2023年江西省九江市大學(xué)英語(yǔ)6級(jí)大學(xué)英語(yǔ)六級(jí)模擬考試(含答案)

2023年江西省九江市大學(xué)英語(yǔ)6級(jí)大學(xué)英語(yǔ)六級(jí)模擬考試(含答案)學(xué)校:________班級(jí):________姓名:________考號(hào):________

一、1.Writing(10題)1.1.目前社會(huì)上存在著迷信文憑的現(xiàn)象

2.造成這一現(xiàn)象的原因

3.我對(duì)此的觀點(diǎn)

IsaDiplomaEverything?

2.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledThePopularityofWesternHolidays.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:

1.一些“洋”節(jié)日在中國(guó)越來越流行。

2．一些中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日反倒無人問津。

3．你如何看待這種現(xiàn)象。

ThePopularityofWesternHolidays

3.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopic:Travel-mateWanted.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:

假設(shè)你是李明，假期即將到來，你打算做一次為期三周的旅行，希望找個(gè)外國(guó)朋友作為游伴(Travel-mate)，擬—個(gè)尋游伴的啟事，交代清楚日程安排、費(fèi)用分擔(dān)情況、對(duì)對(duì)方的要求等，并說明對(duì)方和你一起出游的好處。

Travel-mateWanted

4.Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopic"AFewRemarksonCompetition".Yourcompositionshouldbenolessthan150wordsandbaseonetheoutlinegiveninChinesebelow.

1．競(jìng)爭(zhēng)是存在于當(dāng)今社會(huì)的普遍現(xiàn)象；

2．競(jìng)爭(zhēng)的好處；

3．競(jìng)爭(zhēng)的同時(shí)不要忘記合作。

5.1.在校大學(xué)生炒股的現(xiàn)象在一些地主很普遍

2.有人認(rèn)為這種行為不利于學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)也有人認(rèn)為這種行為也能讓學(xué)生有所收獲

3.你的觀點(diǎn)

BuyingandSellingStocksasaStudent

6.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteashortessayentitledEnergyCrisis.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinEnglish:

1.Energycrisisisoneofthemainproblemsfacingtheworldtoday.

2.Importanceofenergy.

3.Conservingenergy.

7.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledTheImportanceofCreatingaHealthyInternet.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.

1.隨著社會(huì)和經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展．網(wǎng)絡(luò)成為了每個(gè)人必不可少的獲取信息的工具

2．但是，在網(wǎng)絡(luò)上也出現(xiàn)了一些不健康的因素，如垃圾信息、黃色網(wǎng)站、虛假新聞、網(wǎng)絡(luò)炒作等

3．我們應(yīng)采取措施制止這些，并建立—個(gè)健康的網(wǎng)絡(luò)環(huán)境

TheImportanceofCreatingaHealthyInternet

8.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetitle:IsLongHolidayNecessary?Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese.

1.對(duì)于長(zhǎng)假是否必要，不同的人有不同的看法。

2.我認(rèn)為長(zhǎng)假是必要的，因?yàn)?.....

3.如何度長(zhǎng)假。

IsLongHolidayNecessary

9.Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledCreditCardsinCollegeCampus.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsbasedonthechartandoutlinegivenbelow:

1.根據(jù)圖片描述某高校擁有信用卡的學(xué)生所占比例的變化

2.分析產(chǎn)生這些變化的原因

3.分如何看待信用卡令后在學(xué)生中的使用情況

CreditCardsinCollegeCampus

10.Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayonthetopicofShouldEnterprisesHoldanAnnualMeeting?.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelow.

現(xiàn)在有不少單位熱衷于組織年會(huì)

1．對(duì)這種做法有人表示支持

2．有人并不贊成

3.我認(rèn)為……

ShouldEnterprisesHoldanAnnualMeeting?

二、2.ReadingComprehension(SkimmingandScanning)(10題)11.

Flyingbridgemeansagoodcommunicationstyle.thatmadethescientificarticleseasytoberead.

A.YB.NC.NG

12.

MalcolmByrd'swifesaidthat______maybringherhusbandsafetyfornow.

13.

Whatisnotsaidtobeawayofcleaningupafterourselves?

A.Throwlessaway.

B.Don'tuseitagain.

C.Designrecycledproducts,

D.Lastlonger.

14.

Tayloris______,sawanotherandshothim,too.

15.

ThegoaloftheHumanGenomeProjectisto______.

