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1、 1、四級(jí)評(píng)分原那么和規(guī)范、四級(jí)評(píng)分原那么和規(guī)范(Principles and Standards) 2、常見錯(cuò)誤、常見錯(cuò)誤(Mistakes) 3、應(yīng)對(duì)戰(zhàn)略、應(yīng)對(duì)戰(zhàn)略(Strategies) 4、常用句型、常用句型Useful Structures)評(píng)分原那么評(píng)分原那么 1、檢查考生能否到達(dá)大學(xué)英語教學(xué)大綱規(guī)、檢查考生能否到達(dá)大學(xué)英語教學(xué)大綱規(guī)定的四級(jí)教學(xué)要求。定的四級(jí)教學(xué)要求。 2、采用總體評(píng)分、采用總體評(píng)分Global Scoring)方法方法 閱卷人員就總的印象給出獎(jiǎng)勵(lì)分閱卷人員就總的印象給出獎(jiǎng)勵(lì)分reward scores),而不是按言語點(diǎn)的錯(cuò)誤而不是按言語點(diǎn)的錯(cuò)誤數(shù)目扣分。數(shù)目扣分

2、。 3、 從內(nèi)容和言語兩方面對(duì)作文進(jìn)展綜合判從內(nèi)容和言語兩方面對(duì)作文進(jìn)展綜合判別。作文應(yīng)表達(dá)標(biāo)題所規(guī)定的內(nèi)容。評(píng)分要?jiǎng)e。作文應(yīng)表達(dá)標(biāo)題所規(guī)定的內(nèi)容。評(píng)分要思索文章能否切題，能否清楚而適宜地表達(dá)思索文章能否切題，能否清楚而適宜地表達(dá)思想，言語錯(cuò)誤能否呵斥了解妨礙。思想，言語錯(cuò)誤能否呵斥了解妨礙。評(píng)分規(guī)范按百分制評(píng)判評(píng)分規(guī)范按百分制評(píng)判 1、總分值15分 2、閱卷規(guī)范分五等：2分，5分，8分，11分，14分 3、檔次評(píng)分規(guī)范 2分， 5分， 8分， 11分，14分2分一塌糊涂 條理不清，言語支離破碎或大部分句子均有條理不清，言語支離破碎或大部分句子均有錯(cuò)誤，且多數(shù)為嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤。錯(cuò)誤，且多數(shù)為嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤

3、。 Nowdays, Social appeared more more free Admissions to museums. its in order to people wasted money. In adition, rich in peoples life and increase more knowldeges. But some people thought free Adimssions to museums have brought much problems. In hand, a plenty of people visited5分糊里糊涂 根本切題，表達(dá)思想不清楚，銜

4、接性差，有較多嚴(yán)根本切題，表達(dá)思想不清楚，銜接性差，有較多嚴(yán)重言語錯(cuò)誤。重言語錯(cuò)誤。 In order to enrich the culture of people, more and more musuems were provided free admissions. Somebody thought it would take some problems like that. The first, because of free admissions of Museums were attracted a large numbers of people who interested i

5、n all around the world. And those who take part in effected the traffic crowed around the museums, even though affected people who live in next to the museum life8分馬馬虎虎 根本切題。根本切題。 有些地方表達(dá)思想不夠清楚，文字勉強(qiáng)有些地方表達(dá)思想不夠清楚，文字勉強(qiáng)銜接；言語錯(cuò)誤相當(dāng)多，有一些是嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤。銜接；言語錯(cuò)誤相當(dāng)多，有一些是嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤。 There is an interesting and instractive pictu

6、re which goes like this: More and more museums are free for people. They want more people go to museums. But some people argue that it make some trouble for free for people. The reason is the economy of the museums would be worse than before. Worst of all, it may take a mess for more people come to

7、the museums. 11分清清楚楚 切題。表達(dá)思想清楚，文字銜接，但有少量言語錯(cuò)切題。表達(dá)思想清楚，文字銜接，但有少量言語錯(cuò)誤。誤。 Now more and more museums are free without charge to the public. Does that make any sence? Free admission to musuems helps us save money, but it also encourages us to go to museums to learn something else and get more knowledge. T

8、his contributes to improve the living level of the public. It can certainly let us know more about our country and the world, which has a good effect on our development. Every coin has two sides. It can also bring some problems. For example,14分漂美麗亮 切題。表達(dá)思想清楚，文字照射、銜接，根切題。表達(dá)思想清楚，文字照射、銜接，根本上無言語錯(cuò)誤。本上無言語

