中文論文中的英文寫作一些較常見的問題

1、 中文論文中的英文寫作：中文論文中的英文寫作：一些較常見的問題一些較常見的問題中國醫(yī)學科學院中國醫(yī)學科學院北京協(xié)和醫(yī)學院北京協(xié)和醫(yī)學院腫瘤研究所腫瘤研究所周傳農(nóng)周傳農(nóng)題目題目題目題目太繁太繁 雙側(cè)迷走神經(jīng)和頸總動脈聯(lián)合切斷法雙側(cè)迷走神經(jīng)和頸總動脈聯(lián)合切斷法 建立急性腦缺血大鼠動物模型的實驗研究建立急性腦缺血大鼠動物模型的實驗研究 Bilateral vagotomy and carotid arteries combined cutting method Establishment of rat model of acute focal cerebral ischemia animal mod

2、el experimental study 雙側(cè)迷走神經(jīng)和頸總動脈聯(lián)合切斷法建立急性腦雙側(cè)迷走神經(jīng)和頸總動脈聯(lián)合切斷法建立急性腦缺血大鼠動物模型缺血大鼠動物模型 Establishment of a rat model of acute focal cerebral ischemia by combined bilateral vagotomy and carotid artery cutting題目題目太大太大 兒童單純性肥胖模型的制作兒童單純性肥胖模型的制作 Establishment of Childood Simple Obesity Animal Model 兒童單純性肥胖兒童單純性

3、肥胖小鼠小鼠模型的制作模型的制作 Establishment of a mouse model of childhood simple obesity （本文只作了小鼠實驗，未涉及其他動物）題目題目太籠統(tǒng)太籠統(tǒng) 不同測壓方法測試大鼠結(jié)腸破裂壓不同測壓方法測試大鼠結(jié)腸破裂壓 A comparison of different pressure testing systems for hollow organ of laboratory animals Comparison of different methods for testing the colon rupture pressure in

4、 rats題目題目不能反映原意、用錯單詞不能反映原意、用錯單詞 基因工程大鼠研究進展基因工程大鼠研究進展 Process in Rat Genetics Progress in research on rat genetic engineering題目題目濫用縮寫濫用縮寫 乳酸調(diào)控大鼠腸黏膜微血管內(nèi)皮細胞乳酸調(diào)控大鼠腸黏膜微血管內(nèi)皮細胞NF-B信號通路的研究信號通路的研究 Lactic acid inhibits NF-B signaling pathways in RIMMVECs 讀者看不懂讀者看不懂 RIMMVECs是什么；是什么；“的研究的研究”可以省去。可以省去。題目題目濫用縮寫濫用

5、縮寫 哺乳動物哺乳動物 ES 細胞與細胞與 EG 細胞研究細胞研究進展進展 哺乳動物哺乳動物 胚胎干細胞胚胎干細胞與與 胚胎生殖胚胎生殖 細胞細胞研究進展研究進展 ES embryonic stem cells EG embryonic germ cells題目題目 拼寫錯誤拼寫錯誤 comparision of hematological parameters in germ-free and conventional guinea pig comparison of hematological parameters in germ-free and conventional guinea

6、pig題目題目 用錯單詞用錯單詞 適度深吸氣呼吸控制部分乳腺外照射時基于適度深吸氣呼吸控制部分乳腺外照射時基于不不同參照物同參照物配準對銀夾構(gòu)成幾何體分次內(nèi)位移的配準對銀夾構(gòu)成幾何體分次內(nèi)位移的影響影響 Influence of registration based on the different reference markets on the displacement of the geometry consisted of all clips in the cavity for external-beam partial breast irradiation at moderate d

7、eep inspiration breath holding markers署名與單位署名與單位署名署名大小寫大小寫 Li bao-ming , wang zhida，liu xiaowen，yao tao,ouyang xiaotong,su jiagang Li Bao-ming , Wang Zhi-da，Liu Xiao-wen，Yao Tao, Ouyang Xiao-tong, Su Jia-gang 姓名大寫、標點符號姓名大寫、標點符號單位單位錯詞、錯名、大小寫錯詞、錯名、大小寫 The forth Applicated Hospital of Suzhou University

8、 the Forth Affiliated Hospital of Soochow University歷史形成的傳統(tǒng)地名，已成為這所大學的正式名稱，不可用現(xiàn)今的漢語拼音代替單位單位不全不全 Academy of Military Sciences Academy of Military Medical Sciences單位單位大小寫大小寫 Department of , The Fifth Central Hospital of Tianjin, Tianjin 300162, china. Department of , The Fifth Central Hospital of Tian

