2013考研英語作文寫作技巧

Thegoatsgrazedpeacefullyinthefarmandwereunawareoftheapproachinghunter并列分句Grazingpeacefully,thegoatsinthefarmwereunawareoftheapproachinghunter.現(xiàn)在分語短語簡單句Inthefarmthegoatsgrazedpeacefullyandwereunawareoftheapproachinghunter副詞短語+并列分句(1)-(2))Thereweregoatsgrazingpeacefullyinthefarm,unawareoftheapproachinghunter.簡單句+形容Asthegoatsgrazedpeacefullyinthefarm,theywereunawareoftheapproachinghunter原因副詞TheyoungpilotwasonhisfirstoverseasHefeltveryTheyoungpilotonhisfirstoverseastrainingfeltveryTheyoungpilotfeltveryuneasyduringhisfirstoverseasTheyoungpilot''''''''sfirstoverseastrainingmadehimfeelveryExtremeuneasinessseizedtheyoungpilotonhisfirstoverseasTheyoungpilotwasonhisfirstoverseastraining,feelingveryItbeinghisfirstoverseastraining,theyoungpilotfeltveryBeingonhisfirstoverseastraining,theyoungpilotfeltveryTheyoungpilotwasonhisfirstoverseastrainingandfeltveryTheyoungpilot,whowasonhisfirstoverseastraining,feltveryWhentheyoungpilotwasonhis/firstoverseastrainging,hefeltveryAstheyoungpilotwasonhisfirstoverseastraining,hefeltveryTheyoungpilotwasonhisfirstoverseastraining,sothathefeltvery用的人并不多。人們最喜歡采用復(fù)雜句，尤其是(j)和(k)這兩款；接著便是并列句(h)。如果大多數(shù)人的句子只限于(b),(g),(h),(j)和(k)這五種，而其他的則棄如敝屣，不是很可惜嗎？1Weak:Thetreesarebare.Thegrassisbrown.Thelandscapeseemsdrab.Revision:Thebrowngrassandbaretreesformadrablandscape轉(zhuǎn)換為前置定語)Or:Thelandscape,bareandbrown,beggedforspringgreen.)Weak:TheteammembersaregoodRevision:TheteammembersyWeak:Oneworker'snistheeliminationofRevision:Oneworker'sneliminates3、在以“here”或“there”開頭的句子中，把“be”Weak:ThereisnoopportunityforRevision:NoopportunityforpromotionWeak:HerearethebooksyouRevision:Thebooksyouorderedhave1、PoorMysupervisorwentpastmyBetterMysupervisorsaunteredwalkedslowlypastmydesk.2、Poor:Sheisacarefulshopper.Better:Shecomparespricesand1、Weak:Theorganizationhasbeensupportedbycharity.Better:Charityhassupportedtheorganization.2、Weak:Thebiscuitswerestackedonate.Better:Motherstackedthebiscuitsonate.1、Wordy:MylittlesisterhasapreferenceforchocolateImproved:Mylittlesisterpreferschocolate2、Wordy:Weareinreceiptofyourletterandintendtofollowyour Improved:Wehavereceivedyourletterandintendedtofollowyour 3、RedundantWehadaseriouscrisisatschoolyesterdaywhenourchemistrylaboratorycaughtfire.Improved:Wehadacrisisatschoolyesterdaywhenourchemistrylaboratorycaughtfire.4、RedundantMysisterandIboughtthesame,identicaldressindifferentImproved:MysisterandIboughtthesamedressindifferent五、杜絕陳舊詞語或難懂的專業(yè)術(shù)語。例如1、Weak:Theywillnotagreetohisproposalsinanyshapeorform.Improved:Theywillnotagreetoanyofhisproposals.2、Weak:IneedherfinancialinputbeforeIcanguesstimateourexpendituresnextImproved:IneedherfinancialfiguresbeforeIcanestimateourexpendituresnext首先，一個(gè)段落必須有一個(gè)中心即思想，該中心由句特別是其中的題旨來表達(dá)。整個(gè)段落必須緊扣這個(gè)(stickorholdtothetopic)，這就是段落的統(tǒng)一性(unity)。其次，一個(gè)段落必須有若干推展句，使思想得到充分展開，從而給讀者一個(gè)完整的感覺，這就是完整性(completenessoradequateness)。句子的過渡必須流暢(smooth)，這就是連貫性(coherence)。下面我們就對(duì)這三個(gè)標(biāo)準(zhǔn)分別加以說明。