四六級寫作高分策略

四六級寫作高分策略1..盡量避免不應(yīng)該出現(xiàn)的錯誤：

只有評卷人認(rèn)可了你語法掌握的水平，他才會抱著寬容甚至欣賞的態(tài)度看你的句型設(shè)計，用詞和例證的援引。CET作文常見錯誤在實際的閱卷過程中，語法錯誤，是閱卷人員的主要“照顧點”，，大家可以設(shè)想一下，一篇語法上漏洞百出、嚴(yán)重影響表達(dá)的作文又會有什么樣的好內(nèi)容呢？因此，認(rèn)清各種各樣的語法錯誤，盡可能地避免少犯，對于提高作文分是有極大的幫助的?，F(xiàn)將閱卷過程中所發(fā)現(xiàn)的大量語言錯誤逐一歸類，抽出其中的典型錯誤，以警示大家。1.句子成分殘缺不全Wealwaysworkingtilllateatnightbeforetakingexams.(誤)

Wearealwaysworking(Wealwayswork)tilllateatnightbeforetakingexams(正)Weshouldreadbookswhichmaybeusefultous.(正)Weshouldreadbooksmaybeusefultous.(誤)2.句子成分多余Thistestisend,butthereisanothertestiswaitingforyou.(誤)

Onetestends,butanotheriswaitingforyou.(正)Thedriveroftheredcarwasdiedonthespot.(誤)Thedriveroftheredcardiedonthespot.(正)3.主謂不一致Someone/Somebodythinkthatreadingshouldbeselective.(誤)Somethinkthatreadingshouldbeselective.(正)

Mysistergotothecinemaatleastonceaweek.(誤)Mysistergoestothecinemaatleastonceaweek.(正)4.動詞時態(tài)、語態(tài)的誤用Iwaswalkingalongtheroad,andtherearenotsomanycarsonthestreet.(誤)

Iwaswalkingalongtheroadandtherewerenotsomanyvehiclesonthestreet.(正)Wehavelittletimetoreadsomebookswhichweinterest.(誤)Wehavelittletimetoreadsomebooksinwhichweareinterested.(正)Iamastudentwhohasstudyinginthecollegefortwoyears.(誤)Ihavebeenstudyinginthecollegefortwoyears(正)5.詞類混淆Itismypointthatreadingmustbeselectively.(誤)Inmyopinion,readingmustbeselective.(正)Honestissoimportantforeveryperson.(誤)Honestyissoimportantforeveryone.(正)Theoldmanwashitbyacarwhenheacrossthestreet.(誤)Theoldmanwashitbyacarwhenhewascrossingthestreet.(正)6.名詞可數(shù)與不可數(shù)的誤用

Toomuchtestsaredisadvantageforstudents’study.(誤)Toomanytestsaredisadvantageoustostudents.(正)Inthepresident’soffice,wehavefoundnewequipmentsofvariouskinds.(誤)Inthepresident’soffice,wehavefoundnewequipmentofvariouskinds.(正)7.動詞及物與不及物的誤用Thetrafficaccidentwastakenplaceatthejunctionoftwohighways.(誤)Thetrafficaccidenttookplaceatthejunctionoftwohighways.(正)Becauseofhisexcellentperformance,thebossrosehissalary.(誤)Becauseofhisexcellentperformance,thebossraisedhissalary.(正)8.介詞to和不定式符號的混淆Toomanytestswilldoharmtocultivateourindependentthinking.(誤)Toomanytestswilldoharmtothecultivationofourindependentthinking.(正)Allthesecontributedtosolvetheseriousproblem.(誤)Allthesecontributedtothesolutiontotheseriousproblem.(正)9.情情態(tài)態(tài)動動詞詞的的誤誤用用Itmaynotgoodtoourhealth.(誤誤)Itmaybenotgoodtoourhealth.(正正)Theyshouldspentmuchtime.(誤誤)Theyshouldspendmuchtime.(正正)10.Therebe句句型型的的誤誤用用Thereexistssomenewproblemssuchasbeingdishonest.(誤誤)Thereexist/arisesomenewproblemssuchasbeingdishonest.(正正)Therearemanystudentsthinkcollegeeducationisworthwhile.(誤誤)Therearemanystudentswhothinkcollegeeducationisworthwhile.(正正)11.動動賓賓搭搭配配不不當(dāng)當(dāng)Wemustpayattentiontoitandmakesolutionstotheproblem.(誤誤)Wemustpayattentionandfindasolutiontotheproblem.(正正)Italsomayhelpyoutomakesuccess.(誤誤)Itmayalsohelpyousucceed/obtainyourgoal.(正正)12.根根據(jù)據(jù)中中文文逐逐字字硬硬譯譯Ifsomeone’’sfamilysituationisnotwell,hecanapplyforloantobank.(誤誤)Ifone’’sfamilyisnotwelloff,hecanapplytothebankforaloan.(正正)Letalonetouchtheoutsideworldofcampus.(誤誤)Letalonegetintouchwiththeworldoutsideofthecampus.