專題21 英語(yǔ)作文之話題作文類（解析版）

1.Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“TheFunofLearning________(playingthepiano/doinghousework/playingfootball/English/…)”.(以“學(xué)......的樂趣”為題寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。)Usethefollowingpointsasareference.(以下問題僅供參考)1.yourexperienceoflearning……(giveanexample)2.reason(s)youthinkitisfunlearning……【答案】ItisnoteastolearnEnglish.IusedtowatchEnglishprogrammestoimproveit.Ifounditreallyinterestingandhelpful.IthelpmelearnEnglishandwidenmyrangeofknoeledgeaswell!Ontheotherhand,ItriedtalingwithmyfatherinEnglish.AlthoughIcouldn’texpressmyselfwellatfirst,everythingwentbetterlater.IwasexcitedwhenIfoundmysuccessinimprovingmyoralEnglishbythis.Iwastrulyproudofmyself.IfoundlotsoffunlearningEnglish.【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇短文內(nèi)容切題，意思連貫，表達(dá)清楚、完整。詞匯和句型句式運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)，多見好句型和習(xí)慣表達(dá)用語(yǔ)者考點(diǎn)：話題作文2.書面表達(dá)請(qǐng)就關(guān)于減壓的問題給學(xué)校提一些建議。詞數(shù)（60-80）?！敬鸢浮縉owmanystudentsareundertoomuchpressure.Theyalwaysfeeltootiredtolistentoteacherscarefullyinclass.It’simportantforstudentstorelax.Herearesomedifferentwaystorelaxthemselves.Forexample,theycantrytohaveenoughsleep,ortheycanlistentotheirfavoritemusicafterclass.Theycanalsoreadsomebooksordosomesports.Forme,Ioftenhangoutwithmyfriendsafterschool.Whileyouarestudying,don’tforgettorelaxyourself.Inthisway,youwillbehealthyandstudybetter.【解析】試題分析：這是一篇話題作文。要求根據(jù)許多學(xué)生因?yàn)閴毫^大，談?wù)劀p壓的幾點(diǎn)建議?！玖咙c(diǎn)說明】這篇短文內(nèi)容切題，意思連貫，表達(dá)清楚、完整。詞匯和句型句式運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)，多見好句型和習(xí)慣表達(dá)用語(yǔ)，使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理?？键c(diǎn)：話題作文。3.緊張的初中學(xué)習(xí)生活就要結(jié)束了，你即將迎來一個(gè)輕松的暑假。請(qǐng)你以MySummerHolidayPlan為題，寫一篇80詞左右的短文（開頭部分已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)），談?wù)勀愕募倨谟?jì)劃。要求用上提示詞并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的地址和姓名。rest(relax)rest(relax)readbooks(getknowledge)chatwithparentshelpdohouseworksocialactivities(knowaboutthesociety)visit…….MYSummerHolidayMySummerHolidayPlanThesummerholidayiscoming._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】MySummerHolidayPlanThesummerholidayiscoming.I’mgoingtohaveagoodrestandlearntorelaxmyself.Iwillreadmoreusefulbookstogetmoreknowledge.Iwilltrytospendmoretimeinchattingwithmyparentsandhelpthemtodosomehousework.IamgoingtotakepartinthesocialactivitiessothatIcanknowmoreaboutthesociety.Ifpossible,I’dliketogotravelingandvisitsomeplacesofinterest.I’msureI’llhaveaninterestingandmeaningfulsummerholiday.【解析】試題分析：這是一篇話題作文。要求根據(jù)提示詞談?wù)勛约旱募倨谟?jì)劃，根據(jù)內(nèi)容可知是談?wù)搶淼氖虑?，故選用將來時(shí)態(tài)?！玖咙c(diǎn)說明】這篇短文時(shí)態(tài)正確，能利用所給的提示詞合理的介紹自己的假期計(jì)劃。豐富的句式變化可見作者的英語(yǔ)功底深厚，如IamgoingtotakepartinthesocialactivitiessothatIcanknowmoreaboutthesociety.，Ifpossible,I’dliketogotraveling等。考點(diǎn)：話題作文。4.