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1、2020高考英語(yǔ)沖刺短文改錯(cuò)最新名校模擬30篇（下）短文改錯(cuò)162020年百師聯(lián)盟屆全國(guó)高三沖刺考（五）My uncle, director of Yonghua Company, has several expensive cars, which he used to enjoy driving. However, recently he has begun to ride his bicycle at and from work following a doctor's advices. The benefits of the change are obviously. He ha

2、s become more energetic and is in good shape than before. Besides, he is happy that he can make difference to reducing pollution and preserve natural resources. Following his example, more and more people in his company, which spend a lot of time sitting in the office every day, have been started us

3、ing bicycles, saying that with the popularity of shared bicycles, this is extremely convenient. Now this has become a new fashion in the company to go green or keep fit.參考答案：My uncle, director of Yonghua Company, has several expensive cars, which he used to enjoy driving.However, recently he has beg

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6、any to go green or_keep fit. itand172020年百師聯(lián)盟屆全國(guó)高三沖刺考（四）Of all my teachers, Mr. Moore is the one what impresses me most. Though he is 43, but he looks very young for his age. And he is one of most popular teachers in our school.Comparing with other teachers, Mr. Moore pays more attention to his way

7、of teaching. He tries various way to make his classeslively and interesting. In his opinion, we should not only know “what”but also understand “why” Therefore, instead of giving us answers immediately, he encourages us to think for us whenever he puts forward questions. Under his help, we've lea

8、rned how to analyze or settle problems. What a wonderfully world of "why" he leads us to!He is such a learned person that we all admired him very much.Of all my teachers, Mr. Moore is the one what impresses me most. Though he is 43, but he looks very young that/ who刪掉for his age. And he is

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11、ed him very much. admire18 山西大同市第一中學(xué) 2020屆高三年級(jí)英語(yǔ)模擬試卷三Recently I found a couple of donation box in my living community. People come to it when theyhave clothes they don't wear. The donation box, I think, is of great useful. I have a lot of clotheswhich don't fit for me any longer. I have no i

12、dea before about how to deal with the clothes thatare real new and still in good condition. Now I know how to do next. I will donate them or helpthose people in need. So I think the donation box is good idea that lights up our life and makethe world a better place to live in.參考答案Recently I found a c

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14、 real new and still in good condition. Now I know how to do next. I will donate them _or help reallywhatandthose people in need. So I think the donation box is gooclA idea that lights up our life and make amakesthe world a better place to live in.19四川省三臺(tái)中學(xué)實(shí)驗(yàn)學(xué)校2017級(jí)高三上期入學(xué)考試My friend Lily and I were o

15、n the way back to home from school when we saw a boy fall off his bicycles. The boy lay on the ground, screamed in pain. We rushed to help and found if the boy's left leg was bleeding. It happened that we have learned some knowledge about first aid before, so we knew how we should do. We dialed

16、“120” and called an ambulance. While waiting it, I took out my handkerchief and pressed them onto the bleeding point. Then we rolled the boy onto one side but put him in the recovery position. We stayed with him until the ambulance arrived 5 minutes late.My friend Lily and I were on the way back to

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19、y is a girl whom loves writing. Both of her parents were writers. She dreams that to be a writer, too. She believes though creativity is so importance that a good writer can-working'istmose cribciEd. So in herspare time, she reads varieties of books instead playing games. She learned a lot by re

20、ad other passages. With his hard work, she got first prize in a writing competition in 2019 and since then she began to works for the school newspaper. She was very happily because she has taken the first step to be the writer.Jenny is a girl whom loves writing. Both of her parents were writers. She

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22、got first prize in a writing competition in 2019 and since then she began to works for herthe school newspaper. She was very happily because she has taken the first step to be_the writer.happya21Last Friday, our class was invited an old craftsman to teach us how to making dough figurine（面 人）.When th

23、e craftsman came into the classroom, we gave him warm welcome and two boy helped him with the tool box. First, he shows us the basic steps and skills of making dough figurines. We stood around him or watched attentively. Then we started to have a try itself. The old man walked around and helped us p

24、atient. Finally, we put the figurines we made on the table and took pictureswith the old craftsman. Looking on the figurines, we were all very exciting. We hope we can havemore activity of this kind!I ,Last Friday, our class was invited an old craftsman to teach us how to dough figurine（面makeA人）.Whe

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26、round and helped us. Finally, we put the figurines we made on thepatientlyon -table and took pictures with the old craftsman. Looking the figurines, we were all very atexcitingactivity.We hope we can have moreof this kind! excitedactivities22I always dream life in the future. What will it be like?an

27、d in pace. Besides, probably therePerhaps some people will go to the moon for the holiday, and some people may live under the seas morere educational program on the Internet. And therefore,students will be able to study at home instead of go to school every day. Whatfuture each family will have a ro

28、bot, that will be able to do whatever it was told to, such as going toshopping, doing housework and so on.With the breakthrough of technology, I believe that their life will certainly become easier, happy andmore colorful.I always dream life in the future. What will it be like?about/ofr thePerhaps s

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31、station but from there I was supposed to taking a bus to New YorkCity. It was going to be long journey. I had been packed some chocolates in my suitcase to eat in theway. When the ride was over, I paid the driver the due amount and gave him a tip. He got mysuitcase out. I took them and started walki

32、ng away. However, I realized that it was one of theopportunity to perform an act of kindness. I want to give away all the chocolates to the driver. Afterall, he had served me even though it was just his job. I gave them away and saw the brightly smilelight up his face, what made me feel my heart fil

