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youngchildrencannot Theiradultworldwillbeconstantlychanging TheInternetisthekey alltheknowledgeandinformationavailable theworldtoday.Childrenshouldlearn anearlyage usetheequipmententhusiasticallyand They needtheseskills theirstudiesandworkinglives.Childrenarenotsupposed overuseTheyneed learn enjoyotherkindsofactivity, sittingathomealldayandlivinginavirtualworld.句子結(jié)正常結(jié)構(gòu) (adj.)who(, howwhereWhodoWhodowhatWho+be+Whodowhat(人+物）Whodowhat(n.n./adj./adv.) who,when,do howwhere whodo wherewhat howwhenTherebe+n.(+which/who…)Adj./adv.+be/vi.+n.Part并且，大部分不可能永居。Whodowhat;who+be+adj.Whodowhat(n.adj./adv./n.)whodowhat+物---theireffortscannotprovetheir ese.g.WeallcallhimLW.Theteacheraskedmetohisofficeafterclass.Shegavemeapresent.Whodowhere---moststarscannotalwaysstayontheWhodoWhodowhatwho+be+whodowhat人+物Whodowhat(n.+adj./adv./n.Starsintheentertainmentbusinessareoftenover-paid.Theirhugesalariescannotbejustifiedbytheirwork.Theyare,ineffect,raretalents.Furthermore,themajorityofstarsdonotholdtheirtoppositionsWhodowhathowwherewhen---Who,when,dowhathowe.g.theoldladyhad,inheryouth,poisonedeveryoneofherfiveWeoftenreadinnovelsthataseemingly alwayshassometerribleSportsstarsandpopstars,forexample,aresoonrecedbythenextyounger,moreenergetic,ThegoodlooksofmostfilmstarsquicklySothisrelativelyshortworkinglifemaybesomejustificationfortheirveryhighpay.Itishardtodisagreewiththisstatement.這些專業(yè)應(yīng)當(dāng)?shù)玫礁叩闹匾?。Teachers,nursesandscientistsareneverlistedamongthebest-paidTheyare,however,moreimportanttoourwell-beingandourThehugegapsbetweentheearningsofstarsandthoseofthemarenotjustifiable/cannotbejustified.Suchprofessionalsshouldbemuchbetterappreciated.Part在屏幕前坐的時間太長，會兒童的眼睛和身體Toomuchtimespentonacomputerwillexertanegativeeffectonyoungchildren.youngchildrencanbenegativelyaffectedbytoomuchspentonacomputer.（Sittinginfrontofascreenfortoolongcanbedamagingtoboththeeyesandphysicalpostureofayoungchild.Toomuchexposuretointenseandratherviolentgamescanencouragechildrentobeself-centeredandinsensitivetoothers.Communicationsoncomputerscannotsubstituteforhuman 互聯(lián)網(wǎng)是獲取世界所有知識和信息的關(guān)鍵。Spendingtimewithotherchildrenandsharingnon-virtualexperiencesisanintegral/importantpartofachild’sdevelopment.Inspiteofthis,theobviousbenefitsofcomputerskillsforyoungchildrencannotbedenied.Theiradultworldwillbeconstantlychangingintermsoftechnology.TheInternetisthekeytoalltheknowledgeandinformationavailableintheworldChildrenshouldlearnfromanearlyagetousetheequipmententhusiasticallyandwithconfidence.Theywillneedtheseskillsthroughouttheirstudiesandworkinglives.ChildrenarenotsupposedtooveruseTheyneedtolearntoenjoyotherkindsofactivity,insteadofsittingathomealldayandlivinginvirtual2.3句的使Childrencanbenegativelyaffectedbytoomuchtimespentonthecomputereveryday.“孩子受Someprofessions,suchassportsartorscienceshouldbepaidbetter.（明顯沒有明確主語，所以用）Educatingchildreniswidelyconsideredtobetheresponsibilityofparents.“教育孩子”是句子Anychildcanbetaughtparticularskills.（表達(dá)更加客觀Buttobereallygoodinareassuchasmusicartorsportsomenaturaltalentisrequired.