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1、初中英語書面表達(dá)初中英語書面表達(dá)寫作技巧指導(dǎo)寫作技巧指導(dǎo)brainstormTeenagerscolorful lifeWe study .We like listening to music.We play computer games for long.We like reading books.We often playSports.We go to KFC .Sometimes we travel.Sometimes we stay up studying.Teenagershealthy lifeWe study all day.We like listening to music.
2、We play computer games for long.We like reading books.We often playSports.We go to KFC.Sometimes we travel.Sometimes we stay up studying. 認(rèn)真認(rèn)真審題審題,找出文章要表達(dá)的中心。找出文章要表達(dá)的中心。寫作第一步健康很重要。在學(xué)習(xí)和健康很重要。在學(xué)習(xí)和工作的壓力日趨增大的工作的壓力日趨增大的今天,會(huì)休息的人才會(huì)今天,會(huì)休息的人才會(huì)有健康的身體。人們是有健康的身體。人們是如何度過假期的呢?國如何度過假期的呢?國際健康組織對此作了一際健康組織對此作了一次調(diào)查,右圖
3、是他們此次調(diào)查,右圖是他們此次的調(diào)查結(jié)果。根據(jù)你次的調(diào)查結(jié)果。根據(jù)你所得的信息,請為國際所得的信息,請為國際健康組織寫一篇完整的健康組織寫一篇完整的調(diào)查報(bào)告調(diào)查報(bào)告, ,并提倡大家并提倡大家進(jìn)行假日休閑。進(jìn)行假日休閑。審審travelstay at homevisit friends or parentswork 用簡單的句子或短語用簡單的句子或短語列出列出文章要文章要點(diǎn)。點(diǎn)。列列寫作第二步 根據(jù)以下關(guān)鍵詞及圖表用簡單的句根據(jù)以下關(guān)鍵詞及圖表用簡單的句子列出文章的要點(diǎn)子列出文章的要點(diǎn) 如何度假如何度假 調(diào)查報(bào)告調(diào)查報(bào)告 倡議假日休閑倡議假日休閑stay at homeworkvisit fri
4、ends or parentstravel A lot of people travel . Some people stay at home. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work. Enjoy your vacation.列列A lot of people travel . Some people stay at home. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work.How do people spend their vac
5、ation? We made a survey and here is our survey report.Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.a nice heada nice taila nice body加加 加首尾加首尾,使結(jié)構(gòu)完整。 可以采取總分總結(jié)構(gòu)或者總分結(jié)構(gòu),開頭或結(jié)尾的句子應(yīng)注意簡潔,漂亮。寫作第三步:3 2 1 4 6 5 1. Second , we should keep quiet in the library.2. First , we have to wear our unif
6、orms to go to school, though most of us dont like them at all.3. Every school has its own rules for students. We have many school rules to follow in our daily life.4. Whats more, we ought to return books on time.5. Our school rules are good for us, I will try my best to follow them.6. Third , we mus
7、t do lots of homework. How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our survey report. A lot of people travel . Some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the internet. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work. Come and enjoy your vacation. The people wh
8、o relax well work well.連連 恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用關(guān)聯(lián)詞句,使得文章層次清晰,各個(gè)部分銜接自然。寫作第四步:1.表示并列或遞進(jìn)表示并列或遞進(jìn): and, as well as, bothand, not onlybut also, neithernor;2.表示選擇表示選擇: or, eitheror;3.表示轉(zhuǎn)折表示轉(zhuǎn)折: but, however, although, though, after all, 4.表示因果表示因果: because, so, therefore5.表示條件表示條件: if , unless6.表示對比表示對比: instead, notbut, on
9、 the one handon the other hand;7.表示解釋表示解釋: for example, for instance, such as, that is to say, in other words;8.表示順序表示順序: to begin with, firstly, first (of all), second(ly), next, later, since then, from then on, finally, in the end;9.表示強(qiáng)調(diào)表示強(qiáng)調(diào): also, besides, whats more, actually, in fact, 10.表示結(jié)論表示
10、結(jié)論: all in all, altogether, in a word, generally speaking, _ I am tired, I keep on working till midnight. He didnt go to movies, he went to the concert _. We like doing kinds of sports _ swimming, running and hiking. _, he stood up. Then he got out. _, he went back. _, he smiled. How do people spend
11、 their vacation? We made a survey and here is our survey report. According to it, most people travel. And some people stay at home. Also some other people visit friends or parents. However, a few people work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.連連 We interviewed people abou
