高考英語寫作指導地點描寫2

1、to our class Basic WritingHow to describe a placeSuppose you are a guide to describe a place to tourists, what subjects(主題）主題）will you intruduce ?a placelocationpopulationareahistoryeducationeconomylivingconditionsculturePossible subjects： Revision：Some key words and expressions about different subj

2、ects1.Location:位于位于，be located in/lie in/be situated in坐落于坐落于腳下腳下/頂部頂部stands at the foot of/ on the top of面臨一條大河面臨一條大河faces a big river/ in front of flows a big river 2.Population:有有人口人口has a population of, with a population of3.Area:占地占地平方公里平方公里has/covers an area ofsquare kilometreswith an area ofs

3、quare kilometres海岸線總長海岸線總長公里公里Its coastline has a total length of kilometers.4.History: 歷史悠久歷史悠久has a long historywith a long history5.Transportation:坐汽車、火車、飛機到坐汽車、火車、飛機到take a bus, a train or a plane togo to by bus/train/plane水陸交通便利水陸交通便利with/has convenient transportation both on land and water6.Co

4、mparison between the past and the present：發(fā)生了很大變化發(fā)生了很大變化great changes have taken place新建了許多新建了許多have been built/set up經濟迅速發(fā)展經濟迅速發(fā)展economy has been developing rapidly多次進入全國經濟十強城市多次進入全國經濟十強城市has been listed among the top ten strongest cities in economy several times7.other expressions: 名勝古跡、名勝古跡、place

5、s of interest/ historical spots特色鮮明的地方文化特色鮮明的地方文化distinct local culture基礎寫作-情景說明西山鎮(zhèn)依山傍水。過去，這里的人們生活極其平困。西山鎮(zhèn)依山傍水。過去，這里的人們生活極其平困。解放后人們的生活在個個方面都發(fā)生了很大的變化。解放后人們的生活在個個方面都發(fā)生了很大的變化。人口人口約約10萬萬面積面積約約126平方公里平方公里地理概括地理概括 坐落在粵北一山腳下，面臨一條坐落在粵北一山腳下，面臨一條大河，新建有許多工廠商店、醫(yī)院學校大河，新建有許多工廠商店、醫(yī)院學校教育狀況教育狀況解放前只有一所學校且只有富家子弟可以解放前只

6、有一所學校且只有富家子弟可以上學，現(xiàn)在有上學，現(xiàn)在有10所學校，每個孩子都可以所學校，每個孩子都可以上學；上學；生活狀況生活狀況 人們工作之余，可以逛商店、看電影、跳人們工作之余，可以逛商店、看電影、跳舞、參加體育活動等舞、參加體育活動等寫作要求：寫作要求：1.短文標題自擬短文標題自擬2必須使用個句子介紹全部所給的內容；必須使用個句子介紹全部所給的內容；3將個句子組織成連貫的短文將個句子組織成連貫的短文Read the directions for the following information:title if necessary(標題）標題）tense and voice （時態(tài)和語態(tài)

7、）（時態(tài)和語態(tài)）person （人稱）（人稱）style （文章題材）（文章題材）the important points (list them out or underline them to make sure you wont leave out one)（要（要點要全）點要全）1.How to analyze the directions (審題審題)? title if necessary(標題）標題）tense and voice （時態(tài)和語態(tài)）（時態(tài)和語態(tài)）person （人稱）（人稱）style （文章題材）（文章題材）the important points (list th

8、em out or underline them to make sure you wont leave out one)（要（要點要全）點要全）1. Read the directions and get the following information:the present tense, the past tense, the present perfect tense (一般現(xiàn)在、一般過去、現(xiàn)在完成時）一般現(xiàn)在、一般過去、現(xiàn)在完成時）the third person 第三人稱第三人稱practical writing應用文應用文Great Changes in Xishan Town

9、List the important points out :過去，這里的人們生活極其平困。過去，這里的人們生活極其平困。解放后人們的生活發(fā)生了很大的變化。解放后人們的生活發(fā)生了很大的變化。西山鎮(zhèn)的人口約西山鎮(zhèn)的人口約10萬；萬；In the past, people there lived a hard life.Since liberation great changes have taken place in peoples lifeXishan town has a population of about 100,000The population of Xishan town is

