考研寫作4課件

考研寫作4考研寫作42.2寓意說明+原因分析段2006Itisblindworshipthatmakesitpossibletodosuchcrazy/unreasonablethingsasthephotosdisplay.Themainreason,Iassume,wouldbethedistortededucationofthepopularcultureleadingtothepervasivenessofthestar-worshipping.Asisshowninthestatisticsofarecentsurveylaunchedbyanon-profitinstitution,theincreaseofteenagers’someoneissoprominentthattheresultcausedbyitmaybeconcludedasfollows.1強(qiáng)調(diào)句說明寓意插入分詞做定語3數(shù)據(jù)論證desire/aspirationsofrespectingeagernesstorespect2過渡說明原因2023/10/122考研寫作42.2寓意說明+原因分析段…Itmaymisleadadolescentstodreamaboutanimmediatesuccess/triumph

ratherthantodedicatetotheirstudy.Anditisoflittlesurprisetofindtheirdisappointmentatlast.107words4結(jié)果推導(dǎo)5進(jìn)一步推導(dǎo)形式主語句2023/10/123考研寫作4二、高分范文得分解密2.2寓意說明段+舉例說明段（1）五至六句(80-90詞)：第一句說明寓意(承上啟下)；第二句說明如下事例可以證明；第三四句一個事例及擴(kuò)展；第五六句另一個擴(kuò)展。具體化——切忌以理說理。（2）注意事項——切忌例子私人化。（3）擴(kuò)展方式——數(shù)據(jù)論證、借用常識、引用權(quán)威、因果論證、比較論證例中人/例中事behave(s)/occur(s)inthesamewaythat圖中人/圖中事do(es)inthepicture.2023/10/124考研寫作42.3寓意說明+舉例說明段1998(P34)Itseemsreasonablewhenpeoplelaughatthecartoon,butitwouldnolongerbelaughablewhenpeoplefindsimilarthingstakingplaceinourdailylife.1

Recentlythereisatrendofmakingpromisesinvariousfieldsofoursociety.Fromdepartmentsofgovernmenttocommonshoppingcenters,manybusinesseswhosupplyproductsorofferserviceshavemadevariouspromisestotheircustomersorservicereceivers.2

分詞作定語定語從句2023/10/125考研寫作42.3寓意說明+舉例說明段Theyasserttheirproductstobeofgoodqualityorpromisetoofferexcellentservice.3

Asamatteroffact,manyofthesebusinessesclaiminthesamewaythat（比較）thehenintheabovecartoonpromisestolayeggs.4ofgreatimportance/significance=important/significantofgreat/littlepossibility=possible/impossibleofgreathelp=helpfulofpoor/outstandingqualityof+n.=adj.比較論證2023/10/126考研寫作42.3寓意說明+舉例說明段舉例論證常用過渡句：Abundantofexampleswoulddemonstratethephenomenon,whilethefollowingone,Isuppose,wouldsuffice.Hereisanexample.Take…foranexample/instance.…(短語/that主語從句)providesuswithanexcellentexample.Eg.Teenagerssurfingonlineprovidesuswithanexcellentexample.

Thatteenagers,inincreasingnumbers,surfonlineprovidesuswithanexcellentexample.2023/10/127考研寫作42.4寓意說明+利弊分析段2002，2009，2010積極中帶有消極，消極中暗含積極五至六句(80-90詞)：第一句說明寓意(承上啟下)；第二句說明有利有弊；ononehand,第三四句一個優(yōu)點(diǎn)及擴(kuò)展；ontheotherhand,第五六句一個缺點(diǎn)及擴(kuò)展。優(yōu)點(diǎn)/缺點(diǎn)=原因

擴(kuò)展=舉例/數(shù)據(jù)/權(quán)威/常識/結(jié)果(五種論證)論點(diǎn)必須清晰2023/10/128考研寫作42.4寓意說明+利弊分析段2009(P35)Fromthecartoon,wecanconcludethatthecartoonistwantstoconveysuchamessage:withthepopularityofcomputers,peoplefromallovertheworldbecomenearerbyusingtheinternettocommunicatewitheachother.1