12、t the ways to spend the vacation and here is our survey report. According to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays . Then some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. And to visit friends or parents also mak
13、es them relaxed. However, a few people have to work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.美美美美 選好詞句,美化美化文章。在有把握的情況下展示自己的語言功底。寫作第五步:Skill One Make your sentences correct Good good study, day day up. We should do sports a week once. Save the environment is our duty. There is g
14、oing to have a meeting today. I hope I can come true my dream.once a weekSavingbeachieveSkill Two Express in different waysOur parents really wish us to work hard.Our parents really wish us to put our heart into study.The teenagers like the computers.The teenagers are fond of the computers. We shoul
15、dnt eat junk food. We should stay away from the junk food. When he spoke, he got more excited. The more he spoke, the more excited he got. We should learn English grammar. Its important to learn English grammar.書面表達(dá)寫作技巧書面表達(dá)寫作技巧列列加加連連美美中考作文評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)中考作文評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)第一檔(第一檔(13-15分)分)信息完整,表達(dá)流暢,無語言錯(cuò)誤或基本無語言錯(cuò)誤。信息完整,表達(dá)流
16、暢,無語言錯(cuò)誤或基本無語言錯(cuò)誤。第二檔(第二檔(10-12分)分)信息基本完整,表達(dá)較流暢,有少量語言錯(cuò)誤,但不影響意思表信息基本完整,表達(dá)較流暢,有少量語言錯(cuò)誤,但不影響意思表達(dá)。達(dá)。第三檔(第三檔(7-9分)分)能傳達(dá)部分信息,表達(dá)不夠流暢,語言錯(cuò)誤較多,但句子基本可讀。能傳達(dá)部分信息,表達(dá)不夠流暢,語言錯(cuò)誤較多,但句子基本可讀。 第四檔(第四檔(4-6分)分)只能傳達(dá)少量信息,表達(dá)不流暢,語言錯(cuò)誤多,只有少量句子可讀。只能傳達(dá)少量信息,表達(dá)不流暢,語言錯(cuò)誤多,只有少量句子可讀。 第五檔(第五檔(1-3分)分)只能傳達(dá)個(gè)別信息,表達(dá)不清楚,只有個(gè)別句子可讀。只能傳達(dá)個(gè)別信息,表達(dá)不清楚,只
17、有個(gè)別句子可讀。 以以 “I have a dream”為題寫一篇不少于為題寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文,個(gè)詞的短文, 標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號不占格。標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號不占格。 Sentence patterns for reference(以下句型以下句型供參考)供參考) My dream is to be/to do/to go I enjoy /like/prefer To make my dream come true, I If my dream comes true I have a dreamHave you ever watched a bike racing? The riders are cool!
18、 Yeah, its my dream to be a professional bike rider.I fell in love with bike rider for the first time I rode. Since that, Ive been riding for 5 years. Some people think its dangerous, I dont think so. During a bike riding, you will be in a high speed and feel the wind rushes quickly. Exciting? That
19、is!To make my dream come true, Ill practice more after middle school. Also, Ill watch more bike racing to learn from the riders. I hope my dream will come true, if so, I can enjoy the life I like best.Passage One I have a dreamAnybody has a dream. But different people have different dreams.Most peop
20、le always dream to be popular or rich. But my dream is very special, I just want to be a bird. Why I have such a dream? Just because I admire theyre free, they can do everything they want.When theyre flying in the sky, they look beautiful, even theyre the most beautiful animals. I really want to enj
21、oy the feeling of flying in the sky. However, I know it wont be achieved any more.Its just a dream, in my heart.Passage TwoPassage Three I have a dreamMy dream is to be a basketball player. I like it because I think it very interesting. It can make me become very happy and healthy. To make me dream
22、come true. I need try to do it. And I need take some time to do it. I need practice every day. If my dream come true, I will more thy to do it. 自教育部提倡初中生每天長跑自教育部提倡初中生每天長跑1500米后,校園里課間可以看到很多米后,校園里課間可以看到很多學(xué)生跑步的身影。對于這樣的倡議,你在學(xué)校做了一個(gè)調(diào)查,有些學(xué)學(xué)生跑步的身影。對于這樣的倡議,你在學(xué)校做了一個(gè)調(diào)查,有些學(xué)生覺的好,有些學(xué)生覺的不好。請你把調(diào)查的結(jié)果用英語寫成短文,生覺的好,有些學(xué)生覺的不好。請你把調(diào)查的結(jié)果用英語寫成短文,并談?wù)勛约旱目捶?,發(fā)表在學(xué)校的刊物上,開頭已經(jīng)寫好。并談?wù)勛约旱目捶?,發(fā)表在學(xué)校的刊物上,開頭已經(jīng)寫好。 I did a survey about whether middle school stude
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