10、about面積約126平方公里 It covers/has an area of about126 square kilometers. The size of it is about 126 square kilometers.坐落在粵北一山腳下，面臨一條大河，坐落在粵北一山腳下，面臨一條大河， Xishan town is at the foot of a mountain of North Guangdong Province and faces a big river. Xishan town is located /stands at the foot of a mountain o

11、f North Guangdong province and in front of it flows a big river. 新建有許多工廠商店、醫(yī)院學校新建有許多工廠商店、醫(yī)院學校 Many factories, shops, hospitals and schools have been built/ set up.解放前只有一所學校且只有富家子弟可以上學。解放前只有一所學校且只有富家子弟可以上學。現(xiàn)在有現(xiàn)在有10所學校，每個孩子都可以上學；所學校，每個孩子都可以上學；人們工作之余，可以逛商店、看電影、跳舞、參人們工作之余，可以逛商店、看電影、跳舞、參加體育活動等加體育活動等Befor

12、e liberation there was only one school for children from wealthy families.Now there are 10 schools and every child can go to school.After work people go shoping, see films, go dancing and have sports.Organize the messages in 5 sentences adding some conjunctions or change the sentence structure where

13、 necessary. 1.Xishan town is a small town,_ is located at the foot of a mountain of North Guangdong province and in front of it flows a big river.which2.Xishan town has a population of about 100,000 _ covers an area of about 126 square kilometers.Xishan town, _ an area of about 126 square kilometers

14、, has a population of .Xishan town covers an area of about 126 square kilometers_100,000 . andcoveringwith a population of多種表達法靈活表達多種表達法靈活表達3.Before liberation, people there lived a hard life _ since liberation great changes have taken place_ many factories, shops, hospitals and schools have been bu

15、ilt. butand now4.Before liberation there was only one school for children from wealthy families_ now there are 10 schools and every child can go to school. 5.After work people go shoping, see films, go dancing and have sports .butOne possible version :1.Xishan town is a small town, which is located

16、at the foot of a mountain of North Guangdong province and in front of it flows a big river. It has a population of about 100,000 and covers an area of about 126 square kilometers. Before liberation, people there lived a hard life but great changes have taken place since liberation and now many facto

17、ries, shops, hospitals and schools have been built. The school education has also improved, for example , before liberation there was only one school for children from wealthy families, but now there are 10 schools and every child can go to school. After work people go shoping, see films, go dancing

18、 and have sports .南極洲世界上最寒冷的地方，南極洲世界上最寒冷的地方，常年有冰雪覆蓋常年有冰雪覆蓋 Antarctica, is the coldest continent in the world.Antarctica, is covered with cold thick ice and deep snow all year round.1.使用定語從句或同位語優(yōu)化句子表達使用定語從句或同位語優(yōu)化句子表達which is covered with coldthick ice and deep snow all（the) year round,the coldest con

19、tinent in the world,* 語法，句法高分語法，句法高分tips 夏天幾乎不下雨，夏天幾乎不下雨，但一下起來但一下起來就很大。就很大。It hardly ever rain in summer it rains heavily. 2.運用非謂語動詞和運用非謂語動詞和with結構優(yōu)化句子表達結構優(yōu)化句子表達我的家鄉(xiāng)位于中國廣東，我的家鄉(xiāng)位于中國廣東，毗鄰香港毗鄰香港My hometown, is located in Guangdong Province of China.but whenever it does,neighbouring Hongkong,使用狀語從句優(yōu)化句子表

20、達使用狀語從句優(yōu)化句子表達 名勝很多名勝很多，是中國優(yōu)秀旅游城市，吸引各地游，是中國優(yōu)秀旅游城市，吸引各地游客客 It is a national tourism city _which attract thousands of visitors fromhome and abroad 南海南海位于廣東省中部位于廣東省中部,歷史悠久，歷史悠久， _ Guangdong province, Nan Hai is an old city with a long history. with many places of interest,Located in the central part of3

21、.恰當運用形容詞使文章可讀性更強恰當運用形容詞使文章可讀性更強 （以（以出名）出名） its bright sunshine and (獨特的）獨特的）wildlife, Australia attracts tourists from all over the world. （除（除之外）之外）that , Antarctica （ 富有）富有）mineral resources including iron, coal and so on. Famous foruniqueApart fromis also rich in*Make sure all the important points are included. * The important points should be attractive and usually in the given order.Pay special attention to the first three