(正正)keepagoodbodyhealth.(誤誤)keepfit.(正)2.句句型要要有變變化性性考生不不可全全以簡簡單句句拼湊湊文章章，應(yīng)應(yīng)主動動使用用復(fù)句句、倒倒裝、、排比比、平平行結(jié)結(jié)構(gòu)及及動詞詞短語語，體體現(xiàn)出出良好好的語語言駕駕馭能能力。。以形容容詞或或形容容詞組組開頭頭Marywasverypleasedandtelephonedhermother．→Pleased，，Marytelephonedhermother．Thegirl，，hungryandthirsty，wentbackhome．．→Hungryandthirsty，thegirlwentbackhome．以副詞詞開頭頭Thechildstayedtherequietly．．→Quietly，，thechildstayedthere．以不定定式開開頭Hegotupveryearlytocatchthebus．→Tocatchthebus，hegotupveryearly．．以現(xiàn)在在分詞詞或過過去分分詞開開頭IwasfilledwithanticipationwhenIcamehomefromschoolthatdarkwinter‘‘sdaysolongago．．→Cominghomefromschoolthatdarkwinter‘sdaysolongago，Iwasfilledwithanticipation．．Ifyougivemeenoughtime，，Icandoitwell．→Givenenoughtime，，Icandoitwell．以介詞詞短語語開頭頭Chesterlikemanyotheradventurershadexperiencedfearandconqueredit．→Likemanyotheradventurers，，Chesterhadexperiencedfearandconqueredit．．以同位位語開開頭Sue，ourmonitor，alwayslikesgivingsuggestionstoeverybody．．→Ourmonitor，，Sue，，alwayslikesgivingsuggestionstoeverybody．以從句句開頭頭Francishadalreadysurprisedhisfriendsseveraltimesbeforehesailedroundtheworldsingle-handed．．→Beforehesailedroundtheworldsingle-handed，F(xiàn)rancishadalreadysurprisedhisfriendsseveraltimes．Youwillgreatlyimproveyourfinishedproductifyouhaveaqualitycontrolinspection．→Ifyouhaveaqualitycontrolinspection，youwillgreatlyimproveyourfinishedproduct．3.一一定要要學(xué)會會換詞詞，形象象具體體的代代替太太寬泛泛的。。（考考試中中一般般不要要出現(xiàn)現(xiàn)good,bad,many,thing,think,people,opinion等等等等）eg.Itis,therefore,hightimethatsomeapplicableapproacheswereimplementedbytheserviceindustrylikethat.Thus,itscompetitiveedgewillbesharpenedeffectively.applicable代代替proper,approaches代代替ways,implement代替替carryout,sharpenone''scompetitiveedge代替替enhanceone''scompetitiveness（提提高某某物競競爭力力）,ComputerandIIneverforgettheexceedinglythrillingdaywhenmymotherboughtmeacomputerasbirthdaypresent,whichexertedatremendousfascinationonmesothatiindulgedmyselfingooglinganarmyofusefulinformationihadexpected,andenjoyaseaofmelodiousclassicmusic.ThatnightIwassleepless,feelingthatthewholeworldbelongedtome.exceedingly替替換verythrilling替替換excitingsth.exertatremendousfascinationonsb替替換sb.beinterestedinsth.google替替換換searchanarmyof,aseaof替替換alotofThedawnofthenewcenturywitnessedtheincreasingpopularityofcomputers.Coincidentwiththeadvancementofscienceandtechnology,computerspouringintothecurrentsocietyasafashionareappealingtogrowingindividuals.Itisnoexaggerationtosaywehavebeensubmergedbythem,inlargemeasure!Thedawnofthenewcenturywitnessed是是一個個精彩彩句型型，用用來描描述在在某個個時期期發(fā)生生了什什么事事情；；Increasingpopularity替替換moreandmorepopularCoincidentwith……非非常地地道的的詞匯匯，表表達(dá)““與……一致致”的的意思思，替替換With……Advancement替替換developmentPourinto(floodinto/swarminto)替換換enterintoCurrent(currently)替換換nowAppealtosb.