Unit 1 Whats the matter？八年級英語下學期單元話題寫作（人教版）

1、2021-2022八年級英語下學期單元話題總分值寫作Unit 1： Whats the matter?單元話題：talk about health problems 討論健康問題并給建議” 范文1.由于新型冠狀病毒肺炎(COVID-19)的爆發(fā)，幾個月來我們不得不待在家里。正因 如此，這次疫情教會了我們重新審視自己的習慣，更好地生活。請根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇80 詞左右的英語短文，談談保持健康的秘訣。短文的開頭已給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)。提示：1 .多鍛煉，多喝水，均衡膳食(have a balanced diet)；.早睡早起，保持充足的睡眠；.多吃蔬菜和水果，健康飲食；Because of the

2、 COVID-19, we had to stay at home for months. It taught us to take a second look at our habits and to live better.【答案】參考范文Because of the COVID-19, we had to stay at home for months. It taught us to take a second look at our habits and to live better. Here are some tips to keep healthy.First, we shou

3、ld do more exercise and have a balanced diet. Drink more water every day. Second, wed better go to bed early and get up early to keep enough sleep. Third, why not eat more vegetables and fruit every day? As we know, they are good fbr our health. Whats more, to be healthy, we cant play too much compu

4、ter games. We can read more books about health.In a word, there are many ways to make us healthy. You can find some and try them.【詳解】題干解讀：題目要求寫一篇關于保持健康的秘訣的英語短文；要求包含所有提示內(nèi)容。寫作指導：時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主；采用第一人稱。文章可使用3段落格式，第一段：開 門見山，引出下文；第二段：描述保持健康的秘訣；第三段：總結(jié)全文，保持健康的秘訣 很多。范文22.你的朋友Jack由于長時間玩電腦游戲，現(xiàn)在頭痛、眼睛不舒服、腰背酸痛，并且睡不好覺

5、。請根據(jù)上述材料，寫一篇80詞左右的短文介紹一下他的情況，并給出你對他的建議。【答案】參考范文Jack is my friend. He likes playing computer games very much. He often sits in the same way for too long without moving. Now he has a headache, sore eyes and a sore back. He doesnt sleep well at night, so he feels tired every day.I think he should take

6、breaks away from the computer. He shouldnt use the computer for a long time. He should do eye exercises to relax his eyes and go to bed early at night.I think if he has a good rest, he will feel well soon.【詳解】.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容介紹Jack的情況，并針對他的問題 給出建議。注意要點要齊全，可適當發(fā)揮。.寫作指導：寫作時要以第三和第一人稱來行文，時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時

7、。作文可分為三段， 第一段表達問題；第二段給出建議；第三段收尾。要保證語言連貫，無語法和拼寫錯誤。范文3. Mike昨晚頭疼，沒睡好覺。今天早上去了醫(yī)院，醫(yī)生量過他的體溫后發(fā)現(xiàn)他并沒有發(fā) 燒，只是有點兒感冒。醫(yī)生給他開了一些藥，讓他每天吃兩次，多喝熱水，好好休息。最 后，醫(yī)生建議他每天鍛煉身體。請你根據(jù)以上信息及下面提示，寫一篇不少于80詞的短文。提示：1. What is the matter with Mike?How many times does Mike should take the medicine?What did the doctor advise him to do?要求：

8、.包含所有提示，可適當發(fā)揮；.開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。Mike didnt sleep well last night【答案】范文Mike didnt sleep well last night because he had a headache. His father took him to the hospital this morning. After taking his temperature, the doctor told him that there was nothing serious. He didnt have a fever, but had a little co

9、ld. Then the doctor gave him some medicine and asked him to take it twice a day. The doctor also told him that he should drink more hot water and have a good rest.At last, the doctor advised him to do more exercise every day because exercising will help him stay healthy. I hope he will be better soo

