2018年8.18寫(xiě)作高分班課件lesson4-agree or disagree1筆記版

1、議論文介紹段+核心段+結(jié)尾輕松搞定6-新浪微博： 杜仕明-學(xué)為T(mén)owhatextent doyouagreeor議論文介紹段+核心段+結(jié)尾輕松搞定6-新浪微博： 杜仕明-學(xué)為T(mén)owhatextent doyouagreeor1我到底要贊同還是不贊同啊要不哪邊好寫(xiě)就寫(xiě)哪邊吧(寫(xiě)了100詞以后)完蛋！寫(xiě)不下去了要不把兩邊都寫(xiě)了吧完蛋！我到底贊我到底要贊同還是不贊同啊要不哪邊好寫(xiě)就寫(xiě)哪邊吧(寫(xiě)了100詞以后)完蛋！寫(xiě)不下去了要不把兩邊都寫(xiě)了吧完蛋！我到底贊不贊同啊不管了，反正都討論到了核心段只能講解你自己的觀點(diǎn)或者陳述事實(shí)絕對(duì)不要花大量筆墨去討論別人的看法三種可能的個(gè)人觀1. completely

2、agree- (出現(xiàn)的幾率最低，因?yàn)轭}目中經(jīng)常出現(xiàn)極端限定詞 2. completely disagree- 逐一反駁咯(比較高的可能性,懟起來(lái)很爽.但是你的懟人能力有限 3. 一分為二(其實(shí)相當(dāng)于部分贊同，但我要求必須是一個(gè)明確的個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)， 要求比較高的掌控力 雖然我承認(rèn), 但是我認(rèn)為(出場(chǎng)幾率最大，但千萬(wàn)不要寫(xiě)題目里沒(méi)有的東西 我認(rèn)為是否應(yīng)該取決于(別亂用，一定要確保有明確的劃分標(biāo)準(zhǔn) 我認(rèn)為和都應(yīng)該被重視(使用幾率很少，除非你實(shí)在分不出高低弱強(qiáng) 2候經(jīng)常在題目里設(shè)定極端限定詞，這就導(dǎo)致完全贊同的寫(xiě)候經(jīng)常在題目里設(shè)定極端限定詞，這就導(dǎo)致完全贊同的寫(xiě)輯藏在某個(gè)小角落，萬(wàn)一有時(shí)候能用到呢改寫(xiě)觀點(diǎn)

3、，然后表達(dá) 完全贊同贊同理由-贊同理由-贊同理由-In conclusion, 重復(fù)自己的觀點(diǎn)Somepeoplethinkthatunpaidcommunityserviceshouldbea compulsorypartofhighschoolprogrammes(suchasworking foracharity,improvingtheneighbourhoodorteachingsports to young children).Towhatextentdoyouagreeor3 technology,butsomegroupsofpeoplehavenotbenefitedatal

4、l. To what extent do you agree or disagree?The 21st century has seen a large number of changes that are beyond our wildest expectations. Oneoftheseadvances technology,butsomegroupsofpeoplehavenotbenefitedatall. To what extent do you agree or disagree?The 21st century has seen a large number of chang

5、es that are beyond our wildest expectations. Oneoftheseadvancesistherapiddevelopmentofcommunicationstechnology. Theadvantages of convenience and high efficiency brought by digital communication are obvious, but I do not think that everyone has access to these benefits.Digital forms of communication

6、enable many people, mainly including students, families as well asentrepreneurs,toreapthemaximum benefits.From aneducationalperspective,learningcanbe incrediblyefficientandeffective,asstudentshavingtheinternetconnectioncanvirtuallysolveall their puzzles by browsing teaching websites or asking for he

7、lp from teachers simultaneously.Internet-based communication also contributes positively to strengthening family relationships and increasing closeness between family members. For example, students who attend boarding schools or study abroad are able to keep in daily contact easily with parents by s

8、ending greeting messagesorcamerachatting.Whatismore,companiescanberunatamuchlowercostbecause theinternetandcomputershelptoexpandbusinesscheaplyandbecauseinformationtechnology allows employees to work at home, which saves most of the rents for office space.4However, I would argue that the benefits of

9、 information and communication technology are restrictedtocertaingroupsofusers.Inotherwords,somepeople,particularlytheoldandthe poor, are not beneficiaries of modern ways of communication. With regard to the former, a largepercentageofelderlypeopleareunableandHowever, I would argue that the benefits

10、 of information and communication technology are restrictedtocertaingroupsofusers.Inotherwords,somepeople,particularlytheoldandthe poor, are not beneficiaries of modern ways of communication. With regard to the former, a largepercentageofelderlypeopleareunableandreluctanttoadapttonewtechnology,which

