2018版高三英語一輪復(fù)習(xí)2012-2016年五年真題分類5短文改錯題及答案

1、20122016年短文改錯Correction 12016·乙卷(全國) My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live. Though not very big, but the restaurant is popular in our area. It is always crowded with customers at meal times. Some people even had to wait outside. My uncle tells me that the key to his success

2、 is honest. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time. Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady.Correction 22016·甲卷（全國） The summer holiday is coming. My classm

3、ates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday. We can chose between staying at home and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about world. If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden your view and gain

4、 knowledges we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot.Correction 32016·丙卷（全國） The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me. They were also

5、the best and worse years in my life. At the first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself. However, my parents didn't seem to think such. They always tell me what to do and how to do it. At one time, I even felt my parents couldn't understand me so I hoped I could b

6、e freely from them. I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes. Now I am leaving home to college. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help.Correction 42016·四川It is Mother's Day today. Though it's a western festival, it&

7、#39;s popular in China now.Mom has a full-time job, so she has to do most of the houseworks. She is a great mother. Both Dad or I planned to do something on Mother's Day. We get up early in the morning. Dad cleaned the house, and then went on shopping. When he came back, I found a bunch of flowe

8、rs in her hand. I asked Mom to stay in the sitting room and I cooked in kitchen. The dishes what I cooked were Mom's favoritest. At dinner, we said to her, "Happy Mother's Day!" Mom was grateful and moving.Correction 52016·浙江 When I was a very young children, my father created

9、 a regular practice I remember well years late. Every time he arrived home at end of the day, we'd greet her at the door. He would ask who we was and pretend not to knowing us. Then he and my mother would have had a drink while she prepared dinner and they would talk about his day and hers. Whil

10、e they chat, my father would lift my sister and me up to sit in the top of the fridge. It was both excited and frightening to be up there! My sister and I thought he was so cool for putting us there.Correction6 2015·新課標(biāo)全國卷 When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city.I think I would be happy

11、 there.Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside.There the air is clean or the mountains are green.Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted.Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously prob

12、lem.The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier.Much rare animals are dying out.We must found ways to protect your environment.If we fail to do so, we'll live to regret it.Correction7 2015·新課標(biāo)全國卷 One day, little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent. It was very crowded.

13、Tony saw a toy on a shop window. He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop. After looks at the toy for some time, he turned around and found where his parents were missing. Tony was scared and begun to cry. A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop. Five minut

14、es later, Tony saw parents. Mom said, "How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried." Tony promised her that this would never happen again.Correction8 2015·陜西My soccer coach retired in last week. I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party. My mum mak

15、es the better biscuits in the world, so I decide to ask her for help. Mum taught me some basic step of baking. I insisted on doing most of the baking myself. I thought the biscuits were really well. My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up. At a party, my coac

16、h, with a biscuit in his mouth, asked surprisingly who made them and joked, "I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits."My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter!Correction9 2015·四川Hi, Janice,It'

17、s been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing.As I tell you last time, I made three new friend here. We hang out together during lunch and after school. We've been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars. It'

18、s been three Saturdays now and it really costs me many. And I started to see this as a time-wasting activity! In fact, I don't like to go anymore, so I'm afraid I'll lose their friendship. How do you think I should do? If you are me, would you talk to him?Please help with me and give me

19、some advice. GraceCorrection10 2015·浙江 My old classroom was interesting because three side of the classroom were made from glass. I enjoyed sit close to the windows and looking at the view. On the left-hand side of the class, I could easy see the football field. In the mornings, it was full of

20、students exercising. The view from the back of the classroom is also splendid. Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them. Farther in the distance, I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains. On the right side of the class was the road. I was always interested to s

21、ee the drivers in hurry in the morning. The position of the classroom with its view made me felt like I was dreaming. If I was only a child when I studied in that classroom, I will never forget it.Correction11 2014·新課標(biāo)全國卷 Nearly five years before, and with the help by our father, my sister and

22、I planted some cherry tomatoes (圣女果) in our back garden. Since then for all these year we had been allowing tomatoes to self-seed where they please. As result, the plants are growing somewhere. The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste. There are so much that we often share them with our nei

