10 航空航天 -中考英語高分作文（全國通用版）

備戰(zhàn)2023年中考英語高分作文熱點10航空航天一、材料作文1．近期，三名中國宇航員完成了為期六個月的任務(wù)，安全返回地球。假如你是陽光中學(xué)學(xué)生李華，你最欽佩的就是給女兒摘星星的女航天員王亞平大校，請你用英語寫一篇短文，向你校英語報投稿，講述王亞平的故事。要點如下：1.王亞平，41歲，再次創(chuàng)造歷史，成為在太空待了100多天的第一位女航天員。2.王亞平成為中國首位走出太空站的女航天員，邁出了中國女性艙外太空行走第一步。3.她站上了“最高講臺”，在太空艙內(nèi)給學(xué)生進(jìn)行了一場現(xiàn)場直播的科學(xué)講座，成為我國首位在太空上課的女老師。4.要繼續(xù)進(jìn)行太空探測，還需要幾代人的努力。注意：1.內(nèi)容涵蓋要點，全文連貫通順。2.詞數(shù)90左右（已給出的文章開頭，不計入總詞數(shù)）。3.文中不得提及有關(guān)考生個人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。參考詞匯：太空站：spacestation太空探測：spaceexploration講臺：platform欽佩：admire探測：exploration一代（人）：generationThreeChineseastronautshavecompletedtheirsix-monthmissionandreturnedtotheEarthsafely._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】ThreeChineseastronautshavecompletedtheirsix-monthmissionandreturnedtotheEarthsafely.IadmirethewomanastronautWangYapingmost.Shekeptherpromisethatshewouldbebackwithstarsforherdaughter.WangYaping,attheageof41,hasmadehistoryagainassheisnowthefirstChinesewomantostayinspaceformorethan100days.Moreover,sheisalsotheChinesefemalewhotookthefirststepontothespace,outsideofthespacestation.Believeitornot,sheevenstoodonthehighestplatformtogivestudentsalivesciencelecturefromspace.Studentsconsiderherasthefirstfemaleteacherinspace.Forspaceexplorationtocontinue,itrequirestheeffortsofgenerations.Asaresult,alltheteenagersshouldstudyhardertodevotetoourcountrylikeWangYaping,ourhero.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇說明文，為材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般過去時和一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)完整表述內(nèi)容。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹王亞平的個人信息；第二步，介紹王亞平在太空方面取得的成績；第三步，表達(dá)自己的感悟。[亮點詞匯]①attheageof在……歲時②morethan多于③considersbas把某人看作[高分句型]①Shekeptherpromisethatshewouldbebackwithstarsforherdaughter.（that引導(dǎo)的定語從句）②Asaresult,alltheteenagersshouldstudyhardertodevotetoourcountrylikeWangYaping,ourhero（動詞不定式作目的狀語）2．假如你是李華，上個月你在“中國航天日”參加了科技館舉行的航天俱樂部活動，請根據(jù)以下要點寫一篇短文，描述這次活動，并表達(dá)你的想法。（1）我聽了宇航員的故事，學(xué)習(xí)到了科學(xué)精神。（2）我做了物理實驗，增長了科學(xué)知識。（3）我參觀了展覽，使我對太空旅行更感興趣了。（4）我認(rèn)為……參考詞匯：科學(xué)精神