16.

AccordingtoPatriciaMorgantheincreasingnumberofwomenwhohavechildrenlateordon'twanttogivebirthtochildrenarethosewhoare______.

17.

Sincerainforestbacteriaandtreesdependoncactiotherforlife,therelationshiptheyform.istermed______.

18.

Whatwasthe19thtopicrelatedwithontheministerialmeetingofWTO?

A.Cottonimportationandexportation.

B.Protectingfarmersindevelopingcountries.

C.Theeliminationoftradeprotection.

D.Foodsafetyandtheenvironment.

19.

______arekeyindicatorsoftheperformanceofWHO.

20.

Inanother25yearspeoplewillhavetokeepworkingasfull-timeemployeesuntiltheirmid-70sifhealthpermits.

A.YB.NC.NG

三、3.ListeningComprehension(10題)21.(35)

A.Warsornaturaldisastersmakethemlosetheirfamilies.

B.Theywanttohelptheirfamiliesearnenoughmoneytosurvive.

C.Theyarepoor.

D.Alltheabove.

22.(17)

A.HedoesnotknowwhoAliceis.

B.Hehasfoundajobasamessenger.

C.Hedoesnotwanttodeliverthenote.

D.HedoesnotknowwhoAliceis.

23.

【B7】

24.(45)

25.聽力原文：It'sgenerallyagreedthatserious,violentcrimehasreachedalarmingproportionsintheUnitedStates.AsurveybytheLawEnforcementAssistanceAdministrationfoundthat61%ofallwomenfeelunsafeintheirownneighborhoodsatnight;that45%ofthepopulationisafraidtowalkaloneatnightneartheirownhomes;andthat47%ownguns,largeforself-protection.

Thosearrestedforcrimesanddisproportionatelylikelytobemale,young,amemberofaracialminority,andacityresident.Malesarearrestedaboutfourtimesasoftenasfemales.Onlyinjuvenilerunawaycasesandprostitutionarefemalesmoreoftenarrested.Oneisthesexrolestereotypingwhichencouragesmalestobemoreaggressiveanddaring,whilefemalesareencouragedtobemorepassiveandconformingtotherulesandnorms.Thesecondreasonisthetendencyofpoliceofficersandthecourtstodealmorekindlywithfemaleoffenders.However,itshouldbenoted,inthepastdecade,crimeamongfemaleshasbeenincreasingatmuchfasterratethanamongmales,anegativesideeffectwhichhasbeenattributedtowomenchallengingthetraditionalsexroleofpassivityandconformity.

Youngpeopleappeartocommitfarmorethantheirshareofcrime,includingthecrimesthatareclassifiedbytheFBIasmostserious--rape,murder,robbery,arson,burglary,aggravatedassault,autotheft.In1985,31%ofallarrestswereofpersonundertileageof21,and50%ofallarrestswereofpersonsunder25.

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A.Forhunting.

B.Forprotectinghimself.

C.Forstimulation.

D.Forprotectingthecountry.

26.SectionA

Directions:Inthissection,youwillhear8shortconversationsand2longconversations.Attheendofeachconversation,oneormorequestionswillbeaskedaboutwhatwassaid.Boththeconversationandthequestionswillbespokenonlyonce.Aftereachquestiontherewillbeapause.Duringthepause,youmustreadthefourchoicesmarkedA,B,CandD,anddecidewhichisthebestanswer.

聽力原文：W:Howdoyoufindyournewapartment?

M:Well，it'squitenicereally,althoughIhaveahardtimegettingusedtolivinginabigplace.

Q:Whatistheman'sproblem?

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A.Hecan'tfindhisnewapartment.

B.Hehadabiggerapartmentbefore.

C.Hefindsthenewapartmenttoobig'forhim.

D.He'slookingforanapartment.

27.SectionB

Directions:Inthissection,youwillhear3shortpassages.Attheendofeachpassage,youwillhearsomequestions.Boththepassageandthequestionswillbespokenonlyonce.Afteryouhearaquestion,youmustchoosethebestanswerfromthefourchoicesmarkedA,B,CandD.

聽力原文：Astronomersarestilllearningaboutsunspotsandabouttheireffectsonus,butbelievethatthespotsonthesun,whichwerefirstobservedthroughatelescopebyGalileoin1610,areelectricalinnature.

Sunspotsvaryinsizefromwhatappeartobesmallspecksonthesun'ssurface,toatleast90,000mileslong,and200,000milesinlength,andarevisibleonmostcleardays.

