【高中英語寫作訓(xùn)練】靚化詞匯——學(xué)會運(yùn)用高級表達(dá)

1、寫作層級訓(xùn)練第三部分靚化詞匯一一學(xué)會運(yùn)用高級表達(dá)英語書面表達(dá)第五檔作文中提到：語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面有些許錯(cuò)誤，但為盡 力使用較復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)或較高級詞匯所致。換句話說，如果考生使用高級詞匯或句型， 即使犯了少量或輕微的語言錯(cuò)誤，也可不扣分，文章還是屬于最高檔次。因此， 為了讓文章檔次高，首先要學(xué)會使用高級詞匯。高級詞匯的使用能夠給文章增添色彩和畫面感。它會大大提升文章的檔次， 從而幫助考生獲得高分。要做到準(zhǔn)確使用高級詞匯，應(yīng)該注意以下幾個(gè)方面： 一、使用亮點(diǎn)詞匯的 4種方法1.標(biāo)新立異“語”眾不同在寫作時(shí)，恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂靡恍﹦e人可能想不到的詞匯或表達(dá)，會體現(xiàn)出自己的高水平。(1) Great cha ng

2、eshave taken place in our school in the last few years.A nd the newscame that a short film will be shown in our school.(2018 全國卷U書面表達(dá))f Our school has witnessecgreat cha nges in the last few years.A ndword came that ashort film will be shown in our school.(2018 全國卷U書面表達(dá))(2) 1 bmsy with my less ons n

3、ow, for the College Entrance Exam in ati on, which is veryimportant to me, is near.fInoccupied with my less ons now for the College Entrance Exam in ation, which is ofgreat importanceto me，is around the corner(2017 天津高考書面表達(dá) )(3) Our team, besidesregular training，will join in a variety of activities.

4、fOur team，apart/aside from regular training，will join in a variety of activities.(2017 全國卷川書面表達(dá))(4) Several days late，when the video was played on the graduation ceremonyit was verypopular.fSeveral days late，when the video was played on the graduation ceremony it was wellreceived(2017 北京高考書面表達(dá))2多樣表達(dá)

5、 避免重復(fù)在寫作時(shí)， 應(yīng)盡量避免重復(fù)使用相同的單詞或短語， 要盡量用貼切多樣的詞語來 展示自己的水平。用詞不同、表達(dá)方式迥異，也是高級用法。(1) Moreover， we will build a new stadium and with the stadium built， a wide range of sportsevents are able to be held.f Moreover, we will build a new stadium and with the stadium set up, a wide range of sportsevents are able to b

6、e held.(201 全國卷 川書面表達(dá))(2) The team will hold many activities, some of which will appeal to you, including manymatches.fThe team will hold a range of activities,some of which will appeal to you,including manymatches.(2017 全國卷川書面表達(dá))(3) We may have different opinions in organizing class activities.We m

7、ay have differentways to deal with such a situation.fWe may have different opinions in organizing class activities.We may havevarious waysto deal with such a situation.浙江高考書面表達(dá))3單詞短語 短語優(yōu)先 當(dāng)單詞和短語表示同一個(gè)意思時(shí), 優(yōu)先使用短語。 恰當(dāng)使用短語, 一方面能使文 章更加生動,另一方面也能展示出學(xué)生扎實(shí)的語言功底。(1) Hopefully, these suggestions would behelpful

8、/beneficial to you.fHopefully, these suggestions would beof great help/benefitto you.(2018 全國卷I書面表達(dá))(2) To learn more about the development of our school all the students are welcome towatch the short film Growing Together.fWith the aim of learning more about the development of our school，all the st

9、udents arewelcome to watch the short filmGrowing Togethe.(2018 全國卷n書面 表達(dá) )(3) There is no doubt that you should know about the history of the Tang Dynasty inadvance. f There is no doubt that you are supposedto know about the history of the TangDynasty in advance.（2017 全國卷I書面表達(dá)）（4）Firstly，the final e

10、xam of this term is comingso I am busy preparing for it.fTo begin with，the final exam of this term is around the corner so I am busy preparingfor it.（2017 天津高考書面表達(dá)）4用高級詞匯取代簡單詞匯為了表現(xiàn)自己的語言功底， 顯示出自己的寫作水平， 應(yīng)避免反復(fù)使用低年級學(xué)過 的簡單詞匯，盡量使用高中階段學(xué)到的詞匯來代替。（1）If you take my advice you are sureto have the most unforgett