11、 means that they barely enjoy the convenience and fun brought by the devices.As for people living in extreme poverty, mobile phones, computers and any other electronic devices are luxuries.All web-based activities mean nothing to them, neither making them relaxed nor providing them with career oppor

12、tunities.In conclusion, I agree with the idea that technological advances in information and communicationhavejustbroughtbenefitstoacertaingroupofpeople,eventhoughitisa largegroup.有的題目讀起來(lái)簡(jiǎn)直喪心病狂。作為作者，只想懟死這個(gè)就好改寫(xiě)觀點(diǎn)，然后表達(dá) 完全不贊同不贊同理由-不贊同理由-不贊同理由-In conclusion, 重復(fù)自己的觀點(diǎn)5Some people believe that wild animals

13、 have no place in the 21stcentury,soprotectingthemisawasteofresources.what extent do you agree or Some people argue that it is pointless to spend money on the protection of wild animalsbecausewehumanshavenoneedforthem.ISome people believe that wild animals have no place in the 21stcentury,soprotecti

14、ngthemisawasteofresources.what extent do you agree or Some people argue that it is pointless to spend money on the protection of wild animalsbecausewehumanshavenoneedforthem.Icompletelydisagreewiththis point of view.In my opinion, it is absurd to argue that wild animals have no place in the 21st cen

15、tury. IdonotbelievethatplanetEarthexistsonlyforthebenefitofhumans,and there is nothing special about this particular century that means that we suddenly havetherighttoalloworencouragetheextinctionofanyspecies.Furthermore,there is no compelling reason why we should let animals die out. We do not need

16、 to exploit or destroy every last square metre of land in order to feed or accommodate theworldspopulation.Thereisplentyofroomforustoexistsidebysidewithwildanimals,andthisshouldbeourI also disagree with the idea that protecting animals is a waste of resources. It is usuallytheprotectionofnaturalhabi

17、tatsthatensuresthesurvivalofwildanimals,and most scientists agree that these habitats are also crucial for human survival. For example,rainforestsproduceoxygen,absorbcarbondioxideandstabilisetheEarths climate. If we destroyed these areas, the costs of managing the resulting changes to our planet wou

18、ld far outweigh the costs of conservation. By protecting wild animals and their habitats, we maintain the natural balance of all life on Earth.Inconclusion,wehavenorighttodecidewhetherornotwildanimalsshouldexist, and I believe that we should do everything we can to protect them6Foreign visitors shou

19、ld pay more than local visitors for cultural and historical attractions. To what extent do youagreeordisagreewith this1).Itissometimesarguedthattouristsfromoverseasshouldbechargedmorethan localresidentstovisitimportantsitesForeign visitors should pay more than local visitors for cultural and histori

20、cal attractions. To what extent do youagreeordisagreewith this1).Itissometimesarguedthattouristsfromoverseasshouldbechargedmorethan localresidentstovisitimportantsitesandmonuments. Personally,Icompletely disagree with this opinion.2). First of all, it is unfair to ask foreign tourists to pay more wh

21、en visiting tourist attractions.Although local people have helped with the maintenance of these sites throughtaxes,foreigntouristsalsocontributesignificantlytotheeconomyofthehost countrywiththemoneytheyspendonawiderangeofgoodsandservices,including food, souvenirs, accommodation and travel. Therefore

22、, the governments and inhabitants of every country relying on international tourism should be happy to subsidize important tourist sites and encourage more people from the rest of the world to visit them.3). In addition, if travelers realized that they would have to pay more to visit historical and

23、culturalattractionsinaparticularnation,theywouldperhapsdecidenottogotothatcountryon holiday. If overseas tourists stopped coming due to higher prices, there would be a risk of insufficient funding for the maintenance of these important buildings. Therefore, most tourist sites charge the same price r

24、egardless of nationality, and this helps to promote the nations culturalheritage.TotaketheUKasanexample,thetourismindustryandmanyrelatedjobsrely on visitors coming to the country to see places like Windsor Castle or Saint Pauls Cathedral.4). Finally, chargingforeigntouristsdifferentlymaycausemoretro

25、ublethanbenefits.More specifically, it takes extra time to distinguish local residents from foreigners and this can be especiallydifficultwhenpeopledonothaveanyidentificationwiththem.Asaconsequence, there may be chaos at the ticket office.5). Inconclusion, Ibelievethateveryeffortshouldbemadetoattrac

26、ttouristsfromoverseas,itwouldbecounterproductivetomakethempaymorethanlocal7Individuals can do nothing to change society. New developments can be only brought about by governments andlargeinstitutions.Towhatextentdo youagreeor.Opinions are divided on whether it is possible for individuals to make cha

27、nges to society. I believetherearemanyexamplesofindividualscientists,inventorsorevenpoliticalactivists Individuals can do nothing to change society. New developments can be only brought about by governments andlargeinstitutions.Towhatextentdo youagreeor.Opinions are divided on whether it is possible

