大學英語四級作文 寫作技巧

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9DueAttentionShouldBeGiventoSpelling1.如今不少學生在英語學習中不重視拼寫，2.出現(xiàn)這種現(xiàn)象的原因是……3.為了改變這種狀況，我認為……從遣詞造句組段三方面分析DueAttentionShouldBeGiventoSpelling12分作文Nowadays,fewerandfewerstudentspayattentiontotheirword-spelling.Accordingtoarecentsurvey,thereisadramaticincrease(高分短語)inthenumberofstudentswhocanonlyimitatethepronunciationofawordbutbeincapableofspellingit(句式上，定語從句，使表達更豐富).9分作文(用詞一般，無特色,句式簡單)Nowadays,studentspaylittleattentiontothespellingofwordswhenstudyEnglish.Thisinfluencesstudents’writingverymuchandmakesteacherworry.第一段15分作文Nowadays,studentsattachlessattention

(高分詞匯，強于payattentionto)tothespellingofwordsintheprocessofEnglishstudy,whichhasbeenbroughtintopublicfocusandcalledforfurtherconcern.(定語從句的使用，使表達更生動)組段：使用復合句直接開門見山點出主題。第二段遣詞造句組段

9分作文：Therearepossiblythreereasonsforthisphenomenon.First,oureducationmakesstudentspaylessattentiontospelling.Second,someteachersdon’temphasizetheimportanceofspellingduringteaching.Last,somestudentsaretoolazytorecitewords.

閃光詞匯不多，表達不夠生動/短句，簡單句過多/銜接有些生硬，F(xiàn)SL等無法吸引老師眼球

12分作文：Thereareanumberoffactorsaccountingforthissituation.

Firstofall,thegoalofmoststudentstolearnEnglishistospeakitandpasstheexaminationwhichreducestheimportanceofspelling.What’smore,thewideuseofelectronicdevicessuchase-dictionariesandcomputersmakesstudentsnolongerneedtocorrectthewordsbythemselves.使用高分短語，如AF/Twu等/使用復合句：thegoalof…/行文流暢，F(xiàn)irstofall,What’smore的使用使段落銜接較為自然。

第二段遣詞造句組段15分作文

Severalfactorscouldaccountfortheproblem.

Tobeginwith,studentslikeaneasywayofstudying,whichcausessomeomissionsandchangesinspelling.Furthermore,thestandardized-test

orientedwayofEnglishlearning,inwhichthehighscorecanbeachievedwithoutspelling,putstudentstotheposition

inwhichtheyhavethequitereasontoignorespelling.用詞準確，表達生動豐富。Accountfor（紅體字）等詞語的使用清晰地闡釋了拼寫被忽視的原因。使用復合句(綠色)，以及被動語態(tài)（紫），句式豐富多變，表達生動。細節(jié)與主題密切相關。組織有序，條理清晰，Tbw，F(xiàn)m作為連接，過渡自然，連貫性非常好第三段遣詞造句組段9分SincespellingisoneofthemostimportantfactorsinEnglishstudy,dueattentionshouldbegiventoit.Asforme,Ithink,first,examsshouldaddsomefactorsintoit.Thiscanhelpstudentspaymoreattentiontospelling.Then,schoolsshouldalsoseteffectivemechanismstohelpteachersaswellasthestudentstorealizetheimportance.用詞普通/句式單一/切題，句子基本連貫12分AsfarasI’mconcerned,Ifirmlyarguethatweneedtoattachgreatimportancetoword-spelling.Tothestudents,theyshouldwriteEnglishasmuchastheycan.Meanwhile,totheteachers,thedictationsshouldbe

reinforcedinclass.有高分詞匯和短語的使用（紅色）/使用賓語從句及被動語態(tài)（綠）/切題，寫出了提綱的內(nèi)容。Meanwhile使句子銜接連貫。第三段遣詞造句組段15分Tochangethissituation,theteachersandthestudentsshouldgivemoreattentiontostudents’spelling,askingthestudentstobeconsciousoftheimportanceofcorrectspellingfromtheverybeginningoftheirEnglishstudy.Ontheotherhand,thestudentsthemselvesaresupposedtobeawarethatcorrectspellingisamustinEnglishstudy.用詞貼切，有效地表達了作者的意圖，如(紅色)/句子連貫，使用-ing形式作伴隨狀語（綠），賓語從句（紫）/組段切題。與上文銜接自然，段落結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，Ontheonehand,Ontheotherhand銜接手段的使用，使句子過渡自然。高分方法高分詞匯

