書面表達(dá)(開放式作文)_課件.ppt22

2013屆高考英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)之 半 開放性作文 漫畫式 半 開放作文的寫作第一步 描述漫畫內(nèi)容描述漫畫內(nèi)容的基本條件是看懂漫畫 要求是 審圖要準(zhǔn) 定位要清 描述時(shí)言簡(jiǎn)意賅 不可越位 要注意 不要花太多時(shí)間挖掘圖畫深意 常用句式 Inthepicture thereis Asisvividlyportrayed 被生動(dòng)的描繪 inthepicture Fromthepicturewecanseethat Ascanbeseenfromthepicture Thepicturedescribesaninteresting acommonphenomenon Thepicturetriestotellusthat 第二步 闡述對(duì)漫畫的理解所謂對(duì)漫畫的理解 是指圍繞漫畫反映的基本事實(shí)進(jìn)行較為細(xì)致的解釋和自己的看法 感想或人生感悟等 要求是 邏輯清晰 合情合理 挖掘漫畫所反映出的社會(huì)現(xiàn)象和蘊(yùn)含的哲理常用句式 Itseemsveryridiculousthat However thiskindofstoryisperformedeverywhere Whatthepictureshowsistheexactreflectionof Theimpliedmeaningofthepictureshouldbetakenintoaccountseriously Andthesocialproblemhasarousedgreatconcernamong Theremay mightbethreefactorswhichcontributeto accountfor areresponsibleforthisphenomenon Firstofall Andthenthesecondreasonisthat Thelastreason Ithink is 對(duì)漫畫中反映的問(wèn)題作出評(píng)價(jià)或建議常用句式 AsfarasI mconcerned Inmyopinion Frommypointofview Onmypart 就我來(lái)說(shuō) Somemeasuresasfollowsshouldbetakentodealwith Onlyintheseways canwesolvetheproblemof Itisbetter advisableto Iconsideritnecessaryto that 假設(shè)你參加所在年級(jí)的英文寫作比賽 請(qǐng)按如下要求完成一篇短文 1 簡(jiǎn)要描述下圖的內(nèi)容 并點(diǎn)明主題 2 聯(lián)系實(shí)際 談?wù)劤霈F(xiàn)此現(xiàn)象的原因及解決辦法 注意 1 詞數(shù)不少于80個(gè) 提示詞 蝸牛snail 從漫畫中兩只蝸牛中一只所說(shuō)的話 Look Theyaremovingmoreslowlythanus 可以看出兩只蝸牛在開玩笑來(lái)取笑路上擁擠的汽車比它們還要跑得慢 由此我們可以推斷 交通擁擠問(wèn)題的嚴(yán)重性 一 簡(jiǎn)述漫畫內(nèi)容點(diǎn)明主題 Fromthepicturewecanseetwosnailsarejokingaboutthecarsonthecrowdedroads Thishumorouspictureisn tjusttoamuseus Itactuallyshowsusoneofthemostseriousproblems Asweallknow theissueofheavytraffichaslongbeenaproblem Inthepicture therearetwosnailsplayingajokeaboutthecarsonthecrowdedroads Howslowlytheyaremoving Thepictureconveysusthemessagethatheavytrafficisaseriousproblem Inthepicture twosnailsareplayingajokeaboutthecarsonthecrowdedroads Theyaremovingsoslowlythatwecan thelpthinkingoftheseriousnessofheavytraffic Fromthepicturewecanseetwosnailsarejokingaboutthecarswhicharemovingveryslowlyonthecrowdedroads Thishumorouspictureisn tjusttoamuseusbutactuallyshowsusoneofthemostseriousproblems Thatis heavytrafficisaseriousproblem 分析現(xiàn)象產(chǎn)生的原因可以從下列考生比較熟悉的幾個(gè)方面來(lái)考慮 隨著經(jīng)濟(jì)的發(fā)展 私家車的增加 隨著汽車的增加和城市人口的增加 一些道路等交通設(shè)施仍然沒有得到改善 行人交通意識(shí)的淡薄等等 二 分析現(xiàn)象產(chǎn)生的原因 Firstly thenumberofprivatecarskeepsgrowingeveryday Secondly withalargenumberofpopulationandnumbersofcarsincreasing someroadsstillremainunimproved Thirdly somepeople slackofawarenessoftrafficregulationalsoresultsintrafficjam 緊緊圍繞所分析的原因 不要面面俱到 可以選取其中一兩個(gè)原因 提出解決問(wèn)題的看法 Personally Ithinkthatratherthanpromoteprivatecars it sbettertoimprovethepublictransportationsystemwithscientificroaddesignandpropermanagement Moreimportantly nevercantrafficjamsbeeasedwithoutself disciplinedcitizens 三 談?wù)劷鉀Q問(wèn)題的看法 Inmyopinion thenumberofprivatecarsshouldbeputundercontrol Andatthesametime busesshouldhavetheirownspecialrouteswhichcannotbeusedbyothervehicles Besides undergroundtrainandcitytrainshouldbedevelopedquickly Tosolvetheproblem somepiecesofadviceareputforward Isuggestthatmorestreetsandroadsshouldbebuilt Besides weshouldtakesomemeasurestolimitthenumberofcars Thiscandecreasethetrafficflow Inmyopinion thenumberofprivatecarsshouldbeputundercontrol Meanwhile thegovernmentshouldtakesomemeasurestoimprovesomepublictransportation What smore peoplemustobeytrafficregulationsstrictly Forexample pedestriansdon tcrossthestreetsuntilthetrafficlightsareforthem 參考作文 Fromthepicturewecanseetwosnailsarejokingaboutthecarsonthecrowdedroads Thishumorouspictureisn tjusttoamuseus Itactuallyshowsusoneofthemostseriousproblems Asweallknow theissueofheavytraffichaslongbeenaproblem Butwhydoesthishappen Ithinkseveralfactorscontributetothisphenomenon Firstly thenumberofprivatecarskeepsgrowingeveryday Secondly withalargenumberofpopulationandnumbersofcarsincreasing someroadsstillremainunimproved Thirdly somepeople slackofawarenessoftrafficregulationalsoresultsintrafficjam forexample manypedestrians 行人 crossthestreetwithoutwatchingtheWalklights Onlywhenourwholesocietyworktogethertosolveallthesesproblemscanwespeeduptheflowoftrafficinthecities InyourspokenEnglishclass yourteachershowsyouthefollowingpicture Youareaskedtodescribethepictureandexplainhowyouunderstand 參考作文 Inthepicturewecanseeaboyclimbingaplatform Heistakinggreattroubletoreach dietopofthestairs ignoringthecomparativelylowerstairsbesidehim Thepictureremindsmeofthosewhodreamofachievinggreatsuccesseveryday Theyaresoeagertosucceedthattheyhopetogettotheirdestinationsasquicklyaspossible Theydon trealizethereare