人教版（2019）必修第三冊Uni 3Diverse Cultures寫作指導(dǎo)

1、如何用英語寫游記寫作任務(wù)假定你是李華，最近你和朋友參加了某旅行社組織的敦煌三日游活動。請你根據(jù)所給提示用英語寫一篇游記。行程活動內(nèi)容第一天參觀莫高窟及其附近的紀(jì)念品商店。第二天到鳴沙山騎駱駝、滑沙、參觀月牙泉。第三天參觀敦煌古城。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。參考詞匯：鳴沙山Mingsha Mountain；月牙泉Crescent Lake；滑沙sandboarding_寫作指導(dǎo)一、審題定調(diào)本寫作任務(wù)要求寫一篇以記錄行程為主的游記。游記類作文寫作時應(yīng)注意以下幾點：1.按游覽的順序或時間來寫；2.寫出景物的特點；3.適當(dāng)抒發(fā)自己的情感或發(fā)表自己的看法。游記類作文的

2、時態(tài)以過去時為主，人稱多用第一人稱。二、謀篇布局本寫作可以分為三部分：第一部分：簡述旅行概況（最近參加了敦煌三日游活動）；第二部分：描述旅行過程及所見所聞（具體的三日游活動介紹）；第三部分：表達(dá)旅行感受（對敦煌之旅的評價）。三、組織語言第一部分：簡述旅行概況。普通表達(dá). visited / paid a visit to . and stayed there for three days.高級表達(dá). made a three-day tour of ., which was impressive.第二部分：描述旅行過程及所見所聞。普通表達(dá)As soon as we arrived, we we

3、nt straight to visit . are famous for their statues and wall paintings.After lunch, we visited . and saw many beautiful souvenirs there.The next day, we went to .We experienced the“singing sand”and enjoyed the beautiful Crescent Lake there.We also took part in some activities including camel riding

4、and sandboarding.Lastly, we spent the third day in .高級表達(dá)On our arrival, we headed straight to ., which are famous for their statues and murals (壁畫).After lunch, we went around ., where we were impressed by a wide range of fine souvenirs.The following day we experienced the“singing sand”of ., as well

5、 as appreciating the beautiful Crescent Lake.Besides, we had so much fun there participating in (參加) many exciting activities, such as camel riding and sandboarding.Lastly, we had a fun day in .第三部分：表達(dá)旅行感受。普通表達(dá)We were tired but our trip to . was really unforgettable.高級表達(dá)Exhausted (筋疲力盡的) as we were,

6、 the trip to . was worth it.范文展示普通范文My friends and I paid a visit to Dunhuang recently and stayed there for three days.As soon as we arrived, we went straight to visit the Mogao Caves. They are famous for their statues and wall paintings. After lunch, we visited some souvenir shops near the Mogao Ca

7、ves and saw many beautiful souvenirs there. The next day, we went to Mingsha Mountain. We experienced the “singing sand” and enjoyed the beautiful Crescent Lake there. We also took part in some activities including camel riding and sandboarding. Lastly, we spent the third day in the Dunhuang Old Cit

8、y.We were tired but our trip to Dunhuang was really unforgettable.高級范文The other day, my friends and I made a three-day tour of Dunhuang, which was impressive.On our arrival, we headed straight to the Mogao Caves, which are famous for their statues and murals. After lunch, we went around some souvenir shops near the Mogao Caves, where we were impressed by a wide range of fine souvenirs. The following day we experienced the “singing sand” of Mingsha Mountain, as well as appreciating the beautiful Crescent Lake. Besides, we had so much fun there participating in many exciting activities, such