調(diào)查報告類作文訓(xùn)練 課件

調(diào)查報告類作文訓(xùn)練檔次的衡量標(biāo)準(zhǔn)為：內(nèi)容(content)、語言的準(zhǔn)確性(accuracy)、流暢性(fluency)。項目要素給分表AA檔B檔C檔D檔內(nèi)容6分切合題意，體現(xiàn)要點65.554.543.53210.50有所發(fā)揮準(zhǔn)確性6分語法準(zhǔn)確65.554.543.53210.50詞匯豐富機械性：大小寫，拼寫和格式等錯誤流暢性3分結(jié)構(gòu)合理32.521.510.50得體、連貫▲項目要素說明1）內(nèi)容-------指是否切題；是否包括所有的要點，并有所發(fā)揮；2）準(zhǔn)確性----指詞匯的數(shù)量合適度與拼寫、語言結(jié)構(gòu)和書寫格式的準(zhǔn)確性等；3）流暢性-----指文章的結(jié)構(gòu)、上下文的連貫性、用詞造句的流暢度和表達的得體性等。4）如考生寫出自己的真實姓名、學(xué)校名等個人信息，全文給0分。RecentlywedidasurveyinourclassinordertoseewhatstudentsmainlydoontheInternet.Here’ssomethingaboutmygroupmembers.Rogerspendsmostofthetimeonlinelookingfortheinformationheneeds.Hesaiditwasquickandconvenienttoknowtheworldinthisway.SusanusestheInternetmainlyforlearningEnglishandfindsitveryhelpful.ForNick,theInternetismainlyforrelaxing.Helistenstomusicorwatchesfilmsoniteveryday.AsfarasIamconcerned,ImostlyusetheInternettokeepintouchwithmyfamilyandfriends.It’sgreatthatthereisInternetwhenwe’refarfromeachother.Hopefully,everyonecanusetheInternetinagoodway.

調(diào)查報告要根據(jù)具體調(diào)查內(nèi)容來寫。調(diào)查報告的寫作思路(3段法)

1、報告是關(guān)于什么的?

Recentlywedidasurveyabout….Here’stheresultofoursurvey.2、報告的內(nèi)容：（數(shù)據(jù)/觀點）A陳述觀點+所基于的原因B陳述現(xiàn)狀+所造成的結(jié)果3、作者的觀點：inmyopinion;inaword;Ithink/hope/believethat….Thereisnodoubtthat….Summary比例喜歡的英語老師類型40%有創(chuàng)意(creative),授課生動,有趣28%年輕、友善且有幽默感(humorous)20%關(guān)心學(xué)生，平等對待學(xué)生7%細心、耐心，樂于幫助學(xué)生5%工作勤奮你的看法？寫作自評表自評項目評價結(jié)果是 否1.我明白在寫作中“我”是誰2.我非常清楚寫作要點3.我的書寫很工整，字沒有超出規(guī)定的范圍，標(biāo)點符號清晰4.我一開始就確定文章的時態(tài)5.我每段的第一、第二句就寫出了段落的主要內(nèi)容，然后展開（段落中心句）6.寫作時，我盡可能運用連接詞7.寫作時，我總是嘗試運用多種表達方式，避免句式的單一8.寫前我盡可能構(gòu)思完整，盡量避免邊寫邊涂改9.寫完后，我能細心地檢查文章一遍，檢查內(nèi)容要點是否有遺漏，詞匯、時態(tài)、句法是否正確10.需要修改時，我一筆劃過，確保修改清楚工整【解題思路】1.時態(tài)：_______________________________________

內(nèi)容要點：_______________________________________2.詞句準(zhǔn)備：1）40%的學(xué)生_______________________________喜歡_______________________________________40%的學(xué)生喜歡有創(chuàng)意，授課生動、有趣的老師。_______________________________________________________________________________2）在我看來_______________________________________like/prefer/befondof/love/carefor六個內(nèi)容要點40%students/40%ofthestudents以一般現(xiàn)在時為主40%studentspreferteacherswhoarecreativeandinteresting,andwhocangivelivelylessons.inmyopinion,asfarasIamconcerned,IbelieveRecentlywedidasurveyaboutthetypeofteachersthatstudentslikebest.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Recentlywedidasurveyaboutthetypeofteachersthatstudentslikebest.

40%ofthestudentswouldprefercreativeEnglishteacherswhocanmaketheirEnglishclasseslivelyandinteresting.28%thinkthattheyoung,kindandhumourousEnglishteachersarepopularwithstudents.And20%ofthestudentsbelievethatgoodEnglishteachersshouldcareaboutstudents’feelingsandtreateverystudentequally.7%ofthestudents

liketheEnglishteacherswhoarecareful,patientandready