Whensunspotsreleasetheirelectricalenergy,theyshootbeamsofnegativelychargedelectronsintospace,someofwhichescapeintotheEarth'satmosphere.Theseelectronscreateelectricaleffects,suchastheauroraborealis,orNorthernLights,causethedisruptionofradiotransmissions,andincreasetheamountofozoneintheupperatmosphere.Theadditionalozonemayabsorbmorethantheusualamountofthesun'sheat,whichinturnmayaffectourweather.

Thesunspotcycle,isarecurring11-yearperiodoverwhichthenumberofsunspotsfluctuatesandcorrespondstothenumberofsunflares.Anincreaseinthenumberofsunflaresleadstoanincreaseinthenumberofsunspots,andadecreaseinthenumberofsunflaresleadstoadecreaseinthenumberofsunspots,

Recordsofsunspotshaveonlybeenkeptforthelast100yearsorso,leavingastronomerswithlittletobacktheirresearchandmuchyettodiscoveraboutthisphenomenon.

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A.TheywerecreatedbyGalileoin1610.

B.Theyareelectricalinnature.

C.Theyarecreatedbynature.

D.Theyarethereforalmostthousandsofyears.

28.(18)

A.Themanwillgohomeduringthespringholiday.

B.Themanwillgraduatebeforespringholiday.

C.ThemanwillnotgraduateinMay.

D.Themanwillnotgohomeduringthespringholiday.

29.

【B5】

30.SectionC

Directions:Inthissection,youwillhearapassagethreetimes.Whenthepassageisreadforthefirsttime,youshouldlistencarefullyforitsgeneralidea.Whenthepassageisreadforthesecondtime,youarerequiredtofillintheblanksnumberedfrom36to43withtheexactwordsyouhavejustheard.Forblanksnumberedfrom44to46youarerequiredtofillinthemissinginformation.Fortheseblanks,youcaneitherusetheexactwordsyouhavejustheardorwritedownthe

Tobereallyhappyandrealsafe,oneoughttohaveatleasttwoorthreehobbies,andtheymustallbereal.Itisnouse(36)______lateinlifetosay:"Iwilltakean(37)______inthisorthat."Amanmayacquiregreat(38)______oftopicsunconnectedwithhisdailywork,andyetgethardlyany(39)______orrelief.Itisnousewhatyoulike;youhavegottolikewhatyoudo.Broadlyspeaking,humanbeingsmaybe(40)______intothreeclasses:thosewhotoiledtodeath,thosewhoare(41)______todeath,andthosewhoareboredtodeath.Itisnouseinvitingthe(42)______ortheprofessionalorbusinessman,whohasbeen(43)______orworryingaboutseriousthingsforfivedays,toworkorworryabouttriflingthingsattheweekend.

Itmayalsobesaidthatrational,industrious,usefulhumanbeingsaredividedintotwoclasses:(44)____________.Ofthesetheformerarethemajority.Thelonghoursintheofficeorthefactorybringwiththemastheirreward,notonlythemeansofsustenance,butakeenappetiteforpleasureeveninitssimplestandmostmodestform.(45)____________.Forthemtheworkinghoursareneverenough.Eachdayisaholiday,andordinaryholidays,whentheycome,arejustlikeenforcedinterruptionsinanabsorbingvacation.(46)____________.

四、4.ReadingComprehension(ReadinginDepth)(3題)31.

Theterm"electroniccity"inParagraph2refersto______.

A.BerkeleyB.EarthC.LosAngelesD.SanFrancisco

32.Accordingtothelastparagraph,whichofthefollowingstatementsisTRUE?

A.Onlyasmallpercentageofthegrainisdirectlyconsumedbymanintheworld.

B.Eatingmeatmightbeasymbolofrichnessinthefuture.

C.Humanscanlivewithoutmeat.

D.Manyregionsfacetheproblemoffreshwatershortage.

33.Theworldisundergoingtremendouschanges.Theriseofglobalization,botheconomicandculturaltrendthathassweptthroughouttheworld,hasforgednewgroundasweenterthe21stcentury.Butaretheeffectsofglobalizationalwayspositive?Somesayno.

