高考英語(yǔ)專(zhuān)題六短文改錯(cuò)

創(chuàng)作時(shí)間：二零二一年六月三十天短文改錯(cuò)專(zhuān)項(xiàng)訓(xùn)練（一）：最近幾年浙江省高考真題實(shí)戰(zhàn)之老陽(yáng)三干創(chuàng)作創(chuàng)作時(shí)間：二零二一年六月三十天1.(2015浙江)Myoldclassroomwasinterestingbecausethreesideoftheclassroomweremadefromglass.Ienjoyedsitclosetothewindowsandlookingattheview.Ontheleft-handsideoftheclass,Icouldeasyseethefootballfield.Inthemorning,itwasfullofstudentsexercising.Theviewfromthebackoftheclassroomisalsosplendid.Closetotheschooltherewasabeautifulparkwithmanytreesaroundthem.Fartherinthedistance,Icouldnotenjoytheviewofsnowyalwaysinterestedtoseethedriversinhurryinthemorning.ThepositionoftheclassroomwithitsviewmademefeltlikeIwasdreaming.IfIwasonlyachildwhenIstudiedinthatclassroom,Iwillneverforgetit.（2014浙江）Station.Ihadfilledwithpeople.

IwastakingatraintoLondon’sVictorianoticedthatthecarriagewasnoiseandBeforelong,atraininspectorcomestocheckouttickets.創(chuàng)作時(shí)間：二零二一年六月三十天創(chuàng)作時(shí)間：二零二一年六月三十天Apassengerrealizedhecouldn’tfindhisticketbutbecamequiteupset.Theneveryoneinthecarriagebegansearchingtheticket,whichwaseventuallyfoundunderaseatseveralrowsfromhisowner.Thepersonwhofoundaticketsmiledwithpleasureathissuccess.Nooneinthecarriagehadpreviousspokentoorevennoticedtheticket-ownerbefore.Yet,theyhadsoquicklyofferedthestrangerstheirhelp.Ifwecouldshowconcerntoothersonneed,theworldwouldbeabetterplacetolivein.3.（2013年浙江）HereIaminthemiddleofacity,350milesfarawayfromourfarmhouse.Doyouwanttoknowwhywemovelastweek?Dadlosthisjob,andasMomexplained,“Hewasluckytofindotherone.”HisnewjobmeantIhadtosaygoodbyetomyclassmate,myschoolorjusteverythingelseIloveintheworld.Tomakemattersbad,nowIhavetosharearoomwithmyyoungersister,Maggie.Tomorrowisfirstdayofschool.Iamawfullytiring,butIknowIwillneverfallsleep.Goodnightandremember,you,deardiary,ismyonlysouvenirfrommypastlifeandmyonlyfriend.4.（2012年浙江）Twoyearsbefore,ItraveledtoBrazil創(chuàng)作時(shí)間：二零二一年六月三十天創(chuàng)作時(shí)間：二零二一年六月三十天and1rentedforacar.Unfortunate,1hadanaccidentandhitanothercar,andIneededtostayinahospitalforatleasttwoweek.Icalledmyparents,so1didnottellthemwhathadhappened.IknewthattheywillbeworriedaboutmyselfbecauseIwassofartheraway,andthatmymotherwouldnotsleepifsheknew.Therefore,Itoldtheminterestedstoriesandhow1wasenjoyingBrazil.Asaresult,nobodyknewtruth.Istillthinkthatitwastherightthingtodo.（2011年浙江）Iwasplayingatmycousinhouse.Sincehisfamilywasrichthanmine,hehadmoretoysthanIdid.TherewasoneonparticularI'dalwayswanted.Iputintomypocketwhenhewasn'tlooking.Iguessed,evenatthatage,Iwouldneverbeabletoenjoytoplayingwiththetoyorfacedmycousinagain;Iwouldalwaysknow,I'ddonesomethingwrong.Lateon,myauntdrovemehome.Whenshedroppedmeoff,Ipulledoutthetoyslowandgaveitback.Sheknowswhathadhappened,butshethankedmeandevermentioneditagain.6.（2010年浙江）Aftershopping,MotherandIwenttoarestaurantforlunch.InoticeMotherlookingatanearbytableoccupybyanelderlywomanandyoungcouple.創(chuàng)作時(shí)間：二零二一年六月三十天創(chuàng)作時(shí)間：二零二一年六月三十天Theyatesilently,anditwasclearlythatthingswerenotgoingwell.Asweleft,Motherstoppedontheirtable."Excuseme,"shesaid,putherarmaroundtheunhappyoldwoman."Youremindmesomanyofmymother.MayIhug(擁抱)you?"Thewomansmiledhappilyassheacceptedtoit.Afterweleft,Isaid,"Thatwasveryniceofyou,Mother.SoIdidn'tthinkshelookedlikeGrandma.""Neitherdidme,"saidMothercheerfully.7.