四級作文之圖畫作文完整版課件

1、四級圖畫作文1A作文四大要素根據(jù)教育部公布的大綱解析，大作文四大要素為描述、寓意、分析、評論。根據(jù)歷年考題，首段應(yīng)是圖畫描述，不應(yīng)發(fā)表太多議論，否則屬于跑題。圖畫描述至少應(yīng)有兩句，根據(jù)大綱解析，如果圖畫只字未提，扣三分之一的分?jǐn)?shù)；如果圖畫只描述一句，屬于描述不充分，扣3分。2A寫作框架：1）第一段主要是描述圖畫中的信息和表達的含義。2）第二段的全文的重點，一般都是要求具體分析圖畫中暗含的社會現(xiàn)象。3）第三段的要求一般視具體的試題而定，有的要求給出自己的評論、有的要求舉例、有的要求考生提出自己的建議以及針對現(xiàn)象應(yīng)該采取的措施。Tips：第二段和第三段的開頭最好寫一個主題句，既可以防止離題，又符合

2、英文寫作的習(xí)慣。3A議論文框架結(jié)構(gòu)：3段，12句，120180詞，35個關(guān)聯(lián)詞，35個從句第一段：引言/起始/淘金段，圖畫描述，3句1. 總體描述：人物/動物/事物動作環(huán)境 1句2. 挖掘細節(jié)詞、串連成句： 1句3. 文字說明/象征寓意： 1句4A第二段：主體段，意義闡釋，5句1. 主題句：象征寓意，1句2. 論證：3句1）因果論證2) 影響論證3) 舉例論證 3. 小結(jié)：概括論證，總結(jié)本段 1句 5A第三段：結(jié)論段，建議措施，4句1. 結(jié)論句：1句2. 針對雙方提建議：2句3. 包裝結(jié)尾、展望未來：1句Only in this way can we solve this problem.It

3、 is high time that we solved this problem.6A 第一段套話如何描述7A首段寫法其實，閱卷教師最重視的就是大作文第一段，也是最難寫的段落，盲目套用模板、空發(fā)議論，容易導(dǎo)致低分。閱卷教師最希望看到的寫法是:首句總體描述圖畫，點出人物、動作和環(huán)境；次句挖掘細節(jié)詞、串連成句，將圖中細節(jié)一網(wǎng)打盡；（根據(jù)情況而定）末句點出文字說明或象征寓意?？梢园l(fā)表議論，最好不要太多。8A描述圖畫的常用詞有關(guān)圖畫的名詞描述圖畫的形容詞修飾動詞的副詞“寓意”、“字幕”如何翻譯？9A替換picture的詞語drawing 指用線條或色彩繪成的圖畫。cartoon 指幽默或諷刺性漫畫。

4、(amusing drawing in a newspaper or magazine, esp one that comments satirically on current events (報刊上的)漫畫；（尤指）時事諷刺畫。)portrait 指肖像，只用于指人。illustration 插畫10A描述圖畫的形容詞 thought-provoking發(fā)人深省的enlightening 有啟迪作用/使人感悟的compelling/striking/intriguing引人注目/引起興趣profound含義深刻 =far-reaching implicationsinstructive有益

5、的（=informative）（搭配ADV: extremely, highly, most, particularly, quite ）amusing 令人發(fā)笑的， ridiculous 荒謬可笑的illuminating (particularly revealing or helpful) 富有啟發(fā)性的；很有助益的；impressive 印象深刻的， exaggerative 夸張的11A修飾動詞的副詞：graphically/ vividly生動地symbolically象征性地conspicuously/ clearly / explicitly 清晰地subtly巧妙地，精細地12

6、A寓意： moral/ implications/ messagehave a profound implicationbe pregnant with meaningentertain a thought deeply13A字幕:Caption: words printed with an illustration or a photograph in order to describe or explain it （附於插圖、照片上的）說明文字1) We are informed by the caption that “_”. 2）The caption reads/indicates

7、that “_”.14A 第一句描述圖畫怎么寫？15A第一段常用首句句式As is shown/ depicted/ portrayed in the picture/ cartoon,.The picture above vividly describe.The drawing above does demonstrate certain thought-provoking social phenomenon.What does the author intend to convey by describing. is that .16A描述圖畫時需要遵循以下步驟：尋找出圖畫的中心事物，并確