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10、誤注釋錯誤注釋 無特定病原體無特定病原體 (special pathogen free，SPF) 無特定病原體無特定病原體 (specific pathogen free，SPF) 注釋錯誤注釋錯誤 獨立通風籠具獨立通風籠具 (Individually wentilate cagesdul，IVC) (Individually ventilated cages，IVC) 注釋錯誤注釋錯誤 集落形成抑制法集落形成抑制法 (human tumor cell cloning assay , HTCA ) (colony formation inhibition assay )注釋錯誤注釋錯誤 自然殺

11、傷細胞自然殺傷細胞 (natural kill cell，NK) 自然殺傷細胞自然殺傷細胞 (natural killer cell，NK)注釋錯誤注釋錯誤 神經(jīng)生長因子神經(jīng)生長因子（never growth factor，NGF） 神經(jīng)生長因子神經(jīng)生長因子（nerve growth factor，NGF） 全文多處，全都錯用這個單詞參考文獻的參考文獻的書寫錯誤書寫錯誤參考文獻參考文獻作者作者丟失第一作者、姓與名顛倒丟失第一作者、姓與名顛倒 Jeongmi An, Hee-Jin Y, Kimoon Park，et al. (原雜志原雜志) Jeoum Lee, Jeongmi An，Hee-

12、Jin Yang，Byung-Woo Kim, Kimoon Park. Lee J, An J, Yang HJ，et al. 參考文獻參考文獻作者作者姓名拼寫錯誤、標點符號姓名拼寫錯誤、標點符號 Gordon MN,K ing DL,D iam ond DM et al. Gordon MN, King DL, Diamond DM, et al. 參考文獻參考文獻作者作者姓與名顛倒、標點符號姓與名顛倒、標點符號 Maria WW,Edward P,Dennis L,et al . Werner-Wasik M, Pequinot E, Leeper D, 原文：原文：Maria Wern

13、er-Wasik, Edward Pequinot, Dennis Leeper, et al. 參考文獻參考文獻作者作者不可用怪異的寫法不可用怪異的寫法 Giuseppe VerdileSamuel E Gandy Ralph N. Martins. Giuseppe Verdile G, Gandy SE, Martins RN. 參考文獻參考文獻作者作者etc./et al. Tyler KL, Barton ES, Ibach ML,ETC. Tyler KL, Barton ES, Ibach ML, et al. 拉丁文：etc. 是指物，例如 apple, banana, etc

14、.et al. 是指人，例如 Gordon MN, King DL, Diamond DM, et al. 不可混淆。參考文獻參考文獻不可出現(xiàn)兩批作者不可出現(xiàn)兩批作者 Vanini G, Wathen BL, Lydic R, et al. Baghdoyan,et al.Endogenous GABA Levels in the potine Vanini G, Wathen BL, Lydic R, et al. Endogenous GABA Levels in the potine 參考文獻參考文獻作者作者不可用數(shù)字不可用數(shù)字11代替文字母代替文字母ll、姓與名顛倒、大小寫、姓與名顛倒

15、、大小寫、etc. Wi11iam Luyties, Peter J. Bredenbeek, Ans F.H. noten etc. Luytjes W, Bredenbeek PJ, Noten AF, et al. 參考文獻參考文獻錯寫中國作者、標點錯寫中國作者、標點 Yuhuan W,Xinming T,Charles H,et al. Wang YH, Tu XM, Humphrey C, et al. 原文：原文：Yuhuan Wang, Xinming Tu, Charles Humphrey, 參考文獻參考文獻引錯作者、文題拼寫錯誤、雜志拼寫錯誤引錯作者、文題拼寫錯誤、雜志拼寫

16、錯誤 Schmitt CA, Lowe SW. Apoptosis cell death following exposure to fluoride in rat alveolar macrophage. Arch Toxical, 1996, 70: 249-251 Hirano S, Ando M. Apoptotic cell death following exposure to fluoride in rat alveolar macrophages. Arch Toxicol, 1996, 70: 249-251參考文獻參考文獻缺雜志、缺標點缺雜志、缺標點 Age-related

17、 increase inducible atrial fibrillation 201021(1):88-93. Age-related increase inducible atrial fibrillation. J Cardiovasc Electrophysiol 2010，21(1): 88-93. 參考文獻參考文獻文題首詞丟失文題首詞丟失Campylobacter jejuni infection in different mice strains Primary Campylobacter jejuni infection in different mice strains 參考

18、文獻參考文獻丟了作者、寫了單位丟了作者、寫了單位 Cleveland Clinic Foundation, Cleveland, OH, USA. The global epidemiology of heart failure. Med Clin N Am 2004, 88: 1135-1143. Young JB. The global epidemiology of heart failure. Med Clin N Am 2004, 88: 1135-1143. 參考文獻參考文獻文題脫漏文題脫漏 Fossella FV, DeVore R, Kerr RN, et al. Random