11、able experienceduring your college in Beijing.fSo long asyou take my advice you are bound to have the most unforgettable experieneeduring your college in Beijing.（2018 北京高考書面表達(dá) ）（2）Second，I am trying my best to acquire the essential knowledge and skillsconcerning my position.fSecond，I am sparing no

12、effort to acquire the essential knowledge and skills concerningmy position.（2017 天津高考書面表達(dá) ）（3）I should say sorry for being unable to go to the bookstore with you on Fridayafternoon.fI should make an apology for being unable to go to the bookstore with you on Fridayafternoon.（2016 全國卷 川書面表達(dá)）二、使用亮點(diǎn)詞匯的

13、 2 點(diǎn)注意1 注意增加亮詞的 “出鏡率 ”，變消極詞匯為積極詞匯 閱讀中能認(rèn)識但寫作中不會用的詞匯屬于消極詞匯， 寫作中能運(yùn)用自如的詞匯為 積極詞匯，也就是平常所說的“第一反應(yīng)詞” 。積極詞匯量的多少直接決定著英 語作文表達(dá)水平的高低。 現(xiàn)在很多考生的困難是，頭腦中的很多詞匯介于積極詞 匯與消極詞匯之間； 另外，很多背過的消極詞匯如果較長時(shí)間不接觸就會變成陌 生詞匯。因此在備考過程中， 考生要做的事情就是迅速擴(kuò)大消極詞匯量并且保持 接觸的頻度，力爭使其變成積極詞匯。很多考生作文駐足不前的一個(gè)重要原因是反復(fù)使用初中學(xué)過的簡單詞匯， 背了大 量的亮詞妙語而不用。建議大家在想到一個(gè)表達(dá)時(shí)，務(wù)必要想

14、一想還有沒有更好 的表達(dá)方式，這就是我們平時(shí)常講的“頭腦風(fēng)暴法”。例如想表達(dá)“美麗的”這 個(gè)含義，大家首先想到的是“ beautiful，”那么在下筆時(shí)， 要想一想還有沒有更出 彩的表達(dá)， 如 “attractive 或“charming等。再如表達(dá)“困難的”時(shí)，大家常用“difficult，那是不是用“tough 或 “challenging 更與眾不同呢？2.注意亮點(diǎn)詞匯使用的場合寫作時(shí)，在用詞上不可隨心所欲，決不能為追求“高級”而使用復(fù)雜但毫無把握 的詞語，也不能滿篇堆積所謂的“高級”詞匯，否則給人過分炫耀之嫌，得不償失。一般來說，一篇文章能用好三至五個(gè)高級詞匯就可以了。另外，為能更好地

15、“完成規(guī)定的寫作任務(wù)”，減少錯(cuò)誤，特別提醒考生在使用“高級詞匯”時(shí)，一 定要注意遵循“準(zhǔn)確、恰當(dāng)”的原則，并且要注意使用的場合，難詞和生僻詞匯 并不一定就是高級詞匯，例如： 一大早我們買了一些圣誕禮物。Early in the morni ng we purchasedsome Christmas prese nts.（purchase 太過于書面 化，改為 bought 更地道）三、寫作的秘密武器一一 24 個(gè)高級詞匯名詞普通詞匯高級詞匯普通詞匯高級詞匯chaneeopport unitychoicealter nativeideaopi nionpeoplein dividualresul

16、tconsequeneeeffectin flue nee動詞havepossessreplacesubstitutebearput up withun derstandmake senseofdeveloppromotecon sidertake intoacco unt形容詞enoughadequaterichabundantproperappropriateimporta ntvital/ sig nificantin terest ingabsorb ing/difficultchalle ngingappeali ng副詞fin allyeve ntuallyhardlybarely

17、immediatelyin a flashno wadayscurre ntly連詞sothereforeandas well as(1) lt is of importanee for you to understand the conten, Tang poetry.f It is of importanee for you to make sense othe content, Tang poetry.f It is of importanee for you to be aware of the conten,Tang poetry.(2017 全國卷I書面表達(dá))(2) That s