JoeandIdecidedtotakethelongtripwe'dalwayswantedacrossthecountry.Wewerelikeyoungkidsbuyingourcamperandstockingitwithallthenecessitiesoflife.Bellabakesthebestrhubarbpie.WestartedoutinearlyspringfromMinneapolisandheadedwestacrossthenorthernpartofthecountryWebothenjoyedthosepeoplewemetatthetrailerpark.JoereceivedawatchathisretirementdinnerTooursurprisewefoundthatwelikedthewarmsouthernregionsverymuch,andsowedecidedtostayhereinNewMexico.本段的句是段首句，controllingidea（中心思想）是takethelongtripacrossthecountry。文中出現(xiàn)兩個(gè)irrelevantsentencesBellabakesthebestrhubarbpieJoeandI，中間出現(xiàn)一個(gè)Bella是不合適的。還有，Joereceivedawatchathisretirementdinner這一句更是與句不MynameisRoseanna,andIliketokeepphysicallyfit.Iusedtoweightwohundredpounds,butIjoinedtheYMCAforanexerciseclassanddietprogram.InoneyearIlosteightypounds.Ifeelmuchbetterandneverwanttohavethatmuchweightonmyfive-feetframeagain.Iboughttwonewsuitcaseslastweek.EverydayIpracticejoggingthree,swimmingfifteenlaps,liftingtwenty-poundweightsandyingtennisforonehour.Mymotherwasaprematurebaby.controllingidea是liketodeepphysicallyfitirrelevantsentencesItwonewsuitcaseslastweekMymotherwasaprematurebaby從上面兩個(gè)例子可以看出，nativespeakersirrelevantsentencesPhysicalworkcanbeausefulformoftherapyforamindinturmoil.Workconcentratesyourthoughtsonaconcretetask.Besides,itismoreusefulto youproducesomethingratherthanmoreanxiety本段的句是段首句本段的兩個(gè)推展句均不能回答句中問題什么是＂amindin100～12040Itisnotalwaystruethatagoodpictureisworthathousandwords.Oftenwritingismuchclearerthanapicture.Itissometimesdifficulttofigureoutwhatapicturemeans,butacarefulwritercanalmostalwaysexinit.Itisnotalwaystruethatapictureisworthathousandwords.Sometimes,picturesareprettyuselessthings.Ifyoucan'tswimandfallintheriverandstartgulwater,willyoubebetterofftoholdupapictureofyourselfdrowning,orstartscreaming"Help"?連貫性A．按時(shí)間先后排列(chronologicalarrangement)Wehadanumberofclosecallsthatday.Whenwerose,itwasobviouslylateandwehadtohurrysoasnottomissbreakfast;weknewthediningroomstaffwasstrictaboutclosingatnineo'clock.Then,whenwehadbeendrivinginthedesertfornearlytwohours-----itmusthavebeenclosetonoontheheatnearlyhidusin;theradiatorboiledoverandwehadtousemostofourdrinkingwatertocoolitdown.Bythetimewereachedthemountain,itwasfouro'clockandwewereexhausted.Here,judgementranoutofusandwestartedthetoughclimbtothesummit,notrealizingthatdarknesscamesuddenlyinthedesert.Sureenough,bysixwewerestrugglingandAndrewverynearlywentdownasteepcliff,draggingmmedandmealongwithhim.Bynine,whenthewindhowledacrosstheflatledgeofthesummit,weknewasweshiveredtogetherforwarmththatithadnotbeenourluckyrose＂（起床）寫起，然后是吃早餐(＂nottomissbreakfast＂,＂closingatnineo'clock＂)，然后是＂closetonoon＂，一直寫到這一天結(jié)束(＂Bynine--")。B.按位置遠(yuǎn)近排列(spatialarrangement)Fromadistance,itlookedlikeaskinnytube,butaswegotcloser,wecouldseeitfleshoutbeforeoureyes.Itwastubular,allright,butfatterthanwecouldseefromfaraway.Furthermore,wewerealsoastonishedtonoticethatthebuildingwasreallyintwoparts:apagodasittingontopofatubularone-storystructure.Standingtenfeetaway,wecouldmarvelathowmuchofthepagodawasmadeupofglasswindows.Almosteverythingunderthe roofwasmadeofglass,unlikethetubethatitwason,whichonlyhadfour.Inside,thetubewasgloomy,becauseofthelackoflight.Thenasteep,narrowstaircasetookusupinsidethepagodaandthelightchangeddramatically.Allthosewindowsletinafloodofsunshineandwecouldseeoutforacrosstheflatland.