人教版八年級(jí)下冊(cè)英語(yǔ)課件 Unit 5 寫作素養(yǎng)提升練

1、寫作素養(yǎng)提升練人教版八年級(jí)下 Unit 5 What were you doing when the rainstorm came? 人教版八年級(jí)下天有不測(cè)風(fēng)云，人有旦夕禍福。一些突發(fā)的災(zāi)難或事故留給人們的記憶是悲傷的、長(zhǎng)遠(yuǎn)的。平安和健康是那么重要，我們要從事故中吸取教訓(xùn)，避免類似的傷害發(fā)生。讓我們生活在更精彩的世界里吧！假如你所在中學(xué)的?？陂_辟了英文專欄，征集發(fā)生在大家身邊的感人故事。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，為該專欄投稿。要點(diǎn)提示：1. 在一個(gè)寒冷的早晨，你買早餐時(shí)看到前面的女孩買了面包和牛奶。2. 女孩要離開時(shí)，發(fā)現(xiàn)樹下有一位老乞丐，他看上去又冷又餓。3. 女孩走到乞丐身旁，把食物遞給了他。4

2、. 乞丐向女孩道謝，女孩微笑著離開。5. 你很感動(dòng)參考詞匯：乞丐beggar;感動(dòng)be moved【謀篇布局】理清文章要素，構(gòu)建文章結(jié)構(gòu)。交代時(shí)間、人物時(shí)間：on a cold morning人物：a girl; an old beggar介紹事情的經(jīng)過was going to leave; found; cold and hungry; came up to; said thanks to; left; smile介紹我的感受was moved; decided【遣詞造句】就結(jié)構(gòu)圖中的要點(diǎn)和詞語(yǔ)寫出句子。1. 當(dāng)我正買早餐時(shí)，我看見在我前面的女孩買了一些面包和牛奶。While I was _

3、, I saw a girl in front of me _.2. 當(dāng)那個(gè)女孩要離開時(shí)，她發(fā)現(xiàn)樹下有一個(gè)老乞丐。When the girl _, she found _.buying breakfastbuy some bread and milkwas going to leavean old beggar under the tree3. 那個(gè)女孩走到他身旁，把她的早餐給了他。The girl _ and _.4. 當(dāng)那個(gè)乞丐向女孩道謝時(shí)，女孩什么也沒說并且微笑著走開了。When the beggar _, she said nothing and _ on her face.came

4、up to him gave her breakfast to himsaid thanks to the girlwent away with a smile5. 我被那個(gè)女孩所做的事感動(dòng)了。I _ by what the girl did.was moved【巧妙銜接】利用連詞，使句子意思連貫。簡(jiǎn)述事情發(fā)生時(shí)用一般過去時(shí)和過去進(jìn)行時(shí)，這兩種時(shí)態(tài)的配合建立起上下文的邏輯聯(lián)系。全文按照事情的發(fā)展過程來描述，運(yùn)用連詞when或while，使文章過渡自然?！具B句成篇】On a cold morning, while I was._【精彩范文】On a cold morning, while I w

5、as buying breakfast, I saw a girl in front of me buy some bread and milk. When she was going to leave, she found an old beggar under the tree. He looked cold and hungry. The girl came up to him and gave her breakfast to him. When the beggar said thanks to the girl, she said nothing and went away wit

6、h a smile on her face.I was moved by what the girl did. Her kindness touched me a lot. I decided to learn from her and be a kind person. I should help the people in need from now on.上個(gè)星期日下午三點(diǎn)，我市突然下起大暴雨，你的朋友們正在做著不同的事情。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面表格的內(nèi)容，寫一篇80詞左右的短文。NameDoingPlaceJulia看書城市圖書館Jim等公共汽車在公交站Tim and Mike觀看動(dòng)物表演在動(dòng)物

7、園里Peter and I打電腦游戲在我家里_A heavy rainstorm hit our city at 3：00 p. m. last Sunday. My friends in the city were doing different things at that time. Julia was reading in the city library. She could hear strong winds outside and the rain beat heavily against the windows. Jim was waiting for the bus at the bus stop. He didnt take an umbrella with him，so he was all wet. Tim and Mike were watching the animal shows in the zoo. Luckily, they found_somewhere to get out of the rain. Peter and I were playing computer games in my home. However，because of the loud noise outside, we could