18、why I think the trip along the Yangtze River will be a beCeoice.fThatswhy I think the trip along the Yangtze Riverwill bea betteralternative.(2017 北京高考書面表達(dá))(3) In the coming three years our school life will be difficult.fIn the coming three years our school life will be challenging四、寫作的頂級裝備一一 27 個(gè)加分

19、詞匯表達(dá)關(guān)注的名詞attention, focus，concern表達(dá)爭論的名詞discussion，debate argument表達(dá)現(xiàn)象的名詞phe nomenon表達(dá)優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)的名詞advantage disadvantage strength，weakness表達(dá)增長或下降的動詞in crease accumulate, decrease decli ne表達(dá)導(dǎo)致后果的動詞短語result in， lead to, bring about， con tribute to，giverise to表達(dá)支持、反對的動詞短語approve of，be in favor of， object to表

20、達(dá)可能性的形容詞likely表達(dá)有好處的形容詞ben eficial表達(dá)強(qiáng)調(diào)的副詞particularly，especially(1) The picture shows a commonphenomenonthese days.這幅圖顯示了這些日子的一個(gè)常見現(xiàn)象。(2) The Internet hasbrought about many cha nges in the workplace.網(wǎng)絡(luò)給工作場所帶來了很多變化。（3）0ur teacher is likely to get angry when she sees the dirty floor.我們的老師看到地面這么臟時(shí)，可能會發(fā)火

21、。II綜合演練III請用高級詞匯替換下列句子中的加黑部分1. We were sointerested in the competitio n that we formed a group to take part in it.（2018 天津高考書面表達(dá)）keen on2. Imery glad to learn that you are coming in September.（2018 全國卷I書面表 達(dá)）more than3.We are desperately in need of your helpAs a result, I sincerely invite you to joi

22、n us.（2018 天津高考書面表達(dá)）As a consequenee4. So, please spend some time taking a brief look at the history of the Tang Dynas, whichwill help you prepare for your class.（2017 全國卷I書面表達(dá)Therefore；make_preparations _for5. The craftsmen will show visitors how to cut paper into different shapeson the spot.（2017

23、全國卷n書面表達(dá)）various/a range _of6. In order to get a better understanding of Tang poetry I advise you to learn some briefhistory of the Tang Dynasty in advance.（2017 全國卷I書面表達(dá)）acquire7. Our class thought of the idea to make better use of used materials.（201 北 京高考 書面表達(dá)）came 丄一 with8. The reasons ar*he fol

24、lowing.（2016 四川高考書面表達(dá)）as_follows9. At the same time , I decidedto study harder rather than waste precious time on thoseuseless thin gs.（湖南高考書面表達(dá)）made _up _my _mind10 . As high school students, we should be neatly dressed when at school.aresupposed。11. There s no harm in your staying up latemetimesoc

25、casionally/onee in a while 12 . Theteacher directed the gifted students towards the more difficult courses.challe ngingn.句型轉(zhuǎn)換1. She didn t listen to what her teacher said in the class. f She turned a deaf ear to whather teacher said in the class.2. At that time , I realized that she didnfAt that tim

26、e,it occurred to me that she didn t tell the truth.3. You should finish your homework before you play football.fYou .are supposed to fin ish your homework before you play football.4. In my opinion , neither you nor she has met the standard.fAs far as Inconcerned, neither you nor she has met the stan

27、dard.5. I can t bear the way she treats her pare nts any Ion ger.fI can no longer put .up with the way she treats her pare nts.6. During the mountain climbing , please help each other and pay special attention toyour safety.fIn the course of the mountain- climbing,please help each other and pay spec

28、ial atte nti onto your safety.7.After five hours stop work, we were all tired.fAfter five hours -nop work,we were all worn out.8. Jack is very clever, who often thinks of new ideas.fJack is very cleve,who often comes up with new ideas.川.請用高級詞匯對下文黑體部分進(jìn)行提升考生作文Dear Pete,It is a great honor for me to invite you to l.take part in the activity “ Build a CivilizedCampus ” this mon th.We 2.plan to go hand in hand to 3.build our civilized campus where beauty andt tell the truth.harm ony meet.To achieve the goal we ll 4a sk the school to com muni cate with eac