8、定中心事物的位置。描述中心事物，可以從動作和狀態(tài)兩個方面來描述。尋找中心事物周圍相關(guān)的事物，并進行簡單的描述。17A屌絲版：There is a man who is running on the playground. He is rushing to the final. The final is defined as another new start.1. 句型單一，2. 不具備可復(fù)制18AAs is shown in the picture, + 完全倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)（主系表 表系主）+ 非謂語動詞結(jié)構(gòu)+定語從句There is a man who is running on the pla

9、yground.On the playground runs a young man.19AAs is shown in the picture, + 完全倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)（主系表 表系主）+ 非謂語動詞結(jié)構(gòu) +定語從句There is a man who is running on the playground. He is rushing to the finnal.On the playground runs a young man, rushing to the finnal.20AAs is shown in the picture, + 完全倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)（主系表 表系主）+ 非謂語動詞結(jié)構(gòu) +

10、定語從句There is a man who is running on the playground. He is rushing to the finnal. The final is defined as another start.On the playground runs a young man, rushing to the finnal， which is defined as another start.21A某個位置有中心事物 中心事物什么樣 周圍事物什么樣 完全倒裝 非謂語動詞 非限定性定從22A常見可用于四級寫作的完全倒裝的系動詞有 be, come, run, wal

11、k, jump, sit, stand, lie, crouch蜷縮, float等表示動作的動詞。23A屌絲版：As is shown in the cartoon, a candle is shining in the dark. It spreads brightness around itself.女神版：As is shown in the cartoon, in the picture stands a candle, spreading brightness around itself.24A屌絲版：As is shown above, a young man was askin

12、g his barber to have his hair cut like David Beckham.女神版：As is shown above, in the chair sits a young man, asking his barber to have his hair cut as cool as David Beckham.25A屌絲版：As is vividly depicted above, there is a bottle falling to the ground, the wine spile out. One man thinks its all over, wh

13、ile the other one thinks it still left a little.女神版：As is vividly depicted above, in the picture lies a bottle, falling to the ground with wine spilt out . One man who looks very sad thinks its all over, while the other one, happily rushing to the bottle, says it still left a little.26AAs is vividly

14、 depicted in the cartoon above, in the picture stands a boy, worried about disposing of nuclear waste, while his father instructs him to empty the dustbin in his room first. (33 words)27AAs is vividly depicted in the cartoon above, in front of blackboard stands a teacher, teaching mathematics, howev

15、er, one of her students holds the opinion that the knowledge he is learning might be outdated by the time hes in the job market. (42 words)28AAs is vividly depicted in the cartoon above, in the classroon stands a teacher, asking her student to read a work of literature as if he were reading a long t

16、ext-message, while the student feels rather unpleasant. (37 words)29Apractice makes perfect30A You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact.31AAs is vivi

17、dly depicted in the cartoon above, in the middle of a room sits a boy, typing letters continuously and intensively, who totally ignored his mother staring at the monitor with a blank face. (35 words)32AYou should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on learning and the

18、n explain why education doesnt simply mean learning to obtain information.33AYou should start your essay with a brief account of the increasing use of the mobile phone in peoples life and explain the Consequence of overusing it.34A第一段第二句由圖片描述上升到文字說明或寓意的闡釋35A由淺入深之句型Simple and funny as the cartoon is,

19、 it reflects that .The picture implicitly含蓄地，暗示地 raises the question of the importance of .The picture seems to be humorous at first glance/sight，but on second thoughts (=after reconsideration), you can find the fact that_. The primary purpose of the pictures above is that due attention should be pa

20、id to .As is vividly depicted in the cartoon above, in the picture stands a boy, worried about disposing of nuclear waste, while his father instructs him to empty the dustbin in his room first.Simple and funny as the cartoon is, it reflects that the father intends to advise his son to do small thing

21、s before undertaking big.37AAs is vividly depicted in the cartoon above, in front of blackboard stands a teacher, teaching mathematics, however, one of her students holds the opinion that the knowledge he is learning might be outdated by the time hes in the job market.The picture implicitly raises t

22、he question of the importance of the fundamental skills students learn in our classes.38AAs is vividly depicted in the cartoon above, in the classroon stands a teacher, asking her student to read a work of literature as if he were reading a long text-message, while the student feels rather unpleasan

23、t. The primary purpose of the picture above is that due attention should be paid to the importance of basic skills.39A看累了，練一個唄40A You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace

24、 face-to-face contact.41AAs is vividly depicted in the cartoon above, in the middle of a room sits a boy, typing letters continuously and intensively, who totally ignored his mother staring at the monitor with a blank face.The picture seems to be humorous at first glance，but on second thoughts, you