19、ized phase III trial of docetaxel versus vinorelbine or ifosfamide in patients with advanced non-small-cell lung cancer previously treated with platinum-containing chemotherapy regimens. The TAX 320 Non-Small Cell Lung Cancer Study Group. J Clin Oncol, 2000，18: 2354-2362. 濫用縮寫濫用縮寫濫用縮寫濫用縮寫 Ca.C 中中sur

20、vivn陽性陽性 “Ca.C”是什么？是什么？ （一張照片的說明） （文內(nèi)根本就沒有見到過“Ca.C” ） （猜想是癌細胞的意思）英文摘要英文摘要濫用縮寫濫用縮寫 To screen the genes differentially expressed in human renal cell carcinoma (RCC) cell lines using SSH. To screen the genes differentially expressed in human renal cell carcinoma (RCC) cell lines using suppression subtr

21、active hybridization (SSH).（摘要首句）濫用縮寫濫用縮寫英文摘要英文摘要 IHC analysis on TMA revealed that Immunohistochemical analysis on tissue microarray revealed that 濫用縮寫濫用縮寫英文摘要英文摘要 Objective： To observe the affect of RGZ and ATRA on the growth of myeloma xenograft in nude mice and RGZ rosiglitazone ATRA all-trans-r

22、etinoic acid affect effect用錯詞用錯詞錯詞錯詞 大鼠給予藥液灌胃大鼠給予藥液灌胃 All rats were lavaged with KFL solution. All rats were gavaged with KFL solution.錯詞錯詞 神經(jīng)上皮移植神經(jīng)上皮移植 Neuralepithelial transplantation Neuroepithelial transplantation錯詞錯詞 巴馬小型豬巴馬小型豬12只只 12 Obama mini-pigs were randomly divided into 12 Bama mini-pigs

23、 were randomly divided into 錯詞錯詞 Low does Low dose High does High dose通篇如此錯詞錯詞 RT-PCR was used to amplification the full-length sequence of RT-PCR was used to amplify the full-length sequence of 錯詞錯詞 GeneBank GenBank 錯詞錯詞用詞顛倒了用詞顛倒了 正常、特異抗原正常、特異抗原批內(nèi)批內(nèi)變異系數(shù)分別為變異系數(shù)分別為8.3%和和6.4%，批間批間平均變異系數(shù)分別平均變異系數(shù)分別為為9.7

24、%和和11.5%. The inter-assay coefficient of variation of normal antigen and special antigen was 8.3% and 6.4%, and the intra-assay average coefficient of variation was 9.7% and 11.5%, respectively 錯詞錯詞 評價其抗癌作用評價其抗癌作用 To access the anti-tumor effect To assess the anti-tumor effect 錯詞錯詞 探討其作用機理探討其作用機理 To

25、 explicit the molecular mechanism of To explore the molecular mechanism of 英文摘要首句錯詞錯詞 系統(tǒng)性感染系統(tǒng)性感染 Systematic infection Systemic infection單復數(shù)單復數(shù) The level of P24 antigen in the supernatant were tested continuously. The level of P24 antigen in the supernatant was tested continuously. 其他其他不好的文章首句不好的文章首句

26、 MG患者通常有眼肌受累，患者通常有眼肌受累， 重癥肌無力（重癥肌無力（myasthenia gravis，MG）患者通常有眼肌受累，患者通常有眼肌受累， 不好的摘要首句不好的摘要首句 To Investigate the mechanism of NAFLD in gerbils To Investigate the mechanism of non-alcoholic fatty liver disease (NAFLD) in gerbils 中英文的語氣應(yīng)該一致中英文的語氣應(yīng)該一致 結(jié)論結(jié)論 Ezrin、E-cadherin和和CD44V6在在NSCLC的生長和轉(zhuǎn)移的生長和轉(zhuǎn)移過程中發(fā)

27、揮著重要的調(diào)控作過程中發(fā)揮著重要的調(diào)控作用，用， Ezrin, E-cadherin and CD44V6 probably play an important role in the regulation ofgrowth and meastasis of lung cancer. 材料與方法材料與方法 Methods Rats were divided randomly into 2 groups. Methods One hundred and twenty healthy adult male rats were randomly divided into two groups.英文無

28、頓號英文無頓號 The values of Ri, Re, Cl, MVV, FVC, Fev0.2, Fev0.2/FVC, FEF25-75%, PEF were 1.81 (0.94-4.10) cm H2O/mLs、1.83 (0.71-3.57) cm H2O/mLs、0.15（0.05-0.29）mL/cm H2O、144.65 (77.28-256.20) mL/min、8.49 (5.82-12.70) mL、5.72 (3.62-7.01)mL、68.12 (39.14-85.28)%、34.11 (28.25-46.87) mL/min、38.28 (30.75-50.25) mL/min, respectively.（9個參數(shù)）英文無頓號拼寫錯誤拼寫錯誤 主要組織相容性復合體主要組織相容性復合體II類類 (majorhistocompatibilitycomplex II, MHC II)