讀后續(xù)寫個(gè)人成長(zhǎng)類-一節(jié)折紙課 講義 高考英語(yǔ)專題復(fù)習(xí)

答案第=page11頁(yè)，共=sectionpages22頁(yè)答案第=page11頁(yè)，共=sectionpages22頁(yè)1．閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。AcoupleofmonthsbeforeIstartedhighschool,myparentsgavemethegreatestgiftanyteenageboycouldaskfor:acellphone.Ilivedonthatphoneallsummerwithmyfaceburiedinitsscreen.Iignoredmyfamilyandmysurroundings(周圍事物).Beingconnectedwasmoreimportantthanbeingpresent.So,youcanimaginemydispleasurewhenIlearnedwhatmydadhadplannedforourfamilyvacationthatyear.“Thisyear,”mydadsaid,“we’llbedoingsomethingspecial.We’regoingcamping!”Hisexcitementwasmetwithadisappointedsigh(嘆氣).Itwasn’tmydreamvacationbecausemindwasonmyphone.Iwassoburiedinthescreen,infact,thatthefirsttimeIcanremembertrulylookingupwaswhenwedroveacrossabridgeonthewaytoourcampsite.Istaredoutthewindowandsawredwoodstoweringaboveus,theirbranchesthreateningtopierce(刺破)thebluesky.Isawaroaringriver,withsliversofsilkyblackwaterappearingbetweencrashingwhiterapids.Theairblowingintothecarfromtheopenwindowswashot.Butnoneofthatmatteredtome.ThereasonIhadlookedupwasforsomethingfarmoreserious:myphonenolongerhadservice.Thelasthourofthedrivewasincreasinglytense.Mydadannouncedthathehadchosenacampsitethathadnocellservice,andthatmyphonewouldbeuselessuntilwereturnedhome.Iwouldbetrappedintheforestforfourdayswithnowaytocontacttheoutsideworld!Iwentthroughthefullcycleofteenageemotionsduringthefirstdayofthetrip.Iraged(發(fā)怒).Ibargained.Ibegged.Iflip-flopped(轉(zhuǎn)變)fromadepressivestatetoangerandback.Iwenttobedangrilythatnight.ButwhenIawokeinthemorning,somethinghadchanged.注意：1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫好。Paragraph1:Insteadofburyingmyselfinmyphone,Ifocusedonsomethingelse:mysurroundings.___________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Thenextfourdayspassedinaflashwithmanyfunactivities._______________________________________________________________________【分析】本文以人物為線索展開(kāi)，講述了作者在上高中前的幾個(gè)月，作者的父母給了作者一個(gè)所有青少年都能想得到的最好的禮物:一部手機(jī)，于是作者沉溺于手機(jī)，忽略了家人和周圍的環(huán)境。作者的父親計(jì)劃了一次家庭旅行計(jì)，作者很是不高興。父親選擇了一個(gè)沒(méi)有手機(jī)信號(hào)的營(yíng)地，作者經(jīng)歷了整個(gè)青少年時(shí)期的最壞情緒循環(huán)，那天晚上作者生氣地上床睡覺(jué)。但當(dāng)作者早上醒來(lái)時(shí)，有些事情發(fā)生了變化。5W1HWho:

myson,mywife,I,someunder-5kidsWhen:

TodayWhere:

atmyson’sschoolwheremywifeworkedWhy:

mywifeinvitedmetotheschoolWhat:

Iwenttoteachthekidsfoldingpaper.How:續(xù)寫Para.1:

Amidstalltheseact,hisclassmatescouldn’thelpstaringwithenvyandadmiration.Para.2:

Ileftthatschoolwithmyheadheldhighandfeelingfulfilled.場(chǎng)景一：介紹自己并說(shuō)明來(lái)意。場(chǎng)景二：學(xué)生們非常激動(dòng)并積極地配合我的教學(xué)。跟著我一步一步地完成作品。場(chǎng)景三：學(xué)生對(duì)自己完成的作品很滿意，并感謝我，有多學(xué)生還大聲邀請(qǐng)我下次再來(lái)?？梢钥闯鰞鹤臃浅５匾晕覟楹?。Amidstalltheseact,hisclassmatescouldn’thelpstaringwithenvyandadmiration.

“Hello,I’mgladtobeinvitedtoteachyouhowtomakeanimalsoutofpaper.”

saidIwithagentlevoice.HearingwhatIsaid,thekidsclappedtheirlittlehandswithexcitement,curiouslooksshowingtheirpleasantwillingness.Withapieceofcoloredpaperinmyhand,Iaskedthekidstotakeouttheirstofoldafterme.Thrilledanddelighted,they,absorbedinfoldingpaper,followedmestepbystep.Imaginetheirhappinessandfulfillmentwhentheyfinishedtheirworks,andfoundit’sadog.Afterappreciatingtheirworksforseveralminutes,IsaidallofthemweredoinggreatbutIhadtoleave.WhattouchedmewasthatIheard

“Docomeagain,please”

fromthekids.場(chǎng)景一：想到之前老婆的邀請(qǐng)，突然意識(shí)到老婆的用意，增加我的自信和成就感。場(chǎng)景二：兒子的不嫌棄和同學(xué)們的喜歡，讓我覺(jué)得的身體上問(wèn)題并不是問(wèn)題。場(chǎng)景三：我決定要經(jīng)常來(lái)這教孩子們折紙，讓他們感受折紙的藝術(shù)，同時(shí)我讓我感受教學(xué)的快樂(lè)。Ileftthatschoolwithmyheadheldhighandfeelingfulfilled.

Atthoughtoftheinvitationfrommywife,Isuddenlycametoarealizationthatsheaimedtomakethebestoftheactivitytohelp

me

boostmyconfidenceandgainasenseofachievement.Itwasmyson’senthusiasmandthekids’

passionforfoldingpaperthatmademefeelthatmyphysicaldisabilitywasnotthatbigadeal.WhatreallymatteredwasthatIwasinagreatpositiontobringcontentmentandgoodlife-longmemorytoothers.ThereforeIwasdeterminedtogotothatschoolfrequentlyandinstructkidstomakeallkindsofthingstheylikewithcoloredpaper.Meetingagainwithmywifeandmysonlaterathome,Iexpressedmygratitudeforwhattheygavetoaddanewdimensiontomylife.參考答案：1．Para1:Insteadofburyingmyselfinmyphone,Ifocusedonsomethingelse:mysurroundings.Iletthenoiseofthewildernesswashoverme,animalsandbugscreatingaruckusthatwasbothloudandsereneatthesametime.Myangerturnedtopeace,thenlittleinterestand,finally,excitement.Standingonthehighcampsite,IfelttheweightofstressmeltfrommyshouldersasIviewedthevastexpansethatunfoldedbelowme.Thesightthatmetmystartledeyesnearlytookmybreathaway.Forthefirsttime,Ithoughtcampinginaplacethathadnocellservicemightnotbesobad.Para2:Thenextfourdayspassedinaflashwithmanyfunactivities.Ihiked.Iswam.Ifished.MydadandIlearnedhowtostartafiretogetherafterseveralfalsestarts.WecookedtogetherandIatethesweetestmarshmallowsIhadevertasted.Dadtoldmestoriesofhislife,storiesIhadneve