最后是＂insidethepagoda＂……當(dāng)然，按位置遠(yuǎn)近來寫不等于都是由遠(yuǎn)及近。根據(jù)需要，也可以由近及C.按邏輯關(guān)系排列(logical按重要性順序排列(arrangementinorderofIfyouworkasasodajerker,youwill,ofcourse,notneedmuchskillinexpressingyourselftobeeffective.Ifyouworkonamachine,yourabilitytoexpressyourselfwillbeoflittleimportance.Butassoonasyoumoveonestepupfromthebottom,youreffectivenessdependsonyourabilitytoreachothersthroughthespokenorthewrittenword.Andthefurtherawayyourjobisfrommanualwork,thelargertheorganizationofwhichyouareanemployee,themoreimportantitwillbethatyouknowhowtoconveyyourthoughtsinwritingorspeaking.Intheverylargebusinessorganization,whetheritisthe thelargecorporation,ortheArmy,thisabilitytoexpressoneselfisperhapsthemostimportantofalltheskillsamancanpossess."moreimportant""mostimportant"Ifareaderislost,itisgenerallybecausethewriterhasnotbeencarefulenoughtokeephimonthepath.Thiscarelessnesscantakeanynumberofforms.Perhapsasentenceissoexcessivelyclutteredthatthereader,hackinghiswaythroughtheverbiage,simplydoesn'tknowwhatitmeans.Perhapsasentencehasbeensoshoddilyconstructedthatthereadercouldreaditinanyofseveralways.Perhapsthewriterhasswitchedtenses,orhasswitchedpronounsinmid-sentence,sothereaderlosestrackofwhentheactiontookceorwhoistalking.PerhapssentenceBisnotlogicalsequeltosentenceAthewriter,inwhoseheadtheconnectionisclear,hasnotbotheredtoprovidethemissinglink.Perhapsthewriterhasusedanimportantwordincorrectlybynottakingthetroubletolookitup.Hemaythinkthat"sanguine"and"sanguinary"meanthesamething,butthedifferenceisabloodybigone.Thereadercanonlyinferwhatthewriteristryingtoimply.這一段談的是awriter'scarelessness，先給出一個(gè)generalstatement作為句，然后通過5個(gè)由特殊到一般排列(specific-to-generalIdonotunderstandwhypeopleconfusemySiamesecat,Prissy,withtheoneIhadseveralyearsago,Henry.Thetwocatsareonlyalikeinbreed.Prissy,aquiet,femininefeline,lovesmedearlybutnotpossessively.Shelikestokeepherdistancefrompeople,exertherindependenceandisneversorudeastobeg,lick,orsniffunceremoniously.Herusualpostureissittingupright,eyesclosed,perfectlystill.Prissyisaverypropercat.Henry,ontheotherhand,lovedmedearlybutpossessively.Hewasmyshadowfrommorningtillnight.Heexpectedmetoconstantlyentertainhim.Henrynevercaredwhosawhimdoanything,whetheritwasdecorousornot,andheusuallyoffendedmyfriendsinsomeway.Thecatmadehimselfquitecomfortable,onthetopoftheevision,acrossstranger'sfeetorlaps,inbeds,drawers,sacks,closets,ornooks.Thedifferencebetweenthemisimperceptibletostrangers.行文的邏輯性常常要靠適當(dāng)?shù)霓D(zhuǎn)換詞語及其他來實(shí)現(xiàn)請(qǐng)讀下面這一段文字并找出文中用以承上啟下Walter'sgoalinlifewastoeasuccessfulsurgeon.First,though,hehadtogetthroughhighschool,soheconcentratedallhiseffortsonhisstudies---inparticular,biology,chemistry,andmath.Becauseheworkedconstantlyonthesesubjects,Walterbecameproficientinthem;however,Walterforgotthatheneededtomasterothersubjectsbesidesthosehehadchosen.Asaresult,duringhisjunioryearofhighschool,WalterfailedbothEnglishandLatin.Consequently,hehadtorepeatthesesubjectsandhewasalmostunabletograduateonschedule.Finally,onJune6,Walterachievedthefirststeptowardrealizinghisgoal.