Module6SectionⅤWriting介紹大自然神秘現(xiàn)象的說明文

1、Section V Writing介紹大自然神秘現(xiàn)象的說明文 寫作技法指導(dǎo) 文體指導(dǎo) 基本結(jié)構(gòu)介紹大自然神秘現(xiàn)象的說明文一般包括如下內(nèi)容：1簡述神秘現(xiàn)象 (什么樣的神秘現(xiàn)象， 何時(shí)何地發(fā)現(xiàn)的， 科學(xué)家對(duì)此的解釋， 證據(jù))；2各界不同的看法；3自己對(duì)此現(xiàn)象的認(rèn)識(shí)。亮點(diǎn)句式 1描述自然界某種神秘自然現(xiàn)象，以及何時(shí)何地被發(fā)現(xiàn)的，常用語句： The monster of .is back in the news. It is known to all that . It lies in . It looks like a . 2描述科學(xué)家及有關(guān)專家們對(duì)神秘現(xiàn)象的解釋及其證據(jù)，常用語句： Some sc

2、ientists think that . Some people believe in its existenc，e because . By recent research，we can learn that . Other scientists consider . 3描述作者個(gè)人對(duì)此現(xiàn)象的認(rèn)識(shí)，常用語句： Personally，I (dont) believe . As far as I am concerned I think . In my point of view , I believe .滿分佳作構(gòu)建 寫作任務(wù) “北美大腳怪 (Bigfoot) ”一直引發(fā)人們的熱議。請(qǐng)根據(jù)所

3、給的圖片以及文字提示寫一篇英語短文來參與討論。出沒地址北美怪物描述像猿(ape),高610英尺，重約500磅以上，全身覆蓋棕色或紅色 毛，頭和眼睛很大，腳印長達(dá)24英寸發(fā)現(xiàn)情況科學(xué)家和研究人員也找到了相關(guān)的毛發(fā)、糞便(waste)及大腳印等結(jié)論無其他證據(jù)證明其存在，也許是當(dāng)?shù)貍髡f以嚇唬徒步者或獵人注意：1詞數(shù)100左右;2 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫審題謀篇體裁說明文時(shí)態(tài)一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)、過去時(shí)和現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)主題介紹北美大腳怪(Bigfoot)人稱第三人稱結(jié)構(gòu)第一段：神秘現(xiàn)象發(fā)生的地點(diǎn)第二段：根據(jù)所給內(nèi)容，描述神秘之處第三段：科學(xué)家的相關(guān)研究情況及結(jié)論遣詞造句I .對(duì)接模塊詞匯1. mystery

4、2. describe .as.3. witness4. up to5. do research6. be related to7. so far8. existence9. evidence10. terrifyn .巧用模塊句式、語法神秘；神秘事物 把描述為目擊者多達(dá)做調(diào)查，做研究 與有關(guān)系到目前為止 存在證據(jù)使害怕(一)完成句子1 .北美大腳怪是世界著名的神秘事件之一。(簡單句)第2頁Bigfoot is one of the world-famous mysteries.2 它是在北美洲被首次發(fā)現(xiàn)的。（被動(dòng)語態(tài)）It was first see n in North America.3

5、. 據(jù)說它高 610 英尺。（It was said to be .）It was said to be 6- 10 feet tall.4. 它重達(dá)500磅以上。（weigh）It weighed over 500 poun ds.5. 全身覆蓋棕色或紅色毛，頭和眼睛很大。（with短語）It was covered in brow n or red fur with large eyes and a big head.6許多科學(xué)家和研究人員已經(jīng)去那里做調(diào)查。（teams of;不定式作目的狀語）Teams of scie ntists and researchers have gone t

6、here to do research.7. 他們已經(jīng)找到了相關(guān)的毛發(fā)、糞便（waste）等。（過去分詞短語作后置定語； such as）They have found things related to it, such as waste, fur and so on.8. 但是到目前為止，沒有其他證據(jù)證明其存在。（there be句型；prove）However, so far there has been no other evidenee to prove its existenee.（二 ）句式升級(jí)9. 用非限制性定語從句合并句1和句2Bigfoot, which was first

7、 seen in North America, is one of the world - famous mysteries.10. 用現(xiàn)在分詞作定語合并句 3、句4和句5It was said to be 610 feet tall, weighing over 500 pounds and was covered in brow n or red fur with large eyes and a big head.11. 用定語從句合并句6和句7Teams of scie ntists and researcherswho have gone there to do research h

8、ave found things related to it, such as waste, fur and so on.妙筆成篇【參考范文】Bigfoot, which was first seen in North America, is one of the world - famous mysteries.第3頁Wit nesses described it as an apelike creature .It was said to be 6 10 feet tall,weighing over 500 pounds and was covered in brown or red fur with large eyes and a big head.Footprints up to 24 inches long have been found.Teams of scientists and researcherswho have gone there to do research have found things related to it，such as waste，fur and so on.However，so far there has been no other