高中英語短文改錯課件公開課;

1、,how to do proof-reading,短文改錯,class 7 senior 2 miss zhou,in our everyday lives, if we make some mistakes, we should correct them, and then we are still a good fellow. chairman maos words,怎么改？,his salary is paid by an hour. lihua hit me on a head. he always has dinner at the table. the teacher said t

2、he earth ran around the sun.,i can go to home now. 2. i like history of china. 3. i am fond at english.,the,wrong word,missing word,of,unnecessary word,高考短文改錯的考察方式,下面短文中有10處語言錯誤。請在有錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。 增加:在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（）,并在其下面寫出該加的詞。 刪除:把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。 修改:在錯的詞下劃一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。 注意: 1.每句不超過兩個錯誤； 2.每處錯誤及其

3、修改均僅限一詞； 3.只允許修改10處,多者（從第11處起）不計分。,改錯格式,從錯誤比例上看，,一般以三種題型出現(xiàn):增加,刪除或修改。,設(shè)問的角度有三個：詞法、句法和行文邏輯。,動詞形，,名詞數(shù),還要注意形和副,代詞格，細(xì)領(lǐng)悟,介詞短語須關(guān)注 習(xí)慣用法要記住,冠詞連詞常光顧,a limerick,請先念一遍“咒語” 吧,復(fù)雜句子不放過.,一、動詞形,1.動詞的時態(tài)和語態(tài)錯誤.,高考鏈接1： however, my father had to return to work on monday so we fly back last saturday. (2011 全國）,flew,growin

4、g up is not easy. sometimes all that is need is someone to rely on.（2008 全國）,needed,2. 主謂不一致的錯誤.,高考鏈接:,i stayed there for one and a half hours and made sure that the girl were all right. (2009 全國卷2),was,3. 非謂語動詞 錯誤,高考鏈接:,i was at the shanghai railway station buy a ticket to hangzhou.（2011新課標(biāo)全國卷）,buy

5、ing,i was really disappointing and about to leave when he walked out of a building. (2011陜西卷),disappointed,5. he used to getting up early to take physical exercise.,were,likes,exciting,get,not only the students but also the teacher like the film.,2. when they came here tomorrow, i will show them.,3.

6、 they eager to know everything about china and asked me lots of questions.,4. i found the game excited and my dad explained the rules.,practice,come,practice,二、名詞數(shù),指名詞單、復(fù)數(shù)形式的用法錯誤。,高考鏈接2： it felt very strange to travel without any luggages. （2011新課標(biāo)全國卷）,luggage,in early january this year, the rate of

7、 ufo reports was steady, around three per weeks.(2011遼寧卷）,week,1.dont lose hearts, youll be successful in time. 2.i need some more informations. 3.these machines look the same,but they are of different kind.,heart,information,kinds,practice,不可數(shù)名詞,progress, furniture, weather, fun, news, information,

8、 advice ,practice,三、還要注意形和副,形容詞和副詞的誤用,高考鏈接3：,when she dropped me off, i pulled out the toy slow and gave it back.（2011 浙江卷）,slowly,2比較級和最高級的混用或誤用.,the doctor says he is recovering fast than expected.(2009陜西）,faster,還要注意形和副,高考鏈接：,unfortunate, i had an accident and hit another （2012 浙江卷）,unfortunately

9、,we lived in a comfortably double- room with a big bath.(2012陜西）,comfortable,1. he asked angry if we had finished the work. 2. yes, it is clearly that your life in your country is quite different from mine. 3. his father looks much more happier today.,angrily,clear,4. so i grateful accepted the offe

10、r.,gratefully,practice,practice,四、 代詞格，細(xì)領(lǐng)悟,3. it作形主、形賓、指代時有缺漏 (make, find, think)或固定搭配.,高考鏈接4： with the help of katia, a roommate of me (2011 重慶卷）,mine,it was only when we did their chemistry project together that i began to understand (2010 遼寧卷）,he found difficult to learn math well.,our,it,1. 人稱代詞

11、，反身代詞，不定代詞,2. 代詞指代的人或事物前后不一致的錯誤.,2. i was learning to express me in simple english. 3. i always thought in chinese and tried to translate anything into english. 4. one day i wrote a little story and showed to my teacher.,myself,everything,it,some students may also save up for our college or future u