10、n.【詳解】.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。題目要求是根據(jù)所給信息和提示，寫一篇不少于80詞 的短文。要包含所有提示內(nèi)容，可適當發(fā)揮；短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。.寫作指導：本文人稱主要以第三人稱為主，時態(tài)主要是一般過去時。首先要認真審題， 看清題目中的要求和要點，圍繞主題展開作文；根據(jù)提示要點，列出本文的寫作提綱，提 綱包括所有提示要點。然后緊扣要點，動筆寫作，在寫作過程中，要注意時態(tài)、主謂一致 等問題，不要出現(xiàn)語法錯誤；最后要細心復核檢查，確保正確無誤。范文44假如你是王朋，你在美國的筆友杰克(Jack)來信告訴你說他總是覺得很疲憊，導致上課 不能集中精力聽講。請根據(jù)參考詞匯寫一封不少于

11、80詞的回信，向他提一些建議。信的開 頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：should, help, exercise, keep healthy, sleep, try Dear Jack,I am sorry to hear that you often feel tired. Let me give you some advice.Yours, Wang Peng【答案】參考范文Dear Jack,I am sorry to hear that you often feel tired. Let me give you some advice.First you should eat

12、 breakfast every morning. Eating breakfast can help you study well. Then you should do more exercise after school. Doing exercise can make you keep healthy. It is also very important to sleep eight or nine hours a night. Good sleep can make you feel good and study well in the day. Try to have a heal

13、thy lifestyle and then you can study well.Yours,Wang Peng 【詳解】,題干解讀：該題目屬于書信作文。題目要求是假如你是王朋，請你根據(jù)參考詞匯，給在 美國的筆友杰克(Jack)寫一封不少于80詞的回信，關于他總是覺得很疲憊，導致上課不能 集中精力聽講的問題，向他提一些建議。信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。.寫法指導：這是一篇應用文，注意信件的格式。本文給出了一些參考詞匯，并給出了作 文的開頭和結(jié)尾。我們要做的就是根據(jù)要求列出寫作要點，用正確的英語把要點表達出 來，并適當發(fā)揮想象說出自己的觀點。然后緊扣要點，動筆寫作，在寫作過程中，要注意

14、 主謂一致等問題，不要出現(xiàn)語法錯誤；最后要細心復核檢查，確保正確無誤。范文5.書面表達假如你是Kate,你的朋友Mary病了。請根據(jù)下面表格中的提示寫一封信，告訴她該做什 么，不該做什么。要求：1.注意書信格式。2. 70詞左右。ShouldShouldntdrink a lot of watergo to bed latehave a good restwork too hardsee a doctorget tired【答案】Dear Mary,Im sorry to hear youre not feeling well. First, I thing you should drink

15、a lot of hot water with honey. Second, dont get tired, and try to relax yourself. Third, you shouldnt go to bed too late or work too hard. You should have a good rest. If you dont get better, you should see a doctor and do as the doctor tells you. I hope you feel better soon.Yours,Kate【詳解】 這是一篇給材料作文

16、，要以書信的形式來完成寫作，首先要注意書信的格式，其次要根據(jù) 所提供的要點，選擇恰當?shù)木涫饺ソM織材料，注意情態(tài)動詞should, shouldnt后跟動詞原 形，因為列舉的建議較多，為了條理更清晰，可以使用first, second, third條目來介紹。 高分句型一：Im sorry to hear you9re not feeling well.聽說你身體不舒服,我很難過。be sorry to do sth 很 難過做某事，這是不定式表原因。高分句型二:If you dont get better, you should see a doctor and do as the docto

17、r tells you.如果你沒有好轉(zhuǎn)，你應該去看醫(yī)生，按照醫(yī)生告訴你的去做。if引導條件狀語從句，時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時；seea doctor看醫(yī)生。范文6.書面表達。假如你是Martin,你的筆友Alice在給你的來信中說她經(jīng)常生病，情緒低落。請你給她寫 封回信，告訴她應該怎樣做。參考詞匯：healthy food, do more exercise, enough sleep, keep happy, talk about your problems.要求：1 .根據(jù)參考詞匯，并適當發(fā)揮；2.字數(shù)不少于70詞，注意字跡工整。Dear Alice,Im sorry to hear that y

18、ou are not very well and feel unhappy.【答案】Dear Alice,Fm sorry to hear that you are not very well and feel unhappy. Here is my advice about how to keep healthy. A balanced diet can help you to keep in good health.Youd better eat more healthy food. It is good fbr you to eat a lot of vegetables, fruit and drink milk every day. And you should do more exercise, s