替替換sb.beinterestedinsth.Growingindividuals替替換moreandmorepeopleItisnoexaggerationtosay經(jīng)經(jīng)典典句型型，說說某某事是是毫不不夸張張的Forastart,wecan,freely,searchdesiredinformationatanymoment.Littlebylittle,ourknowledgewillbewellenriched,andourhorizonswillbegreatlybroadened.Additionally,wecangethugerecreationsonlinebychatting,playinggames,ordeliveringemail.Forastart替換TobeginwithWecan,freely,search用了插插入語的寫作作手法Ourknowledgewillbewellenriched,andourhorizonswillbegreatlybroadened用用了非常精彩彩的被動Additionally替換Inaddition/BesidesDeliver替換sendThereisnodenyingthat,however,computerscanfunctioninthedisserviceofhumanbeings,inaway,especiallythegrowingviolence,pornpictures,AV-filmsemergingonthescreen,whichleadsquietafewnetcitizenstocopying.Thereisnodenyingthat,however,computerscanfunctioninthedisserviceofhumanbeings,這個個句子有三個個精彩之處，，首先Thereisnodenyingthat這個句型型，還有however作為插入語語，functioninthedisserviceof替換doharmtoEmerging代替替appearing(fading代代替disappearing)Asaclassicproverbgoesthatnogardenhasnoweeds，computersdoplayapositiveroleinthedevelopmentofpeople'lives,despiteasliceofunfavorableimpacts.Weshould,therefore,takeadvantageofthefruitsandavoidtheoppositefacet.Nogardenhasnoweeds替換EverycoinhastwosidesComputersdoplay，do強調(diào)Positive替換換important/good等Asliceof替替換apartofUnfavorable替換badImpacts替換effects/influencesWeshould,therefore,takeadvantageof……使用插入入語Fruits(而且fruits用的非常常形象，merits/virtues)替換advantages(defects替替換disadvantages)Facet替替換aspect最經(jīng)典的替換換詞1.individuals,characters,folks代替people,persons2.positive,favorable,rosy(美好好的)，promising(有有希望的)，，perfect,pleasurable,excellent,outstanding代替good3.dreadful,unfavorable,poor,adverse(有害害的),belessimpressive代替替badeg.Anarmyofcollegestudentsindulgethemselvesinplayinggames,enjoyingromancewithgirls/boysorkillingtimepassivelyintheirdorms.Whenitapproachestograduation,asaresult,theyfindtheiracademicrecordsarelessimpressive.4.(anarmyof,anoceanof,aseaof,amultitudeof,many,ifnotmost)代替many.注：用many,ifnotmost一一定要小心心，many后一定要有有詞。Eg.Manyindividuals,ifnotmost,harbortheideathat……同理用most,ifnotall,代替most.5:asliceof,quietafew,several代替some6:harbortheideathat,taketheattitudethat,holdtheviewthat,itiswidelysharedthat,itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat)替替think(因為是書面面語，所以要要加that)7:affair,business,matter代替thing8:shared代代common9.reaphugefruits代替替getmuchbenefit)10:formypart,frommyownperspective代代替inmyopinion11:Increasing(ly),growing代代替moreandmore(注意沒有有g(shù)rowingly這這種形式。所所以當(dāng)修飾名名詞時用increasing/growing.修飾形形容詞，副詞詞用increasingly.Eg.sthhasgainedgrowingpopularity.Sthisincreasinglypopularwiththeadvancementofsth.12.exceedingly,extremely替替換very13.benefitial,rewarding代替替helpful14.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser,代替customer15.thrilling替換換exciting16.nevertheless代代but17.sthappealstosb,sthexertsatremendousfascinationonsb代替替sbbeinterestedin18.captureone'sattention代替attractone'sattention19.facet,demension,sphere代代aspect20.beindicativeof,besuggestiveof,befearfulof代indicate,suggest,fear21.giveriseto,leadto,resultin,trigger代代替cause22.magnificent,cute,pretty,gorgeous代替beautiful23.desire代代替want24.pourattentioninto代替payattentionto25.bearinmindthat代代替remember26.enjoy,possess代替替eraction代代替communication28.frownonsth代代替beagainst,disagreewithsth29.tonameonlyafew,asanexample代替forexample30.nextto/virtuallyimpossible,代替nearlyimpossible（后為精彩替換換詞）：31．