備戰(zhàn)高考英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)萬(wàn)能模板05建議信201712171160

1、05建議信寫作模板寫作模板Dear,You have asked me for my advice with regard to, and I will try to make some conducive suggestions here.In my opinion, you would be wise to take the following actions:（建議的內(nèi)容）.I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further

2、 details.Good luck with your（ 祝愿）.Yours Sincerely, Li Hua寫作模板Dear,I ' m glad to receive your letter asking for myadvice on how to （弓 I 出對(duì)方需要建議的主題）.Here are a few suggestion（ 弓 I 出作者 的建議）. First, It isimportant to. Then, it also helps to . Besides, it should be a good idea to. You can also.（可以根據(jù)要

3、求用不同的句式提出建議，如下 ）As to, I suggest（需要具體至 U某方面）.In addition,（其他的建議）.I ' m sure（預(yù)測(cè)可能的結(jié)果，給對(duì)方以行為的信心和決心）.I hope（ 表達(dá)愿望）。Yours Sincerely,Li Hua1 .建議信寫作注意事項(xiàng)建議信的寫作目的是提出建議或忠告，不是投訴信。觀點(diǎn)要合情合理，注意禮貌當(dāng)先。2 .寫作方法首段：a.簡(jiǎn)介自己，不要羅嗦；b.說(shuō)明目的，注意語(yǔ)氣。主體：a.提出具體建議；b.首先肯定優(yōu)點(diǎn)，再寫改進(jìn)內(nèi)容，否則會(huì)變成投訴信；c.經(jīng)常進(jìn)行交流，注意對(duì)方感受，時(shí)時(shí)提到你和我，否則容易跑題寫成議論文。尾段：總結(jié)

4、建議，注意禮貌，使對(duì)方易于接受。3 .寫作流程圖說(shuō)明寫信目的介紹詳情、說(shuō)明原因提出建議提出希望采納建議，并表示謝意，盼望回復(fù)第一部分：說(shuō)明寫信的目的 套語(yǔ):1. I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in your new school. Such problems are quite normal. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful.很遺憾聽說(shuō)你在適應(yīng)新學(xué)校方面有困難。這樣的問題是很正常的。可能下面的建議會(huì)有一些幫助。2. I have received y

5、our letter saying you plan to play a visit to China for ten daysnext month. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful to you.我已經(jīng)收到了你的來(lái)信。信上說(shuō)你打算下個(gè)月來(lái)參觀中國(guó)十天?？赡芟旅娴慕ㄗh對(duì)你是有幫助的。3. I'm writing to you to present what I think on the further improvement of our hotel so as to attract more clients(顧客)我給你寫信

6、是想說(shuō)明一下我對(duì)于進(jìn)一步改善我們旅館的一些想法，以吸引更多顧客。4. You have asked me for my advice with regard to how to learn Chinese , and I willtry to make some suggestions here.你關(guān)于如何學(xué)習(xí)漢語(yǔ)詢問我的建議，那么我就在這里給出一些建議。5. I'm very glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to fit in thenew school life. Here are a few sugg

7、estions.很高興收到你的來(lái)信，信上詢問我關(guān)于如何適應(yīng)新的學(xué)校生活。下面是我的一些建議。6. I'm very glad to have received your e-mail. NowI'm writing to give you some advice on how to learn English well in high school.很高興收到你的電子郵件?，F(xiàn)在，關(guān)于如何在高中學(xué)好英語(yǔ)，我寫信給你一些建議。第二部分：介紹詳情、說(shuō)明原因套語(yǔ)：(1)它將于下午兩點(diǎn)鐘開始，四點(diǎn)鐘結(jié)束，在此期間將會(huì)有十五位準(zhǔn)備充分的參賽者發(fā)表演講。It will begin at 2:

8、00 pm and last two hours, during which time 15 well-prepared contestants will deliver their speeches.(2)我們將會(huì)在上午八點(diǎn)出發(fā)，九點(diǎn)到達(dá)那里。We will start at 8:00 am and arrive there at 9:00.(3)下午，我們會(huì)一起During the afternoon,we' ll.together.(4)記得帶上水和午餐。Remember to take water and lunch with you.(5)順便說(shuō)一下，你可以乘坐 322路公交

9、車，它會(huì)直接把你帶到俱樂部。By the way, you may take Bus No. 322 and it will take you directly to the club.(6)我知道你的母語(yǔ)是英語(yǔ)，還是一名英語(yǔ)老師。我代表我們學(xué)校真誠(chéng)地邀請(qǐng)你來(lái)比賽現(xiàn)場(chǎng)。I know you are a native speaker of English and an English teacher, and I, on behalf of our school, sincerely invite you to be part of the contest.(7)既然你如此渴望提高英語(yǔ)，這會(huì)是一