25、can find the fact that due to the wide use of computers and the development of Internet, more and more people like to chat on the Internet. We tend to pay more attention to electronic communication than to face-to-face contact.42AYou should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the

26、Internet on learning and then explain why education doesnt simply mean learning to obtain information.43AYou should start your essay with a brief account of the increasing use of the mobile phone in peoples life and explain the Consequence of overusing it.44A第二段：即主體段落如何寫？45A第二段：主體段，意義闡釋，5句1. 主題句：象征寓

27、意，1句2. 論證：3句1）因果論證2) 影響論證3) 舉例論證 3. 小結(jié)：概括論證，總結(jié)本段 1句 46Atopic sentencedevelopment: sub idea 1 development: sub idea 2brief conclusionLinking devices47A主題句（全段核心，全文關(guān)鍵,必寫）The symbolic meaning of the picture is to show us that importance should be attached to.The purpose of the drawer is to show us that

28、due attention has to be paid to .The picture illustrates the real meaning of .Undoubtedly, the drawing has symbolically revealed a serious problem in our daily life, .The cartoon conveys the meaning that A is like the process of B. (比喻類)The purpose of the picture is to remind us of the fact that we

29、should not neglect the significance of.過渡句(“原因如下” ）的表述：Several factors, (both individual and social), could account for the (negative/ positive) phenomenon.The reasons for the phenomenon may be complicated, but we can , to a large extent，ascribe/ owe/attribute (歸結(jié)于) it to the following factors.The p

30、urpose of the picture is to remind us of the fact that we should not neglect the significance of fundamental skills. （主題句）The reasons for the phenomenon can be attributed to the following factors. （過渡句）找原因！2-3條1. 學(xué)習(xí)基礎(chǔ)知識不但能幫助我們獲得高等的技能，還能培養(yǎng)我們的情操。2. 基本技能永遠不會過時，因為它在日常生活和工作中仍然具有實用性。50Amastering the basic

31、 skills can not only help us acquire the advanced skills, but also cultivate our characters along the way we learn it.the basic skills will never be out of date and they remain very practical in our daily life and work.1. 掌握基礎(chǔ)知識不但能幫助我們獲得高等的技能，還能培養(yǎng)我們的情操。2. 基本技能永遠不會過時，因為它在日常生活和工作中仍然具有實用性。51A下面具體指出幾個原因

32、，第一個原因可以用Among the most important reasons cited by people is.Obviously, a variety of complicated factors contribute to the phenomenon, with the following one being the foremost.第二個原因可以用：Another important reason is.Also playing a part is.第三個原因可以用：The third reason, which can not be neglected, is that.

33、In addition, (名詞) is also responsible for the phenomenon.last but not least, .52AAmong the most important reasons cited by people is that mastering the basic skills can not only help us acquire the advanced skills, but also cultuvate our characters along the way we learn it.Moreover, the basic skill

34、s will never be out of date and they remain very practical in our daily life and work. (55 words)for one thing, for anotheron the one hand, on the other hand53AThe picture illustrates the real meaning of dealing with trivial things first. （主題句）Several factors could account for the phenomenon. （過渡句）找

35、原因1+21. 做小事不僅能夠培養(yǎng)我們的情操，而這正是做大事所需要的，而且還能磨礪人的耐性。2. 正如一句言語所說，細節(jié)決定成敗，成功往往取決于小事情上。54ADoing small things can not only help us cultivate the good qualities that we need in undertaking important tasks, but also develop our patience.As a proverb goes, it is detail that determines success, which was made up o

36、f by small things. 55AThe picture illustrates the real meaning of dealing with trivial things first. （主題句）Several factors could account for the phenomenon. （過渡句）For one thing, doing small things can not only help us cultivate the good qualities that we need in undertaking important tasks, but also d

37、evelop our patience. For another, as a proverb goes, it is detail that determines success, which was made up of by small things. (66 words)56Apractice makes perfect57A You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whethe

38、r electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact.58AThe purpose of the picture is to remind us of the fact that electronic communication can never replace face-to-face contact. （主題句）The reasons for the phenomenon can be attributed to the following factors. （過渡句）找原因！2-3條1. 網(wǎng)上聊天不能完全表達自己的想法。

