初中英語(yǔ)作文寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)

中考作文注意事項(xiàng)一、徐老師的忠告：近幾年中考英語(yǔ)作文以看圖寫(xiě)話的形式為主，重點(diǎn)考察學(xué)生運(yùn)用一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)講述過(guò)去故事的書(shū)面表達(dá)能力。因此，be動(dòng)詞一律使用was,were;行為動(dòng)詞一律用動(dòng)詞的過(guò)去式形式；重點(diǎn)記憶不規(guī)則動(dòng)詞的過(guò)去式；注意故事的書(shū)寫(xiě)要自始至終使用過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)；不提倡使用直接引語(yǔ)；不提倡使用沒(méi)見(jiàn)過(guò)和沒(méi)把握的句子；為提高句子水平，盡量使用幾個(gè)主從復(fù)合句，像賓語(yǔ)從句、定語(yǔ)從句、時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句或原因狀語(yǔ)從句，并列句和感嘆句也會(huì)為你的文章增色，但不能因?yàn)樯想y度而出語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，得不償失，看自己的能力而定；怕出錯(cuò)，就全使用小短句子，正確無(wú)誤是第一追求；注意每張圖片的內(nèi)容都要有專門(mén)的句子體現(xiàn)，要點(diǎn)不能漏掉；每個(gè)單句句子都要符合簡(jiǎn)單句的五種基本類型之一：主系表；主語(yǔ)謂語(yǔ)；主謂賓；主謂賓賓；主謂賓賓補(bǔ)；注意主謂一致；注意避免標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)、大小寫(xiě)、拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤等低級(jí)失誤；字?jǐn)?shù)要足；打草稿是個(gè)拿卷面分的好辦法，也避免低級(jí)失誤。將草稿上的作文抄到試卷上之后，再對(duì)照一下，不要漏掉字或出現(xiàn)書(shū)寫(xiě)單詞不完整的現(xiàn)象。二、中考作文評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：1）本大題共10分。2）卷面書(shū)寫(xiě)潦草不工整，可酌情從總得分中扣1分。3）拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤每?jī)蓚€(gè)扣0.5分。同樣錯(cuò)誤不重復(fù)計(jì)算。4）書(shū)面表達(dá)可分為四個(gè)等級(jí)：（1）9-10分語(yǔ)句通順，內(nèi)容完整，書(shū)寫(xiě)工整，無(wú)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，字?jǐn)?shù)符合要求。（2）7-8分內(nèi)容較完整，書(shū)寫(xiě)較工整，語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤較少（1-2處），字?jǐn)?shù)基本符合要求。（3）5-6分語(yǔ)句尚通順，書(shū)寫(xiě)較工整，3-4處語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，字?jǐn)?shù)在60詞左右。（4）5分以下作文內(nèi)容不完整語(yǔ)句不夠通順，語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤較多，書(shū)寫(xiě)一般，字?jǐn)?shù)在50詞以下。三、類型舉例：1.做好事Tomisagoodboywholikeshelpingothers/whoisalwaysreadytohelpothers.Oneday,onhiswaytoschool/onhiswaybackhome,hefoundanoldmanwholookedworried.Hewentuptohimandaskedhimwhatwaswrong./ifhecouldhelphim.Theoldmansaidthathedidn’tknowhowtogetbackhome.Tomhelpedhimtoaskthepolicemanforhelp.ThenTomtookhimtohishomebybus.Hetookgoodcareoftheoldman.Atlast/Intheend,theoldmangotbackhomeandmethisfamily.TheythankedTomverymuch.Tomgottoshoollate/gothomelatebuthewasveryhappy.Whatagood/kindboy!Weshouldlearnfromhim./Helpingothersistohelpourselves.2.節(jié)日：Children’sDay兒童節(jié)；Teachers’Day教師節(jié)；AprilFool’sDay愚人節(jié)NationalDay國(guó)慶節(jié)；NewYear’sDay元旦；SpringFestival春節(jié)；Mid-AutumDay中秋節(jié)；MayDay五四青年節(jié)ChristmasDay圣誕節(jié)；ThanksgivingDay感恩節(jié)；Mother’sDay母親節(jié)；Father’sDay父親節(jié)Tomisagoodboywholoveshisparents.YesterdaywasWomen’sDay.Hewantedtodosomethingforhismother.Hetoldhisfatherwhathethoughtandhisfatheragreedwithhim.Theybegantowork.Tomsweptthefloorandhisfatherdidsomewashing/washedtheclothes.Whilehisfatherwascooking,heputthedishesontothetable.Whenhismothercamebackhome,hefoundsomedeliciousfoodonthetable.Howhappyshewas!ShehadawonderfulWomen’sDay.