idea/opinionnotion/standpoint/perspective/outlook32.reasonablerational/sensible/advisable33.considerponder/contemplate/deliberate34.useutilize/takeadvantageof35.deliver/sendconvey/transmit/transfer36.serioussevere/austere/stern37.obviousapparent/evident/transparent/conspicuous38.importantsignificant/crucial/critical/vital/fatal39.accordingtoinaccordancewith/basedon40.basicessential/fundamental/elemental/elementary41.main/chiefprincipal/primary/dominant/predominant/cardinal42.partportion/section/fraction43.public/commonordinary/extensive/comprehensive44.task/workassignment/commission45.method/waymeasure/mode/approach/remedy(指補補救的辦法)46.famousdistinguished/prominent/eminent/striking47.catchcapture/grasp/grip/(fig.)digest48.bigenormous/immense/tremendous/massive/sweeping/colossal/gigantic49.search/lookforgoogle/ransack/rummage50.finallyeventually/terminally/ultimately51.strikingastonishing/amazing/52.unbelievableincredible/ve/justifyconfirm/certify/substantiate54.variousdiverse/myriad/multitudinous/plexelaborated/sophisticated/complicated/intricate56.unchangingpermanent/constant/enduring57.instant/momentarytemporary/ephemeral/transient58.arbitrary武斷斷的59．topsummit/culmination/acme/zenith/peak60.improvepromote/accelerate/boost/enhance61.explaininterpret/illustrate/illuminate/elucidate/depict62.changealter/convert/transform/diversify/modify63.centrecore/kernel/nucleus64.agreeapprovesb.Ofsth./consenttodo/concurwithsb.indoingsth.65.don’tknowbeignorantofsth.66.inordertoforthesakeof67.abilityqualification/capacity/capability/competence68.buypurchase/procure69.about大約約approximate/estimated70.rule/principleregulation/doctrine/formula71.giveoffersth.tosb./provide……for……/supply…for…72.traditionalconventional/conservative73.dangerousperilous/hazardous/precarious74.actuallysubstantially/practically75.carefulcautious/discreet/prudent/scrupulous76.old/out-of-dateobsolete/ancient/ductivepregnant78．goodpartadvantage/merit/strength79.bravegallant/valiant/intrepid80.excellent/goodsplendid/glorious/brilliant/magnificent/marvelous81.naturalspontaneous/instinctive,inherent82.necessarycompulsory/obligatory/mandatory83.finishaccomplish/consummate84.carryoutimplement85.about關(guān)于于(prep.)regarding/concerning86.differencedivergence/inconsistency/discrepasy/incongruity87.notclearambiguous/suspicious/dubious/implicit88.decisivecrucial/critical89.cause/arousetrigger/stimulate/whet90.reformevolution/innovation91.citymetropolis92.admitacknowledge/concede93.avoidavert/dodge/evade94.start/beginembarkonsth./commencetodosth./initiatesth.95.giveupabandon/renounce/relinquish96.destroydevastate/demolish/exterminate97.puzzlebewilder/perplex/mystify98.surfacesuperficial/ostensible99.thecampustheIvoryTower100.thenet(internet)thefictitiousworld/theelectronicworld/thecyberworld101.alotofamultitudeof/agalaxyof102.manymyriad/umpteen103.wethepublic/theindividuals/thefolks104.asaresultconsequently105.popularprevalent4.主題句句放開開頭。。作為應(yīng)應(yīng)試手手段，，考生生應(yīng)現(xiàn)現(xiàn)實地地去爭爭取做做到開開宗明明義，，將主主題句句(TopicSentence)放放在在每段段開頭頭。將將提綱綱以主主題句句的形形式放放在每每段開開頭表表述出出來，，就可可避免免跑題題.5.寫好好第一一句話話。這樣容容易給給閱卷卷者留留下一一個好好印象象，最最好能能用上上一個個復(fù)句句，里里面要要用上上2-3個個難的的單詞詞或詞詞組。