MichaelTenet,headoftheInternationalInstituteforForeignRelationsinAtlanta,isworriedaboutcurrentresentmentthroughouttheworldtowardtheriseofglobalization."Eversincethe1980sandtheeconomicbreakdownoftheAsianTigersinthelate1990s,therehasbeenare-evaluationoftheroleofglobalizationasaforceforgood,"hesaid."Incomeinmanycountrieshasdeclinedandthegapbetweenthemostrichandthemostpoorhasbeenworsened.Withoutfurtherinterferencebygovernments,wecouldseeatragedyexpressedinanincreasedlevelofpovertythroughouttheLatinAmericaandAsia."

YetGeorgeFrank,aninfluentialeconomistwhoworksonWallStreet,seesnosuchdanger."Economicliberalization,increasedtransparencyandmarket-basedreformshavepositiveeffectinthelongrun,evenifmarketmechanismscanproduceshorttermdestabilizationproblems,"hesaid."Whatismostimportantisthatbarrierstotradecontinuetofallsothatactivecompetitionforconsumergoodsreducespricesandinturnraisestheaveragelevelofincome."

Othersfeelthatglobalization'sculturalimpactmaybemoreimportantthanitseconomicimplications.JaniceYawee,anativeofAfrica,feelsstronglythatglobalizationisweakeningherlocalcultureandlanguage."Mostoftheworld'sdialectswillbecomeextinctunderglobalization.WearepavingtheworldwithMcDonald'sandEnglishslang.Ittearsmeupinside,"shesaid.

However,ignoringthepoliticaldimensionsofglobalizationshasalreadyhaditscost.NowherewasthismadeclearerthanintheEastAsianeconomiccrisisofthelate1990's—particularlyinIndonesia.Inthewakeofthatcrisis,thePresidentSuhatro'sregimewasoverthrown,andtheentirecountryhasbeenthrownintoamess.TheIndonesianeconomyhascontractedalmost50percent,throwingtensofmillionsofpeoplebelowthepovertyline.

Governmentsofdifferentcountrieshavehadmixedresponsestothewaveofglobalization.TheUnitedStatesisgenerallyseenasanactiveproponentofgreaterfreetrade,anditcertainlyhasenormousculturalinfluencebyvirtueofitsnearmonopolyonworldwideentertainment.SothechallengefacedbythenewBushadministrationisnotthechallengeofthe1990's.Butothercountries,mostnotablyinEuropeanddevelopingnations,havesoughttoreducetheimpactthatglobalizationhasontheirdomesticaffairs.

ItcanbeinferredthatMichaelTenet'sattitudetowardglobalizationisprobably______.

A.stronglyopposed

B.cautiouslyagreed

C.somewhatanxious

D.absolutelysupportive

五、5.ErrorCorrection(3題)34.

【S5】

35.

【S8】

36.Areyouworriedabouttherisingcrimerate?Ifyouare,thenyouprobably

knowthatyourhouse,possessionsandpersonsareincreasinglyindangerof

sufferingtothetremendousriseinthecasesofburglaryandassault.Figures【S1】______

indicateanever-increasingcrimerate,butitisonlytooeasytoimagine"Itwill

neverhappentome."Unfortunately,statisticsshowitisreallycanhappento【S2】______

youand,ifyouliveinthelargecity,youruntwicetheriskofbeingavictim.【S3】______

Fortunately,thereissomethingdefinitewhatyoucando.ProtectAlarms【S4】______

canhelpyoutoprotectyourhousewithaburglaralarmsystemwhichis

effective,simpletooperateandeasilyaffordable.Youmayrememberthat【S5】______

possessingaburglaralarmisnoindicationwhichyourhouseispackedwith【S6】______

valuablepossessions.Itquitesimplyindicatesofunwelcomevisitorsthat【S7】______

yoursisonehousetheywillnotbreakintoeasilysotheycarryontoan

unprotecthousewheretheirjobismadealoteasier.Sendnowforourfree【S8】______

leaflettellingyouhowwecanprotectandalarmyourhousequickly,easierand【S9】______

cheaply.Completeoutandtearofftheslipbelowandpostittous.Postageis【S10】______

free.

【S1】

六、6.ErrorCorrection(3題)37.