scientificspirit太空旅行

spacetravel要求：（1）詞數(shù)：80～100個。（2）題目和開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。（3）要點齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。TheactivitiesonSpaceDayofChinaLastmonth,I_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】：TheactivitiesonSpaceDayofChinaLastmonth,ItookpartinthespaceclubactivitiesheldbytheScienceandTechnologyMuseumonSpaceDayofChina.IntheScienceandTechnologyMuseum,firstofall,Iheardsomestoriesaboutastronautsandlearnedthescientificspirit.Next,wedidsomephysicsexperimentstoincreaseourknowledgeofscience.Finally,italsomadememoreinterestedinspacetravelbyparticipatingintheexhibition.Ithinkweshouldtakepartinmoreoftheseactivities.Theseactivitiescankeepourthirstforspaceknowledgealiveandenhanceourenthusiasmforscienceaswell.【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于材料作文。根據(jù)要點寫一篇短文，描述你參加的這次航天俱樂部活動，并表達(dá)你的想法。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文應(yīng)該用第一人稱來敘述故事內(nèi)容；時態(tài)采用一般過去時為主。本文可以采用兩段式寫作，第一段描述這次活動的內(nèi)容，第二段則表達(dá)對此次活動的看法。3．飛天夢，強(qiáng)國夢！2022年4月16日，神舟十三號載人飛行任務(wù)取得圓滿成功。航天任務(wù)取得成功離不開航天人的堅守與努力。習(xí)總書記深情寄語航天人：“在航天事業(yè)發(fā)展的征程上勇攀高峰、不斷前行”，“你們是新時代中國航天事業(yè)無數(shù)奮斗者、攀登者的代表”……假如你是李華，你校英語社團(tuán)公眾號正在做“我最崇拜的航天英雄”系列推送，請你用英語給公眾號留言，推薦一位你最崇拜的航天英雄，對其作簡要介紹，并說明推薦理由。提示詞語：workhard,stickto,dream,difficulty,overcome提示問題：●Whichspaceherodoyouadmiremost?●Whydoyouadmirehim/her?IamLiHuafromClass1,Grade9._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】IamLiHuafromClass1,Grade9.AllChinesepeopleareproudofthethreeastronauts,NieHaisheng,WangYapingandYeGuangfu.Amongthem,IadmireWangYapingmost.

WangYapingisnotonlyanastronautbutalsoateacherinspace.

Bornin1980,WangYapinglovedlearningandwasgoodatsportswhenshewasinschool.Herspacedreamstartedin2003.Shetrainedreallyhardandnevergaveup.Aftertenyears’effort,shejoinedtheShenzhouXmissionandgavewonderfulandlivelylessonsinspace.Moreover,sheisthefirstfemaleastronautwhowalkedinspacesuccessfullyinChina.Asastudent,ItrulyadmireWangYapingforhergreatspiritofdevotingherselftoherspacedream.WheneverImeetdifficulties,Ishouldalsolearnfromhertokeepontryingandneverloseheart.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根據(jù)提示問題介紹自己最崇拜的航天英雄。注意要點齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：寫作時要以第三人稱來介紹，時態(tài)綜合使用一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時。作文可分為三段，第一段引出話題；第二段介紹王亞平；第三段介紹自己欽佩王亞平什么。要保證語言連貫，無語法和拼寫錯誤。4．神舟十三號順利返航，宇航員王亞平再次圓夢天宮，凱旋歸來。你校正組織以“Theheroinmyheart”為題的征文活動，請根據(jù)以下要點介紹王亞平的事跡并分享你對她的欽佩之情。經(jīng)歷與成就●出生于1980年，在學(xué)校里熱愛學(xué)習(xí)，擅長體育●太空夢始于2003年，十年如一日艱苦訓(xùn)練、從不言棄●2013年加入神舟十號航天任務(wù)并太空授課●中國首位在太空行走的女宇航員你的觀點……（至少兩點）注意：1.詞數(shù)：100左右。2.文中不得出現(xiàn)與考生相關(guān)的真實姓名、校名等信息。3.參考詞匯：theShenzhouXmission神舟十號航天任務(wù)TheheroinmyheartWangYapingisnotonlyanastronautbutalsoateacherinspace._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】Theheroinmyheart

WangYapingisnotonlyanastronautbutalsoateacherinspace.

Bornin1980,WangYapinglovedlearningandwasgoodatsportswhenshewasinschool.Herspacedreamstartedin2003.Shetrainedreallyhardandnevergaveup.Aftertenyears’effort,shejoinedtheShenzhouXmissionandgavewonderfulandlivelylessonsinspace.Moreover,sheisthefirstfemaleastronautwhowalkedinspacesuccessfullyinChina.

