二輪測試(一)作文

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高三二輪英語綜合測試（一）

如今，外出旅游的人越來越多。有些物品可能是外出旅游時必備的?，F(xiàn)在，請說明你外出旅游時選擇以下物品的理由【寫作內(nèi)容】

1、身份證：旅游者必備的最基本的證件；2、相機：記錄所看到的東西，帶來樂趣；3、手機：聯(lián)系家人、朋友：4、MP3player：用于旅游途中打發(fā)時間。[寫作要求]只能使用5個句子表達全部內(nèi)容。[評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)]句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。IalwaystakemyIDcard,camera,mobilephone,MP3playerandsomeotherthingswithmewhiletravelling.IthinkanIDcardisabasicandnecessarydocumentfortourists.AcameraisusedtorecordwhatIsee,anditcanbringmealotoffun.Amobilephoneisveryusefultokeepintouchwithmyfamilyandfriends.AndthenanMP3player,Ithink,isalsoveryimportantformetokilltimeduringthejourney.如何寫好高考英語作文得高分？

近幾年要求“使用較多語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯”，因此要想得高分，除了要點和語言準(zhǔn)確度以外，還必須在較復(fù)雜的句子結(jié)構(gòu)或較高級的詞匯上有所表現(xiàn)。句式單一，缺乏生氣的文章，哪怕無任何錯誤也不可能得高分，相反“有些錯誤，但是為了使用較復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)或較高級詞匯所致”，給分檔次仍在最高檔(21～25分)。1.改變句子的開頭方式，不要一味地都是主語開頭，接著是謂語、賓語，最后再加一個狀語。可以把狀語置于句首，或用分詞,adj等做狀語等［原文1］Wemetattheschoolgateandwenttheretogetherearlyinthemorning.

［修正］Earlyinthemorning

wemetattheschoolgateandwenttheretogether.

［原文2］Theyoungmancouldn’thelpcryingwhenheheardthebadnews.

［修正］Hearingthebadnews，theyoungmancouldn’thelpcrying.③由with或without引導(dǎo)的短語。如:Hesatinachairwithanewspaperinthehand.④分詞短語。如:

Satisfiedwiththeresult，hedecidedtogoonwithanewexperiment.⑤倒裝句。如:

Onlyinthiswaycanweachieveourgoal.

NeverbeforehaveIseensuchawonderfulfilm.3.通過分句和合句，增強句子的連貫性和表現(xiàn)力。［原文1］Hestoppedushalfanhourago.Hemadeuscatchthenextoffender.［修正］Hestoppedushalfanhouragoandmadeuscatchthenextoffender.［原文2］Wehadashortrest.Thenwebegantoplayhappily.Wesanganddanced.Sometoldstories.Someplayedchess.［修正］Afterashortrest，wehadgreatfunsinginganddancing，

tellingjokesandplayingchess.5.注意使用詞組、習(xí)語來代替一些單詞，以增加文采。如:［原文］Anewrailwayisbeingbuiltinmyhometown.［修正］Anewrailwayisunderconstructioninmyhometown.6.避免重復(fù)使用某一單詞或短語。如:［原文］Ilikereadingwhilemybrotherlikeswatchingtelevision.［修正］Ilikereadingwhilemybrotherenjoyswatchingtelevision.讀寫任務(wù)

閱讀下面的短文，然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。

HonestyisoneofthemosttreasuredtraditionalvaluesinChina.Thechildrenaretaughttobehonestwhentheyareveryyoung.Atschoolsthestudentsarealsoinstructedtobehonest.

However,withthedevelopmentofsociety,weoftenhearcomplaintsaboutdishonesty.Reportswiththethemeofdishonestyoftenappearinthemedia.Forexample,somepeopletrytogetrichandliveacomfortablelife.Buttheydonotworkhardhonestly,insteadtheycheatothers.Theysellsomethingquiteordinaryataveryhighprice.Somepeople'sdelayingpayingbacktheloancanserveasanotherexample.Somepeople,includingsomecollegestudents,getloanfromthebank,andpromisetopaywithin,say,3years.However,theydon'tdothat.

Thedishonestpeoplesometimescangetbenefitfromtheirbehaviors.Sosomepeopleassertthatdishonestycanbringpeoplebenefit,whilehonestyonlymakespeoplesuffer.Isthatso?Definitelynot.Itisalwaystruethathonestyisthebestpolicy.Itpaystobehonest.Thecheaterselling"thetreasure"mentionedabovewillsurelybedisclosedandpunishedsomeday.

Onthecontrary,ifhehadbeenhonest,neitherthebuyernorhehimselfwouldhavesuffered.Thepeoplewhodonotreturnmoneyintimewillsoonerorlaterbecomeinfamous,andwillnotgetthemoneyfromothersagain.Ifhehadacteddifferently,hewouldhaveearnedrespectandtrust,meanwhile,thebankwouldnothavesufferedfromloss.

【寫作內(nèi)容】1.以約30個詞概括短文的要點。2.然后以約120個詞就“誠實”的主題發(fā)表看法，并包括以下要點：（1）你對不誠實現(xiàn)象的看法；

（2）誠實的重要性是什么；（3）作為中學(xué)生，該如何做一個誠實的人。[寫作要求]1.在作文中可以使用實例或其他論述方法支持你的論點，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。2.作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱。[評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)]概括正確，語言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，篇章連貫。Thepassagemainlytellsusthatnowadaysmanypeoplearedishonestfortheirownbenefit.Theynotonlyneglectourtraditionalvalues,butalsowanttoescapebeingpunished.Dishonestydoesgreatharmtooursociety.Itcandestroyourgoodrelationshipwithothers,bringinglotsofunstablefactorstothesociety.Sometimes,itmayevenaffectpeople’shealth..Whyshouldwebehonest?Firstly,beinghonestisoneofChinesetraditionalvirtueswhichweshouldcarryforward.Secondly,friendshipisbasedonhonesty.Seeingthatthehonestpersonisreliable,mostofpeoplearewillingtomakefriendswiththem.Thirdly,honestyisveryimportantforustobuildaharmonioussocietyandrealizeou