本文中起承上啟下的詞語有兩種，一種是轉(zhuǎn)換詞語(transitionalwordsorphrases)的其他連接(linkingdevices)前者依次有：first,though,so,inparticular,and,because,however,besides,asaresult,both…and,consequentlyand,finally.he,he,his,his,he,these,themhethosehishethese,his.本10526個(gè)詞，約占該段總詞匯量的四分之一。由120個(gè)詞也是不無好處的。differentinmanyways.Speechdependsonsounds.Writinguseswrittensymbols.Speechdevelopedabout500000yearsago.Writtenlanguageisarecentdevelopment.Itwasinventedonlyaboutsixthousandyearsago.Speechisusuallyinformal.Thewordchoiceofwritingisoftenrelativelyformal.Pronunciationandaccentoftenlwherethespeakerisfrom.PronunciationandaccentareignoredinwritingAstandarddictionandspellingsystemprevailsinthewrittenlanguageofmostcountriesSpeechreliesongestureloudnessandriseandfallofthevoiceWritinglacksgestureloudnessandtheriseandfallofthevoice.Carefulspeakersandwritersareawareofthedifferences.Speakingandwritingaredifferentinmanyways.Speechdependsonsounds;writing,ontheotherhand,useswrittensymbols.Speechwasdevelopedabout500000yearsago,butwrittenlanguageisarecentdevelopment,inventedonlyaboutsixthousandyearsago.Speechisusuallyinformal,whilethewordchoiceofwriting,bycontrast,isoftenrelativelyformal.Althoughpronunciationandaccentoftenlwherethespeakerisfrom,theyareignoredinwiringbecauseastandarddictionandspellingsystemprevailsinmostcountries.Speechreliesongesture,loudness,andtheriseandfallofthevoice,butwritinglacksthesefeatures.Carefulspeakersandwritersareawareofthedifferences．Inthemovie,RobertRedfordwasaspy.Hegoestohisofficewherehefoundeverybodydead.Otherspieswantedtokillhim,sohetakesrefugewithJulieChristie.Atherhouse,hehadwaitedfortheheattodiedown,buttheycomeafterhimanyway.Everybodylooksforsatisfactioninhislife.Theywanttobehappy.Butifheseeksonlypleasureintheshortrun,the willsoonrunoutofpleasureandlifewillcatchuptohim.Theyneedtopursuethedeeperpleasureofsatisfactioninworkandinrelationships.Nowmorethanever,parentsneedtobeintouchwiththeirchildren'sactivitiesbecausemodernlifehasthetendencytocausecleavagesinthefamily.Youneedtoarrangefamilylikeitsothatfamilymemberswilldothingstogetherandknowoneanother.Youneedtogiveupisolatedpleasuresofyourownandrealizethatparentshaveasetofobligationstosponsortogethernessandthereforesponsorknowledge.1、句必須是可辯論的，不能是說事實(shí)，而是說觀點(diǎn)ThemeStatement全文的2、句的位置最好在第一段的最后一句12、句＋支撐句3、句不能定得太寬，也不能才窄原因大概是1吧，說不完或者沒有支持的句是不能接受的12、不要引入任何新的。第二、詞匯量太小，且對(duì)已學(xué)詞匯不清Someoneconsiderthatfreshwaterwillnottouchit'send.(961月，2分)2）Oneman'slifelackofmoneyhewillimpossibletoliveon.（951月，5分）3）Asisknowthattherearemuchfakecommoditiesintoday'ssociety.(9712月，6分5、6"Manisiron,andfoodissteel.",＂Womenarehalfsidesky.＂。此外，語言錯(cuò)誤的普遍性和嚴(yán)重性十分驚人，比如，主謂不一致，名詞單復(fù)數(shù)不分，動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)語態(tài)，常用詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤比比皆是。