Asastudent,ItrulyadmireWangYapingforhergreatspiritofdevotingherselftoherspacedream.WheneverImeetdifficulties,Ishouldalsolearnfromhertokeepontryingandneverloseheart.【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目為一篇應(yīng)用文寫作。標(biāo)題和首段已給出，第二段介紹宇航員王亞平的經(jīng)歷與夢想，包括題目中給出的四個要點；第三段寫出自己的兩個觀點并結(jié)尾。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文應(yīng)該用第三人稱來敘述故事內(nèi)容；時態(tài)需采用一般過去時和一般現(xiàn)在時，用一般過去進(jìn)行時描述宇航員王亞平的經(jīng)歷與成就；用一般現(xiàn)在時描述自己的觀點。寫作過程中需要注意時間邏輯，時態(tài)的切換，行文流暢，用詞準(zhǔn)確，條理清晰。二、電子郵件5．假設(shè)你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，2022年3月23日你和同學(xué)們一起觀看了神舟十三號航天員太空授課。請你根據(jù)下列提示內(nèi)容給三位航天員發(fā)送一封電子郵件，告訴他們你對天宮課堂的感受。提示：1.感謝航天員們的精彩授課；2.觀看太空授課后的收獲和感想；3.祝愿祖國越來越強(qiáng)大，并希望自己的夢想將來也能實現(xiàn)。要求：1.參考提示內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.語句通順，意思連貫，書寫工整；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)你的任何真實信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；4.詞數(shù)：不少于70詞（開頭已給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)）。Dearastronauts,I’mLiHuafromXinhuaMiddleSchool.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________LiHua【參考范文】Dearastronauts,I’mLiHuafromXinhuaMiddleSchool.I’mwritingtoexpressmythankstoyouforyourwonderfulsciencelectureintheChineseSpaceStationonMarch23,2022.Afterwatchingthehour-longtelevisedperformance,Ihaveabetterknowledgeofspacescience.Itwillhelpmestudysciencewellatschool.What’smore,I’mmoreinterestedinourcountry’sspaceexplorationprogram.I’msoproudofourcountry’sadvanceinscienceandIhopeourcountrywillbestrongerandstronger.IwillstudyharderfromnowonandIhopemydreamwillcometrueinthefuture.LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”和“一般將來時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生注意不要遺漏“要點”中對觀看太空授課后的收獲和感想，注意要點要齊全。[寫作步驟]第一步，由于短文開頭已給出，故接下來對航天員們的精彩授課表達(dá)感謝；第二步，具體描述自己觀看太空授課后的收獲和感想；第三步，書寫結(jié)語。祝愿祖國越來越強(qiáng)大，并希望自己的夢想將來也能實現(xiàn)。[亮點詞匯]①what’smore除此之外還②beinterestedin對……感興趣③beproudof對……感到自豪④fromnowon從現(xiàn)在起⑤cometrue實現(xiàn)[高分句型]①I’msoproudofourcountry’sadvanceinscienceandIhopeourcountrywillbestrongerandstronger.（省略引導(dǎo)詞that的賓語從句）6．假設(shè)你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，2022年3月23日你和同學(xué)一起觀看了神舟十三號航天員天宮授課，請你發(fā)送一封電子郵件給三位宇航員。內(nèi)容包括：1.感謝宇航員們的精彩授課；2.觀看太空授課后的收獲和感想；3.祝愿宇航員凱旋歸來。注意：1.詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Dearastronauts,I’mLiHuafromXinhuaMiddleSchool.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Wishyouatriumphantreturn.Yours,LiHua【參考范文】：Dearastronauts,I’mLiHuafromXinhuaMiddleSchool.I’mwritingtoexpressmygratitudetoyouforyourmarveloussciencelectureinsidethespacestationonMarch23,2022.Afterwatchingthehour-longteleviseddemonstrations,Ihaveabetterknowledgeofspacescience.What’smore,I’mmoreenthusiasticaboutourcountry’sspaceexplorationprogram.I’msoproudofourcountry’sadvancesinsciencethatI’mdeterminedtobeengagedinspaceindustryandmakecontributionstoourmotherland.Wishyouatriumphantreturn.Yours,LiHua【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目是寫一封電子郵件。要求根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容給神舟十三號三位宇航員發(fā)送一封電子郵件，短文開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文主要采用第一人稱來敘述；時態(tài)上以一般現(xiàn)在時為主。