假設(shè)你和家人4月5號(hào)到北京旅游，根據(jù)下面所給表格內(nèi)容寫一篇日記，介紹一下你們的旅游經(jīng)歷。Howwasyourtrip?Wonderful.HowdidyougotoBeijing?Bytrain.Howlongdidyoustaythere?Forsixdays.Whatdidyousee?Tian’anmenSquare,theSummerPalace,theGreatWall.Whatdidyoudo?ClimbingtheGreatWall.Whatdidyoueat?BeijingRoastDuck.【答案】OnApril5th,myfamilyandIwentonatourtoBeijing.WewenttoBeijingbytrain.Andwestayedthereforsixdays.wefirstwenttotheheartofChina-Tian’anmenSquare.Itisoneofthelargestsquaresintheworld.OnonesideofthesquareistheGreatHallofthePeopleandontheothersideistheMuseumofChineseHistory.Alotofpeoplefromallovertheworldcometovisitthesquareeveryday.ThenwewenttotheForbiddenCity,IthoughtthatwasreallybeautifulThePalaceMuseumhas9999palaces.Ithasaverylonghistory.IboughtalotofsouvenirsofthePalaceMuseum.Whatnicepalacestheseare!NexttwodayswevisitedthePalaceMuseumandfeltexcited.IfyouwanttoknowmoreaboutthePalaceMuseum,youcangotoBeijingandhavealook.Onthelastday,wevisitedtheGreatWall.Itisverylongandold..Ithasmillionsofbricks.Eachbrickisverybigandheavy.LotsofpeoplefromdifferentcountrieslikeclimbingtheGreatWall.WefeltverytiredwhenweclimbedtothetopoftheGreatWall.butIwashappybecauseIknowthechinesesaying：OnewhofailstoreachtheGreatWallisnotahero！Asforfood,IthoughtBeijingRoastDuckwastasty.Ilikeitverymuch.IreallyenjoyedthetriptoBeijing.【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇短文所給材料直接，不易發(fā)揮。但作者詳細(xì)的描述了各景點(diǎn)的特色，可見英語(yǔ)基礎(chǔ)的扎實(shí)。同時(shí)引用諺語(yǔ)OnewhofailstoreachtheGreatWallisnotahero！不到長(zhǎng)城非好漢。更給文章增色不少。為了寫好文章，平時(shí)就要多積累一些詞匯，名言等?？键c(diǎn)：話題作文。5.假如你的好朋友叫李華，是“中華好少年”(China’sGoodChild)的候選人之一。請(qǐng)你寫一份材料，介紹他在家里、在學(xué)校、在社會(huì)（society）上的表現(xiàn)。個(gè)人介紹年齡：15歲外貌：圓臉；笑瞇瞇的眼睛；高個(gè)子；愛好：……,因?yàn)椤ㄗ詳M）個(gè)人表現(xiàn)[來源:學(xué)#科#網(wǎng)]在家里：……（自擬兩點(diǎn)）在學(xué)校里：……（自擬兩點(diǎn)）在社會(huì)上：……（自擬兩點(diǎn)）[來源:Z*xx*k.Com]感想1.希望他……；2.號(hào)召……。1.詞數(shù)100個(gè)左右；開頭，結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)字?jǐn)?shù)；2.條理清楚，語(yǔ)義連貫，句式規(guī)范，字跡工整；3.不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名﹑校名﹑地名等相關(guān)信息。(提示詞：respect尊敬；obey遵守)MygoodfriendisLiHua.HeisluckytobechosenasoneofChina’sGoodChildren.__________【答案】MygoodfriendisLiHua.HeisluckytobechosenasoneofChina’sGoodChildren.Heis15yearsold.Hehasaroundfaceandsmilingeyes.Heistall.Hishobbyistorecycleemptybottlesbecauseitcanhelpprotecttheenvironment.Heisagoodboyathome.Hegetsupearlyeverydayanddoessomereading.Thenhedoesexercise.Doingexercisecannotonlyhelphimkeepfit,butalsohelptotrainaperson’scharacter.Heoftendoessomehouseworkathome.

Atschool,hestudieshardandobeystheschoolrulers.Inclassheoftenanswersquestionsandafterclass,heoftenhelpsthestudentswiththeirlessons.

Insociety,herespectstheoldpeople.Andonweekends,healwaysvisitsoldpeople,spendstimewiththemandhelpsthemasmuchaspossible.Heoftenhelpsthechildren.Givethembooks,warmclothes,raisemoneyforcharities.Ihopehewillbealwayshimself.IthinkweshouldlearnfromLiHua.

