情感線：焦急緊張/恐懼無助—筋疲力盡--欣喜/欣慰（relieved）—感動/感謝二、語料積累理清情節(jié)線，搭建語言支架1.雪山脫險盡管我們筋疲力盡，但是我們沒有停下來，我們咬緊牙關繼續(xù)挖溝槽。Exhausted

as

we

were,wedidn’tstop.

Gritting

our

teeth,wekeptdiggingthetrench.我們一點一點的把雪挖出來，在經(jīng)歷了似乎一個世紀之后（夸張手法），我們終于成功了。Inch

by

inch,wedugthe

snowout.After

what

seemed

a

century,wemadeit.

2.冰上救援他把樹枝推向我。我立刻抓住它，最終被哈利從冰冷的水中拖了出來。真是死里逃生。He

pushed

thebranchtowardme.I

grabbed

immediatelyand

was

draggedoutof

theicywaterby

Harry.

What

anarrowescape!3.困洞營救Nosooner

hadwearrivedwherethechild

wastrapped

than

the

manstartedto

scanthesurroundings.Thenhe

inchedtoward

theholeand

stretchedouttoseize

thechild'shands,

pullinghimout

without

reserve.(動作鏈）我們一到孩子被困的地方，那個男人就開始觀察周國的環(huán)境，然后慢慢向洞口走去，仲手抓住孩子的手，把他完全拉了出來。Slowlyandcautiously,movingforward,

we

heldourhandstightly

inordernottobeseperated.慢慢且小心翼翼地往前走，我們緊緊地握著手，不讓彼此分開。4.情感描寫:寬慰/感謝令我欣喜的是，在大家的幫助下，我們成功挖好了溝槽，馬兒被帶到山下。To

my

delight,wemanagedtodigoutthetrenchandtookthesehorsesdownthemountain

with

the

help

of

others.我如釋重負的松了口氣，伸出雙臂緊緊地保住了他。I

breathed

a

sigh

of

relief,

throwing

my

arms

around

himand

hugged

himtightly.(動作雙連）我如釋重負的笑了笑，心里涌起一陣感恩。Smiling

in

relief,Ifelt

arushof

gratitude.“如果沒有得到大家的幫助，我的馬兒已經(jīng)死了。”我感激地對大家說?！笆悄銈儊韼椭覀儯攘宋覀円幻??！盜f

I

hadn’tbeen

giventhefirstaid,

Iwouldhave

beendead.”Isaidtoeveryone

gratefully.”Itis

you

whocame

to

my

aid

andsavedmylife.(

ifIhadn'tdonesth,Iwould...虛擬語氣）三、感悟升華天氣雖然很冷，但是我的心里卻感受到前所未有的溫暖。Cold

as

the

weather

was（as表示盡管，形容詞提前倒裝）,greatwarmthfilledmyheart

like

neverbefore.直到那時，我才意識到團結可以戰(zhàn)勝任何困難。Only

then

did（倒裝）

I

realize

that

it

was

unitythat（強調句）can

conquer

whatever

difficulty

you

meet.正是這種獨特的經(jīng)歷，讓我明白，無論我們面臨什么困難，主要團結一致，就能戰(zhàn)勝它。Itis

this

uniqueexperience

that(itis...that強調句）mademeunderstand

whateverdifficultieswe

arefacedwith,aslongaswe

worktogether/stayunited,wecanconquerit.我永遠忘不了那種幫助需要幫助的人的好感覺。Iwouldneverforgetthegoodfeelingof

helpingsomeone

inneed.我突然想到，幫助別