23、ghbors. Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost!Correction12 2014·新課標(biāo)全國卷 My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are three lesson

24、s in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didn't need to do so many homework. Therefore, we have more time with after-school activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sports for one hour every day. My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds

25、of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends.Correction13 2014·浙江I was taking a train to London's Victoria Statio

26、n. I had noticed that the carriage was noise and filled with people. Before long, a train inspector comes to check our tickets. A passenger realized he couldn't find his ticket but became quite upset. Then everyone in the carriage began searching the ticket, which was eventually found under a se

27、at several rows from his owner. The person who found a ticket smiled with pleasure at his success. No one in the carriage had previous spoken to or even noticed the ticket-owner before. Yet they had so quickly offered the strangers their help. If we could show concern to others on need, the world wo

28、uld be a better place to live in.Correction14 2014·陜西My father took me out camping for the first time when I was seven. He wanted teach me about animals,insects and trees. My uncles all come along with bows and arrows for hunting.One evening at sunset,we sat by the fire,have our barbecue.Just t

29、hen a bird was flying over us.My uncles immediate jumped up and shot their arrows on the bird. Neither of the arrows hit the target.Suddenly the arrows was flying down at us from the sky they were looked like rain! We ran to escape but fortunately no one was injured.That day I didn't learn much

30、about animals, insects or trees, but I learnt a impressive lesson about gravity!Correction15 2014·四川Hello, boys and girls! Today，I am going to talk with what you should do when a fire alarm go off. If you hear the alarm, stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside. Stay

31、close to your teacher and classmate. Don't panic or get out of line, and trying to remain quiet and calmly. Soon the firefighters will come and put out a fire. If it's a false alarm and there is no fire, your teacher will lead us back to the classroom. If you notice that when someone is miss

32、ing and hurt, tell your teacher immediately.Correction 16 2014·遼寧Dear Jeremy and Alice,Although we've been delighted to have you as neighbors, we're hoping to settle something that bothers to us. In a word, your dog Cleo.We've called several time about Cleo's early morning barki

33、ng. It is difficult to understanding why she barks every minute she's outside. The early morning barking have been disturbing us as we are often up all night with the baby. Beside, Cleo tends to bark a average of six hours a day. This morning she starts barking even before 5 o'clock. That is

34、 too much for us, considering how closely the houses are.We appreciate our apologies and goodwill, but we hope that you can figure a good way of settling the matter.Sincerely,Jack and RoseCorrection17 2013·新課標(biāo)全國卷I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old

35、songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now.I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was

36、 strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.Correction18 2013·新課標(biāo)全國卷 The book I'm reading of talks about afternoon tea in Britain. It is said to have started in t

37、he early 1800's. Have tea in the late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner, that might not be served until 8 o'clock at night. This custom soon becomes another meal of day. Interesting, it had a connection by the British porcelain (瓷器) industry. Tea in China was traditionally

38、 drank from cups without handles. When tea got popular in Britain, there was a crying need for good cup with handles to suit British habits. This made for the grow in the porcelain industry.Correction19 2013·陜西My grandfather and I enjoy fishing.One Sunday morning we go fishing at a lake. We too

39、k ours fishing poles and headed for the lake. As soon as we arrived, so we dropped the lines into the water. Before waiting for about half an hour, I was beginning to get impatiently. I wanted to give up, and my grandfather told me to wait a little longer. Finally, there were a sudden pull at the po

40、le and fish was caught. Within the next few minute, my grandfather also caught a fish.Felt hungry, we built a fire by the lake and barbecued the fish. It was delicious.Correction20 2013·四川Today we had a chemistry test. I found the test difficulty, but I tried hardly to do it. Suddenly Mary, my

41、best friend, asking me to let her to copy my answers. After think for some time, I let her copy my answers. But after the test, all of us were called to the teacher's office. The teacher was angry because we had same answers in the tests. We were warned not to cheat again so she would need to se

