新人教版英語(yǔ)選擇性必修三導(dǎo)學(xué)案 UNIT 2寫作園地

1、新教材英語(yǔ)選擇性必修第三冊(cè)人教版寫作園地 應(yīng)用文寫作寫一封健康生活方式的建議信本單元的寫作項(xiàng)目是應(yīng)用文寫作(建議信)，主題為健康生活方式。關(guān)于此類型的應(yīng)用文寫作，需要注意以下幾個(gè)方面：1建議的合理性。關(guān)于建議信的寫作，在向?qū)Ψ教岢鼋ㄗh時(shí)，要設(shè)身處地聯(lián)系對(duì)方的生活習(xí)慣等細(xì)節(jié)進(jìn)行合理建議，否則就失去了建議信的目的和意義。2整理好順序。當(dāng)寫作中不只有一條建議時(shí)，要做好整理，按照一定的順序?qū)⒁獋鬟_(dá)的建議寫在文章中。3知識(shí)點(diǎn)要清楚。在寫作中如果有關(guān)于專業(yè)健康知識(shí)方面的寫作，要查證好資料，再進(jìn)行寫作，不要因?yàn)樘峤ㄗh而胡編亂造。1開頭常用句式I believe fresh air and exercise

2、are helpful to my health.我相信新鮮的空氣和鍛煉對(duì)我的身體有益。Good health depends upon good food, exercise, and enough sleep.健康依賴于良好的食物、運(yùn)動(dòng)和充足的睡眠。Just as the saying goes, “An apple a day keeps the doctor away.”正如俗語(yǔ)所說：“一天一個(gè)蘋果，醫(yī)生遠(yuǎn)離我。”2主體段落常用句式Y(jié)ou should throw over your lifestyle.你應(yīng)該改變你的生活方式。You should go to have the doc

3、tor check on your health.你應(yīng)當(dāng)去找醫(yī)生檢查一下健康狀況。We all desire health and happiness.我們都渴望健康和幸福。Loss of health is more serious than loss of wealth.健康的喪失比財(cái)富的損失更為重要。Nothing can compensate for the loss of ones health.一個(gè)人健康的喪失是無法補(bǔ)償?shù)?。Im rather troubled about my friends health.我為朋友的健康感到非常憂慮。3結(jié)尾常用句式Tea contains caf

4、feine. Its bad for your health.茶含有咖啡因，對(duì)你的健康不利。If you really love life, then follow these suggestions and start a healthy lifestyle.如果你真的熱愛生活，遵循這些建議并開始一個(gè)健康的生活方式。Exercise will give you a sharpening figure back.鍛煉可以還你一個(gè)健美的體格。健康對(duì)于我們每個(gè)人來說都是非常重要的，但你的父母天天忙于工作而忽略了這個(gè)問題，你很為他們擔(dān)憂。請(qǐng)你以此為話題，并結(jié)合提示給他們寫一封信。提示：1要走路去上班

5、，而不是開車或坐車；2每周至少去體育館鍛煉一次，或打球或游泳；3飲食要健康；4不要工作太晚，要早休息。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。精彩范文Dear Mum and Dad，Youre so busy every day that you dont pay much attention to your health, and Im worried about your health all the time. Id like to give you some suggestions. I hear walking is the best sport. Yo

6、ur company isnt far from home, is it? Why not walk to the office? Youd better take exercise at least once a week, such as playing tennis in the gym. Going to swim is a nice choice, too. Whats more, its necessary to have healthy food. Try not to stay up too late. Having enough sleep can help your bra

7、in work better.Mum and Dad, please accept my advice. I really wish you healthy!Your loving daughter，Mary總評(píng)本篇文章語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)潔，結(jié)構(gòu)合理。既滿足了作文要求也體現(xiàn)了女兒關(guān)心父母的濃濃深情，體現(xiàn)了作者寫作的整體把控能力，是一篇難得的佳作！亮點(diǎn)呈現(xiàn)(1)Your company isnt far from home, is it? 運(yùn)用反意疑問句，起到加強(qiáng)語(yǔ)氣的作用。(2)Try not to stay up too late. Having enough sleep can help your brain work better過于生硬的建議不利于對(duì)方接受，故作者在提出建議后直接給出結(jié)果，增強(qiáng)說服力。假如你是李華，你的筆友Jane最近總是感覺身體不適，因此寫信向你詢問如何保持身體健康。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)用英文給她回一封信。要點(diǎn)：1合理飲食，避免吃脂肪高及含糖多的食物，多吃新鮮蔬菜和水果；2鍛煉身體，合理鍛煉有助于身體健康；3保證充足睡眠，不要熬夜；4其他建議。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear Jane，Im glad to receive yo