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1、掌握寫作技巧掌握寫作技巧 增添表達(dá)亮點(diǎn)增添表達(dá)亮點(diǎn)青島十七中青島十七中 李景新李景新 2009年山東省高考英語作文各檔次的給分范圍和要求年山東省高考英語作文各檔次的給分范圍和要求第一檔（優(yōu)秀）第一檔（優(yōu)秀）26分分-29分分 緊扣主題；覆蓋所有要點(diǎn)，內(nèi)容充實(shí)；語法結(jié)構(gòu)多樣，詞匯緊扣主題；覆蓋所有要點(diǎn)，內(nèi)容充實(shí)；語法結(jié)構(gòu)多樣，詞匯豐富，有效使用連接成分，顯示出較強(qiáng)的語言運(yùn)用表達(dá)能力；語豐富，有效使用連接成分，顯示出較強(qiáng)的語言運(yùn)用表達(dá)能力；語言小錯不超過言小錯不超過4個，不能有一處大錯。個，不能有一處大錯。第二檔（良好）第二檔（良好）22分分-25分分 緊扣主題，覆蓋所有要點(diǎn)，內(nèi)容較充實(shí)，語言有少

2、量錯誤，緊扣主題，覆蓋所有要點(diǎn)，內(nèi)容較充實(shí)，語言有少量錯誤，但基本不影響意思表達(dá)；大錯不超過但基本不影響意思表達(dá)；大錯不超過3個。個。第三檔（一般）第三檔（一般）18分分-21分分 緊扣主題，基本覆蓋所有要點(diǎn)，能夠表達(dá)基本內(nèi)容；語言錯緊扣主題，基本覆蓋所有要點(diǎn)，能夠表達(dá)基本內(nèi)容；語言錯誤已影響了部分意思的表達(dá)，但多數(shù)句子基本正確。誤已影響了部分意思的表達(dá)，但多數(shù)句子基本正確。Dear Tom , It has been a long time since I met you last time . I miss you very much . How are you ? Im very gra

3、teful to you for your help with my English when I studied in your country . I wouldnt speak English so fluently now without you . So now I cant thank you enough . By the way , do you keep in touch with Mr. Smith ? Is he fit ? Im very concerned about him . If you could visit him , please remember me

4、to him . Furthermore , would you mind making me know how to contact him ? Eventually, Im glad to tell you our Spring Festival , the most important one in China , is coming . And I remember you once told me you like China . Would you like to come here and enjoy the Chinese traditional customs and cul

5、ture ? I will expect your coming . Best wishes ! Yours, Li HuaGroup I like reading while my brother likes watching television.I like reading while my brother enjoys watching television.Group There will be an increase in the number of peoples jobs There will be an increase in the number of jobs for p

6、eople in Beijing.availableGroup It will have an important effect on the development of Beijing.It will have a(n) effect on the development of Beijing.Group It is very useful to practise English every day .It is to practise English every day .of great value /of great help /of great importancesignific

7、ant /far-reaching /profound / vitalof great/vital useGroup 5 He told me that the question was now being discussed.He told me that the question was now .Group 6Suddenly I had a good idea.Suddenly I a good idea. A good idea me.came up withoccurred tounder discussion. under repair / control /considerat

8、ion/constructionGroup 7He has decided to be a teacher when he grows up. He has to be a teacher when he grows up.Group 8 Last Sunday we had a good time in the parkLast Sunday we in the parkenjoyed ourselves / had funmade up his mind /determinedAt noon we had a picnic lunch in the sunshine. Then we ha

9、d a short rest. Then we sang and danced. We played happily. At noon we had a picnic lunch in the sunshine. After a short rest, we had great fun singing and dancing.have fun doing2.他站在那兒，什么也不干。他站在那兒，什么也不干。 He stood there doing nothing .He stood there and (he) did nothing .3.人們說人們說中國每年有中國每年有成千上萬成千上萬的人

10、的人死于吸煙死于吸煙. People say that tens of thousands of people die from smoking every year in China .（賓語從句）（賓語從句）Tens of thousands of people are said to die from smoking every year in China .（被動語態(tài)）（被動語態(tài)）Its said that tens of thousands of people die from smoking every year in China . （主語從句）（主語從句）4.4.青島是一個美麗

11、的城市青島是一個美麗的城市, , 它它有百年的歷史有百年的歷史. .Qingdao is a beautiful city and it has a history of one hundred years. （并列句）（并列句） Qingdao is a beautiful city, which has a history of one hundred years.（非限制性定語從句）（非限制性定語從句）Qingdao is a beautiful city with a history of one hundred years. （with +賓語）賓語）Qingdao is a bea