39、2. 網(wǎng)上聊天不能給人真實的心里安慰。59AWhen we chat with others online, we cannot express our feelings fully.We know that body language plays an important role in our communication, but the electronic communication cannot do this. 1. 網(wǎng)上聊天不能完全表達自己的想法。(浪費時間，造成交流障礙)2. 網(wǎng)上聊天不能與面對面的安慰相比。(一個真正的擁抱遠比文字好)60AAmong the most imp

40、ortant reasons cited by people is that we cannot express our feelings fully when we chat with others online.A typical example is that co-workers tend to send e-mails or instant messages through the Internet even when they are sitting next to each other. As words can never convey the full message, it

41、 usually takes much more time and rounds of conversation than face-to-face communicationMoreover, We know that body language plays an important role in our communication, but the electronic communication cannot do this. For example, when we are sad, we need more love and warmth, a real hug from our

42、parents or friends can mean much more to us than just words through electronic communication. for one thing, for anotheron the one hand, on the other hand61AYou should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on learning and then explain why education doesnt simply mean le

43、arning to obtain information.62AUndoubtedly, the drawing has symbolically revealed a serious problem in our daily life, education doesnt simply mean learning to obtain information.（主題句）Several factors could account for the phenomenon. （過渡句）找原因1+2教育不僅僅是信息的獲得，還包括實驗技能 ，性格的發(fā)展，和同輩的交流等。63AThe reason why e

44、ducation doesnt simply mean learning to obtain information is that education is not limited to the hard facts or theories students can learn from their textbooks or the Internet. It relates to a wider scope ranging from the obtainment of practical skills to the development of characters, which are h

45、ard for students to learn simply by googling.Consequently, comprehensive learning in schools that includes learning knowledge, conducting experiments and communicating with peers is what true education is.64A列舉影響It will exert a profound influence.The positive effects, which are widely accepted, can

46、be listed as follows.The negative effects, which are generally acknowledged, are presented below.To begin with, to make matters worse, worst of all65A列舉影響法的模板如果全段都講的是正面影響，主題句可以寫成：is beneficial in more than one ways.如果全段都講得是負面的影響，主題句可以寫成： is harmful in more than one ways.具體到連接全段的框架可以套用如下句型：The immedi

47、ate result it produces is The influence is not confined to what is mentioned above. Whats more. Perhaps the most serious consequence (obvious advantage) is 66A1. 過度使用手機影響健康。（走路使用手機過馬路危險，舉例。或?qū)е陆暎?. 降低人與人之間交流的能力。3. 影響文化水平。（漢字不會寫）67AThe purpose of the picture is to remind us of the fact that we should

48、 not neglect the consequence of overusing mobile phone. The influence for the phenomenon may be complicated, but we can, to a large extent，attribute it to the following factors. First, it leads to countless health problems including short sight,especially for children. Whats more, overusing mobile p

49、hone can change our lives patterns and undercut the ability of communication between people. Last but not least, having access to the cell phone at an early age can directly affect literary competence of Chinese new generation, who cant even write a complete composition without consulting their phon

50、es.68A主體段落萬能角度69A物質(zhì)回報.can provide people with not only delicious food but fashionable colthes and such benefits as comfortable dwellings and handsome aotomobiles.individuals and organizations can make money, take profits and even obtain wealth by doing .It can improve ones living standards and make

51、an easy an comfortable life.70A提供快捷信息.provides people with up-to-date, concrete and accurate and vivid information.can shrink the distance between cities and even continents, smooth the communication between residents and rid of the barrier between people.71A安全角度. can shield people from various kind

52、s of hazards ranging from injury, robbery, assaults.can secure peoples food, health and shelter.72A身心角度.can relieve not only pressure but also anxiety and such problem from isolation and solitude.It can lessen peoples stress, pressure and tension.It cultivates an optimistic view toward the world, an

53、d extends peoples life span.can also have added benefit of increasing ones knowledge, giving us a new perspective of the outside world.73A受益角度It can broaden ones mind, enrich ones experience, enhance vigor and put more enthusiasm to ones work.74A有助成長和成功people can obtain mental comfort or spiritual b

54、ack from .through . they cultivate the spirit of competition, participation and cooperation and finally find their own ways to fulfill their pursuit of happiness.75A文化價值觀It can promote mutual understanding，narrow the gap between people.the increasing cultural exchanges bring with it far greater rewards than culture itself. 76A第三段寫作策略77A結(jié)尾段落四六級寫作，一般來說如果能用寥寥數(shù)字總結(jié)或概括