33、led with happiness.buttakinI was riding in a taxi to the bus stationfrom there I was supposed to g a bus to Newso/andtakeYork City. It was going to be - long journey. I had beenpacked some chocolates in my suitcase to aeat- the way. When the ride was over, I paid the driver the due amount and gave h

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35、way and sawbrightlythatthesmile light up his face, made me feel my heart filled with happiness.brightwhich24There are four seasons in a year and each is unique. However, autumn is the one I like best. Beloware the reason why I have a preference for themIt seems to me what autumn is the most grand an

36、d impressive season in a year. First of all, neither can I suffer summer's heat, or can I go through winter's coldness at this time. In addition, it is general acknowledged that autumn is symbol of harvest. The smile from farmers, who are getting a good harvest, always making me happy. What

37、is the most important is that autumn also see leaves of bushes and trees to turn red, gold or orange. What a colorful world it is!That's why I like autumn better.reasonare the why I have a preference forthemitreasons,whatIt seems to me thatThere are four seasons in a year and each is unique. How

38、ever, autumn is the one I like best. Belowautumn is the most grand and impressive season in a year. First of all, neitherrrorcan I suffer summer's heat,can I go through winter's coldness at this time. In addition, it norgeneralisacknowledged that autumn is symbol of harvest. The smile from f

39、armers, who aregenerallythemakinggetting a good harvest, always me happy. What is the most important is that autumnmakesalso -see leaves of bushes and treesto. turn red, gold or orange. What a colorful world it is! seesbetterThat's why I like autumn best25On December 30, after two weeks training

40、, we finally began our work for volunteer guides in a museum. During the first two weeks, I learnt a lot about the story behind the artworks. In order to do good in the work, my teammates and I made fully preparations. We first worked out a careful plan. Then we practiced use proper body language to

41、 explain the artworks better. The month-long volunteer work has now come to end, from what I understand that it isn' t easy to be a good guid(Besides, I also realize that how important teamwork is. I believed that I will get lifelong benefits from the short and meaningful experience.On December

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44、evefrom the short and meaningful experience. but26I am very luckily to have the opportunity to see so many place, but sometimes I experienceculture shock when I see or do something new. Dad and I now are travelled through Denmark,Norway and Sweden. I used to thinking that these countries are the sam

45、e, but not any more. People inDenmark are a bit of friendlier, while Norwegians and Swedes prefer not to talk to strangers. I ' msurprised to learn that many people there speak English in addition their national languages. InSweden, it seems that anyone has golden hair and blue eyes. I feel a li

46、ttle strange with my black hairand dark eyes. I imagine this is that foreigners feel when they visit China!I am very luckily to have the opportunity to see so many place, but sometimes I experiencecultureplacesluckyandshock when I see or do something new. Dad and I now are travelled through Denmark,

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48、rangers. Ito刪掉learn that many people there speak English in additionA their national languages. In Sweden, itheretoseems that anyone has golden hair and blue eyes. I feel a little strange with my black hair anddarkeveryoneeyes. I imagine this is that foreigners feel when they visit China!how27Hearin

49、g a news that the 2022 Winter Olympics would be hold in China, I felt very excited. Itstruck to me how I learned skating when I was a child. At 7, I began to go crazy about skating, likeall my friend. At the beginning, it extremely tough for me to keep my balance. I always fall over onthe ground, as

50、 a result of which I thought I had no talent for skating. So I gradually lost confidenceand became impatient. The more impatient I was, the more terrible I did. I was about to give upwhile my father came to my assistance. Encouraged by her, I restored confidence and stood up again.As I practiced ska

51、ting, he always created a relaxed atmosphere and put forward some specific advice.Eventually, I made it.Hearing a news that the 2022 Winter Olympics would be hold in China, I felt very excited. It strucktheto me how I learned skating when I was a child. At 7, I began to go crazy about skating, like

52、all my刪掉to 或把struck改為occurredfriendswasfellground, as a result of which I thought I had no talent for skating. So I gradually lost confidence andbecame impatient. The more impatient I was, the more terrible I did. I was about to give up while my terriblywhen father came to my assistance. Encouraged

53、by her, I restored confidence and stood up again. As I himpracticed skating, he always created a relaxed atmosphere and put forward some specific advice. relaxingEventually, I made it.28In the past two years, our school had organized many activities. What impressed me most was an activity calling “

54、Learning to Farm ” . In an autumn afternoon, we went to the farm, where we learn to plant potatoes. Having been in the city for such a long time, we are so happy to go to the countryside. After we got there, we were divided into three groups, we started to work. Some students cut potatoes into piece

55、s, some dug hole, and the others put the pieces of potatoes into the holes, put the earth back and pushed them down hard. We were all busy working as all the work was done. Though we were tired out, we felt pleased on our way back to home. 參考答案In the past two years, our school had organized many act

56、ivities. What impressed me most was an haveactivity calling “ Learning to Farm ” . In an autumn afternoon,we went to the farm, where we calledOnalearned to plant potatoes. Having been in the city for such a long time, we are so happy to go to werethe countryside. After we got there, we were divided

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58、d on our way backto home.刪掉29Dear Joy,How are you doing? Here is an exciting news for you. There will be an invention competition in our school in the 20th of October. However, there is a rule the participants shall be in a group. But I ' d like to invite you to be my partners.I know that you have been longed to design a tiny cool