高考英語復(fù)習(xí)作文專項讀后續(xù)寫環(huán)境描寫講義

環(huán)境描寫環(huán)境描寫在續(xù)寫中一般配合人物經(jīng)歷或故事情節(jié)推進出現(xiàn)，服務(wù)于人物、細(xì)節(jié)的塑造，而非“為了寫景而寫景”，故不應(yīng)該占據(jù)太長的篇幅。一、地點方位描寫句式1：在哪+謂語+主語常用“完全倒裝”這一句式。例1：森林中央有一個美麗的湖。Inthemiddleoftheforestliesabeautifullake.例2：現(xiàn)在，不遠處，篝火周圍有許多人手拉手跳舞。Now,notfaraway,aroundthebonefirearedancingmanyhumanshandinhand.例3：其中一張桌子旁坐著一家人，他們有兩個女人，都和MeiMei差不多大。AtoneofthetablessatafamilywithtwodaughterswhowereaboutMeiMei’sage.例4：海邊矗立著高大的棕櫚樹，樹上掛著綠色的椰子。Attheseasidestoodthickandtallpalmtreeswithgreencoconytshangingfromthem.例5：霧蒙蒙的山上星星點點地散落著小農(nóng)場和村落。Mistcoveredmountainsweredottedwithsmallfarmsandvillages.句式2：方位+lie/stand+景，介詞+whichis+物/人在....有一個.....，在它的....有...例1：森林中央有一棵大樹，旁邊是一間小屋。Inthecenteroftheforeststandsagianttree,besidewhichisasmallcottage.二、環(huán)境的直接描寫景/物描寫對景、物等的描寫通常會直接使用物作主語，或者用擬人化的修辭手法。（2023年浙江卷1月）Itseemedthatthebirdwaswaitingforme,itsbeadyeyeslockedonmineasiftryingtoconveysomedeep,unspokengratitude.那只鳥似乎在等著我，它那明亮的眼睛盯著我，仿佛在試圖表達某種深深的、不言而喻的感激之情。（2024屆廣東省四校高三第一次聯(lián)考試題）Afewhoursintothetrek,hesaweyesinthedistance,sohegrabbedhisbatbeforerealizingitwasjustastraydog.長途跋涉幾個小時后，他看到了遠處的眼睛，所以他抓起了球棒，才意識到那只是一只流浪狗。Themoonwashedthewoodsinagentlelight.Thestarstwinkledlikeachild’scuriouseyesblinkingwithanticipation.月亮用柔和的光洗刷著樹林星星閃爍著，像孩子好奇的眼睛閃爍著期待。Thesoundcameswiftlynearer,andbecameawildroar,fillingthewholevalley.這聲音很快就走近了，變成了狂吼，響徹整個山谷。5.Duringautumn,thesesamemountainsaregold,andinwintertheyarecoveredinsheetsofwhitefrost.在秋天，這些山是金色的，而在冬天，它們身披白露。6.Theroaroftheoceanwavesandcriesoftheseabirdsmakeupthemusicofthecoast.海浪的咆哮和海鳥的鳴叫組成了海岸的音樂。7.Theleaveshadalmostallfallenoff,creatingaseaoffierycolorsthatcrunchedbeneathourfeet.幾乎所有的葉子都掉下來了，在我們的腳下形成一片火紅色的海洋。我們踩上去發(fā)出嘎吱嘎吱的聲響。8.TheleavescrunchedbeneathmyfeetasIstrolleddownthestreet.Occasionally,onewouldfallpastme,lightlyswayingastheairgentlycarriedittotheground.漫步街頭，樹葉在我腳下嘎吱作響。偶爾，有葉子會從我身邊掉落，在微風(fēng)中輕輕搖擺，飄然落地。9.Bathedinthegoldensunlight,thesearippledandsparkledcharmingly.大海沐浴在金色的陽光下,蕩漾著迷人的波光。10.Inaninstant,everythinghadsuddenlygonequiet.Birdsdidn'tchirp,leavesdidn'trustleandinsectsdidn'tsing.Afeelingofstillnesscreptuponme剎那間,萬物突然安靜。