10、個(gè)很好的機(jī)會(huì)。Since you are so eager to improve your English, it will prove to be a great chance. (8)我保證你在那里會(huì)過得很愉快。I ' m sure that you will enjoy yourself there.第三部分：提出建議套語(yǔ)：我建議I' d like to suggest that May I suggest that ？In my opinion I would like to make a recommendation that I am writing to advi

11、se If I were you, I would 第四部分：希望采納建議，并表示謝意，盼望回復(fù) 套語(yǔ)：1. I hope these suggestions will be of use to you. Remember: where there is a will, there is a way(有志者事竟成).我希望這些建議會(huì)對(duì)你有用。記?。河兄菊呤戮钩?。2. I hope these suggestions will be of use to you. Remember:The man who has madeup his mind to win will never saya imp

12、ossible "(一個(gè)決心要成功的人從來(lái)不說(shuō)“不可能”).我希望這些建議會(huì)對(duì)你有用。記?。阂粋€(gè)決心要成功的人從來(lái)不說(shuō)“不可能”。3. Best wishes!（給你）最美好的祝愿!4. I hope that my suggestions are helpful for you anyway. I would be more than happy to see improvement.無(wú)論如何，我希望這些建議對(duì)你有所幫助。我會(huì)非常高興看到情況改善。5. I believe that you will take my suggestions into serious account.

13、Whatever youdecide to do, good luck with your studies/work!我相信你會(huì)認(rèn)真考慮我的建議。無(wú)論你決定做什么，祝你學(xué)習(xí)/工作好運(yùn)。6. I sincerely hope my advice will be some help for you. If there is more I can doto help, please let me know.我真誠(chéng)的希望我的建議對(duì)你有一些幫助。如果有更多我可以幫忙的，請(qǐng)告訴我。典例周折典例01（2017 北京卷）你的英國(guó)朋友Jim所在的學(xué)校要組織學(xué)生來(lái)中國(guó)旅行，有兩條線路可以選擇：“長(zhǎng)江之行”或者“泰

14、山之旅”。Jim來(lái)信希望你能給些建議。請(qǐng)你給他回信，內(nèi)容包括：1 .你建議的線路；2 .你的理由；3 .你的祝愿。注意：1.詞數(shù)不少于50;2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear Jim,Yours,Li Hua【寫作指導(dǎo)】試題分析：本文為提綱類作文。首先，學(xué)生要仔細(xì)閱讀提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明 確有哪些要點(diǎn)。其次，要注意提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象。要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫。最后，要根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)，語(yǔ)態(tài)；語(yǔ)言表達(dá)要符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣。本文是一封信，按照內(nèi)容要求可以確定文 章的框架結(jié)構(gòu)，三段式，其中第一段寫你所建議的路線，

15、第二部分是本文的主體，要闡述你 所建議的路線的原因，好讓他們有很好的掌握，最后一段，提出你的祝愿。寫作時(shí)要注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。根據(jù)句意適當(dāng)使用并列連詞，同時(shí)也 要合理運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句子為文章增色添彩?！痉段馁p析】Dear Jim,I ' m happy to receive your letter and know you' re coming to China.Of the two trips to the Yangtze River and Mount Tai, both are highly recommended. Personal

16、ly, I prefer the tour along the Yangtze, the longest river and one of the mother rivers of Chinese civilization. You can learn a lot about the history of China and Chinese people. Moreover, the scenery along the river is amazing, with many well-known sightseeing spots. That ' s why I think the t

17、rip along the Yangtze will be a better choice.Hope you ' ll have a good time in China.Yours, Li Hua 典例02學(xué)校英語(yǔ)報(bào)正在醞釀改版，擬從現(xiàn)有的三個(gè)欄目（健康、娛樂、文化）中去除一個(gè)，并 從三個(gè)備選欄目（時(shí)尚、職業(yè)規(guī)劃、讀者反饋）中挑選一個(gè)納入該報(bào)。假設(shè)你是該校學(xué)生程 飛，給校報(bào)編輯寫一封電子郵件，表達(dá)你的觀點(diǎn)。郵件須包括以下內(nèi)容：1 .你建議去除的欄目及去除的理由；2 .你建議增加的欄目及增加的理由?！緦懽髦笇?dǎo)】這篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類范疇，這篇作文要求就校英語(yǔ)報(bào)改版是事情給校報(bào)編輯寫一封