12、utiful city （dating back to/dating from) one hundred years ago.（非謂語）非謂語） Voices from experts 閱卷老師在評閱時最注重的是文章中的閱卷老師在評閱時最注重的是文章中的亮點(diǎn)，根據(jù)語言使用情況，亮點(diǎn)的多少而定亮點(diǎn)，根據(jù)語言使用情況，亮點(diǎn)的多少而定出檔次，所以考生在書面表達(dá)上的亮點(diǎn)是取出檔次，所以考生在書面表達(dá)上的亮點(diǎn)是取得優(yōu)秀的關(guān)鍵，亮點(diǎn)主要包括：一、語言地得優(yōu)秀的關(guān)鍵，亮點(diǎn)主要包括：一、語言地道、詞匯豐富；二、語法結(jié)構(gòu)多樣；三、文道、詞匯豐富；二、語法結(jié)構(gòu)多樣；三、文章連貫自然。章連貫自然。* *不要刻意追求

13、高級詞匯和復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)。不要刻意追求高級詞匯和復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)。注意注意Experts:Experts:個別考生片面追求花哨文字，結(jié)果造個別考生片面追求花哨文字，結(jié)果造出一些錯誤百出的句子，這是寫作的一大忌。高考出一些錯誤百出的句子，這是寫作的一大忌。高考寫作時應(yīng)盡可能運(yùn)用自己熟悉的詞匯和句式，盡量寫作時應(yīng)盡可能運(yùn)用自己熟悉的詞匯和句式，盡量避免錯誤的出現(xiàn)。一篇文章即便用的詞匯再高級、避免錯誤的出現(xiàn)。一篇文章即便用的詞匯再高級、語法結(jié)構(gòu)再復(fù)雜，若是滿篇小錯，閱卷老師也不會語法結(jié)構(gòu)再復(fù)雜，若是滿篇小錯，閱卷老師也不會給文章一個較高檔次的分值的。給文章一個較高檔次的分值的。the China Pavilion

14、 2010 2010年世博會將于年世博會將于5 5月月1 1日日-10-10月月3131日上海召開，請根據(jù)以下要日上海召開，請根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)描述上海有關(guān)情況。（請用一句話描述每一個要點(diǎn)）點(diǎn)描述上海有關(guān)情況。（請用一句話描述每一個要點(diǎn)）1 1、上海是一座有著、上海是一座有著700700多年歷史的城市，多年歷史的城市，占地面積占地面積為為63406340平方公里，平方公里，是我國最大的城市。是我國最大的城市。2 2、上海位于黃埔江畔、上海位于黃埔江畔 ，交通便利。，交通便利。3 3、中國館由中國國家館、中國地區(qū)館、港澳臺館三部分組成，是、中國館由中國國家館、中國地區(qū)館、港澳臺館三部分組成，是世博園中

15、世博園中最引人注目最引人注目的建筑。的建筑。4 4、上海、上海市民市民正正積極準(zhǔn)備迎接積極準(zhǔn)備迎接全世界人民的到來。全世界人民的到來。參考詞匯：參考詞匯：世博園：世博園：the Expo Site 中國館中國館 ： the China Pavilion 中國國家館中國國家館: theChineseNationalPavilion 中國地區(qū)館中國地區(qū)館: the ChineseProvincesPavilion 港澳臺館港澳臺館: the Pavilion0fHongKong、MacaoandTaiwan市民：市民：citizen 1 1、上海是一座、上海是一座有著有著700700多年歷史多年歷

16、史的城市，的城市，占地面占地面積積為為63406340平方公里，是我國平方公里，是我國最大的最大的城市。城市。Shanghai , the largest city of China , which covers an area of 6,340 square kilometers , has a history of more than 700 years . 2 2 、 上 海、 上 海 位 于位 于 黃 埔 江 畔黃 埔 江 畔 ， 交 通 便 利 。， 交 通 便 利 。 Shanghai lies on the Huangpu River , making /which makes

17、it convenient for people to arrive .Shanghai lies on the Huangpu River with a convenient transportation.3 3、中國館、中國館由由中國國家館、中國地區(qū)館、港澳臺館中國國家館、中國地區(qū)館、港澳臺館三部分三部分組成組成, , 是世博園中最引人注目的建筑是世博園中最引人注目的建筑 。The China Pavilion, the most attractive building in the Expo Site ,is made up of / consists of / comprises th

18、e Chinese National Pavilion、the Chinese Provinces Pavilion and Hongkong,Macao andTaiwan.4 4、上海市民正、上海市民正積極準(zhǔn)備迎接積極準(zhǔn)備迎接全世界人民的到來。全世界人民的到來。Shanghai citizens are doing what they can to welcome the people from all over the world .Shanghai citizens are doing all / everything they can to welcome the people fr