9、錯(cuò)誤。 ExampleFree Admission to Museums?越來越多的博物館如今免費(fèi)向公眾開放越來越多的博物館如今免費(fèi)向公眾開放,目的是目的是有人以為這樣做會(huì)帶來一些問題有人以為這樣做會(huì)帶來一些問題在我看來在我看來 Nowadays, more and more museums are open to the public for free. Free admissions to museums will motivate peoples interests in history, arts and science. In this way, museums can provid

10、e people with easier access to knowledge, which is of vital importance for the whole nation. However, some people hold that free admissions to museums can bring about many problems. Since anybody can enter a museum without paying, the museum can be overcrowded and it will be a difficult job for muse

11、ums to maintain their collections. Besides, museums will face financial problems since they cant make profits from the admission fee. Due to the decrease in profits, museums have less motivation to up-date their collections and out-of-date museums cant avoid the fate to close up in the long run. In

12、my opinion, free admissions to museums are good for the public, but on the other hand they may pose problems to the museum management. Governments should provide help to museums and guide them to serve the public better.常見錯(cuò)誤 1、篇章：引子過長，構(gòu)造混亂、篇章：引子過長，構(gòu)造混亂 2、句子構(gòu)造：缺乏根本的句子認(rèn)識(shí)，只需、句子構(gòu)造：缺乏根本的句子認(rèn)識(shí)，只需詞匯的堆砌詞匯的堆砌

13、 3、詞匯：拼寫、動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)、名詞單復(fù)數(shù)、詞匯：拼寫、動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)、名詞單復(fù)數(shù)、描畫詞副詞比較級(jí)別、固定搭配、詞匯的描畫詞副詞比較級(jí)別、固定搭配、詞匯的選擇等方面錯(cuò)誤選擇等方面錯(cuò)誤應(yīng)對(duì)戰(zhàn)略 1、篇章：開門見山，直奔主題。運(yùn)用適宜、篇章：開門見山，直奔主題。運(yùn)用適宜的方法展開主題句適當(dāng)背誦一些模版的方法展開主題句適當(dāng)背誦一些模版 2、句子構(gòu)造：適當(dāng)運(yùn)用從句、倒裝句、非、句子構(gòu)造：適當(dāng)運(yùn)用從句、倒裝句、非謂語動(dòng)詞、插入語，從而使文章句子構(gòu)造謂語動(dòng)詞、插入語，從而使文章句子構(gòu)造略微復(fù)雜而富于變化。略微復(fù)雜而富于變化。 但是最為重要的是：但是最為重要的是： 寫對(duì)每個(gè)句子！寫對(duì)每個(gè)句子！ 英語四級(jí)作文八種常用

14、句型英語四級(jí)作文八種常用句型一一.緣由緣由 1. A number of factors might contribute to (lead to )(account for ) the phenomenon (problem). 2. The answer to this problem involves many factors. 3. The factors that contribute to this situation include. 4. The change in .largely results from the fact that. 5. One of the most

15、common factors (causes ) is that . 6. Another contributing factor (cause ) is . 7. Perhaps the primary factor is that 8. But the fundamental cause is that 二二.比較比較 1.The advantages far outweigh the disadvantages. 2.The advantages of A are much greater than those of B. 3.For all the disadvantages, it

16、has its compensating advantages. 4.Like anything else, it has its faults. 5.A and B have several points in common. 6. A and B differ in several ways. 7. Evidently, it has both negative and positive effects. 8. People used to think ., but things are different now. 三三.批駁批駁 1)It is true that ., but one

17、 vital point is being left out. 2) Some people say ., but it does not hold water. 3) Many of us have been under the illusion that. 4) A close examination would reveal how ridiculous the statement is. 5) It makes no sense to argue for . 6) Too much stress placed on . may lead to . 7) Such a statement

18、 mainly rests on the assumption that . 8) Contrary to what is widely accepted, I maintain that .四四.后果后果 1. It may give rise to a lot of problems. 2. The immediate result it produces is . 3. It will exercise a profound influence upon. 4. Its consequence can be so great that. 五五.舉例舉例 1) A good case in

19、 point is . 2) As an illustration, we may take . 3) Such examples might be given easily. 4) .is often cited as an example. 六六.證明證明 1) No one can deny the fact that . 2) The idea is hardly supported by facts. 3) Unfortunately, none of the available data shows . 4) Recent studies indicate that . 5) Th

20、ere is sufficient evidence to show that . 6) According to statistics provided by ., it can be seen that . 七七.開篇開篇 1) Many nations have been faced with the problem of . 2) Recently the problem has been brought into focus. 3) Recently the phenomenon has become a heated topic. 4) Recently the issue has aroused great concern among . 5) Nowadays there is a growing concern ove