6.主主動使使用生生動的的成語語、諺諺語及及有說說服力力的引引語。。每次練練習(xí)時時，把把這些些成語語、諺諺語、、引語語劃出出來，，以強強化主主動使使用的的意識識。例例如，，在論論述求求知的的艱難難時，，可引引用Thereisnoroyalroadtolearning.(做學(xué)問問無捷捷徑可可走)7.學(xué)學(xué)會回回避。。譬如，，想表表示某某人過過著豪豪華的的生活活，可可以說說Helivedakindofluxuriouslife.但但考考生如如不會會寫luxurious這這個個詞，，不妨妨回避避，切切勿生生拼硬硬造。。考生生可以以說Hehadacar,abighouseandalargecompany.breadcar----microbus/van“MrKong””,““teacherKong”----Confucius，agreateducatorinthehistoryofChina．孟孟子是是Menciustheboyputtingsheep，theboysendingsheep,theboyMUsheep,-----shepherd,thelittleboy，，8.主主動使使用過過渡詞詞。例如使使用firstly,secondly,tomakelongshort,moreover,however,furthermore等等等，，這樣樣，會會使文文章層層次清清晰，，也使使自己己思路路清楚楚。9.注注意避避免邏邏輯錯錯誤。。例:1997年年1月月六級級考試試作文文題目目為HasteMakesWaste，，一考考生的的第一一段第第一句句為Thefasterthebetter，，becausetheycansavetimeinthisway.這樣樣寫顯顯然不不妥，，因為為這樣樣寫，，就等等于認(rèn)認(rèn)定快快并可可以省省時.10.適當(dāng)當(dāng)用被被動代代替主主動，句子子開頭頭不要要總是是用we/I（（比比如寫寫結(jié)尾尾時不不用weshouldpayattentionto而而用Attentionshouldbepaidto.））經(jīng)典結(jié)結(jié)尾：：Itis,therefore,hightimethatsomeapplicableapproacheswereimplementedbytheserviceindustrylikethat.Thus,itscompetitiveedgewillbesharpenedeffectively.１1.善于于使用用插入入語，比如如說把把副詞詞、連連接詞詞等，，作插插入語語放在在中間間，一一般放放在主主語、、動詞詞或者者助動動詞后后，兩兩邊分分別加加上逗逗號。。如如however/therefore/forexample/Ibelieve做做插插入語語放在在中間間，一一般放放在動動詞，，助動動詞后后，兩兩邊分分別加加上逗逗號。。比比如如說：：Otherindividuals,however,taketheattitudethat……１2．．字?jǐn)?shù)數(shù)要足足夠。但不要要寫得得太長長(四四級在在120-180之之間；；六級級在150-200之間間)，，否則則容易易引起起閱卷卷者的的反感感。１3.卷卷面要要整潔潔。卷面潦潦草字字跡不不清的的文章章，常常常還還沒有有看到到內(nèi)容容就會會使人人產(chǎn)生生厭惡惡。。14.擇語語的準(zhǔn)準(zhǔn)確性性Donotwritesothatyourwordsmaybeunderstood,butwritesothatyourwordsmustbeunderstood.Thedifferencebetweentherightwordandthealmost-rightwordisasgreatasthatbetweenlightingandthelightingbug.(MarkTwain)15.多多余的或或轉(zhuǎn)彎抹抹角的詞詞語都不不利于明明白地表表達(dá)思想想莎士比亞亞的名言言“Brevityisthesoulofwit”,相相當(dāng)于漢漢語的““言貴簡簡潔”。。mutualaid(toeachother)(mutual)aidtoeachother，(anentirely)completeconfidence，，repeatthequestion(again)，，Return(back)fromabroad，etc.Task1:Replacetheunderlinedparts1.Inmyopinion,thosewhoareagainsttheInternetthinkthatithasalotofadvantages.Frommyperspective,theopponentsoftheInternetholdtheviewthatithasanumberofadvantages.Task1:Replacetheunderlinedparts2.Ingeneral,wecansafelydrawtheconclusionthatmovingtosuburbisgoodtoacity’’sgrowth.Inaword,wecansafelycometo/arriveattheconclusionthatmovingtosuburbbenefitsacity’’sdevelopment.Task1:Replacetheunderlinedparts3.Ontheonehand,theteachershouldpunishthelazystudents;ontheotherhand,suchphenomenashouldbereported.Foronething,theteachershouldimposepunishmentonthelazystudents.Foranother,suchphenomenashouldbereported.Task1:Replacetheunderlinedparts4.Inthecurrentsociety,somepeopledreamofmakingmuchmoneyovernightandtakeriskstoproducepiratedproducts.Inthepresentsociety,somepeopledreamofmakingafortuneovernightandtakeriskstoproducepiratedproducts.Task1:Replacetheunderlinedparts5.Nowadays,everyoneofushasbeenfacedwithmanyinstancesofdishonesty.Nowadays,everyoneofushasbeenconfrontedwithmanycasesofdishonesty.Task1:Replacetheunderlinedparts6.Butinsomecases,talkingistherightchoice.Nevertheless,undersomecircumstances,talkingistherightcho