廣東高考基礎(chǔ)寫作之人物介紹

基礎(chǔ)寫作：人物簡介專題

人物簡介1).屬于記敘文體裁2).基本類型：記人，敘事，寫景3).常見高考書面表達(dá)題：介紹同學(xué)，朋友，老師，父母，名人等等4).記敘方法：順敘，倒敘，插敘5).注意事項：選材代表性；精煉，感人，不拖泥帶水；注意5W1H；人稱時態(tài)。6).常見段落結(jié)構(gòu)：主題句－發(fā)展句－結(jié)論句

一、人物簡介的寫作步驟：1． Birthdayandbirthplace2． Familybackground3． Educationbackground4． Bigeventsinhisorherlife(inorderoftime)5． Evaluation

二、人物簡介寫作常用的詞組及句子：1.Birthdayandbirthplace:……was/werebornin…on…eg.ShewasborninPolandonNov.7,1867.

2.Familybackground……was/werebornin/intoapoor/richfamilyhis/herfamilywassopoorthat…h(huán)is/herfatherwasverystrictwithhim…thesonofapoorfamilywhenhewasasmallboy/youngasachild/asaboyof15duringhis/herchildhoodspendhischildhoodin…liveahappy/hardlifeeg.AbrahamLincoln,thesonofapoorfamily,wasborninKentuckyonFebruary12,1809.Bornofapoorclerk’sfamily,CharlesDickenshadlittleschooling.

3.Educationbackground

beadmittedto…collegegraduatefrom…departmentof…universitywhenatcollege,hemajoredin…receiveadoctor’sdegreegoabroadforfurtherstudies

4.Bigeventsinone’slife

beinterestedin…/befondof…workhardat…serveas…devotehislifetime/himselfto…concentratehimselfto…doresearchabout/into…makeupone’smindtodosth.dosthwithgreatdeterminationandperseverancebestrictinsth.havea…wayofdoingsthtryone’sbesttodosth.encouragesbtodofightfor,giveupone’slifeforsb/sthwinaprize/thefirstprizein…competitionreceive/obtain/wintheNobelPrizefor…begoodat…dowellin…becrazyabout…enjoy…

makerapidprogressin…setanewworldrecordof…equaltheworldrecordwin(won)agold/silver/bronzemedalbeselectedto/becomeamemberof…studyhardtrainhardgothroughhardshipovercomemanydifficultieshaveagift/talentforlanguage,etconeofthebest/mostimportant…setagoodexamplefor…amodelteacher/workerberespectedbyeveryonespeak/thinkhighlyof…behonoredas(anexcellentathlete)hishardworkbroughthimgreatsuccessheistheprideofChina.Hisheroicstoryspreadalloverthecity5.Evaluation5.Evaluationmakegreatcontributionsto…Consistency/Perseveranceisthekeytosuccess.befamous/knownasberegardedasbecomeaworldchampionat…ChampionshipsremembersbforeveranewchapterofhistoryhasbeenturnedLeiFenghasbeenpraisedforhiscommunistspirit.aninspiringleadermakegreatcontributionsto…Consistency/Perseveranceisthekeytosuccess.befamous/knownasberegardedasbecomeaworldchampionat…ChampionshipsremembersbforeveranewchapterofhistoryhasbeenturnedLeiFenghasbeenpraisedforhiscommunistspirit.aninspiringleader5.Evaluation

6.描寫人物外貌和性格特征good-lookingfunny-lookingugly-lookingordinary-lookingwhite-hairedwarm-heartedkind-heartedabsent-mindedbad-temperednear-sightedfar-sightedastrongwilltallshortprettynaughtysmartwisebrightdiligentlazyhealthyhumorouscharmingattractivetalkativeconfidenceindependentpatienceSamplewritings【基礎(chǔ)寫作實例剖析：】

你是李華，申請到一家外資企業(yè)工作。對方要求你用英語寫一篇短文（只能使用5個句子表達(dá)全部的內(nèi)容），介紹自己的基本情況。短文應(yīng)包括下表所列全部內(nèi)容。

姓名李華出生年月1977年2月出生地遼寧大連學(xué)歷1984——1990光明小學(xué)1990——1996大連市第六中學(xué)所學(xué)主要課程語文、數(shù)學(xué)、英語、物理、化學(xué)、電腦特長英語、電腦（去年在全校電腦競賽中獲第一名）業(yè)余愛好游泳、滑冰、集郵、流行音樂【實例剖析：】

【寫作分析】通過認(rèn)真審題，根據(jù)記敘文對寫人的要求可以確定如下寫作要點：文體：記敘文人稱:根據(jù)內(nèi)容可確定本文人稱為第一人稱要點：李華的出生年月及地點；學(xué)歷；所學(xué)主要課程；特長；獲獎情況；業(yè)余愛好?！緦嵗饰觯骸?/p>

短語及句型：bebornin,afterthat,begoodat/dowellin,graduate,themainsubjects,winfirstprize,

enjoydoing

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MynameisLiHua.②

IwasborninDalian,LiaoningProvinceinFebruary1977.③Istartedschoolin1984whenIwasseven

andIstudiedinGuangmingPrimarySchoolfrom1984to1990,afterthatIwenttoNo.6MiddleSchoolofDalianandgraduatedthissummer.④ThemainsubjectsIstudiedatschoolincludedChinese,maths,English,physics,chemistryandcomputer,inwhichEnglishandcomputeraremyfavourite,furthermore,lastyearIwonfirstprizeintheschoolcomputercompetition.⑤

WhenIamfree,Ienjoylisteningtopopularmusicandcollectingstamps,andmyfavoritesportsareswimminginsummerandskatinginwinter.

范例：請根據(jù)以下信息寫一篇介紹霍英東的文章。出生1923年5月，香港。個人經(jīng)歷1、7歲喪父，家境貧困;2、1955年后，經(jīng)營建筑、航運、石油等，成為國內(nèi)外知名人士;3、改革開放(thereformandopenpolicy)以來，先后捐資支持教育、文化、體育、和福利事業(yè)款項達(dá)100多億港元。影響成為“感動中國”的人物。［寫作要求］只能使用5個句子表達(dá)全部的內(nèi)容。要點分析：

名人介紹，采用第三人稱

將提供的信息整合以一般過去時態(tài)為主。

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①InMay1923,DrHuo

YingdongwasbornfromapoorfamilyinHongKong.②

Attheageoften,hisfatherdied.③

After1955,hewasengagedinarchitecture,shipping,petroleumandbecameafamouspersonathomeandabroad.④

Sincethebeginningofthereformandopenpolicy,hehaddonatedover10billiondollarstosponsoreducation,culture,sports,andpublicwelfareinMainland.

⑤Hehasmadegreatcontributionstoconstructingandbenefitingourcountry,whichmakeshimaMovingChinahero.【人物介紹】：