讀后續(xù)寫 爸爸的泡菜壇子講義 -2022屆高考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)備考

讀后續(xù)寫爸爸的泡菜壇子一2022屆高考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)備考作者小時候時常目睹父親把硬幣投進(jìn)泡菜壇子，為他將來上大學(xué)攢錢，等到作者大學(xué)畢業(yè)，有了工作，也成了家后回到父母家里時，卻沒看見父親的泡菜壇子，作者不免思緒萬千。作者會再次看到父親的泡菜壇子嗎？ThepicklejarasfarbackasIcanremembersatonthefloorinmyparentsbedroom.Whenhegotreadyforbed,Dadwouldemptyhispocketsandthrowhiscoinsintothejar.AsasmallboyIwasalwaysfascinatedbythesoundsthecoinsmadeastheyweredroppedintothejar.Theylandedwithamerryjinglewhenthejarwasalmostempty.Then,thefullerthejar,thedullerthesound.Takingthecoinstothebankwasalwaysabigjob.Eachtimewedrovetothebank,Dadwouldlookatmehopefully,saying,"Thosecoinsaregoingtokeepyououtofthesmalltown.,,Also,eachtimeheslidtheboxofrolledcoinsacrossthecounteratthebanktowardthecashier,hewouldshoutproudly,“Theseareformysonscollegefund.Hellneverworkatthemill（工廠）allhislifelikeme.”Whenwegothome,wewouldstartfillingthejaragain.Healwaysletmedropthefirstcoinsintotheemptyjar.Wesmiledateachotherastheymadeabrief,happyjingle.“You'llgettocollegeonpennies,"hesaid.Nomatterhowroughthingsgotathome,Dadcontinuedtodrophiscoinsintothejar.EventhesummerwhenDadgotlaidofffromthemill,notasinglecoinwastakenfromthejar.Theyearspassed,andIfinishedcollegeandtookajobinanothertown.Once,whilevisitingmyparents,Iusedthephoneintheirbedroom,andnoticedthatthepicklejarwasgone.Ithadserveditspurposeandhadbeenremoved.AlumproseinmythroatasIstaredatthespotbesidethedresserwherethejarhadalwaysstood.Mydadwasamanoffewwords,andneverlecturedmeonthevaluesofdetermination,perseverance（堅(jiān)持不懈），andfaith.Thepicklejarhadtaughtmeallthesevirtues.LanguageStudyI.DifficultphraseinsentenceEventhesummerwhenDadgotlaidofffromthemill,notasinglecoinwastakenfromthejar.語境：即使在夏天爸爸被工廠解雇的時候，爸爸也沒花罐子里的一分錢。分析：本句中，getlaidoff意為“被解雇”。II.UsefulsentencepatternsThen,thefullerthejar,thedullerthesound.語境：然后，罐子越滿，聲音變得越沉悶。分析：本句為“the+比擬級，the+比擬級”固定句型結(jié)構(gòu)，表示“越……越……Also,eachtimeheslidtheboxofrolledcoinsacrossthecounteratthebanktowardthecashier,hewouldshoutproudly,“Theseareformysonscollegefund.Hellneverworkatthemillallhislifelikeme.”語境：而且，每次他把裝著硬幣的盒子從柜臺那邊遞給銀行出納員的時候，他都會驕傲地大喊：“這是給我兒子上大學(xué)的基金。他不可能像我一樣，一輩子在工廠里工作?！狈治觯罕揪渲?，eachtime是連詞短語，意為“每次.????.ReadingCheck閱讀上面的文章，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。注意：.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；.續(xù)寫局部分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好。Paragraph1：WhenImarried,ItoldmywifeSusanaboutthesignificantpartthelowlypicklejarhadplayedinmylifeasaboy.Paragraph2：Shehandedthedaughterbacktomyfatherandledmeintomyparentsbedroom.寫作導(dǎo)引一、語篇研讀要想續(xù)寫內(nèi)容與所給短文之間邏輯連貫、銜接緊密，必須充分理解所給材料的大意，掌握作者想要傳達(dá)的意思。本文是一篇記敘文，文章分析如下：二、提問構(gòu)思基于原文本和續(xù)寫段落首句提供的信息并結(jié)合以上閱讀分析，采用圍繞中心提問相關(guān)問題的方法，構(gòu)思要續(xù)寫的兩段故事情節(jié)，一般分為三步。第一步，根據(jù)續(xù)寫第二段所給出的段首句倒推續(xù)寫第一段應(yīng)包括什么內(nèi)容。根據(jù)第二段的段首句“她把女兒還給了父親，把我領(lǐng)進(jìn)了父母的臥室”可知，續(xù)寫第一段要寫“作者妻子和女兒之間的事”，這樣才能確保續(xù)寫的兩段是相銜接的。第二步，圍繞續(xù)寫第一段所給出的段首句以及上面的分析進(jìn)行提問構(gòu)思。Whydidtheauthortellhiswifeofthepicklejar?Whatdidtheauthorswifeseeinhisparentsbedroom?Whydidtheauthorswifeleadhimtohisparentsbedroom?第三步，圍繞續(xù)寫第二段所給出的段首句進(jìn)行提問構(gòu)思。Whatdidtheauthorseeinhisparentsbedroom?Howdidtheauthorfeelwhenhesawhisfatherspicklejaragain?Whatwouldtheauthordowhenhesawhisfatherspicklejaragain?三、潤色成篇在續(xù)寫的過程中要注意情節(jié)連貫，各局部內(nèi)容相銜接，即：.兩段的續(xù)寫與所給短文的銜接；.每段的續(xù)寫與續(xù)寫段首句之間的銜接；.續(xù)寫的兩段之間的銜接。同時要注意語言風(fēng)格的一致和語法、句型以及所用詞語的準(zhǔn)確性。比方，刻畫人物形象時運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)?shù)男稳菰~使其栩栩如生;描寫人物心理活動時使用一些動詞或副詞使其細(xì)微深入。爸爸的泡菜壇子答案ReadingCheckParagraph1：WhenImarried,ItoldmywifeSusanaboutthesignificantpartthelowlypicklejarhadplayedinmylifeasaboy.Inmymind,itdefinedhowmuchmydadhadlovedme.ThefirstChristmasafterourdaughterJessicawasborn,wespenttheholidaywithmyparents.Afterdinner,Jessicabegantocrysoftly,andSusantookherfromDadsarms.“Sheprobablyneedstobechanged,"shesaid,carryingthebabyintomyparentsbedroom.WhenSusancamebackintothelivingroom,therewasastrangemistinhereyes.Paragraph2：Shehandedthedaughterbacktomyfatherandledmeintomyparentsbedroom.Tomyamazement,therestoodtheoldpicklejar,thebottomalreadycoveredwithcoins.Iwalkedovertoit,dugdownintomypocket,andpulledoutafistfulofcoins.