Meanwhile,peoplealsobecomefarawayfromtheirfriends.2

Allofusacceptthefactthatthedevelopmentoftheinternetbringslotsofconveniencestoourdailylife,forinstance,wecanbuyabookonthenetinsteadofgoingtoabookstore.套話一句引出“利”ratherthan2023/10/129考研寫作42.4寓意說明+利弊分析段Besides,wecancommunicatewithourfriendsonthenetwithoutgoingoutofhome.3Butwecan'tignoretheothersideofthese:thetimewespendwithfriendsorfamilybecomesless.Andwehardlyseethemonceinaweek.Itwillmakeusfeellonelyifwecontinuetousethetoolonthenettotalkwithfriendsinsteadoftalkingwiththemonthephoneorgoingoutwiththem.4158words2023/10/1210考研寫作42.5建議措施段三至四句(50-55詞)：第一句過渡詞(accordingly,asismentionedabove插入)引出重復(fù)論點(diǎn)；第二句改善建議(消極意義)或提升方式(積極意義)；第三句表明期待結(jié)果。改善建議常用表達(dá)方式：Itishightimethat…(did)…Itisimperativefor…that…(should)…(3)提升方式常用表達(dá)方式：Asenhancingthesenseof…,wewouldbenefitmorefrom…

2023/10/1211考研寫作42.5建議措施段三至四句：第一句過渡詞(accordingly,asismentionedabove插入)引出重復(fù)論點(diǎn)；第二句改善建議(消極意義)或提升方式(積極意義)；第三句表明期待結(jié)果。(4)表明期待結(jié)果常用表達(dá)方式：Onlyinthisway/bydoing/byexertingthiscanweboth…andembraceabrightertomorrow.2023/10/1212考研寫作42.5建議措施段2003(P36)——消極寓義Childeducationhasbecomeoneofthemostpopulartopicsdiscussednotonlybyeducationalexperts,butalsobypeopleinallwalks

oflife.

Thefailureofchildeducationdoesmoreharmtothedevelopmentofoursocietyandourcivilizationthantothechildrenthemselves.Thus,it’shightime

thatparents,educatorsandthegovernmentmade

concerted

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toputanendtothissituation.70words重復(fù)觀點(diǎn)2023/10/1213考研寫作42.5建議措施段2008(P47紫)——積極寓義Accordingly,itisimperativeforustotakesomemeasurestoenhancethesenseofteamworkinoursociety.Weshouldbearinmindthatteamworkisofgreatsignificancetobothoursocietyandourselves.Everyoneshouldhavetheabilityofteamwork.Onlyinthiswaycanweachievesuccessandonlyinthiswaycanoursocietybecomemoreharmonioustolivein.70wordsboth2023/10/1214考研寫作4三、短文寫作篇章分析（1）寫作三段論首段——圖畫描述段中間段1——寓意說明段+原因分析段中間段2——寓意說明段+舉例說明段

中間段3——寓意說明段+利弊分析段尾段——建議措施段（2）篇章結(jié)構(gòu)體現(xiàn)段與段之間過渡——第二段第一句寓意說明；第三段第一句重復(fù)觀點(diǎn)段內(nèi)銜接——各種連接詞使用（P6）消極寓意類積極寓意類必須使用?。。±装?023/10/1215考研寫作4三、短文寫作步驟審題——積極還是消極列提綱——三段選擇與句型填充（中文解決邏輯思路）開始寫組——注意語法，書寫工整檢查——拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)、語法、動詞（唯一性原則）2023/10/1216考研寫作4圖畫描述Thereisaboilinghotpot,asisillustratedinthepicture,withvariousingredientsofmulti-cultures,suchasfamousfigureshomeandabroad:BiShengandShakespeare,philosophicalconcepts:ConfucianismandTaoism,performingart:BeijingOperaandSwanLake,andthelike.Thecaptionunderthepictureisthattheculturalhotpotisbothdeliciousandnutritious.59words插入,suchas…andthelike