19、om all over the world .2009 陜西卷陜西卷 假定你是李華。在一個英文網(wǎng)絡(luò)論壇上，你看到一個名假定你是李華。在一個英文網(wǎng)絡(luò)論壇上，你看到一個名叫叫Grown-up 中學(xué)生發(fā)帖（中學(xué)生發(fā)帖（post）尋求幫助。請根據(jù)帖子內(nèi)容、）尋求幫助。請根據(jù)帖子內(nèi)容、寫作要點(diǎn)和要求回帖。寫作要點(diǎn)和要求回帖。Grown-up Post at 18-5-2009 20:08 1Hi , everyone, Im 17 years old and I am going to university this autumn . But my mother continues to treat m

20、e as a seven-year old kid .What should I do ? TOP(last topic / next topic) + Reply + New 寫作要點(diǎn)：寫作要點(diǎn)：1、告訴、告訴Grown-up要理解父母；要理解父母；2、給、給Grown-up 提出解提出解決問題的具體建議。決問題的具體建議。 Version 1Hello , Grown-up, Im sorry to know that you have difficulty in getting along with your mother . But I can understand you just

21、because the problem you are facing is very common among our teenagers Version 2Hello , Grown-up, After reading your post , I understand your trouble because Im also a boy of your age . Its necessary to do something to solve the problem between you and your mother . Here are some suggestions for you

22、.范文開頭句范文開頭句 范文結(jié)尾句范文結(jié)尾句Version 1I believe you will send us the good news that you are expecting before long if you follow my advice .Version 2Good luck to you !Version 3Try your best and Im sure you will get on well with your parents . 好的開頭和好的結(jié)尾會首先吸引閱卷好的開頭和好的結(jié)尾會首先吸引閱卷老師的注意。老師的注意。 1.開頭要緊扣主題，開門見山。開頭要緊扣

23、主題，開門見山。 2. 盡量用一到兩句話引出主體部分。盡量用一到兩句話引出主體部分。 3.結(jié)尾要短但要具有鼓舞、激勵或建設(shè)性。結(jié)尾要短但要具有鼓舞、激勵或建設(shè)性。 如果中間內(nèi)容抓住要點(diǎn)表述正確，再恰如果中間內(nèi)容抓住要點(diǎn)表述正確，再恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂靡恍┻^渡性詞語，使文章結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)當(dāng)?shù)厥褂靡恍┻^渡性詞語，使文章結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)、自然流暢，文章的總體檔次就上去了。謹(jǐn)、自然流暢，文章的總體檔次就上去了。Voices from experts09年全國各地高考范文開頭句統(tǒng)計(jì)年全國各地高考范文開頭句統(tǒng)計(jì)09江西江西Everyone knows that a good mood is very important for u

24、s whoever we are or wherever we are .09湖南湖南1How eager Im to share my experience of my first class in the middle school .09湖南湖南2I cant wait to tell you my experience of my first class as a teacher .09福建福建Im very glad to receive our letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well .09湖北湖北Im wr

25、iting to you for the mobile phone I bought on 20th April ,2008 at Tele Mall .09全國全國Thank you for your letter asking about the rebuilt Qianmen Street . Here is something about it . 09重慶重慶Im a Chinese student from Xin Hua Middle School , and I have learnt your website is collecting topics .09年全國各地高考范文

26、結(jié)尾句統(tǒng)計(jì)年全國各地高考范文結(jié)尾句統(tǒng)計(jì) 09全國全國1Try your best ,and Im looking forward to your outstanding performance .09江蘇江蘇To make matter even worse ,it might also have a bad influence on our health . 09北京北京Are you happy for me ?Im looking forward to hearing from you .09安徽安徽1Boys and girls ,lets communicate with our p

27、arents right now and create a harmonious family . 09安徽安徽2As for me ,we children should communicate with our parents more frequently to let them know that we have grown up and need more respect . Im sure they will understand us .09湖北湖北Take into account all these factors above , I require the company

28、should have a change of it for me as soon as possible . What have you got from the lesson ? Practice makes perfect 1.Finish the passage above paying attention to the skills in writing .2.Try to sum up many more skills in writing in different ways and share them with your classmates .Thanks for your

29、kind attendance! 中國每年都會有中國每年都會有幾十萬幾十萬起交通事故，許多起交通事故，許多人都人都因此因此而喪生。而喪生。據(jù)據(jù)2009年有關(guān)部門統(tǒng)計(jì)年有關(guān)部門統(tǒng)計(jì)，中，中國的交通事故還在成倍地國的交通事故還在成倍地上升上升。請針對這一社。請針對這一社會問題談?wù)剷栴}談?wù)勗斐稍斐蛇@種狀況的這種狀況的主要原因主要原因并提出并提出解解決的方法決的方法。 注意：注意： 1、詞數(shù)、詞數(shù)120-150； 2、可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫；、可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫； 3、參考詞匯：、參考詞匯：drunk driving醉酒駕駛；醉酒駕駛；the speed limit限速限速 ？Extended No one could have failed to notice the fact that thousands of people lost their lives annually i