18、電子郵件，表達(dá)你的觀點(diǎn)。郵件須包括以下內(nèi)容： 1.你建議去除的欄目及去除的理由；2.你建議增加的欄目及增加的理由，根據(jù)自己的建議選定欄目的設(shè)置并以郵件方式表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)?？忌趯懽鬟^程中要確定切題且符合英語(yǔ)寫作邏輯的篇章結(jié)構(gòu)。確立郵件文體之后，要弄清要點(diǎn)，圍繞要點(diǎn)展開，條理要清晰，理由要充分，關(guān)鍵的是在寫作的過程中，要注意人稱，時(shí)態(tài)語(yǔ)態(tài)和常見的語(yǔ)法問題，文章盡量簡(jiǎn)潔，在文章中盡可能多地使用高大上的詞匯，遵循短語(yǔ)優(yōu)先原則在配以特殊句型和復(fù)合句的應(yīng)用，讓文章更上檔次。【范文賞析】Dear Editor,I ' ve learned that our English Post is bein

19、g reformed and one of the three columns is to be replaced by a new one. I' m writing this e-mail to share with you my opinions.Needless to say, the columns will definitely be designed according to students'interest and have positive effects on their study and life.Compared to the entertainme

20、nt, I hold the view that the value of the columnsconcerning health and culture is more important. The main factor is that it is ofgreat significance to keep healthy while loss of health means kissing goodbye to life.Consequently, more knowledge of how to keep fit can improve the quality of life. Ina

21、ddition, the progress in acquiring cultures contributes to broadening one' s horizons, which in turn is beneficial to one' s study and the establishment of philosophy of life.s career development a great deal .OnFurthermore, the career planning should be taken into account in the schoolEngli

22、sh Post . On the one hand, it covers ones career success in the future.the other hand, it makes a great difference to oneWhat has been mentioned above is my personal ideas. Here I am in the hope that my advice will add a brilliant touch to the improved version of our school EnglishPost.Yours sincere

23、ly,Cheng Fei典例03為了幫助中學(xué)生健康成長(zhǎng)，某中學(xué)英文報(bào)開辟了“HEART-TO-HEART專欄。假設(shè)你是該欄目的編輯Jamie,收到一封署名為 Worried的求助信。信中該同學(xué)向你訴說(shuō)了自己的困擾：近日容易發(fā)脾氣，使正常的學(xué)習(xí)和生活受到了影響。請(qǐng)用英文給該同學(xué)寫一封回信。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：1 .表示理解并給予安慰；2 .提出建議并說(shuō)明理由。注意：1 .詞數(shù)120左右；2 .信中不能出現(xiàn)與本人相關(guān)的信息；3 .信的開頭與結(jié)尾已為你擬好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：temper n.脾氣，情緒Hi Worried,I ' m sorry to know that you '

24、 re having such a had time at the moment. Yours,Jamie【寫作指導(dǎo)】這是一篇提綱類書面表達(dá)，要求按照Worried寫的求助信寫一封回信，根據(jù)信中提到的困擾表示理解和安慰，提出建議并給出理由。所以考生在寫作的時(shí)候，要圍繞來(lái)信的問題一一給予解答。但是光翻譯要點(diǎn)肯定不行，還要求考生自己拓展發(fā)揮，關(guān)鍵的是在寫作的過程中，要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型，如強(qiáng)調(diào)句、倒裝句等，讓文章更上檔次。也要注意人稱、時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)和常見的語(yǔ)法問題，同時(shí)在列舉建議和理由的時(shí)候要使用合適的連接詞，如：First ， Second， Besides, What s more 等，

25、讓文章看起來(lái)很有條理，也很流暢?！痉段馁p析】Hi Worried,I m sorry to know that you re having such a bad time at the moment. The truthis everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be wrong, so you don t have to worry so much. The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or

26、say anything you ll regret. Here are three useful tips:First,talk to someone you trust about how you feel. This is a good way of lettingyour anger out without hurting others or yourself. Second, go outdoors and play teamgames with your friends, as physicalexercise is an effective way to get rid of a

27、nger.And third, remain optimistic about your future. Such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits.I hope you ll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal.Y ours,J amie【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】所給范文語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)潔，運(yùn)用了一些詞組：a good way of的好方法，let out釋放，getrid of 消除， carry on 繼續(xù)進(jìn)行，句式上體現(xiàn)出多變的特點(diǎn)，如：I m sorry

