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閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Ourneighbor,Mrs.Mooreisanoldartist,wholivesalonewithhercatTaffy.Herhusbandpassedawayyearsagoandherchildrenworkinothercities.Mrs.Moorealwayswearsaseriouslookbutinfactsheisaveryniceneighbor.ShedoesthreethingseverydaypettingTaffy,paintingandbaking,amongwhichbakingisthepartIlike.Wheneverthemouthwateringsmellgetsoverthefence,IcouldexpectapaperbagcontainingdeliciouscookiestobepassedoverthefenceandsharedbymysisterJenniferandme.Toreturnthisfavor,mydadwouldmowthelawn(修剪草坪)forMrs.Mooreandhelprepairthewaterpipes.我們的鄰居,摩爾夫人是一位老藝術(shù)家,她獨(dú)自和她的貓塔菲住在一起。她的丈夫幾年前去世,她的孩子在其他城市工作。摩爾夫人總是看起來很嚴(yán)肅,但事實(shí)上她是一個很好的鄰居。她每天做三件事——撫摸塔菲、畫畫和烘焙,其中烘焙是我喜歡的部分。每當(dāng)令人垂涎欲滴的氣味越過圍欄時(shí),我都會期待一個裝著美味餅干的紙袋越過圍欄,由我和妹妹詹妮弗分享。為了回報(bào)這一點(diǎn),我爸爸會修剪草坪(修剪草坪)幫Moore夫人修理水管。Lastyear,Dadputhisideaofbuildingatreehouseforusinourbackyardintoaction.Dadshotfromthehip(干事利落)andgoteverythinginplacewithintwoweeks.Itwasayellowtreehousewithredroof,whichmadeagreatplaceforJenniferandmetogetoutofthesightofMomandDadtohavefunandtalkaboutourgirlishmatters.Wecouldn’twaittogetinonlytofindTaffyhadtakenoccupationofitandmesseduptheinside.Weourselveswereunwillingtotalkaboutsuchaproblemtoourniceneighbor,butwehadnootherchoice.DadwastheonewesenttoMrs.Moore’shouseforafriendlytalkabouttheissue.去年,爸爸把在后院為我們建一個樹屋的想法付諸實(shí)施。爸爸臀部中彈(干事利落)并在兩周內(nèi)將一切就緒。這是一個黃色的樹屋,紅色的屋頂,這是詹妮弗和我離開爸爸媽媽視線的好地方,可以玩得開心,談?wù)撐覀兊纳倥畷r(shí)代的事情。我們迫不及待地想進(jìn)去,卻發(fā)現(xiàn)塔菲占領(lǐng)了它,把里面搞砸了。我們自己不愿意和我們的好鄰居談?wù)撨@樣的問題,但我們別無選擇。爸爸是我們派去摩爾夫人家就這個問題進(jìn)行友好交談的人。Afterthetalk,DadtookMrs.Mooreonaninspectionofthetreehouse,atwhichshewasextremelyastonished,sayingshehadneverexpectedTaffycouldbesofascinatedwithit.Shepromisedtotakecareoftheproblembuttoourdisappointment,thecatcouldstillfindwaystoclimboverthefenceandgetintothetreehouse.Afterathousandapologiestous,Mrs.Mooregavetheproblemacarefulconsiderationandcameupwithabigdecision:InviewofTaffy’sobsession(癡迷)withatreehouse,whynotbuildonespeciallyforhim?談話結(jié)束后,爸爸帶著摩爾夫人參觀了樹屋,摩爾夫人對此感到非常驚訝,她說她從來沒有想到塔菲會對它如此著迷。她答應(yīng)會解決這個問題,但令我們失望的是,這只貓仍然能找到爬過圍欄進(jìn)入樹屋的方法。在向我們道歉了一千次之后,摩爾夫人仔細(xì)考慮了這個問題,并做出了一個重大決定:鑒于塔菲的癡迷(癡迷)有了樹屋,為什么不專門為他建一座呢?Paragraph1:Mrs.MooreboughtareadymadeonefromanInternetstoreandhadsomeworkersfixeditupinhergarden.Paragraph2:Mrs.Moorerackedherbrains(絞盡腦汁)andworkedoutaplantoexchangeourtreehouses.文本分析:前情回顧:1.摩爾夫人獨(dú)自和她的貓塔菲住在一起。2.摩爾夫人喜歡撫摸塔菲、繪畫和烘焙。3.鄰居的孩子們越過柵欄從摩爾夫人那里收到了美味的cookie。4.為了報(bào)答,他們的父親幫摩爾夫人修剪草坪和修理水管。5.父親在自家后院為孩子們建了一個樹屋。6.他們發(fā)現(xiàn)塔菲已經(jīng)接管了樹屋并且里面被塔菲搞砸了。7.父親去和摩爾夫人談?wù)撆c塔菲有關(guān)的問題和樹屋。8.摩爾太太很驚訝塔菲竟然如此喜歡樹屋。9.摩爾夫人決定專門為建塔菲一座樹屋。續(xù)寫思路發(fā)展:第1段:摩爾夫人從網(wǎng)上商店買了一個現(xiàn)成的,并讓一些工人在她的花園里把它修好。(1)WetookTaffytotheentranceofthetreehouseandlookedforwardtoseeinghisreaction.(2)Taffyisnotinterested.(3)WelatertriedtoattractTaffytothenewtreehouse,butallfailed.第2段:摩爾太太絞盡腦汁(絞盡腦汁)并制定了一個交換樹屋的計(jì)劃。(1)MrsMooreapologizesagainandpromises:ifyouagree,Iwillmakecookiesforyoueveryday(2)JenniferandIagree.(3)Eachhastheirownplacetogo.JenniferandIfinallyhaveaplacetotalkaboutourgirlmaterials.Ourlaughterandthearomaofcookiesfilledthenewtreehouse.官方范文,Mrs.MooreboughtareadymadeonefromanInternetstoreandhadsomeworkersfixeditupinher