【S3】

38.【S7】

39.【S9】

參考答案

1.IsaDiplomaEverything?Nowadaysthereisawidelyheldbeliefthatdiplomaiseverything.Somepeoplewillgainahigherdiplomaatallcostsandothersforcetheirchildrentogetahigherdiploma.Thisphenomenoncanbeexplainedbyatleasttworeasons.Ontheonehandpeoplebelieveahigherdiplomacanguaranteeaprosperousfuturesuchassuccessfulcareersandrespectablepositions.Ontheotherhandthediplomapeopleholdisattachedtotoomuchimportance.Havingadiplomaisapreconditionforpeopletodoalmosteverythingforexampletofindajobtohaveadatewithagirl.Inmyopinionitisnodoubtthatdiplomaisimportantbecauseitshowsaperson'sacademiclevelandability.Howeveradiplomacannotproveeverythingnomatterhowhighadiplomais.Ahigherdiplomacanonlytellothersthattheholderhasreceivedthiskindofeducation.Asforwhetherheorsheiscompetentinworkingandwhetherheorsheisvirtuousthesestillremainasquestions.IsaDiplomaEverything?Nowadaysthereisawidelyheldbeliefthatdiplomaiseverything.Somepeoplewillgainahigherdiplomaatallcosts,andothersforcetheirchildrentogetahigherdiploma.Thisphenomenoncanbeexplainedbyatleasttworeasons.Ontheonehand,peoplebelieveahigherdiplomacanguaranteeaprosperousfuture,suchassuccessfulcareersandrespectablepositions.Ontheotherhand,thediplomapeopleholdisattachedtotoomuchimportance.Havingadiplomaisapreconditionforpeopletodoalmosteverything,forexample,tofindajob,tohaveadatewithagirl.Inmyopinion,itisnodoubtthatdiplomaisimportant,becauseitshowsaperson'sacademiclevelandability.However,adiplomacannotproveeverything,nomatterhowhighadiplomais.Ahigherdiplomacanonlytellothersthattheholderhasreceivedthiskindofeducation.Asforwhetherheorsheiscompetentinworkingandwhetherheorsheisvirtuous,thesestillremainasquestions.解析：①由題目可知這是一篇分析型作文，需要運(yùn)用“描述現(xiàn)象——解釋原因—一提出解決辦法”的模式。本文按照要求可分成三部分，第一段簡(jiǎn)單介紹目前社會(huì)存在的現(xiàn)象；第二段分析造成這一現(xiàn)象的具體原因，第三段闡述自己對(duì)該問題的看法。②在每段的論述中請(qǐng)注意句式的變化，如定語(yǔ)從句、讓步狀語(yǔ)從句等；注意銜接手段的使用，如however,asfor等。

2.ThePopularityofWesternHolidayItseemsthatsomewesternholidaysaregettingmoreandmorepopularinChina.ForexampleweeksbeforeChristmascountlessshopsrestaurantsandhotelshavegotreadywithChristmasdecorations.HowevercertaintraditionalChinesefestivalsarebeingneglected.Infact.thewesternfestivalsarecelebratedinChinaquitedifferentlyfromintheWest.ForexampleChristmasinthewesternworldismainlyaspiritualfestival.ThenwhyhavethewesternholidaystakenrootinChina?Thechiefreasonisthatbusinessmenknowthattheycanmakemoneybyproducingholidaygoodsorencouragingextradiningandcelebrating.Ithinkthepopularityofwesternholidaysdoesindicatethesuccessoftheeconomicreform.Certainlyeconomicdevelopmenthasbroughtextramoneytomanypeople.PeopleinChinahaveobviouslymoremoneythantheyusedto.Butweshouldn'twasteourmoneyonuselessthings.Soweshouldnotbeledbythoseprofithappybusinessmenratherweshouldtaketheopportunitytorelaxandenjoyourselves.Rememberthatholidaymeanshappinessnotspending.ThePopularityofWesternHolidayItseemsthatsomewesternholidaysaregettingmoreandmorepopularinChina.Forexample,weeksbeforeChristmas,countlessshops,restaurantsandhotelshavegotreadywithChristmasdecorations.However,certaintraditionalChinesefestivalsarebeingneglected.Infact.thewesternfestivalsarecelebratedinChinaquitedifferentlyfromintheWest.Forexample,Christmasinthewesternworldismainlyaspiritualfestival.ThenwhyhavethewesternholidaystakenrootinChina?Thechiefreasonisthatbusinessmenknowthattheycanmakemoneybyproducingholidaygoodsorencouragingextradiningandcelebrating.Ithinkthepopularityofwesternholidaysdoesindicatethesuccessoftheeconomicreform.Certainlyeconomicdevelopmenthasbroughtextramoneytomanypeople.PeopleinChinahaveobviouslymoremoneythantheyusedto.Butweshouldn'twasteourmoneyonuselessthings.So,weshouldnotbeledbythoseprofithappybusinessmen,rather,weshouldtaketheopportunitytorelaxandenjoyourselves.Rememberthatholidaymeanshappiness,notspending.

