2023學(xué)年完整公開課版懲罰孩子

1.Read2.supportingideasFindoutthetopicsentencesofeachparagraphPunishingchildrenisacontroversialtopic1.topic/mainidea:

Para2:Theword

“punish”

meansdifferentthingstodifferentpeople.Punishmentcanbephysicaloremotional.Physicalpunishmentiswhentheparenthits,slapsorspanksthechild.Para3：Ontheotherhand,emotionalpunishmentiswhentheparent,inordertoeducatethechild,doesn’tlethimwatchTV,gotoplaywithhisfriends,ordothingslikethat.Theparentsdoesn’tteachhim,butstillhepunishesthechild.PunishmentcanbephysicaloremotionalKeypoint1:Para4Althoughmanysurveysandstudieshavebeenmadeaboutwhatthecorrectwayistoraiseachild,nobodyhastheanswerorthetruth.Ithinkitwillbeverydifficulttofindtheanswerorgetpeopletoagree.Para5Ithinkparentsshouldlovetheirchildandgivehimthebesteducation,butatthesametime,theyshouldpunishthechildifhedeservesit.Ithinkifyouloveyourchild,youshouldberationalwhenyouapplythepunishment.Itshouldbereasonablebutstrict.Para6Theparent’sgoalistohaveinthefutureagoodmanorwomaninsociety,sosometimesyoushoulddowhatisnecessarytogetyourchildtobehavewell.difficulttofindtheanswerItshouldbereasonablebutshoulddowhatisnecessarystrictKeypoint2:Keypoint3:Keypoint4:

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different,mixed,variousopinions,views,ideas▲Attitudestopunishingchildrenvaryasfordifferentpeople.▲Peoplehavemixedopinionsonpunishingchildren（1）Punishingchildrenisacontroversialtopic（2）Punishmentcanbephysicaloremotional.Kidscangetpunishedphysicallyoremotionally,butthekeyproblemisthewaytheyarepunished.Itisdifficulttofindthecorrectwaytoraiseachild.（3）itwillbeverydifficulttofindtheanswerorgetpeopletoagree（4）ItshouldbereasonablebutstrictProperpunishmentcanbeinstructiveandnecessarytochildrenifitisreasonableandstrict.（5）sosometimesyoushoulddowhatisnecessarytogetyourchildtobehavewellloveandeducationarethemostimportantforustomakeourkidsbehavewellPeoplehavemixedopinionsonpunishingchildren.Kidscangetpunishedphysicallyoremotionally,butthekeyproblemisthewaytheyarepunished.Althoughitisdifficulttofindthecorrectwaytoraiseachild,properpunishmentcanbeinstructiveandnecessarytochildrenifitisreasonableandstrict.Still,loveandeducationarethemostimportantforustomakeourkidsbehavewell.本次作文優(yōu)秀者名單：李艷（21）；鄔佳慧、馬世杰（20）；黃焱淋（19）；蔣波、錢子逸（18）；唐杰（17）本次作文優(yōu)秀者名單：李超（21）；金立洋、胡偉芳（20）；曹佳瑩、陳思怡、俞晨（19）；李寒怡（18）；鐘亞男、高潔琪（17）；趙佳鑫（16）Factors總分為25分；一個(gè)星星代表1分，5星-好4星-較好3星-一般2星-較差1星-差理解準(zhǔn)確，涵蓋全部要點(diǎn)