這些嚴(yán)重地和清楚，將直接影響整篇文章的寫作質(zhì)量。大四、六級(jí)考試和入考試的實(shí)踐都表明，，為改變這種狀況從剖析考生作文中的典型病句入手，對(duì)寫作測(cè)試中的基本句子結(jié)構(gòu)和寫法進(jìn)行評(píng)，否定結(jié)構(gòu)除了在助動(dòng)詞、情態(tài)動(dòng)詞，behave后面加notnot介詞against,beyond,but,except,without,...形容詞和動(dòng)詞absent,deny,differ,different,fail, ,ignore,miss,refuse,thelast,usedto,reluctant,lack,want,...短語keep...from,protect...from,prevent...fromletalone,atalossinvain,insteadofoutofthequestion,ratherthan,too...to,bynomeans,anythingbut,...Womenfailtogettheequalrightsinsome在一些國家里婦女沒有得到的權(quán)利Thisisbynomeansthebestwaytosolvetheproblemofenergy這不是解決能源的最好的辦法WeshouldprotecttreesfrombeingIn wecouldnotmakeanail,letalone(make)barelyhardlyfewlittlerarelyscarcelyseldom,notall,noteveryone,noteverything,...具WecouldhardlyseeanyfreshvegetablesinwinteronmarketseveralyearsTheseyoungpeopleknowlittleabouthowtochoosegoodbooksto有些詞和詞組形式上是否定結(jié)構(gòu)，但其含義是肯定的，比如：cannotbut,can'thelp,nosooner...than,not...until,innotime,noneotherthannothingbut,等等。例句：1）Wecan'tbutfacethereality.2）TheseoldbuildingswillberecedbymodernapartmentbuildingsinnoOnnoaccountshouldwefollowblindly.Nowherehastheworldeverseensuchgreatenthusiasmforlearningasinour五、含有it的結(jié)構(gòu)Asisknowntoallofusthatscienceandtechnologyyanimportantroleinthedevelopmentofsociety.Itisknowntous,practicemakesItisknowntoallofusthatscienceandtechnologyyanimportantroleinthedevelopmentofsociety.(或:Asisknowntoallofus,science...)Itisknowntousthatpracticemakesperfect或:Asisknowntous,兩個(gè)考生了it和as的用法。如果用it作形式主語，后面的主語從句必須由that引起；如果用as，則thataspracticemakesperfect。ItItisnecessaryforustomasteraforeignlanguageskillfully.Itmakesdifferencewhetherwecouldpurifytheairornot.Wefinditratherdifficulttopreventpeoplefrom ngthat.Modernsciencehasmadeitpossibleforbabiestogrowhealthilyandforpeopletolivelonger.Itisonlybythiswaythatwecanachievesuccess.Itwasthenthatpeoplebegantorealizetheimportanceofcontrollingpopulation.Agreement:Ambiguity:盡量不去使用可能引起歧義的詞語或句子。Brief:文章"簡為貴"，要抓住要點(diǎn)，簡明扼要。Coherence:文理通順，前后連貫。Development:的發(fā)揮應(yīng)當(dāng)充分、合理、正確Division:詞匯、句子、段落要分配使用得當(dāng)，劃分要清楚，避免使用重復(fù)字句和片段Figures:Inflateddiction:Key:用適當(dāng)?shù)耐怀?，每段都?yīng)有句Logical:Message:Omit:Proposition:Punctuation:Relevant:Sentencepattern:Strait:Style:Tense:Theme:選題得當(dāng)，突出?！け韺舆M(jìn)·表舉例·表解釋·表總結(jié)·表強(qiáng)調(diào)·表讓步·表比較·表轉(zhuǎn)折·first,firstlytobeginwithsecond,secondlytostartwiththird,thirdlywhat'smorealsoandandequallyimportantbesidesinadditionfurtherinthefirstcestillfurthermorelastlastbutnottheleastnextbesidestoomoreoverforexamplefortoillustrateasanillustrationafterallasamatteroffactfranklyspeakinginthiscasenamelyinotherinsummaryinawordinbriefinconclusiontoconcludeinfactindeedinshortinotherwordsofcourseitistruespeciallynamelyinallthatistosummarizethusashasbeensaidaltogetherinotherwordsfinallyinsimplertermsinparticularthatonthewholetoputitdifferentlyofcourseaboveallmostimportantemphasiscertainlyinstillinspiteofallthesameevensoafterallconcessiongrantednaturallyofcourseincomparisonlikewisesimilarlyequallyhoweverlikewiseinthesamebycontrastalthoughatthesametimeincontrastneverthelessnotwithstandingonthecontraryontheotherhandotherwiseregardlessstillthoughdespitethefactthatevensoeventhoughforallthathoweverinspiteofafterawhileagainandthenaslongasatlastatlengthatthattimebeforebesidesearliereventuallyfinallyformerlyfurtherfurthermoreinadditioninthefirstceinthepastlastlaymeanwhilemoreovernextnowpresentlysecondshortlysimultaneouslysincesofarsoonstillsubsequentlythenthereaftertoountiluntilnow段首句（一）ManypeopledonotdoubtthatAissuperiortoB,whileothersthinkquitedifferentlyontheissue ally,IstandonthesideofASomepeoplesayA,otherpeopleargueB.Inaword, .ButIcannotagreethispointofviewformanyreasons.Therearedifferentviewsconcerningthistopic.SomepeopleliketoCHOOSEA,someprefertoCHOOSEB. ally,IpreferB.IthinkBhasmoreadvantages.Frommypointofview,itismoreadvisabletoCHOOSEAthantoCHOOSEB.5.DespitethefactthatmostpeoplepreferA,IwouldliketochooseBbecausethefollowingreasons.Ingeneral,Ipreferto AsfarasIamconcerned,Iwouldliketoprefer Whenitcomesto ,mostpeopletendtobelieveA.ButothersconsiderBas Whenaskedabout ,thevastmajorityofpeoplewouldsupportthatA.ButothersregardB Attheriskofaddresstheissuetoodirect,IpreferAbecauseIthinkthat Whenaskedabout ,manypeoplegivetheiropinionsthat ,butotherpeoplemay differentlyWhenfacedwith ,quiteafewwouldclaimthat ,butothers,incontrast,deem Wheninquiredabout ,thevastmajorityofpeoplewouldliketo ,butotherpeople,whoholdanoppositeview,consider as When ismentioned ,mostpeoplebelievethat ,butotherpeoplewouldratherthink as Whilemanypeoplemaysticktomeideathat ,Iwouldliketoprefer （二）A.Oneofthegreatestwritersoncesaidthat .Now,itstillhasitssignificantrealisticvalueIwouldfollowthereasoningthat Manypeopleadvocatethat .Theyclaimthat .Myopinionisthesameastheirsinthefollowingreasons.Itotallyagreewiththestatementthat .ThereasonsarepresentedbelowAfterponderingthisquestiononmanyoccasions,Ifinallyreachedtheconclusionthat somethingworthytodoandIcannotskipit.myargumentsforpointarelistedasIagreewiththeabovestatementbecause Nowhereintheworldhastheissueof beensomuchdebatedlikeinoursocietyIagreewiththestatementthat withoutreservationbecause .10.Thinkinglogically,Icanonlysaythatthetitlestatementisvalidbecause IfullysupportthestatementabovebecauseIamverysurethat SomemayholdtheopinionthatAAA.Butothershaveanegativeattitude.AsfarasIamconcerned,Iagreethat ManyonehavetheideathatAAA.However,manyothersdisagreewiththisargument.Butbothsideoftheproblemwhether aresupportedbygoodreasons.Recently,ithasbeenmuchdebatedovertheproblemofAAA.ThosewhoobjecttoAAAannouncethat .ButthosewhofavorAAAutterasonorousvoicethat Recently,thereisvehementdiscussionontheissueof .Thosewhocriticize argue .Theyclaimthat .Butpeoplewhofirmlyadvocate ,ontheotherhand,argue Thereisamuch-debatedproblemtodayabout .Thosewhoobjectto arguethat Theyareverysureabout .Butpeoplewhoprefer ,ontheotherhand,claimthat B.Untilrecently, wasviewedas .ButpeoplearetakingafreshlookatitRecently,weoftenhearabout .ButisitThesedays,itisoftenheardabout .ButisthisreallythetruthIfeelsuchanattitudeisnegative,andthatitcanbring Somepeopleargueasifitisageneraltruththat .Buttobefrank,Icannotagreewiththemfortheflowingreasons.Despitethefactthatmanypeoplebelievethat ,Idoubtwhethertheargumentcanbearmuchysis.Althoughsomepeopleholdtheopinionthat ,Iwonderwhethertheargumentcouldbearcloseexamination.Inthenationwide,discussion,manypeoplearguethat .ButIcansaynothingbut AdvocatesofAAAproclaimthat ,butI Untilrecently, wasregardedas .But Somepeoplethinkthat ,butIdisagreewiththisopinionfornumerousreasons,asbelowNow,itisincreasinglymentionedthat .Suchpeoplethink .ButIcanonlycastdoubtonwhether Now,itiswidelybelievedthat .Thesepeoplethink .ButIwonderif Icannottotallytheideathat .Because,inmypointofview,Ibelieve Asamatteroffact,Isupportthat ,butIcannotagreewiththetitlestatementNowadays,itiswidelyheldthat .Peopleofthiskindthink .ButIdoubtwhether 結(jié)尾句Takingintoaccountofallthesefactors,wemayreachtheconclusionthat Allreliableevidencespointtoonesaying,thatis Forthereasonspresentedabove,Istronglycommittothenotionthat Whileitistruethat ,Ithinkthat GiventhefactorsIhavejustoutlined,Icanonlysaythat Thisisnottosaythat .Butintermsof ,itis Therefore,itiseasytodrawtheconclusionthat Recognizingthefactthat shoulddriveustoconcludethat Toputallintoa ,I Inaword,Isupportthestatementthatitisbetterto （一）Itisgenerallybelievedthat..isahottopicwhichiswidelytalkedaboutbothathomeandabroad.Nowourernmentattachesgreatimportancetosolvingthis tistsinthisfieldhaveputforwardanumberofsuggestionstendingtorelieveit.Tobeginwith,weshould..Furthermore,..Itisclearthat..People,however,differintheiropinionsonthismatter.Somepeoplethinkthat..Accordingtothem,allofusshould..Othersarguethat..Intheiropinion,nobodycan..without..Thereisnodoubtthat..Asaconsequence..Inshort,Ifirmlysupporttheviewthat..Itisbecause..Somyconclusionisthat..(107Thereisnodenyingthefactthat…ispopulartopicwhichismuchtalkedaboutnotonlyby…,butalsoby…Itisgenerallythoughtthat…Thereasonsfor…areasfollows.Tobeginwith,…Secondly,…Therefore,weshouldattachgreatsignificancetosolvingtheproblem.Thereare,Ithink,atleasttwopossiblewaystocopewithit.Thefirstwaytotackleitistoappealtothetotakedrasticmeasuresto(do)…Theotherthatisworthadoptingistoworkoutnewregulationsto(do)…OnlyinthiswaycanwesucceedindealingwiththeprobleminthenearToconclude,itseemsobvious…Sotheprospectwearelookingforwardtowillbebothbrightencouraging.(127（二）Asisshowninthetable(orinthepicutre),…droppedfrom…in1996.Accordingtothefiguresgiveninthetable,…h(huán)asgreatlyincreased(ordecreased)inthepast…years(ordecades),reaching…in1996.Fromthetablewecanalsoseethattherehasbeenasharpdecline(orrise)in…Itisclearthat…Thereareatleasttwogoodreasonsfor…Ontheonehand,…Let’shaveanexampletoillustratethegreatincreasein…Ontheotherhand,…isduetothefactthat…Inaddition,…isresponsiblefor…Maybetherearesomeotherreasonstoshow…Butitisgenerallybelievedthattheabovementionedreasonsarecommonlyacceptable.AsfarasIamconcerned,Ibelievethat……Iamsuremyopinionisbothsoundwell-grounded.(126 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