3.Travel-mateWantedI'ma19-year-oldfemalesophomorenamedLiMing.Iherebyearnestlyinviteaforeignyounglady—collegestudentpreferred—tomakeathreeweektouringtripwithme.Myplanistosetoffnextweekendwhenthesummervacationofficiallybegins.ThefirststopisKunmingtheworld-renownedcityforitsbeautyandmildtemperature.We'llgettherebytrainandstayfor2daysandthanwe'llheadforJinggangshanaformerrevolutionarybaseaswellasanaturalbeautyspot.Aftera3-dayvisittherewewilltakealong-distancecoachtoanearbyportcitybytheYangtzeRiverandboardadownstreamshiptoShanghaisothatwecanenjoythegreatsceneryalongsidethethirdlongestriverintheworld.AseverybodyknowsShanghaiisoneofthebusiestandfastestdevelopingcitiesinChina.I'dliketohaveagoodtourinShanghaisothestaytherewillbeabouthalfaweek.AfamousChinesesayinggoes"JustasthereisParadiseinheaventherearcSuzhouandHangzhouonEarth"soa4-dayvisittothesetwocitiesnearShanghaiisamust.Alltogetherourtripwilllastaboutthreeweeks.Ionlyexpectthatmytravel-matecouldbearherownexpensesandtalkwithmeinbeautifulEnglishandIwouldbeanexcellentguideforhersinceImajorintouristguiding.Thoseinterestedpleasecontactmeeitherthroughemail(Liming@126.com)orphonecall(12345678).Travel-mateWantedI'ma19-year-oldfemalesophomorenamedLiMing.Iherebyearnestlyinviteaforeignyounglady—collegestudentpreferred—tomakeathreeweektouringtripwithme.Myplanistosetoffnextweekend,whenthesummervacationofficiallybegins.ThefirststopisKunming,theworld-renownedcityforitsbeautyandmildtemperature.We'llgettherebytrainandstayfor2days,andthanwe'llheadforJinggangshan,aformerrevolutionarybaseaswellasanaturalbeautyspot.Aftera3-dayvisitthere,wewilltakealong-distancecoachtoanearbyportcitybytheYangtzeRiverandboardadownstreamshiptoShanghai,sothatwecanenjoythegreatsceneryalongsidethethirdlongestriverintheworld.Aseverybodyknows,ShanghaiisoneofthebusiestandfastestdevelopingcitiesinChina.I'dliketohaveagoodtourinShanghai,sothestaytherewillbeabouthalfaweek.AfamousChinesesayinggoes,"JustasthereisParadiseinheaven,therearcSuzhouandHangzhouonEarth",soa4-dayvisittothesetwocitiesnearShanghaiisamust.Alltogether,ourtripwilllastaboutthreeweeks.Ionlyexpectthatmytravel-matecouldbearherownexpensesandtalkwithmeinbeautifulEnglish,andIwouldbeanexcellentguideforhersinceImajorintouristguiding.Thoseinterestedpleasecontactmeeitherthroughemail(Liming@126.com)orphonecall(12345678).

4.AFewRemarksonCompetitionInourmodernsocietyyoumayfeelcompetitioneverywhere．Theathletesforexamplefightwitheachotherforchampionships.Thestudentscompeteforprizesandscholar-shipsatschool．TheunemployeAFewRemarksonCompetitionInourmodernsocietyyoumayfeelcompetitioneverywhere．Theathletes，forexample，fightwitheachotherforchampionships.Thestudentscompeteforprizesandscholar-shipsatschool．Theunemploye