鳥兒不再鳴叫,樹葉不再沙沙作響,昆蟲停止歌唱。一種寂靜的感覺悄然向我襲來。11.Birdswerechattering/twitteringsomewhere.鳥兒在某處唧唧喳喳地叫著。12.Onaquitemorninginthemountains,feelthesunonyourskinandbreatheinthesweetscentoffreshflowerswhilebirdsgreetthenewdaywiththeirmorningsong.山中寧靜的清晨，感受陽光灑在你的身上，呼吸鮮花的芳香，聆聽鳥兒們用它們的歌聲迎接新的一天。天氣描寫天氣的描寫屬于情節(jié)的一部分，但不建議大篇幅進行描寫。為了渲染氣氛，烘托情節(jié)，可以細(xì)化到風(fēng)、雪、雨、雷、陰、晴等。Theicywindstartedhowling,stingingmyface.寒風(fēng)開始咆哮，刺痛了我的臉。ThewindwassobonechillingthatIcouldn'tstopshiveringfromthecod.寒風(fēng)刺骨，我冷得不停打哆嗦。Outside,thewindsblewthetreesandbeatagainstthehouse,whichmadepeopleunabletoonetheireyes.外面，風(fēng)吹著樹，拍打著房子，使人們無法睜開眼睛。Asthewindblows,wecanheartheleavesrustlinginthetrees.隨著風(fēng)的吹拂,我們可以聽到樹沙沙作響。Itwasgettingdarkandthewinddiedaway.天漸漸黑了，風(fēng)漸漸小了。Thebreezegentlykissedhischecks.微風(fēng)輕柔地親吻著他的臉龐。No.2.雨Iwasdisturbedbytheannoyingsoundoftherain.淅淅瀝瀝的雨聲擾亂了我的思緒。Immediately,sheetsofbitterlycoldrainfilledtheair.頃刻間，空中下起了陣陣刺骨的冷雨。Theraincamepouringdown,thestreamsrose,andthewindsblewandbeatagainstthehouse.大雨傾盆，溪水上漲，狂風(fēng)咆哮這撞擊房屋。Thoughtherainstopped,thewindrushedbyandwhistledandmadestrangesounds.雨雖停了，風(fēng)卻呼嘯而過，發(fā)出奇怪的聲音。Theraindrummedonthewindow,biddingfarewelltothelastbeamofsunlight.雨滴敲打著窗戶，向最后一縷陽光告別。6.Itwasrainingcatsanddogsyesterdayafterschool,andIwasallwetwhenIgothome.昨天放學(xué)的時候下著傾盆大雨，我到家時全身都濕了。7.Therewasaheavydownpour.Unfortunately,Tomwascaughtintheheavyrain.下了一場大暴雨。不幸的是，Tom在暴雨中被淋成了落湯雞。No.3.雪1.Thefrozensnowcrunchedunderourfeet.凍結(jié)的雪在我們的腳下嘎吱作響。2.Snowblanketedeveryrooftopandweighedonthebranchesofoldtrees.雪覆蓋了每一個屋頂,壓在老樹的枝丫上。3.Thecountrysidewastransformedintoahugewhiteplainbythesnow.It'sdarknowandthesnowisfalling,clumpsofwetflakesdriftingdown.鄉(xiāng)村被雪變成了一片巨大的白色平原。現(xiàn)在天黑了，雪還在下，一片片濕漉漉的雪花飄落下來。4.Thefeatherysnowflakesdancedinthenightair,makingabeautifulpicture.鵝毛般的雪花在夜空中飛舞，像一幅美麗的畫。No.4.霧Theviewwasobscuredbyfog.霧中景色朦朧。2.Thehillswereenvelopedindensefog.群山被濃霧籠罩著。3.Themorningfogblockedourview.清晨的霧擋住了我們的視線。4.Thefogsoonenpassedthewholevalley.霧很快籠罩了整個山谷。5.Thetownwascoveredinathickblanketoffog.大霧籠罩著這個城鎮(zhèn)。6.Theheavyfogseemedtobecastinganetoverme.濃霧似乎在我身上撒下了一張網(wǎng)。No.5.太陽Thisweatheristerrible.Iamsweatinglikeapig,althoughI'mnotdoinganything.