28、 for individuals to make changes to society. I believetherearemanyexamplesofindividualscientists,inventorsorevenpoliticalactivists whohavemadesignificantcontributionswhichhavebenefitedtheirsocietiesormankindin general. Therefore, I completely disagree with the given statement.Onefieldinwhichindividu

29、alshavemadepositivechangesisthatof science,examplesof which are medicine and electricity. With regard to the former, a British scientists called Sir Alexander Fleming accidentally discovered penicillin when he noticed that bacteria could not survive near certain fungi. This discovery, the first anti

30、biotic, has saved millions of lives.Asfaraselectricityisconcerned,perhapsthegreatestscientistofallwasNicolaTesla, without whose inventions in this field we might not have the safe system of distributing electricitybyalternatingcurrentthatwehavetoday. Amonghisotherinventionswereradio waves which are

31、used to broadcast TV and radio, and of course wifi.Apartfromscience,anumberof politicalactivists havealsomadesignificantcontributions to their societies, and have helped to win freedom for their people. Perhaps the mostfamous of these was Mahatma Gandhi, an Indian lawyer who helped to win independen

32、ce for his nation from the British with his unique style of peaceful protest, which was later an inspiration to other leaders in the 20th century. For example, in the US, a black civil rights leadercalledMartinLutherKingacknowledgedtheinfluenceofGandhi. Kingspassionate styleandnon-violentprotestsaga

33、instsegregationhelpedtobringaboutpoliticalchangefor black people in that country.In conclusion, the scientists, inventors, and activists mentioned above show clearly that individualscancontributegreatlytotheirsocieties,soitisnottruethattheycannotchange 8思考這個(gè)問(wèn)平思考這個(gè)問(wèn)平的世界。你是否贊同此觀點(diǎn)被嚴(yán)重依賴的一分為二邏一分為二的邏輯被嚴(yán)重依

34、賴，這是因?yàn)閮蓚€(gè)原因。首先，這種寫(xiě)法能充分保障字?jǐn)?shù)；其次，這種構(gòu)思能體現(xiàn)你對(duì)所給觀點(diǎn)的全面認(rèn)識(shí)。一分為二寫(xiě)法最重要的是第一段不用回答 agree or disagree ，而是需要用一個(gè)明確的句子來(lái)預(yù)告整個(gè)核心段結(jié)構(gòu)。覆蓋更全面的一分為二邏1。Ibelievethat 一句話寫(xiě)出你的清晰觀點(diǎn)(前面)2Itistruethat/Iacceptthat/Iadmitthat 這里有ntopicsentence)3However/NeverthelessIwouldarguethat 4Inconclusion, 9“雖然但是”的一分為Somepeoplethinkthat allyoungpeop

35、le shouldberequiredhavefull-timeeducationuntiltheyare18yearsold .Towhat extent do you agree or disagree with it?“雖然但是”的一分為Somepeoplethinkthat allyoungpeople shouldberequiredhavefull-timeeducationuntiltheyare18yearsold .Towhat extent do you agree or disagree with it?“雖然但是”的一分為Someeducationistssuggest

36、thateverychildshouldstayatschoolreceivingfull-time educationuntiltheygrowup. Despitetheimportanceofreceivingschooleducation until 18, in my opinion, it is not suitable for everyone.On the one hand, it is widely accepted that receiving education at school as long as possiblepreparesyoungchildrenbette

37、rfortheirworkandlifeinthefuture.Withregard to the former, this is especially true in the knowledge-based world where decent jobs and well-paid positions are available mostly to those equipped with knowledge of a wide range of subjects, such as science, foreign languages and computer skills.As for ev

38、eryday life, qualities acquired from good schooling also play a crucial role. For example,inmostprimaryandsecondaryschools,studentsarerequiredtogetinvolved inmoraleducation,whichteachesthemtheimportanceofobeyingrulesand“雖然但是”的一分為Ontheotherhand,therearemanychildrenwhohavetoorchoosetodropoutofschoolat

39、a much earlier age than 18. For example, as the cost of living has been rising, some parents have no choice but to rely on their teen children who work full time and earn a regular paycheck. Without such a financial support, the family may be in a poor living condition andevenfacedebtproblems.Inaddi

40、tion,someyoungchildrenareexceptionallytalentedin sport or art. Rather than staying at school like the majority of children, home schooling or attendingaspecialtrainingprogramseemstobeabetteroptionformaximizingtheirinnate Inconclusion,Istronglybelievethatafteracertainage,suchas16,teenagersshouldbe al

41、lowed the freedom to make their own decisions for their future, depending on their individualconditions.“取決于”的一分為T(mén)ask2：Toomuchmoneyisspentlookingafterandold buildings. We should knock them down and build modern ones instead. Do you agree or disagree?“取決于”的一分為Mostgovernmentsarefacedwith“取決于”的一分為T(mén)ask2