類似一篇：IhaveagoodfriendnamedJim.Heisafifteen-year-oldboy.YesterdaywasWomen’sDay,andhismotherwasbusyoutside.Hemadeuphismindtodosomethingforher.Sohecleanedoutthehouseinordertomakehismotherhappy.Atfirst,hecleanedthefloorandmadeitascleanaspossible.HelistenedtothemusicthatwaswrittenbyXuLang,oneofthemostpopularsingersinChina.Thenhedidthedishesafterlistening.Ittookhimalittletimetodoit.Atlast,hecookedsomethingnice.Afterfifteenminutes,hismothercamebackhome.Hesaid“HappyWomen’sDay!”Hismotherwasveryhappytoseesomefoodonthetable.Jimdidn'tfeeltiredintheslightest.Whatagoodboy!3.做錯(cuò)事Oneday，XiaoMingandhisfatherwenttoZhongShanPark.XiaoMingwasveryhappy.Whiletheywerewalking,XiaoMing’sfatherfoundafenceanddecidedtojumpoverthefencesothattheycouldgettothezooquickly.XiaoMingdidn’tagreewithhisfather,buthisfatherjumpedoverthefence.XiaoMingwasveryworried.Thenapolicemancametohisfatherandtoldhimthathebrokethetrafficlaw.XiaoMing’sfatherfeltveryembarrassedandbowedtothepoliceman,“Sorry,Iwon’tdoitagain.”It’sdangeroustobreakthetrafficlaw./rules.另一篇：LastSunday,myfatherandmothertookmetothezoo.Itwasaveryinterestingzoo.Wetookawalkandenjoyedthebeautifulsights/flowersinthezoothewholemorning.Atnoon,wehadapicniconthegrass.Finally,Icouldn’tfinishthecakewithcream.Iwantedtothrowitaway.Butmymothertoldmenottodoit.Then,Iwantedtogiveittothemonkeys.Mymothersaiditwasagoodidea.Atthattimeaworkeratthezoocameuptousandtoldusnottodoit.Thenwerealizedourmistakes.Weshouldobeytherulesandtrytoprotecttheanimals.4.活動(dòng)Tomisagoodboywholikesplayingsoccer.LastTuesday,hewasverybusy.Inthemorning,hegotupatsixthirtyandthenhadbreakfast.Hewenttoschoolonfootbecausehishousewasveryneartotheschool.Afterhehadfourclassesinthemorningandthreeintheafternoon,hewasverytired.Afterschool,heplayedsoccerwithhisfriends.Theyhadagoodtime.Aftersupper/dinner,hehadtodohishomework.Ittookhimtwohourstofinishit.HewatchedTVandreadnewspapers.Hedidn’tgotobeduntilteno’clock.Hewastiredbuthappy.Whatabusyday!（如果是周末或假期活動(dòng)，只需要改變時(shí)間和活動(dòng)內(nèi)容即可）另一篇：XiaoMing’sBusyDayLastweekend,XiaoMinghadaverybusyday.Inthemorning,hisfathertoldhimtogetuptoreadEnglish.Afterthat,hehadtopractiseplayingthepiano.Hismotherstoodbehindhimandmadehimplayagainandagain.Intheafternoon,hisfathertookhimtoanartschool.Helearnedhowtopaintthere.Thewholeday,XiaoMinghadnotimetohavearest.Hewassotiredthathefellillintheevening.Hewastakentohospitalbyhisparents.Whatapoorboy！Inmyopinion,Chineseparentsaretoostrictwiththeirchildren.Theyexpecttheirchildrentobecomesuccessfulinthefuture.Thechildrenaretoobusylearningallkindsofthingsallday.Ithinkit’sbadforthem.四、更多舉例：Sunday,May30thSunny/FineItwasMay30thyesterday.WhenIwokeup,Ilookedattheclock.Oh,de