5.BuyingandSellingStocksasaStudentAtpresenttherearemanystudentsengagedinbuyingandsellingstocks.Someofthemareequippedwithupdateddevicesoastogetthelatestinformationandseizegoldenchancesfortransaction.People'sideasvaryonthisissue.Thereasonswhysomepeopleopposeitareasfollows.Foronethingstudentshavetosacrificetheirlearninghourstofocusonstocksonlytofailinexams.Foranother.studentsaretooinexperiencedtomakewiseinvestment.Somespendtheirtuitiononstocks.Iftheyfailtheywillbeundermassivefinancialpressure.Butthensupportersbelievethatstockexchangeisagoodwaytoimprovestudents'abilitytomanagemoneyaswellasapreciouschancetoputtheoryintopractice.Tomymindinaworldofopportunitiesandchallengesthestockexchangeshouldnotbeaforbiddenplaceforcollegestudents.Meanwhilewhattheymustkeepinmindislearningfirstforknowledgeismostvaluable.BuyingandSellingStocksasaStudentAtpresent,therearemanystudentsengagedinbuyingandsellingstocks.Someofthemareequippedwithupdateddevicesoastogetthelatestinformationandseizegoldenchancesfortransaction.People'sideasvaryonthisissue.Thereasonswhysomepeopleopposeitareasfollows.Foronething,studentshavetosacrificetheirlearninghourstofocusonstocks,onlytofailinexams.Foranother.studentsaretooinexperiencedtomakewiseinvestment.Somespendtheirtuitiononstocks.Iftheyfail,theywillbeundermassivefinancialpressure.Butthen,supportersbelievethatstockexchangeisagoodwaytoimprovestudents'abilitytomanagemoneyaswellasapreciouschancetoputtheoryintopractice.Tomymind,inaworldofopportunitiesandchallenges,thestockexchangeshouldnotbeaforbiddenplaceforcollegestudents.Meanwhile,whattheymustkeepinmindislearningfirst,forknowledgeismostvaluable.解析：①審題及布局。這篇作文是討淪大學(xué)生炒股這一熱點(diǎn)問題。在布局上，可以根據(jù)提綱進(jìn)行三段式寫作。根據(jù)提綱，我們可以把第二點(diǎn)作為文章的重點(diǎn)段落，運(yùn)用總——分的段落模式進(jìn)行寫作：同時(shí)把第一點(diǎn)和第三點(diǎn)作為略寫段落。第一段簡(jiǎn)要地說明這種現(xiàn)象普遍存在即可。第二段可以用一個(gè)主題句，表明不同的人對(duì)此有不同的看法，并說明原因。第三段闡述自己的觀點(diǎn)，可以是贊同其中之一，也可以是自己獨(dú)特的見解。②語(yǔ)言。在用詞上，爭(zhēng)取用不同方式表達(dá)相同的意義。多樣化的表達(dá)方式使文章顯得生動(dòng)、流暢，如對(duì)買賣股票的相關(guān)表達(dá)。

6.EnergyCrisisOneofthemainproblemsfacingtheworldtodayistheenergycrisis.Withthedevelopmentofindustryandagriculturetheworldhasconsumedagreatamountofenergy.Butallthisenergyhasgoneforever.Thereforeenergysuppliesarebecomingfewerandfewer.Thismakesitpossiblethatallformsofenergywillbeexhaustedinthefuture.Howeverenergyisofgreatimportancetoman.Wecanhardlyimaginehowmancouldliveinaworldwithoutenergy.Wewouldn'tbeabletodriveourcarsandlistentoourfavoritesongs.Moreoverthenightwouldbecomedarkallthetime.Inshortoncemanlosesalltheenergyresourceshewillnotbeabletoexistintheworld.Thereforeconservingourenergyisanimportanttask.Wemusttakeactivemeasurestoprotectourenergyresources.Ontheonehandweshoulduseourenergyreasonably;ontheotherhandweshouldeducateouryoungpeoplenottowasteenergy．Thenwewillbeabletosendagoodgift—energytoournextgeneration．EnergyCrisisOneofthemainproblemsfacingtheworldtodayistheenergycrisis.Withthedevelopmentofindustryandagriculture,theworldhasconsumedagreatamountofenergy.Butallthisenergyhasgoneforever.Therefore,energysuppliesarebecomingfewerandfewer.Thismakesitpossiblethatallformsofenergywillbeexhaustedinthefuture.However,energyisofgreatimportancetoman.Wecanhardlyimaginehowmancouldliveinaworldwithoutenergy.Wewouldn'tbeabletodriveourcarsandlistentoourfavoritesongs.Moreover,thenightwouldbecomedarkallthetime.Inshort,oncemanlosesalltheenergyresources,hewillnotbeabletoexistintheworld.Therefore,conservingourenergyisanimportanttask.Wemusttakeactivemeasurestoprotectourenergyresources.Ontheonehand,weshoulduseourenergyreasonably;ontheotherhand,weshouldeducateouryoungpeoplenottowasteenergy．Thenw