42、：Toomuchmoneyisspentlookingafterandold buildings. We should knock them down and build modern ones instead. Do you agree or disagree?“取決于”的一分為Mostgovernmentsarefacedwiththedilemmaofwhethertospendahugeamountmoneyprotectingoldbuildingsorsimplyknockthemdown. Inmyopinion,whetheranold building should be t

43、orn down and make way for a new one mainly depends on its value in terms of art and history.Ontheonehand,itisnotwiseforthegovernmenttoinvestfinancialandotherresourcesin protecting some valueless old buildings in spite of their centurial existence. If a house or towercloselyresembleshundredsofotherbu

44、ildingsintermsofdesignandfunction,thenit would be a waste of money to keep it alive. The government instead should consider makingspaceformodernbuildings,especiallythosehigh-riseones,whichwillbefollowed by a range of benefits, such as increasing affordable housing supply and improving living “取決于”的一

45、分為On the other hand, it is undoubtedly worthwhile to preserve buildings with historic and artistic meanings even at a significant cost. The first reason is that these buildings attract people from domestic cities and all over the world. Whether the feeling is patriotic or exotic, visitors to these m

46、eaningful sites can be spiritually satisfied and at the same time makeeconomiccontributionstothecity.Inaddition,todaysdesignersmaybeabletolearn from some creatively designed and well erected buildings. For example, a century-old mansion may be a textbook illustrating modern developers how to constru

47、ct houses that could withstand the fiercest of hurricane.Inconclusion,Idonotagreethatalloldbuildingsshouldbedemolishedwithouttaking their unique meanings into consideration. Culturally and historically valuable old architectural works are worth preserving and protecting.一樣重要”的一分為T(mén)ask2: In many count

48、ries ，prison is the common solution to the problem of crime. However a more effective way is to provide people with better education so that they will notbecomecriminals. Towhat extentdo youagree or一樣重要”的一分為Manyplacesaroundtheworldare一樣重要”的一分為T(mén)ask2: In many countries ，prison is the common solution t

49、o the problem of crime. However a more effective way is to provide people with better education so that they will notbecomecriminals. Towhat extentdo youagree or一樣重要”的一分為Manyplacesaroundtheworldaretroubledbyanincreasingnumberofcrimes.Inorderto combat this problem, governments have been seeking the b

50、est solution. In my opinion, providing better education and punishing offenders strictly are equally effective to lower the crime rate.Thereisnodoubtthateducationhasacriticallyimportantroletoplayincrimeprevention andthisisparticularlyevidentinthisknowledge-basedcentury.Studieshaveshownthata large pr

51、oportion of offenses are committed by poorly educated people who can neither makealivingwithouttheskillsandknowledgeacquiredfromschoolnorareawareofthe line between legal and illegal. Therefore, if the government makes more effort towards eliminating illiteracy and improving academic competence, crim

52、es such as theft, robbery and violent attack can be effectively prevented. .一樣重要”的一分為However, even though the access to education has been guaranteed, the possibility of breaking the law still remains. This is because apart from poverty and lack of legal awareness,therearemanyotherreasonsforcommitti

53、ngacrime,suchasgreed,envyand vengeance.Therefore,theestablishmentofprisonsisaseffectiveaseducationtoprevent crime,servingthepurposeofdeterringpotentialoffenders.Byconfiningprisonerswithin anextremelysmallareaandtakingawaytheirfreedomtomeetfamilies,lawenforcement departments can punish them with pain

54、 both psychologically and physically.As a result, those who intend to receive bribes or abuse animals may weigh the cost carefully.Inconclusion,althoughensuringthateverycitizenhastheaccesstobeingsufficiently educated contributes positively to reducing crimes, locking up criminals is equally effectiv

55、e and extremely necessary.介紹段的可能1.改寫(xiě)原題觀點(diǎn) + 自己的觀點(diǎn)-最常2.事實(shí)背景 + 改寫(xiě)原題觀點(diǎn) + 自己的觀點(diǎn)-容易重復(fù)詞3.事實(shí)背景 + 自己介紹段的可能1.改寫(xiě)原題觀點(diǎn) + 自己的觀點(diǎn)-最常2.事實(shí)背景 + 改寫(xiě)原題觀點(diǎn) + 自己的觀點(diǎn)-容易重復(fù)詞3.事實(shí)背景 + 自己的觀點(diǎn)-難度最是否贊同的介紹Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollutionproblems.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagreewiththisopinion?版本一It is sometimes argued that the increase in the price of fuels can be the best solutiontoproblemsrelatedtotrafficandenvironment. Icompletelydisagreewiththis 版本二It is sometimes argued that t