28、to know thatyou re having such a bad time at the moment. 這句話用了賓語(yǔ)從句，The truth is everyonewill have one of those periods when things seem to be wrong, so you don t have toworry so much. 這句話用了表語(yǔ)從句和時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句，The important thing is to learn tocontrol your temper so that you may not do or say anything you ll

29、 regret. 這句話用了不定式作表語(yǔ)和so that 引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句，talk to someone you trust about howyou feel 這句話用了定語(yǔ)從句。文章還使用了合適的連接詞First, Second, And third使文章很連貫。典例04學(xué)校英語(yǔ)報(bào)正在醞釀改版，擬從現(xiàn)有的三個(gè)欄目（健康、娛樂、文化）中去除一個(gè)，并從三個(gè)備選欄目（時(shí)尚、職業(yè)規(guī)劃、讀者反饋 ）中挑選一個(gè)納入該報(bào)。假設(shè)你是該校學(xué)生程飛，給校報(bào)編輯寫一封電子郵件，表達(dá)你的觀點(diǎn)。郵件須包括以下內(nèi)容：1 .你建議去除的欄目及去除的理由；2 .你建議增加的欄目及增加的理由?！緦懽髦笇?dǎo)】這篇書面表達(dá)屬

30、于提綱類范疇，這篇作文要求就校英語(yǔ)報(bào)改版是事情給校報(bào)編輯寫一封電子郵件，表 達(dá)你的觀點(diǎn)。郵件須包括以下內(nèi)容二L你建議去除的欄目及去除的理由1s 2你建議增加的欄目及增加的理 由，根據(jù)自己的建議選定欄目的設(shè)置并以件方式表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn).考生在確立郵件文體之后，要弄清要 點(diǎn)、，圍繞要點(diǎn)展開,條理要清晰，理由要充分，關(guān)鍵的是在寫作的過程中要注意人稱、時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)和常 見的語(yǔ)法問題，文章盡蚩簡(jiǎn)潔，在文章中盡可能多地使用高大上的詞匯,遵循矩語(yǔ)優(yōu)先原則再配以特殊 句型和復(fù)合句的應(yīng)用，讓文章更上檔次U【范文賞析】Dear Editor,I ' ve learned that our English Po

31、st is being reformed and one of the three columnsis to be replaced by a new one. I' m writing this e-mail to share with you my opinions.Needless to say, the columns will definitely be designed according to students'interest and have positive effects on their study and life.Compared to the en

32、tertainment, I hold the view that the value of the columnsconcerning health and culture is more important. The main factor is that it is of great significance to keep healthy while loss of health means kissing goodbye to life.Consequently, more knowledge of how to keep fit can improve the quality of

33、 life. In addition, the progress in acquiring culture s contributes to broadeningone' shorizons, which in turn is beneficial to one' s study and the establishment of philosophy of life.Furthermore, the career planning should be taken into account in the school English Post . On the one hand,

34、 it covers one ' s c areer development a great deal. On the other hand, it makes a great difference to one' s career success in the future.What has been mentioned above is my personal ideas. Here I am in the hope that my advice will add a brilliant touch to the improved version of our school

35、EnglishPost.Yours sincerely, Cheng Fei 【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】所給范文語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)潔，運(yùn)用了一些詞組：share with 和分享，needless to say 不必說(shuō),according to 根據(jù)，have positive effects on 對(duì)有積極的影響，in turn 反之,take into account 將考慮在內(nèi)，makes a great difference to 對(duì)有很大的影響，in the hope that 希望，句式上體現(xiàn)出多變的特點(diǎn)，如： Compared to the entertainment, I hold the view t

36、hat the value of the columns concerning health and culture is more important. 這句話用 了過去分詞和同位語(yǔ)從句， The main factor is that it is of great significance to keep healthy while loss of health means kissing goodbye to life.這句話用 了表語(yǔ)從句和 while 表示對(duì)比的用法，the progress in acquiring cultures contributes to broadenin

37、g one' s horizons, which in turn is beneficial to one' s study and the establishment of philosophy of life.這句話使用 了 非限制性定語(yǔ)從句， What hasbeen mentioned above is my personal ideas.這句話用 了主語(yǔ)從句。范文中還使用了Inaddition, Furthermore, On the one hand, On the other hand這樣的關(guān)聯(lián)詞，使文章更力口連貫。必背范文Writtingl假定你是李華，你校在學(xué)