【解析】試題分析：這是一篇利用圖表的給材料作文。要求介紹你的朋友李華作為中華好少年的候選人之一他在家里、在學(xué)校、在社會(huì)（society）上的表現(xiàn)。注意第三人稱單數(shù)形式的應(yīng)用?！玖咙c(diǎn)說明】這篇短文內(nèi)容切題，意思連貫，表達(dá)清楚、完整。段落層次清晰，使文章的內(nèi)容一目了然。詞匯和句型句式運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)。考點(diǎn)：表格作文。6.學(xué)校20周年校慶馬上就到了。屆時(shí)，將會(huì)有許多畢業(yè)生回到母校來參觀并看望老師。你作為一名志愿服務(wù)者來接待學(xué)長(zhǎng)們，將在報(bào)告廳向他們簡(jiǎn)單介紹學(xué)校現(xiàn)在的基本情況，并談?wù)勀銈€(gè)人對(duì)創(chuàng)建和諧美好校園的建議及對(duì)學(xué)校美好未來的祝?！，F(xiàn)狀校園美麗，干凈，舒適師生之間關(guān)系融洽學(xué)生好學(xué)，興趣廣泛，課外活動(dòng)豐富建議和祝福（自擬一至兩點(diǎn)內(nèi)容）注意：1.表達(dá)中須包含所給要點(diǎn)，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.字?jǐn)?shù)80左右。開頭已寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。3.文中表達(dá)不要提及真實(shí)校名及姓名。【答案】Ourschoolisverybeautifulnow.Therearemanyflowerseverywhere.It’snotonlycleanbutalsocomfortable.Thestudentsarefriendlyandtheteachersinmyschoolareaskindtousasourparents.Wegetalongwellwithourteachers.wehavelotsoffunatschool.wenotonlyhaveallkindsofclasses,butalsotakepartincolorfulactivitiesafterclasses.Weallworkhardatourlessons.Ithinkourlibraryshouldgetmorebookssothatwecanreadwidely.Ifeelproudofmyschoolbecauseitisoneofthebestschoolsinmyheart.Iwishmyschoolwillbecomemorebeautifulandmoremorden.【解析】試題分析：這是一篇利用表格的給材料作文。要求介紹校園的現(xiàn)狀,并對(duì)建設(shè)美好校園提出自己的建議，對(duì)學(xué)校表示美好的祝福。【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇短文內(nèi)容切題，意思連貫，表達(dá)清楚、完整。詞匯和句型句式運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)。能應(yīng)用好的短語(yǔ)和連詞，如notonly,butalso.as…as等?？键c(diǎn)：表格作文。7.眼睛是身體的重要組成部分。我們每天用眼睛讀書，用眼睛來看這美麗的世界?？墒怯捎诜敝氐膶W(xué)業(yè)負(fù)擔(dān)，很多中學(xué)生都出現(xiàn)了眼睛方面的問題。因此，保護(hù)視力十分重要。有的同學(xué)認(rèn)為保證充足的睡眠、學(xué)習(xí)期間讓眼睛有規(guī)律的放松、使用正確的方法讀書寫字都可以保護(hù)視力。請(qǐng)你以作為中學(xué)生“如何保護(hù)視力（eyesight）”為話題，談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?．請(qǐng)根據(jù)所提供的信息材料和話題（不要逐句翻譯），寫出結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)、內(nèi)容完整、語(yǔ)言豐富優(yōu)美、語(yǔ)法準(zhǔn)確、可讀性強(qiáng)的短文。2．至少80詞。3．不得使用真實(shí)姓名、地名和學(xué)校名。4．題目自擬。【答案】HowtoprctectoureyesightEyeisanimportantpartofourbody.Wecan’tread,lookatthebeautifulwordwithoutoureyes.butItisreportedthatmanymiddleschoolstuddentsinChinahaveeyesight(視力)troublebeacauseoftheheavyschoolwork.Soitisimportanttoprctectoureyesight.Moreandmoreparentshopetoimprovetheirchildren'seyesightwithmedicine,orbycorrectingthewaysthatchildrenreadandsit.Andwestudentsalsohavesomeideas.Somestudentsthinksthatweshouldhaveenoughsleeptime.andweshouldmaketheeyesrelaxduringlearning.Wemustusecorrectwaystoreadandwrite.Ithinkbesidesthose,itisgoodtodosomeexercise.Whenweexerciseweasloexerciseoureyes.likeropeskipping(跳繩).Itcanalsobegoodforone'seyesight.Whileskippingrope,onehastomovequickly,makingboththebrainandtheeyesexcited.Itmayalsohelpmakeonegrowtaller.Anotherthingisimportantthatwemustn’twatchtoomuchTVorplaytoomuchcomputergames.Theyarebadforoureyes.【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇短文主要從三個(gè)方面進(jìn)行寫作，一個(gè)是保護(hù)視力的重要性，另一個(gè)是同學(xué)們對(duì)保護(hù)視力的建議，最后是作者對(duì)保護(hù)視力提供的方法。