-浙江高考讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)真題范文賞析(優(yōu)選.)

1、精品Word.3/8最新文件僅供參考已改成word文本方便更改2016.9浙江高考：One weekend in July, Jane and her husband. Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that s

2、he said to Tom. Tm gomg to find a better spot for us to camp“ and walked away.With no path to follow.Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place, she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and. far beyond, a snowcapped

3、mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost.“Tom! "she cried. nHelp!MNo reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall. Jane was so tired that she had to

4、stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling 6商落) somewhere s( a distance. Quickly she followed the sound

5、to a stream. To her great joy.she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now. Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane hea

6、rd a helicopter. Is that for me? Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again.1 .所續(xù)寫(xiě)短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；

7、2 .應(yīng)使用5個(gè)以上短文文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)：3 .續(xù)寫(xiě)部分分為兩段，每段的開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好；4 .續(xù)寫(xiě)完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)。Paragraph 1But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.Paragraph 2It was daybreak when Jane woke up.2017.6On a bright, warm July afternooiL Mac Hollan, a primary school teacher, was cycling from his home to Ala

8、ska with his friends. One of his friends had stopped to make a bicycle repair, but they had encouraged Mac to carry on. and they would catch up with him soon. As Mac pedaled （騎行）along alone, he thought fondly of his wife and two young daughters at home. He hoped to show them this beautiful place som

9、eday.Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him. "Man. that's a big dog!” he thought. But when he looked to the side, he saw mstantly that it wasn't a dog at all, but a wolf, quickly catching up with him.Mac's heart jumped. He found out his can of hear spray. With one hand o

10、n the bars, he fired the spray at the wolf. A bright red cloud enveloped the animal, and to Mac's relief, it fell back, shaking its head. But a minute later, it was by his side again. Then it attacked the back of Mac's bike, tearing open his tent bag. He fired at the wolf a second time, and

11、again, it fell back only to quickly restart the chase （Mac was pedaling hard now. He waved and yelled at passing cars but was careful not to show down. He saw a steep uphill climb before him. He knew that once he hit the hill, he'd be easy caught up and the wolf s teetli would be tearmg into his

12、 flesh.At this moment, Paul and Beeky were dnving tlieir car on their way to Alaska. They didn't think much of it when they saw two cyclists repairing their bike on the side of the road. A bit later, they spotted what they, too, assumed was a dog running alongside a man on a bike. As they got cl

13、oser, they realized that the dog was a wolf. Mac heard a large vehicle behind him. He pulled in front of it as the wolf was catching up fast, just a dozen yards away now.1.所續(xù)寫(xiě)短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2應(yīng)使用5個(gè)以上短文文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)：3,續(xù)寫(xiě)部分分為兩段,每段的開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好；4,續(xù)寫(xiě)完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)。Paragraph 1The car abnibtly stopped in fr

14、ont of him.Paragraph 2A few minutes latenthe other two cyclists arrived.2017 11.浙江高考 A vacation with my motherI had an interesting childhood: It was filled with suiprise and amusements, all because of my mother-loving, sweet, and yet absenl-mindcd and forgetful. One strange family trip we took when

15、I was eleven tells a lot about her.精品Word.2018 6It was summer; and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon. Uncle Pa

16、ul, my dad's friend, picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos.His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river ne

17、arby. Very early in the morning, Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast. "The day starts at dawn on my farm/1 he said. After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze(DM). I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul

18、 riding horses. They looked really cool.In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a hose ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me. I wasn't going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towar

19、ds the mountains. "Don/t be late for supper/1 Uncle Paul cried, uand keep to the track so that you don't get lost!11 "OK! ” my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his fam house were out of sight. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pi

20、ne trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven(編織的)blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.注意：1 .所續(xù)寫(xiě)短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2 .至少使用5個(gè)短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)：3 .續(xù)寫(xiě)部分分為兩段，每段的開(kāi)頭話(huà)已為你寫(xiě)好；4 .續(xù)寫(xiě)完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)。Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my ho