天熱得嚇人，雖然我什么都沒做，但還是汗流浹背。Inthisheat,eventhetreesappeareddefeated,withleavesdroopinglifelessly.在這種炎熱的天氣里、連樹木都顯得萎靡不振,樹葉都毫無生氣地垂落著。Thesunwasatitshighest.TheheatbeatdownonmyheadasifIwasbaconunderthegrill.太陽處于最高點,熱浪擊打在頭上，我好像烤架下的培根一樣。Thewaterwasdeepblueandthesunlightglitteredonitsglassclearsurface.湖水深藍，陽光在風(fēng)平浪靜的湖面上熠熠生輝。No.6.霧Thecloudshadspreadandnearlycoveredtheentiresky.云層散開，幾乎遮住了整個天空。Theskywasfullofdarkmassesofclouds.天空中烏云密布。Byafternoon,thecloudshaveclearedaway.到了下午，云已經(jīng)散去。4.Theskywasovercast,darkenedwithgloomyclouds,andthewholeworldseemedtobeenvelopedinahugegrayquilt.天陰沉沉的，烏云密布，整個世界仿佛都被籠罩在一張巨大的灰色被子里。No.7.雷電1.Anashoflightningflashedacrossthesky.一道閃電劃過天空。2.Outside,thunderboomedandcrashed.外面雷聲隆降，發(fā)出巨響。3.Thunderboomedintheskyoverhead,雷聲在頭頂上的天空中隆隆作響。4.Theweatherinsummerisunpredictable.Justnowitwassunny.Inaflash,lightningandthunderbrokeout,andthestormbegantorain.夏天的天氣真是變幻莫測。剛才還是晴空萬里，一霎時就電閃雷鳴，開始了狂風(fēng)暴雨。5.Thethunderwasrumblinginthedistance.遠處雷聲隆降。6.Thunderrumbledinthemountainsallaroundandrainbegantofallinheavydrops.山里雷聲隆隆雨點開始大顆大顆地往下落。IwasstudyingaBarbieanddoingsomesimplemathinmyheadwhensuddenlyanearthshakingclapofthunderroaredfromthestormoutside.Ijumpedatthenoise,droppingthedolltothefloor.Thelightsflickeredonceanddied,coveringeverythinginablanketofblackness.Thundercontinuedtoshaketheskyandlightningilluminatedthestoreforseconds,castingfrighteningshadowsonmymind.我正在研究一個芭比娃娃，在腦子里做一些簡單的計算，，突然一陣驚天動地的雷聲從外面的暴風(fēng)雨中呼嘯而出。我聽到噪音嚇了一跳，把娃娃扔在地上。燈光閃爍了一次，然后熄滅了，一片漆黑地籠罩了一切。雷聲繼續(xù)震動著天空，閃電照亮了商店好幾秒鐘，在我的腦海中投下了可怕的陰影。No.8.星空Theskywasdottedwithsparklingstars.天上繁星點點。Starswinkedatmeinadarkeningsky.夜空中星星向我眨眼睛。Blueskiesstoodtallandfar.藍藍的天空高高聳立。4.Thesky,midnightblue,gavethesceneafairytalequality.深藍色的夜空給這一場景增添了童話般的色彩。5.Atmidnight,thestormquieted,thecloudspartedandthestarsshonethroughthedarksky.午夜時分,暴風(fēng)雨停了，烏云散開,星星在黑暗的天空中閃罐。6.hestarsshinelikediamonds.星星如鉆石般閃耀。氣氛描寫（2023年浙江卷1月）Ifeltasurgeofreliefandaweatthesightofthissoundandgratefulcreature,andIknewthatIwouldalwayscherishthememorieswesharedasIclimbedintomycaranddroveaway.看到這個健康的和感激的生物，我感到一陣欣慰和敬畏，我知道，當(dāng)我爬上我的車，開車離開時，我會永遠珍惜我們分享的回憶。