（2009年浙江）OnerainydaywhileIwaswalkinghomewithoneofmyfriend,atrunkcametoastopbesidesus.Thedriverputthewindowdownandofferedusaumbrellabecausehefoundwewerewetthrough.Istoodthereandcouldn’tbelieveinthatacompletestrangerissothoughtful.Themaninsisted,soIgratefulacceptedtheoffer,thankedhimandwatchedthetruckdisappeardowntheroad.Thismanmightneedtheumbrellahimself,andhepreferredtogiveittoeveryoneelse.Itwasalessontousthatitwaspossiblegivewithoutexpectanythinginreturn.短文改錯(cuò)專(zhuān)項(xiàng)訓(xùn)練（二）：2015各省高考真題練手2015陜西卷）Mysoccercoachretiredinlastweek.Iwantedtodo創(chuàng)作時(shí)間：二零二一年六月三十天創(chuàng)作時(shí)間：二零二一年六月三十天anythingspecialforhimathisretirementparty.Mymummakesthebetterbiscuitsintheworld,soIdecidetoaskherforhelp.Mumtaughtmesomebasicstepofbaking.Iinsistedondoingmostofthebakingmyself.Ithoughtthebiscuitswerereallywell.MyonlymistakewasthatIdroppedsomeonthefloorafterIwaspackingthemup.Ataparty,mycoach,withabiscuitinhismouth,askedsurprisinglywhomadethemandjoked,“Imighthavetoretireagainnextyearjustgetsomemoreofthesebiscuits.”Myfavoritepictureatthepartyisofmycoachandmeenjoythebiscuitswithhappylaughter!（2015四川卷）Hi,Janice,It'sbeenamonthsinceIcametothisnewschoolandIreallywantsharewithyousomeoftheproblemsIhavebeenexperiencing.AsItellyoulasttime,Imadethreenewfriendhere.Wehangouttogetherduringlunchandafterschool.We'vebeenspendingalotoftimesinginkaraokebars.It'sbeenthreeSaturdaysnowanditreallycostsmemany.AndIstartedtoseethisasatime—wastingactivity!Infact,Idon’tliketogoanymore,創(chuàng)作時(shí)間：二零二一年六月三十天創(chuàng)作時(shí)間：二零二一年六月三十天soI’mafraidI’lllosetheirfriendship.HowdoyouthinkIshoulddo?Ifyouareme,wouldyoutalktohim?Pleasehelpwithmeandgivemesomeadvice.Grave（2015新課標(biāo)卷1）WhenIwasachild,Ihopedtoliveinthecity.IthinkIwouldbehappythere.NowIamlivinginacity,butImissmyhomeincountryside.Theretheairiscleanorthemountainsaregreen.Unfortunately,onthedevelopmentofindustrialization,theenvironmenthasbeenpolluted.Lotsofstudieshavebeenshownthatglobalwarminghasalreadybecomeaveryseriouslyproblem.Theairswebreatheinisgettingdirtieranddirtier.Muchrareanimalsaredyingout.Wemustfoundwaystoprotectyourenvironment.Ifwefailtodoso,we?lllivetoregretit.2015新課標(biāo)卷2）Oneday,littleTonywenttoashoppingcenterwithhisparent.Itwasverycrowded.Tonysawatoyonashopwindow.Helikeditsoverymuchthathequicklywalkedintotheshop.Afterlooksatthetoyforsometime,heturnedaround創(chuàng)作時(shí)間：二零二一年六月三十天創(chuàng)作時(shí)間：二零二一年六月三十天andfoundwherehisparentsweremissing.Tonywasscaredandbeguntocry.Awomansawhimcryingandtellinghimtow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ybikehadscratchedhiscar.IfeltconfusedbecausethatIclearlyrememberedthatIwastryingtoavoidtouchinghercarjustnow.Therefore,sheinsistedonblamingmeandgraduallyrosehervoice.Surroundedbythecrowd,Igotanxiousanddesperatewantedthistobeover.SoImadeacompromise.NeverbeforeinmylifehadIdealtwithsuchthing,創(chuàng)作時(shí)間：二零二一年六月三十天創(chuàng)作時(shí)間：二零二一年六月三十天andIwasapparentlytakenadvantageof.NowIamawarethatIshouldnevergiveoutaslongasIamontherightside.Mycarjustwouldn’tmoveanyfarther.Itwascompletedead,andIwasafewmilesawayfrommyhomeinthatcold,wetnight.IdecidedtowalkaroundalittleafteracceptingthatI’dhavetospendthenightinthecar.MaybeIcanfindatelephone.Actually,Ididn’thavetowalkfarbeforeIfoundthesmallhousestandinginafieldwithalightshonefromthesittingroom.Iknockedthedoorwasdelightedwhenapleasantoldmanopenedthedoorandlistenedtomystorycarefully.Hesaidhehadnotelephoneandthatitwasn’tanywithinwalkingdistanc