21、rse.We had no idea where we were and it got dark.參考范文一：Paragraph 1But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. Jane had to stay alone in the forest for another cold night. At that moment （時(shí)間）,she felt a little sad. but she wasn't so friglitened （情 感）.She reminded herself constantl

22、y,。心理）"Tom must have called for those hclicoplcrs. Maybe （情感）he was in one of them and will return soon（動(dòng)作）！ I hate to guide him tomorrow." She felt asle叩（動(dòng)作）and dreamed of seeing Tom （動(dòng)作）.Paragraph 2It was daybreak when Jane woke up. She ate some berries and then（時(shí)間）walked along the strea

23、m, hoping 。心理）to find a suitable place to guide the helicopter. She walked and walked, exhausted but full of hope. Suddenly （時(shí)間），she spotted （動(dòng)作）a huge flat rock. She managed （動(dòng) 作）to climb onto it and waited with patience. The moment （時(shí)間）the helicopter appeared （動(dòng)作） again. The nearer it got （動(dòng)作），the

24、 more she waved （動(dòng)作）the yellow blouse. To her great joy.（情 感）die helicopter didn t imss Jane tliis time and it landed near the big rock slowly. Tom jumped off the helicopter and rushed （動(dòng)作）towards Jane. They hugged each other tightly （情感）and burst into tears （情感）.參考范文二：The car abruptly stopped in fr

25、ont of him. Mac jumped off his bicycle and dashed for the back door of the car. It was locked. He then ran around to the passenger door, but it was locked, as well, so he began to climb through the open window. When spotting this .Paul quickly unlocked the door, and the frightened man dived in. slam

26、ming the door behind him. Paul looked out the back window and saw the wolf standing over Mac's bike as if it were a kill. Shortly after, the annual ran off.A few minutes later, the other two cyclists arrived .Mac emerged from the car and hugged his friends. "I thought I was going to die,“ M

27、ac cried to them. Mac retrieved （取回）his bicycle, and the three men resumed（繼續(xù)）their road trip, agreemg to keep m one another's sight line. A few miles down the road, Mac pulled over and burst into tears/The rest of die trip was amazing. but I had to let the former emotion out."參考范文三：Paral:

28、The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us. Mom insisted that we must make full use of it since we had brought it. David and I looked at Dad, hoping he could stop her crazy idea. To our great disappointment, he agreed. We spent a whole afternoon seeking a nice camping place

29、 and set up our tent before the night fell. It was the first time that I had thought mom could be wise as I adniinng our stunning tent. "Oh, I forgot the pillows! what a misconception. Despite the ache of my neck, we had some great nights.Paral: We drove through several states and saw lots of g

30、reat sights along the way. The bright blue sky, the limitless green grass, the group of sheep, the setting sun and the countless stars in the curtain of nights kept me spellbound. Not only did we see the picturesque scenery, we also managed to consider mom's scandals as a kind of fun. I really l

31、ove my Mum.To our relief, we arrived at giandparents, place and went back to our home with all of four people. It was so fortunate to see my friends again.范文四：Paragraph 1Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out i。front of my horse. Instinctively, I yelled out loud, pulling back the reins hard in order to

32、 stop the horse from hurting the little creature. Badly startled by the sudden incident, the horse sped off the track into another direction. Dnd followed closely behind, calling out to tell me how to soothe the terrified horse and I did as told. Finally, the horse calmed down, but we seemed to get

33、lost, unable to go back to the mountain road.Paragraph 2We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark. Wandering around, we were still stuck in the dilemma. Much to our delight, the sound of water in the distance caught our attention and drove us to the riverbank. Dad proposed that we should

34、walk along the river which may lead us to the farm house and nothingseemed better than that. Time appeared to be merrier and shorter when I stayed together with Dad and before long, the farm house came into sight. What a thrilling but memorable experience it was!Version 2Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. I immediately