12、se .,their,practice,practice,五、介詞短語須關(guān)注， 習(xí)慣用法要記住,1.主要考查固定短語，固定介詞的搭配。,2.介詞的多用，漏用和誤用,3.時間狀語前有指示代詞this, that或one, next,last等修飾時不用介詞.,eg. he paid a visit to his grandfather on that afternoon,五、介詞短語須關(guān)注， 習(xí)慣用法要記住,高考鏈接： two years before, i travelled to brazil and i rented for a car.(2012 浙 江卷),with,i also sh

13、ared for my friends many photos taking in beijing.,practice,im sure they will laugh to me and see me as a fool.,2. at last we reached to the village at the foot of the hill.,3. when a young man starts to earn his own living, he can no longer expect others to pay his food .,4. the gentleman insisted

14、at my receiving the money.,at,for,on,practice,連詞but，and，or, so和although的邏輯性用法錯誤,高考鏈接：,六 、冠詞連詞常光顧,he was right here in the front of me. (2011陜西卷）,i bought my ticket but turned around to pick up my bag from the floor.,. 冠詞a, an和the的用法錯誤,and,i came into the living room and saw one of them just go throu

15、gh the kitchen door but turn on the light. he will stay there one and two days.,3. every kind of the chinese food is worth trying.,4. the driver put the window down and offered us a umbrella.,and,or,an,the smaller piece is that you want, right ? it is known to us all, all efforts will be paid. pract

16、ice makes perfect, that is very important for us .,七、復(fù)雜句子不放過,what,as,which,1. 單詞拼寫不改 . 2. 大小寫不改 . 3. 詞序不改 . 4. 標(biāo)點符號不改 . 5. 原意不改.,dont forget!,五不改原則,實戰(zhàn)演練,考 查 目 標(biāo),1）識別錯誤 并正確校正語篇的能力 2）綜合運用英語知識的能力 3）準(zhǔn)確理解語篇，掌握內(nèi)容及行文邏輯的能力,下面短文中有10處語言錯誤。請在有錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。 增加:在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（）,并在其下面寫出該加的詞。 刪除:把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。 修改

17、:在錯的詞下劃一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。 注意: 1.每句不超過兩個錯誤； 2.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞； 3.只允許修改10處,多者（從第11處起）不計分。,改錯格式,解題步驟,1. 通讀全文，掌握大意,2.整句理解，上下兼顧,3.復(fù)讀全文， 檢查驗證,動詞形，,名詞數(shù),還要注意形和副,代詞格，細(xì)領(lǐng)悟,介詞短語須關(guān)注 習(xí)慣用法要記住,冠詞連詞常光顧,a limerick,請先念一遍“咒語” 吧,復(fù)雜句子不放過,再叮囑幾句：,1. 單詞拼寫不改 . 2. 大小寫不改 . 3. 詞序不改 . 4. 標(biāo)點符號不改 . 5. 原意不改.,解題步驟,1.通讀全文，掌握大意,2.整句理解，上

18、下兼顧,3.復(fù)讀全文，檢查驗證,dont forget!,五不改原則,at christmas eve, jim went with his father to choose a christmas tree. they choose a big one. it was almost as taller as the room! they put them in the corner of the sitting room. jim was covered it with a lot of christmas light. the sitting room looked really beau

19、tifully at the moment. there was a fire burning in the fire place, but the christmas tree lights were shinning brightly. jim and his parents singing and dancing happily.,at christmas eve, jim went with his 1._ father to choose a christmas tree. they choose 2._ a big one. it was almost as taller as t

20、he room! 3._ they put them in the corner of the sitting 4._,_,on,_,chose,_,tall,_,it,動詞形,介詞短語常?？?，習(xí)慣用法要記住,還要注意形和副,代詞格，細(xì)領(lǐng)悟,room. kate was covered it with a lot of 5._ christmas light. the sitting room looked 6. _ really beautifully at the moment. there was 7. _ a fire burning in the fire place, but th

21、e chistmas 8. _ tree lights was shinning brightly. jim and his 9. _ parents singing and dancing happily. 10._,_,lights,_,beautiful,_,and,were,were,動詞形,還要注意形和副,動詞形,名詞數(shù),冠詞連詞須關(guān)注,i was a high school student then, from the low-income family. so i have to support my family. my first one job was to clean the tables in a small restaurant. i still remember going there early and felt anxious about the new world. i worked harder because i was afraid of losing the