【省級(jí)公開(kāi)課】高考短文改錯(cuò)公開(kāi)課課件

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短文改錯(cuò)生活中，人人都會(huì)犯錯(cuò)，有錯(cuò)就知改。寫(xiě)作中，人人也會(huì)犯錯(cuò)，有錯(cuò)也要改。PlayagameFindthewrongwordsandcorrectthem.BestrictatsbBeresponsiblewithsb/sthBeinbusinessHavesthoncommonHaveaneffectinsbLosetheheartMakeagreatprogressThewarwasbrokeoutTheaccidentwashappenedInthehurrySharesthforsbApairofshoeAlotofequipmentsGeneralspeakingAssoonaspossiblywithforoninontheawaswasawithShoesequipmentGenerallypossibleWhatisproofreading?知短文改錯(cuò)則百戰(zhàn)不殆1.correctsomegrammarmistakes2.connectionbetweensentences3.themainideaofthewholepassage設(shè)錯(cuò)方式？改錯(cuò)格式？多詞缺詞錯(cuò)詞

假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(Λ)，并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。注意：

1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。改錯(cuò)步驟1.Gothroughthewholepassagetogetageneralidea.(瀏覽全文，掌握大意）2.Readthepassagesentencebysentence

andfindthegrammarmistakes.（分句閱讀，逐行找錯(cuò)）3.Readthepassageagain,checkyouranswers.（檢查核對(duì)，敲定終稿）6

Ioftendreamofateacher.Idreamofstandingonthe______platformintheclassroomandgivelessonstolovelyboys.______andgirls.Iteachthem,playwiththem,butwatchthem.______growingup.IamalwaysyoungwhenIwasstaying.______withthem.Iknowthereisnoteasytobeateacher.You.______havetolearninordertoteach.Withoutenoughknowledges.______youcanneverlearnwell.Whatismore,youhavetobe.______friendswithyourpupilsandtakegoodcareofhim..______Onlyinthiswaycanyouareagoodteacherandwin______respectfromthem.ThoughIamastudentnow,Iwillworkasveryhardtomakemydreamcometrue. ______∧beinggivingandamitknowledgeteachthembeHomework--Checkyouranswers

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歸納總結(jié)錯(cuò)誤主要錯(cuò)在時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)、主謂一致、動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)、非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞（todo/doing/done）

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歸納總結(jié)錯(cuò)誤主要錯(cuò)在并列連詞和從屬連詞的漏用和錯(cuò)用，上下文邏輯關(guān)系理解錯(cuò)用4.(全國(guó))Iboughtmyticketbutturnedaroundtopickupmybag

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5.Allinall,Joeyisaveryspecialdogbecausehehasovercomeunpleasantstartinlife.luggagecupsthean三、名詞四、冠詞名詞錯(cuò)誤主要錯(cuò)在單復(fù)數(shù)；可數(shù)與不可數(shù)；

歸納總結(jié)冠詞錯(cuò)誤主要錯(cuò)在泛指與特指；a.an.the混用漏用和多用

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歸納總結(jié)錯(cuò)誤主要錯(cuò)在詞性錯(cuò)用，副詞混用；原級(jí)、比較級(jí)最高級(jí)的混用

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歸納總結(jié)錯(cuò)誤主要錯(cuò)在六、代詞hermyself指代錯(cuò)誤；人稱代詞和反身代詞的誤用；主格賓格；關(guān)系代詞和連接代詞（復(fù)合句，名詞性、定語(yǔ)從句）their

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錯(cuò)誤主要錯(cuò)在七、介詞inof固定搭配聚沙成塔---Summary動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)和語(yǔ)態(tài)主謂一致勿忘記還要注意非謂語(yǔ)名詞多考單復(fù)數(shù)連詞并列和從屬上下邏輯要清楚形容副詞看詞性代詞前后要一致介詞搭配要記牢還有冠詞a/an/the改完復(fù)查敲定稿Attention三不改四原則標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不改字母大小不改詞語(yǔ)順序不改以保持句子原義為原則改動(dòng)以最少為原則實(shí)詞以改變?cè)~形為原則虛詞以添加或刪除為原則做完能力提升中的單句改錯(cuò)和短文改錯(cuò)Challengeyourself!1.MyfriendNicktoldmestoryabouthisexperience

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