38、生中征集意見，詢問學(xué)生是否贊成開設(shè)iPad課堂(iPadclassrooms)。你支持開設(shè)iPad課堂；請(qǐng)給校長(zhǎng)寫一封建議信，要點(diǎn)如下：1 .資源豐富；2 .促進(jìn)交流；3 .利于環(huán)保；4 .其他理由。注意：1 .詞數(shù)100左右;2 .可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3 .開頭語(yǔ)已為你寫好。Dear Headmaster,We have been asked about our opinions on opening iPadclassrooms.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【范文】Dear Headmaster,We have been asked about our opin

39、ions on opening iPad classrooms. I am in favor of this plan for the following reasons. To begin with, everyone learns differently.Students can customize their iPad with materials that fit their level and learningstyle, and thus tailorit to differentneeds. Moreover, whenconnected to the Internet,stud

40、ents can interactwith teachers and classmates about what they learn moreconveniently. For the sake of environmental protection, opening iPad classrooms isa good way to save trees that we have been cutting down for paper. Most importantly,I believe students will develop their interests in the subject

41、s by enjoying a new way of learning.I hope you would take myideas into consideration and we look forward to attending an iPad class.Yours sincerely,Li HuaWriting 2據(jù)報(bào)道， 藏羚羊（Tibetan antelope）受非法捕殺而瀕臨滅絕，總數(shù)從 1990年的100萬(wàn)只銳減到現(xiàn)在不足10萬(wàn)只。假設(shè)你是李華，現(xiàn)請(qǐng)用英文給中國(guó)野生動(dòng)物保護(hù)協(xié)會(huì)CWCA（ChinaWildlife Conservation Association）的會(huì)長(zhǎng)寫一封

42、建議信。內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括： 簡(jiǎn)述藏羚羊的現(xiàn)狀； 陳述原因（取羊皮獲利等）； 提出你的建議（加大宣傳力度、增加資金、選派志愿者等 ）。注意：1 .開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)（可根據(jù)內(nèi)容需要適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)）；2 .詞數(shù)100左右。Dear President,I ' m writing to give some suggestions to further protect the Tibetanantelope. Looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【范文】Dear President,I ' m writing to

43、 give some suggestions to further protect the Tibetan antelope. As is often reported, too many Tibetan antelopes are being hunted and killed illegally for their fur. By selling the fur, the illegal hunters can make great profits. As a result, the number of the Tibetan antelopes is decreasing rapidly

44、 from about 1,000,000 in 1990 to less than 100,000 at present.Immediate measures must be taken to improve the present situation. First, the importance of protecting the Tibetan antelopes should be promoted. Second, would you provide more money for the conservation of the Tibetan antelopes? Last but

45、not least, I suggest that some volunteers be sent there to help protect the Tibetan antelopes.These are my suggestions and I hope they could mean something for a better future of the Tibetan antelopes.Looking forward to your reply.Yours sincLi HuaWriting 3你是張偉的好朋友 John ,張偉即將參加學(xué)校的英語(yǔ)朗誦比賽，向你求助，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下 內(nèi)

46、容給他寫一封建議信。1 .比賽之前：認(rèn)真準(zhǔn)備，如平時(shí)可對(duì)著鏡子練習(xí)；用語(yǔ)簡(jiǎn)練，使評(píng)委印象深刻。2 .比賽時(shí)：保持微笑；忘詞時(shí)不緊張，繼續(xù)演講。寫作內(nèi)容：1 .說(shuō)明回信的意圖；2 .向張偉提出建議；3 .預(yù)祝張偉比賽成功。Dear Zhangwei,Yours,John【范文】Dear Zhangwei,You have told me that you are very nervous about the coming speech contest andI will try to make some suggestions which I hope can help you. In my o

47、pinion, you should get well prepared before the speech contest by practising before a mirror.Besides, you had better use a brief and concise language in your speech so thatyou can leave a deep impression on the judges. Whenyou are giving the speech, remember to keep smile and even if you forget your

48、 words, don' t be panic and just continueyour speech, because no one will notice it. Wish you success in the speech!Yours ,JohnWriting 4假如你是黎斌老師，一個(gè)名叫李華的學(xué)生來(lái)信詢問如何學(xué)好英語(yǔ)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示給他寫一封建議信：1 .詞匯對(duì)提高英語(yǔ)聽、說(shuō)、讀、寫的技能起到重要的作用。2 .養(yǎng)成學(xué)練結(jié)合的習(xí)慣。3 .培養(yǎng)興趣。要求：t數(shù)：100? 120。Dear Li Hua,I am so sorry to hear that you are having trouble in learningEnglish. However, the situationis