高分句式美化句子結(jié)構(gòu)高分詞匯show發(fā)人深省的deep目擊seetellgood惡化worsendevelopmentbesidesfaceaskindicate,unfold,display,revealthought-provokingwitnessconveyAdvantageousdeteriorateadvancementadditionallyconfrontinquire高分詞匯verybadgoodcustomersendappearcausestopexceeding,extremely,intenselydreadful,unfavorable,poor,adversepositive,favorable,promising,perfect,excellent,outstanding,superiorshopper,client,consumer,purchaserdeliveremergetriggerrestrain高分詞匯judgetrain培養(yǎng)oftenremove除去intention意向gethelpful有益的communicationdarkevaluatecultivatefrequentlyeliminateinclinationattainbeneficial,rewardinginteractiongloomy高分詞匯eternal永遠的destroybearemphasizerealclearoldcommonlimitpersuadeperpetual,permanentdevastateendurehighlightauthenticdistinctancientprevailingrestrainconvince高分詞匯moderntimestellfromBeunwillingtoBewillingtoBecertainthatFindfaultwith批判ApartfromSomeofcontemporaryagedistinguishbetweenBereluctanttoBeinclinedtoBeconvincedthatMakejudgmentsofthemeritsandfaultsofWiththeexceptionofAvariety/seriesof高分詞匯BerichinBegoodatDon’tknowhowtomakethechoiceAllkindsofReducethepressureBeinterestedinMoreandmorepeopleEverycoinhastwosidesInmyopinion…BeabundantinBecompetentinBeinadilemmaAgreatvarietyofAlleviatethepressureSth.appealtosbGrowingindividualsnogardenhasnoweedsFormypart,frommyperspective 美化句子結(jié)構(gòu)并列平行結(jié)構(gòu)IseizeeverychancetotakecoursesthatmayenlargeyhorizonforIwanttobeamanwithsharp,vividandimaginativemind.(詞的并列)Ifeveryoneisgrateful,oursocietywillbemoreharmonious,ourfamilywillhavemorehappiness,andwe,asindividuals,willhavemorebrightfutureforself-development.美化句子結(jié)構(gòu)非謂語動詞結(jié)構(gòu)：不定式，現(xiàn)代分詞，過去分詞Giventhefiercecompetitioninthejobmarket,studentsmightaswellmakemoreeffortsthannecessarytotakeupsocialpractice.被動語態(tài)：起到更加客觀、公正的效果Englishisnowwidelyusedinallfieldsandismorelikelytohelpyougetagoodjobinthetightjobmarket.美化句子結(jié)構(gòu)復合句

信息量大，輕重有別，能提現(xiàn)層次感。與簡單句交替使用，使行文波瀾起伏，富有層次感和生命力。包括三種類型：名詞性從句、形容詞性從句、副詞性(狀語)從句名詞性從句：that/whether/how/why/when/where引導，做主語或賓語。形容詞性從句：who/whom/whose/as/when等引導，做定語美化句子結(jié)構(gòu):特殊句式

1.倒裝句：OnlyinthiswaycanI/we….Bynomeanscanwe…2.強調(diào)句：Takingpart-timejobsisneverwithoutdrawbacks.Littledopeopletakeintoaccounttheseriousofthisproblem.(倒裝表強調(diào))It’sstabilitythatdestroyspeople’sambitionandbarricadespeople’ssteps.美化句子結(jié)