42、e our parents. I was very upset. I didn't cheat. I was just helping a friend. Why does she punish me?Correction 21 2013·遼寧 Mr.Johnson is a hardworking teacher. Every day，he spends too much time with his work.With little sleep and hardly any break, so he works from morning till night. Hard w

43、ork have made him very ill. "He has ruined his healthy. We are worried about him." That is which other teachers say. Yesterday afternoon, I paid visit to Mr. Johnson.I was eager to see him,but outside her room I stopped. I had to calm myself down.Quietly I step into the room. I saw him lyi

44、ng in bed, looking at some of the picture we had taken together. I understood that he missed us just as many as we missed him.Correction 22 2013·浙江Dear Diary, Here I am in the middle of a city, 350 miles far away from our farmhouse. Do you want to know why we move last week?Dad lost his job, an

45、d as Mom explained,"He was lucky to find other one." His new job meant I had to say goodbye to my classmate, my school or just everything else I love in the world.To make matters bad, now I have to share a room with my younger sister, Maggie.Tomorrow is first day of school.I am awfully tir

46、ing, but I know I'll never fall sleep.Good night and remember, you, dear diary, is my only souvenir from my past life and my only friend.Yours,RosemaryCorrection 23 2012·新課標(biāo)全國 I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive. From the time I was about four until I

47、 was about six, I destroyed each of my toy. I was happy when the toys worked, but when things did wrong, I got angry and broke it. For a while parents bought me new toys. But before long they began to see which was happening. When I tear apart my fifth birthday toy train, my father said, "That&

48、#39;s it. No more toys to you." My punishment lasted a year. Meanwhile, I found out that with more patience I must make my toys to last. My attitude changed from then on.Correction 24 2012·陜西My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month.It is in

49、 the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport.We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath.What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room.I checked my email messages every day.I also shared for my friends many photos taki

50、ng in Beijing.The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish.It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing.Correction 25 2012·遼寧Dear Diana, Thank you for the lovely day we have with you. It was so kind for you to l

51、et us bring Anne's friend, Gina. Unfortunate, the only problem was the journey home. There had been a terrible accident on the highway and, for a result, there was a long line of traffic for at least six mile. In the end, we drove to a service station and waited there unless the road was clear.

52、In the car park here Gina nearly got knocked over as car drove out far too quickly from behind a lorry. They finally dropped Gina off at her parents' and made our own way to home.Much love,Fiona20122016年短文改錯答案Correction 11.thatwhere。考查賓語從句。此處表達(dá)的是"靠近我所居住的地方"，故需將that改為where。where在此引導(dǎo)賓語從句

53、，并在從句中作地點(diǎn)狀語。2.去掉but?？疾檫B詞。從屬連詞Though（雖然）不可與并列連詞but（但是）一起使用，故需去掉but。3.hadhave?？疾闀r態(tài)。 整篇文章都是以現(xiàn)在時態(tài)寫的， 所以需將一般過去時改為一般現(xiàn)在時。4.honesthonesty?？疾槊~。根據(jù)語境"我叔叔告訴我他成功的關(guān)鍵在于誠實(shí)"可知,此處該用名詞形式作表語。5.orand?？疾椴⒘羞B詞。根據(jù)語境可知，此處不是表示選擇關(guān)系，而是表示"新鮮的蔬菜和優(yōu)質(zhì)的油"，故把or改為and。6.usingused。考查被動語態(tài)。fresh vegetables和high quality

54、 oil與use之間存在被動關(guān)系，故用被動語態(tài)。7.becoming前加of?？疾榻樵~。dream of doing sth.是固定搭配，意為"夢想做某事"。8.thea?？疾楣谠~。此處表示泛指，故該用不定冠詞a，in a short period of time意為"短期內(nèi)"。9.ourhis?？疾榇~。由語境及主語he可知，此處指的是叔叔的生意，故將our改為his才合乎語境。10.steadysteadily?？疾楦痹~。修飾動詞grow該用副詞，所以應(yīng)用steady的副詞形式steadily。Correction 21.howwhat。考查賓語從句