（2023年浙江卷1月）Aflashofmovementcaughtmyattention.Iturnedaroundtoseethesamehummingbirdhoveringintheair.一陣短暫的動作引起了我的注意。我轉(zhuǎn)過身，看到那只蜂鳥在空中盤旋。(2024屆廣東省四校高三第一次聯(lián)考試題)Withthesunpeekingoverthehorizon,John’sfaceglowedwithgratitude.Feelingenergetic,hecouldn’twaittogetstarted.太陽在地平線上掠過，約翰的臉上洋溢著感激之光。他感到精力充沛，就迫不及待地想開始工作。Anairofsadnesssettledoverthegroup.人群中籠罩著一種悲傷的氣氛.5.Itwasawfullyquietexceptforourfootstepshittingtheroad,andmyheavybreathing.除了我們走在路上的腳步聲和我沉重的呼吸聲外，這里非常安靜。6.Itsuddenlyseemedfrighteninglyquiet.Theairwaschargedwithtension.突然安靜得可怕,空氣中彌漫著緊張的氣氛。環(huán)境比喻Afilled/litupB,which,asifbymagic,hadturnedintoC.A充斥/點亮B，好似魔法般，B變成了C例1：夕陽照亮了這條河，這條河仿佛變魔術(shù)似的，變成了一條金色的絲帶。Thesettingsunlituptheriver,which,asifbymagic,hadturnedintoagoldenribbon.例2：犬吠聲響徹了整個房子，仿佛被施了魔法似的，房子變成了一個游樂場。Thebarksfilledwiththehouse,which,asifbymagic,hadtuurnedintoaplayground.例3：爆米花的香味彌漫了整個房子，仿佛變魔術(shù)似的，房子變成了一個游樂場。Thesmellofthepopcornfilledwiththehouse,which,asbymagic,hadturnedintoaplayground.環(huán)境幕布Bdoing/done,sb....環(huán)境....，人物.....例1：明月高懸天際，人們把酒言歡。Thebrightmoonhanginginthesky,peoplefeastedongrandmeals,talkinginhighspirits.例2：爆竹聲充斥大街小巷，人們看著春晚，分享著趣聞。Thestreetsfilledwiththesoundoffirecrackers,peoplewatchedtheSpringFestivalGala,exchanginganecdotes.例3：醫(yī)生巨響打破了寂靜，它升到空中，消失在夜色中。Aroarbreakingthesilence,itroseintotheairandoffintothenight.用環(huán)境襯托人物環(huán)境反襯句式1Though+環(huán)境描寫，itseemed+adj./nountosb.雖然環(huán)境...，但是在某人看來...例1：雖然這是一個寒冷的夜晚，但是在Robin看來，卻好似春日。Thoughthenightwasfreezingcold,itseemedlikespringtoRobin.Freezeingcoldas/thoughthenightwas,itseemedlikespringtoRobin.例2：雖然教室里坐著的都是白發(fā)老人，但是在我眼里他們大聲朗讀的樣子非常年輕。Thoughthepeoplesittingintheclassroomwereallwhitehaired,theyseemedsoyoungtomewhentheywerereadingloudly.Allwhitehairedthoughthepeoplesittingintheclassroomwere,theyseemedsoyoungtomewhentheywerereadingloudly.環(huán)境反襯句式2AgainstA,B...在A的對比下（在...中），B顯得...例1：在商場的嘈雜聲中，她嘴里說出這些溫柔的話語，在我聽來卻格外清晰。Againstthenoiseintheshoppingmall,thesesofewordsutteredfromhermouthsoundedsocleartome.例2：在桌上鋪著的這些亮閃閃的禮物中，這塊毯子顯得格外丑陋，這讓Lucy尷尬地臉紅了。Againstalltheshinypresentsspreadonthetable,thecarpetseemedextremelyugly,whichmadeLucyblushwithembarrassment.環(huán)境反襯句