寫作時可適當(dāng)使用一些副詞和連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，表達(dá)具有條理性。三、書信作文7．神舟十三號航天員已順利返回地球，此次載人飛船實驗實現(xiàn)了幾代科學(xué)家的航天夢，彰顯了我國的航天科技實力。為歡迎宇航員們回家，請你根據(jù)以下要點，以韓磊的名義給宇航員們寫一封信。要點：1.表達(dá)對宇航員的歡迎和敬佩之情；2.談?wù)勄嗌倌陮τ诤教焐畹暮闷婧拖胂螅?.結(jié)合實際談一談你的夢想和打算。要求：1.文中不要出現(xiàn)所在學(xué)校的校名和師生姓名；2.詞數(shù)100左右。Dearastronauts,WelcomebacktotheEarth.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________yours,HanLei【參考范文】Dearastronauts,WelcomebacktotheEarth.Ourgreatheroes!Iknowyouhavebeeninthespaceforalongtime.YoumustmisstheEarth,missthemotherland,andespeciallyyourfamily.Sofirst,Iwanttoexpressmywarmwelcome.What’smore,Iwanttoexpressmyadmirationforyou.Youmakegreateffortandmakeagreatcontributiontoourcountry’sspacedream,andyouaretheprideofourwholenation.Duringyourstayinthespace,Ireallycareaboutyourworkandlife.EspeciallyI’minterestedinthetwospaceclassthatyouhavegivenus.Theyaresoamazingthattheymakemetakeagreatinterestinphysics.Couldyoutellusmoreaboutsuchinterestingexperiments?Couldyousaymoreaboutyourspacelife?Inthefuture,Ialsowanttodostudyinscienceandphysics.Whatyoudidtellsmenopainsnogains,soIwillmakegooduseoftimeandmakehardeffortinordertorealizemydream.yours,HanLei【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一封書信，屬于書信作文寫作；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：書信開頭以及要點已經(jīng)給出，按照提示的要點逐點闡述，可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，承接書信開頭，表達(dá)對宇航員的歡迎和敬佩之情；第二步，可以以自己的感受為出發(fā)點，談?wù)勄嗌倌陮τ诤教焐畹暮闷婧拖胂?；第三步，結(jié)合實際談一談你的夢想和打算并書寫結(jié)語。[亮點詞匯]①expressone’sadmirationforsb向某人表達(dá)敬佩之情②makeagreatcontributionto對……做出巨大貢獻(xiàn)③takeagreatinterestin對……產(chǎn)生極大的興趣④makegooduseoftime充分利用時間[高分句型]①Youmakegreateffortandmakeagreatcontributiontoourcountry’sspacedream,andyouaretheprideofourwholenation.（and連接兩個并列分句）②EspeciallyI’minterestedinthetwospaceclassthatyouhavegivenus.（that引導(dǎo)限制性定語從句）③Theyaresoamazingthattheymakemetakeagreatinterestinphysics.（so…that引導(dǎo)結(jié)果狀語從句）④Whatyoudidtellsmenopainsnogains,soIwillmakegooduseoftimeandmakehardeffortinordertorealizemydream.（what引導(dǎo)主語從句，so連接兩個并列分句）8．假如你是李華，你的筆友Tom來信說他十分想要了解你心目中的英雄。請你給他寫一封回信。要點如下：1.介紹誰是你心目中的英雄。2.他/她做過哪些令你印象深刻的事情。3.他/她有哪些令你敬佩的優(yōu)秀品質(zhì)。4.他/她對你產(chǎn)生了什么影響。寫作要求：1.內(nèi)容必須包括所給要點，用到提示詞，可適當(dāng)拓展，增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。2.語篇完整，語句通順，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范，卷面整潔。3.文章已寫好的開頭句不計入字?jǐn)?shù)統(tǒng)計，80詞左右。4.特別注意：文中不得出現(xiàn)英雄人名之外的任何人名、校名或地名，否則不予評分。DearTom,I’mgladtohearfromyou.Youwanttoknowabouttheheroinmyheart.Letmesharewithyou.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Howaboutyours?Pleaseletmeknow.Yours,LiHua【參考范文】：DearTom,I’mgladtohearfromyou.Youwanttoknowabouttheheroinmyheart.Letmesharewithyou.MyheroisYangLiwei.Whenhewasyoung,heworkedsohardthathebecameanexcellentpilot.Asaresult,hewaschosenasanastronaut.In2003,hetookShenzhouVspaceshiptothespaceandspentmorethan20hoursdoingexperimentsinspace.Finally,hemanagedtoreturntotheearth.Heisnotonlysmartbutalsobrave.HeistheprideofChina.HeisarealheroinmyheartbecauseheisthefirstChineseastronautwhotraveledinspace.Ihavelearnedalotfromhim.Hisexperienceencouragesmetoworkharderandnevergiveup.Howaboutyours?Pleaseletmeknow.Yours,LiHua【詳解】1.題干解讀：本