garden.

Thetreehouse

lookedgreatinthegarden.

Itwas

intheshapeofabirdnestwithbrightcolorsofpurpleand

orange.

Mrs.

Mooreputcattoysandcatfoodinitto

makesureTaffywouldbeattracted.

However,

outofthe

expectationofallofus,

nomatterhowmucheffortsheputinto

makingthetreehouseattractive,

thecatjustwouldn't

give

itasinglevisit,

andwouldn'tstopingintoours.

Mrs.Moorerackedherbrains(絞盡腦汁)and

workedoutaplantoexchangeourtreehouses.

Nowthat

she

failedtoattract

Taffytohertreehouse,

she

mightas

well

attractJenniferandmetoit.

Shepaintedbeautiful

picturesonthewallsofthetreehouseandputfortable

cushionsinit.

Sureenough,

unlike

thesillycat,wewerewiseenoughtodecide

itwasmuchbetterthan

ourtree

houseand

anagreementwasmadeonthespot.

We

couldn'tbehappiertohaveMrs.Mooreasourneighbor

andwecouldn'tlovehermore.下水文,Mrs.MooreboughtareadymadeonefromanInternetstoreandhadsomeworkersfixitupinhergarden.

Whenitwasdone,itwasofexceptionalbeautyandquality.ThemomentIsawit,IfeltatwingeofjealousyforTaffy.WeassumedthatTaffywouldlovehisnewfabuloushomeandreturnourtreehousetous.Embarrassingly,Taffykeptvisitingourtreehouseandcausingmischief.NowourchallengewashowtolureTaffyaway.Wetriedusingfood,speakingkindlytohim,andevenattemptingtoremovehimbyforce,butalloureffortsfailed.Thenewhousesatthere,lonelyandabandoned,whilewe,twokidsandacat,sathere,staringateachotheramidstthemess.Mrs.Moorerackedherbrainsandworkedoutaplantoexchangeourtreehouses.

Myeyeslitupatthesuggestion.Afterall,Mrs.Moore’streehousewasmuchmorebeautifulthanours.Besides,itwastrulyfrustratingnotbeingabletofullyenjoythefunofhavingatreehouse.Sowestruckadeal.Toeveryone’sdelight,Taffywascontentinhisn

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