這篇短文內(nèi)容切題，意思連貫，表達(dá)清楚、完整?？键c(diǎn)：話題作文。8.假如你是張玉，是一名九年級(jí)學(xué)生，即將面臨中考，可是你在英語(yǔ)作文方面有困難。請(qǐng)給某英語(yǔ)報(bào)社的編輯寫一封電子郵件，請(qǐng)教如何提高英語(yǔ)寫作技能。80詞左右。信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Deareditor,I’mamiddleschoolstudentofGradeNine.AndI’mworkinghardforthecomingseniorhighschoolentranceexamination.Bestwishes! Yours, ZhangYu【答案】Deareditor,I’mamiddleschoolstudentofGradeNine.AndI’mworkinghardforthecomingseniorhighschoolentranceexamination.IcandoagoodjobonallofthequestionsintheEnglishexamexceptthewriting.Ihavebeenputtingmyheartintoit,butIstillcan’twriteagoodarticle.EverytimeIbegintowrite,itseemsthatallofthewordsrunoutofmymind,andIalwaysmakemistakeswhenIwrite.WhatshouldIdo?CouldyoupleasegivemesomeadviceonhowtoimprovemyEnglishwriting?Iamlookingforwardtoyourreplysoon.Thankalot.Bestwishes! Yours, ZhangYu【解析】試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。要求介紹自己在英語(yǔ)作文的困難，并向編輯請(qǐng)教如何提高英語(yǔ)寫作技能。注意在寫作時(shí)用第一人稱單數(shù)。主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)?！玖咙c(diǎn)說明】這篇短文內(nèi)容切題，意思連貫，表達(dá)清楚、完整。時(shí)態(tài)靈活多變，非常合適。能準(zhǔn)確的表達(dá)句子的意思。句型句式運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)，多見好句型和習(xí)慣表達(dá)用語(yǔ)，如itseemsthat….,andIalwaysmakemistakeswhenIwrite.,runoutofmymind,Iamlookingforwardtoyourreplysoon.等等?？键c(diǎn)：話題作文。9.周一下午你們班舉行了“節(jié)約糧食、健康飲食”的主題班會(huì)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的內(nèi)容提示，寫一篇發(fā)言稿。內(nèi)容提示：1.浪費(fèi)糧食可恥。作為中學(xué)生，我們?cè)撊绾巫?？（?qǐng)?zhí)岢鲋辽僖粭l建議或做法。）2.健康飲食很重要。作為中學(xué)生，我們?cè)撊绾巫?？（?qǐng)?zhí)岢鲋辽僖粭l建議或做法。）要求：[來源:學(xué)科網(wǎng)ZXXK]1.可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫；2.80詞左右。開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。提示詞語(yǔ)：shame羞恥Goodafternoon,everyone!I’dliketosaysomethingabouttoday’stopicforourclassmeeting.That’sall.Thankyou!【答案】Goodafternoon,everyone!I’dliketosaysomethingabouttoday’stopicforourclassmeeting.First,it’sashametowastefood.Asstudents,weshouldgetintothehabitofsavingfood.Forexample,weshouldorderasmuchfoodaswecaneatinthedininghallandeatupallthefoodwehaveordered.Second,healthisveryimportantforus.Itisgoodtohaveabalanceddiet.Inordertokeephealthy,we’dbettereatinourschooldininghallorathomeratherthaninfast-foodrestaurants.Fromnowon,let’ssavefoodandeathealthily!That’sall.Thankyou!【解析】試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。要求介紹兩方面的內(nèi)容，一，作為中學(xué)生我們?nèi)绾喂?jié)約糧食；二，作為中學(xué)生我們?nèi)绾伪３纸】档娘嬍?。主要用到一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。主語(yǔ)用第一人稱?！玖咙c(diǎn)說明】這篇短文內(nèi)容切題，意思連貫，表達(dá)清楚、完整。詞匯和句型句式運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)，有一些好句型和習(xí)慣表達(dá)用語(yǔ)如，it’sashametowastefood.，Asstudents，F(xiàn)orexample,eatupallthefoodwehaveordered.Inordertokeephealthy,we’dbetter等。這使文章更有富有邏輯性，更豐富?？键c(diǎn)：話題作文。10.假如你是林涵，下面是你的美國(guó)筆友Dave的來信，請(qǐng)據(jù)此給Dave回信。80詞左右，注意書信格式。DearLinHan,How’sitgoing?I’mfeelingalittlelonelythesedays,butIdon’tknowwhy.Doyousometimesfeellonely?Whatdoyouusuallydowhenyoufeellonely?Pleasewritetomesoon. Yours,