55、。分析句子可知，are talking about 后為賓語從句，且從句中do缺少賓語，故將how改為what。2.chosechoose?？疾榍閼B(tài)動詞的用法。情態(tài)動詞后接動詞原形。3.taketaking。考查非謂語動詞。因?yàn)閍nd連接兩個并列的成分，且介詞后接動名詞形式，所以將take改為taking。4.butand。考查連詞。前后句之間為并列關(guān)系，故將but改為and。5.在world前加the?？疾楣谠~。根據(jù)語境可知，此處表示特指，故應(yīng)用定冠詞the。6.yourour?？疾榇~。因?yàn)榫渥拥闹髡Z為"we"，故此處用our。7.knowledgesknowledge

56、?？疾槊~的數(shù)。knowledge為不可數(shù)名詞，只能用單數(shù)形式。8.去掉can或?qū)anshould?？疾樘摂M語氣。suggest 意為"建議"時，其后的賓語從句要使用虛擬語氣，謂語動詞用"should+動詞原形"，should可以省略。9.thoughtthink?？疾閯釉~的時態(tài)。全文的時態(tài)均以一般現(xiàn)在時為主，故此處應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時。10.manymuch?？疾榇~。表示"錢"的多少時，要用much而不是many。Correction 31.yearyears?？疾槊~復(fù)數(shù)。13至19歲不止一年的年齡差，此處為復(fù)數(shù)概念，故用years

57、。2.worseworst?？疾樾稳菰~最高級。句中有表示范圍的in my life，同時應(yīng)與前面的best保持一致。3.去掉the?？疾楣潭ù钆?。at first表示"起初"。4.yourselfmyself。考查反身代詞的一致性。由前面的代詞I可知，此處應(yīng)用myself。5.suchso?？疾楣潭ù钆?。由"I don't think so."的固定表達(dá)可知，應(yīng)將such改為so。6.telltold?？疾檎Z篇中時態(tài)的一致性。全文中心時態(tài)為一般過去時，故應(yīng)將tell改為told。7.freelyfree?？疾樾稳菰~的句法功能。系動詞be后應(yīng)為形容

58、詞作表語。8.wearwearing。考查動名詞作賓語。介詞后面應(yīng)用動名詞形式作賓語。9.tofor?？疾楣潭ù钆洹eave.for.表示"離開某地去某地"。10.whenever后加I?？疾榫渥咏Y(jié)構(gòu)。此處whenever為連詞，引導(dǎo)狀語從句，從句中缺了主語，根據(jù)句意可知，應(yīng)加主語I。Correction 41.sobut。母親有一份全職工作，但是她還要做大部分的家務(wù)活。根據(jù)語境可知，前后分句間為轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，所以用連詞but。2.houseworkshousework。housework為不可數(shù)名詞，沒有復(fù)數(shù)形式。3.orand。both.and.是固定用法，故用and。4

59、.getgot。本文講述的是在母親節(jié)發(fā)生過的事，所以用一般過去時。5.去掉on。go shopping"購物"，是固定用法。go on doing sth. 意為"繼續(xù)做某事"，不符合語境。6.herhis。此處指父親，所以用物主代詞his。7.kitchen前加the。此處特指"我"家的廚房，故加the。8.whatthat/which或去掉what。根據(jù)句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知，此處為定語從句，先行詞為The dishes，關(guān)系詞在從句中作動詞cooked的賓語，所以用關(guān)系代詞that/which引導(dǎo)，關(guān)系代詞在從句中作賓語時也可以省略。9.favoritestfavorite。favorite作名詞時，意為"特別喜愛的東西"，該詞作形容詞時沒有比較級和最高級。分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知，此處應(yīng)用名詞favorite。10.movingmoved。母親既感激又感動。moved修飾人，moving修飾物，根據(jù)主語為Mom可知，要用moved。Correction 51.childrenchild?？疾槊~單復(fù)數(shù)。根據(jù)I和a可知，這里應(yīng)用可數(shù)名詞單數(shù)形式，故改為child。2.latelater。根據(jù)語境可知，此處表示"很多年后"，故改為later。3