（naturaltalent是主要信息，需強(qiáng)調(diào)）Jobsatisfaction,averyimportantpartofanemployee’ssenseofwellbeing,canbepromotedinanumberofways.n1ben2be，使兩個名詞(n1n2)形成同Jobsatisfactionisaveryimportantpartofanemployee’ssenseofwellbeing（員工感的重要部分）andcanbepromotedinanumberofways.（比較口語化）Jobsatisfaction,averyimportantpartofanemployee’ssenseofwellbeing,canbepromotedinanumberofways.（經(jīng)典語）Allofus,atsomepointsofourlives,havedreamedaboutmakingitbig,butfewofushavemanagedtomakeourdreamscometrueThemelodyofthesongisreallysoothing,andthelyricsaretotallyNikeSneakers,myfavoriteTVcommercial,about,is,starredbyKobeFeature(v.),thecommercial,Kobehimself,lifestories,hisfrustrationsandfailures,howhemadehiswayfromfailuretosuccessTheway,whatimpressedmemost,was,howNikehascombinedarolemodelwithitsproductsBespecialtome,Ithink,intwodifferentways,theadvertisementAgoodopportunity,itgivesme,toseeKobehimself,toreallyunderstand,whoheisasaAtoughspirit,rightbeneathallthecriticisms,Isee,onethatnevergivesupAworldfamoussportswearbrand,hadachance,I,also,atthesametime,togetfamiliarwithMyfavoriteTVcommercialisaboutNikeSneakers,starredbyKobeBryant.ThecommercialfeaturesthelifestoriesofKobehimselfhisfrustrationsandfailuresandhowhemadehiswayfromfailuretosuccessTheresoundingnarrationisYOUCANDOANYTHINGYOUWANTIFYOUREALLYWANTIT.（物品描述，大致特征即可）WhatimpressedmemostwasthewayhowNikehascombinedarolemodelwithitsIthinkthisadvertisementisveryspecialtomeintwodifferentways.FirstofallitgivesmeagoodopportunitytoseeKobehimself,toreallyunderstandwhoheisasa 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thisevidencecannotreflectpeopleliveinEastMeriaconsumeaamountofBesides,theauthorhasnoevidencethattheactualnumberofpeopleinEastMeriahaveacoldisextremelyfew.Third,theauthor mendpeopleliveinWestMeriatakeanutritionalsupplementfromfishoiltopreventcolds.Tojustifythisconclusion,theauthorcitesasurveyindicatedthatover80percentoftherespondentsdesiretoreducetheirintakeoffoodscontainingfatsandcholesterol.Sincethefoodscontainingfatsandcholesterolaremuchmoretasty,theymightbeinhighdemandratherthanthelow-fatfoodsare.Ontheonehand,….Ontheotherhand,句子連貫與段落銜接（參考“敘事常用 1Starsintheentertainmentbusinessareoftenover-paid.Iagreewiththeview.Theirhugesalariescannotbejustifiedbytheirwork.Itoftenseems.Theyareover-paid.Overall,IThesizeofsalaryiscloselylinkedtothecompetitiontheyhave 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Heislookingforsomeonenotonlywhocouldarrangemusicforhisband(樂隊(duì)butmirroring(反映出)hisspecialwritingstyle.Earthhasacrust(殼)thatisnotseamless(無縫的)orstationary(靜止的),ratheritisfragmented Mosteffortstocombat(解決)mosquito-bornediseases(蚊子的疾病)havefocusedeitheronthevaccination(免疫)ofhumansoronexterminating(消滅)mosquitoeswithpesticides(殺蟲劑).答案：平行結(jié)構(gòu)必須并列相同詞性（exterminatingvaccination雖然都名Heislookingforsomeonewhocouldnotonlyarrangemusicforhisband,butmirrorhisspecialwritingstyle.Earthhasacrustthatisnotseamlessorstationarybutfragmented tes.‘rathertherefore/thus/consequently/asaresultMosteffortstocombatmosquito-bornediseaseshavefocusedeitheronvaccinatinghumansoronexterminatingmosquitoeswithpesticides.或者：Mosteffortstocombatmosquito-bornediseaseshavefocusedeitheronthevaccinationofhumansorontheexterminatio